u are giving me a hard time di,, such a wise update?? u are generous so im helpless.. i warn u, this comment is stupid
u gave an unexpected update as expected.. wen all of us were waiting for wat is the meaning of vanshika's 'virat' u gave most unexpected yet rocking pov of virat
i found a different virat.. a different virat in addition to his dad, lover & husband roles.. the way he was moving vt Mr.Burns,, i had the idea dat Mr.Burns is a strict person, ofcoz he is, the way he changed his tone towards virat at the mentioning of Mer's incident... but again i didnt expect virat to move vt him in such a friendly manner.. may be this is the first time u are giving a virat dealing vt someone so friendly other than his family... i was observing him very keenly..
"Hello old man! Good to see you!"
"What's up with all this heavy machinery?" I asked him playfully
"Aha! I always knew there was some ulterior motive to your fondness for Manvi." I smiled. That did the trick.
''Thanks for asking about me by the way."
i can go on quoting their whole conversation.. well every dialogue is spoken out of ease as if talking vt a pere group.. and every dialogue carries its own sarcasm.. i admired it thoroughly.. well the originality is that usually professionals,, especially old have this sort of tough language, double meaning, sarcastic talk (may be they are decendants of shakespere) u maintained that flow & dat style in the whole conversation..
u were very clever in starting the conversation by making virat to observe the photograph... dat made David to get to his point wat he wanted to deal.. and it was too interesting to hear dat man's talk.. it revealed alot.. i remember manvi thinking of Mr.Burns encounter vt her.. she had the same fishy feeling that he's too much into her almost like a guardian..
''You said he was your mentor. You used to bring him home sometimes. I remember he always asked how you treated me, like he was my father or something''
so dat was it.. back in part 17,, the answers for all fishy things... y he preferred virat over karan, y he loved virat's family,, it was all bcoz manvi???
and i have the feeling u mentioned Tanya somewhere back, Tanya being karan's sister,, u did mention it didnt u?? so she was the lady voice... (finally!!! i love swetha... see u made me to doubt every action of her i mean u didnt mean to but i was careful not to believe her,, i'm planning to love her wen i read addicted again) so if they broke up in good terms.. if tanya's coming back to him.. its something to think about..
this piece delivered alot.. like y were two attacks targetted on manvi, y manvi & not virat... again giving hints to wats ahead.. yet there are unanswered questions... wat is the connection between Karan, Tanya- Peter???? was karan bribed by peter, was he acting on peter's orders & tanya on karan's? or tanya has something to do vt peter??? where is Mer's son?? alottt of questions are pouring...
shud i call it clever critics of urs?? u are showing us as if u delivered something but in reality u have created more many questions... i hope u'll reveal the rest very soon
i admired the way u made virat to clear out his doubts & ur language & literature there..
''I just wanted to throw a stone into the water and see what kind of ripples it creates'' with this the questions he threw & the expression of pete was awesome & again
''It was not a ripple, it was a holocaust'' virat grabbed the man!! dat was a brilliant phrase..
the way he observed the tracking system, realised his helplessness, realised his lack of security & protection was so action filled & rocking!!
his immediate move was to secure protect his wife & kids,, brilliant!!
so i was sort of ryt wasnt I?? around 10% atleast? c'mon virat wasnt in the chopper, it was virat's clever plan (forget about my first guess in last comment it sucks)
those moments of virat's planning, that was THRILLING,,, just like watching an action movie.. OMG the excitement in me had no limits... an active, smart, sharp, intelligent, clever, young, angry, determined, focused virat was cleanly visible thru ur update.. dat part was rocking dii rocking!!! he's so clever in getting the clue, helicopter-engine-failure.. double attack & next the enemy vl be upto the samething for virat hence he shudnt choose to fly, the way he was quick in his thoughts, getting immediate information from Ben, relating everything cleverly,
Tanya?
Karan's sister, my ex!
Burns-Peter-Tanya-Karan-Meredith!!
There were dots everywhere. I just need to join them. What's the connection? Why? What do they want? Is it all about the money?
all these were so rocking!! moving in jet speed.. giving hints & creating doubts.. Brilliant job di!!
in the meantime virat inquiring about Randy's daughter & thinking of his own sweet family took the update to the peak,, "Kids do that to you, don't they? You think about them and your face spilts into a big smile." such a heavenly feeling..
i am doing some crap here.. see um ruining the comment & not at all satisfying u.. i dont know di, i dont know wat to say, its too beautiful & very emotional & splendid.. the way u made virat to open his eyes on manvi's sweet voice, the way u made him to feel his own blood warm below him,
''every cell in my body is writhing in pain. This is good, feeling pain is good. I know my body is still responding''
I scream in pain. Pain is good. Pain means there is still life, there is still hope.
again & again virat talking about pain,, these were just out of the world.. any word to describe ur excellent work vl fail, for they'll be mere understatements.. i have to create words to tell u about ur excellent job.. this carries alot.. this means alot.. his feelings, his thoughts, his pains can be sensed by me.. u have written it in a way that the first half of the update is an action pack while the ending turned out emotional & heavenly... his boost is manvi,, her wors dat are cropping in his mind, the promise he made to her, his kids' thoughts, his determination to protect his beautiful family is giving him life & strenghth to go ahead.. such an amazing update dii.. um seriuosly cursing myself as um really doing some stupid commet here.. grabbing ur time but this is of no use.. may be this update is so rocking,, nothing can stand in front of this... um really sorry.. i want to run away without commenting,, but i cant at the same time,, too many things are there her to talk about but um finding it difficult to coordinate.. words, thoughts, everythinng are betraying me today.. um really really sorry for wasting ur time.. wat i have done here just given ur own story back to u,, i want to hide myself... all ii want now is give u a hug vch i cant.. love u loads dii,, um sorry for disappointing u.. i am hating me now..
Arjun
