New Ragna FF Trials of Fate important note pg 21

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Hey guys I want to write an FF but its not about Ragna. Here is the plot. Please let me know if i should continue

Plot


The story is about two sisters who are orphaned since childhood. Both faces a lot of problems in their lives alone in the world but never give up. Even other people related to their lives are tested by fate. They come to a city where a mystery is waiting for them since many years. Let's see what is store in their destiny.


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Part 7 : Pg 4

Part 8 : Pg 5

Part 9 : Pg 7

Part 10 : Pg 7

Part 11 : Pg 8

Part 12 : Pg 9

Part 13 : Pg 10

Part 14 : Pg 11

Part 15 : Pg 12

Part 16 : Pg 13

Part 17 : Pg 14

Part 18 : Pg 14

Part 19: Pg 15

Part 20 : Pg 17

Part 21 : Pg 19

Part 22 : Pg 19
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes! You should definitely continue! The plot sounds interesting. I like to read anything, with or without RagNa.
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Trials of Fate

Characters

Kalpana Oberoi : Main female protagonist. She is strong and sophisticated girl. A senior police officer who wants to protect nation from the threats. Elder sister of Sanjana who is very close to her. She is very traditional and disciplined unlike her sister.

Sanjana Oberoi : Second female protagonist. A free living, bubbly and intelligent girl. Works in software company in Singapore and a hacker. Her dream is to be successful. Even though she is modern but she is instilled traditional values by her sister.

Riya Gujral : Third female protagonist. Rich Fashion designer who wants to make her own design company.Best friend of Sanjana.

Raghav Shergill : Male protagonist. An ambitious guy who lives on his own separately from his family. Another employee working in software company in India. Love interest of Alina. Best friend of Abhimanyu.

Yohan Malhotra : Second male protagonist. Wants to design his own cars but never got any attention from his family. Love interest of Sanjana.

Ray Singhania : Third male Protagonist. A rich and ambitious NRI who wishes to pursue high career and reach height of success. His family arranges his marriage with Sanjana. Love interests of Riya.

Supporting characters

Sameer Malhotra : Police Officer. Elder brother of Yohan and Sufia.

Sonia Shergill : Police Officer. She also lives separately from her family.

Sufia Malhotra : Choreographer and works with theatre group.

Karan Gujral : Another Police officer. Elder brother of Riya

Abhimanyu : Best friend of Samarth. An architecture who wants to be rich but has to overcome obstacles to fulfil his dreams.

Anjali Rathore : Childhood friend of Yohan. A lawyer and daughter of ACP Rathore.

ACP Rathore : Head of all the 4 Police officers

Antagonist

Naina : Sister of Anjali and daughter of ACP. Ex fiance of Samarth

Rajveer Singh : Son of a corrupt Politician

Ranveer Singh : Famous Politician ( Main Antagonist )

Part 1

The plot revolves around two orphaned sister Kalpana and Sanjana who faces extraordinary problems in their life. Both are really close to each other. The story opens with a young girl named Sanjana who works in Software company in Singapore. She decides to move to India with her sister and continue her job there. Her sister Alina lives in chandigarh who works in a police headquarter. Both the sisters has a dark past which they are unaware of. Kalpana is overjoyed when her younger sister comes back. They spend a unique time with each other after many years. One of their neighbour suggests Kalpana to get Sanjana married and warns her to not give Sanjana so much freedom as she is young but she says that she trusts her sister more than anything. Kalpana remembers one of the priest's words and gets scared when he said that she and Sanjana will face with a harsh reality in future which can endanger their relationship. Within few days, Sanjana has to go to Bombay to resume her job. Kalpana decides to go after few weeks after she gets confirmation letter from her job.

When Sanjana reaches Bombay she finds it full of corruption. The womens and children in the slums are treated badly. She discover a building where illegal work is done which can be harmful for everyone in the city. She talks about this to Raghav, he tells her to ignore that matter. She meets Riya and she offers Sanjana to live with her at her house. She meets Riya's friends. Sufia, Abhi, Samarth, and Anjali. She clashes with Yohan at the first meeting as both of them get into tiff and hate each other.

Edited by ashpat3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itz nice...
Plzz continue soon... 😃
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Part 2

Yohan is irritated by his sister who does not have time to talk with him. He is angry with his life as he does not have anybody to share his problems at home. Sanjana meets the manager of the company, Maya who is very strict and punctual about work. She gets impressed by Sanjana's works and thinks to hand her the big contract. This infuriates Naina who wanted that contract and decides to ruin Sanjana's career. Slowly Sanjana gets well with everybody in the group except Yohan but she feels most attached to Raghav. With Sanjana's coming, Riya gets a big contract of designing from Paris. On her way to home, Sanjana is harassed by some goons, she slaps one of the goons and fights with them. She reminds that they should not consider a girl weak and alone. Yohan witnesses all this and thinks that a how can someone be so strong enough to face problem.

Meanwhile, in the headquarters, Karan joins the police where Sameer and Sonia works. Riya thinks her brother Karan left them to fulfill his dreams but she does not know the real reason. While Sanjana gets to know about Yohan's problems from Anjali. Sanjana decides to make him smile and make him live life. The whole group makes a plan to throw a lavish surprise party for Sanjana's birthday. But they have to make her stay away for few hours. Yohan takes her to meet his brother Sameer whom he meets every weekend, so the group can make party arrangements. Sanjana gets happy as to visit the beautiful place. She gets friendly with Sameer. Sameer gets happy to see Sanjana and thinks she is the perfect girl for his brother. He tells her about Yohan's insecurities which makes her sad. Sanjana decides to help Yohan recover from his past.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is the story really bad ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No dear...
The story iz really awesum... 😊
Just change the name of the leads as Kalpana n Ragav n u'll surely get more readers... :)

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On the day Sanjana's birthday, the groups gives her a big surprise party. Kalpana finally arrives at the party and gives surprise to her sister. The whole group is happy to see Alina but Raghav is shocked to see her. Sanjana introduces her to everyone. After the party both the sisters go to their home. Raghav is disturbed with Kaplana's presence. He shares his past truth with Abhi. Kalpana also remember the time when she met Raghav first time.

Flashback

It is revealed that 3 years ago, Raghav went to chandigarh for a wedding where he met Kalpana first time. He decides to woo her when one of his friend challenge him to do as a part of game. Soon Raghav woos Kalpana without realizing her true feelings for him. Before leaving he promised Kalpana that he will be back within few weeks. Kalpana waited long for him and was broken when Raghav did not came back. She decided to move on and not tell about her past to her sister. Raghav comes back to home where his family fixes his engagement with Naina but is not very happy with it. After few days, he realizes his mistakes for betraying Kalpana. He shares this with his sister who suggests him to go back to Kalpana as she is his true love. Raghav broke his engagement with Naina and went to back to Kalpana. But he could not reach to her and gave up his search.

Flashback ends.

Raghav says he knew from the beginning that Sanjana is Kalpana's sister. He worries that when Sanjana will get to know about all this, she will hate him for giving pain to her sister. At the other side, Kalpana also worries for the same thing as her sister is unaware of her past and decides to forget everything. Abhi tells Raghav that if he truly realizes his mistake then he will surely get his love back and Kalpana will forgive him one day.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting..please continue...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tiz is awesum n damn interesting...
Plzz continue soon... 😃

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