Answer Me.... (RagNa OS)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghav was getting restless thinking y did Kalpi hhang up the phone... Many horrible thoughts wete comming into his mind, he was going crazy thinking she might say no...

First time in his life he felt the actual lonliness around, he wanted to be with Kalpi all the time, she makes him feel alive, she has become his life & if she goes away he won't be able to survive... But he knew he can't force her..

Whole evening to night Raghav kept on thinking about Kalpi only.. Is she angry with me.. No no she can't b angry I mean ut wasn't the first time i told her my feelings, he told himself.

On the othere side Kalpi too was feeling reasless due to an unknown happiness... she was feeling blessed & nervous at the same time.
She was looking at the screen of her phone- Should I call him, No no Kalpi you can't & wt if Aai Baba get up, can't take this risk & probably if I call he might think I'm so desperate for his attention plus I can't answer him that I love him too... Kalpi blushed to herself thinking about her words

Raghav was twisting & truning... sleep is no way near him.. He picks up his cell phone dailed kalpi's number then disconnected it in 1000th part of a blink's time...
This wasn't the first time he did that... He had repeated the same activity like 50 times for now
He wanted to hear her voice, wanted to talk with her whole night but he knew she lives with family...
What should I do I can't call her wt if she would b with her family, she will feel uncomfortable... Damn Kalpi just call me for once na plzzz, he prayed in his heart..!

Finally , he decided to call her... With the first ring only he heard Kalpi recieving the call... (for the firsy time in life he was so thankful to god)

He heard Kalpi voice she was speaking in hush hush voice but the words were comming clear
"Kya hua sir" she asked trying to control her nervousness
But Raghav was smart enough to pick the anxiety in her voice.. Wanted to hear your voice, Can we talk, he asked genuinely...
kalpi only relpied with yes sir... She could hear Raghav chuckling on the other end of line...
Office hours are over Kalpana so no formalities now ok... getting no reply from her he repeated his sentence adding is that clear ...
Kalpi thought god this man is something haan he is saying that office hour is over & still bossing me around.. Say something na, Raghav's words interrupted her thoughts...
Ummm koi aa jayega, He noticed a lil hesitation in her words but he knew her fear wasn't useless..
Should I hang up, kalpi didn't want Raghav to hang up Nooo give me two min... Saying that she came out to the balcony... Ab boliye itni raat ko call kyun kiya???
Pehle soch raha tha tumse milne aa jaun bt fir socha rumhe kharab lagega to call se hi kaam chala leta hoon...
Kalpi waa stunned hearing what Raghav had said...
Sir aap na! Her words were cut off by Raghav... For u it's Raghav Kalpana :)
I need time to get used to of calling u Raghav... I mean sir she corrected herself immediately after realising that she had unknowingly called him Raghav :)
That felt beautiful, I should make it compulsary for you to call me from my name & not sir (he was trying not to laugh) btw m waiting for my answer Kalpana...
Little apprehensively Kalpi was about to reply when Kamla asked her what is she doing out in cold weather.. Kalpi made an excuse that her friend needed an answer so she had to take the call
Who is this friend, ask her to come home tomorrow Kalpi... If u have answer to your friend's problem or question u should answer truthfully... :)
I know aai bt she can't come here for some personal reasons & such problems can't be discussed on phone so I'll meet my friend tomorrow outside mountview at 5 pm sharp
That's good looks like you arw very close to this friend of yours... U should always be their for ur friend & never let them go away from your life...
Kalpi was trying to place every word in Raghav's frame... She knew Raghav was still on line that is why she gave him the intimation to meet her tomorrow...
Hope he takes up this hint... She thought to herself.
BTW Kalpi what is the name of your friend???? Kamla's question took kalpi offguard but collecting all her courage together she said, "RagNa"...
She could not come up with some another name.. Kamla left telling Kalpi to come in too
Abhi aai Aai, she again speak into the phone... Mujhe jana hoga aap bhi so jaiye
She was to disconnect the call but Raghav words made her go weak in her knees..
Kalpana, RagNa was a beautiful name for us :)))) never expected your answer will be so simple and heart-touching...Now can't w8 for tomorrow... Good night ye subha kb hogi... The call got disconnected bt Kalpi wad still smiling of her own thinking about themselves thinking about RagNa...!

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incredible96 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was amazing!!! but it would have been better if it was a ss 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for mistakes frnz... typed everything on phone in single go plz forgive me & hope u guys will enjoy this OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful
hope you can make this as short story.
ArshiR thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is amazin i wish Ashish gets to read this 😳 truely beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiR

This is amazin i wish Ashish gets to read this 😳 truely beautiful


Thank u so much... means alot to me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was simply beautiful and lovely os dear, wish it could be in 2-3 more parts..love RagNa😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's a lovely OS
Aww Raghav can't sleep, he need to hear his Kalpi voice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳 aww, it was lovely👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome! I love it! Make an ff out of it!

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