All i can say or more like ask is who the hell are you? Some undercover writer?? Your story is like mind blowing. ( Sorry if i scared you with the begining :) ) I literally read 19 chapters of PURE awesomeness in like 3 hours. They were like the best 3 hours of my day. Your story brightened my whole day! I loved every part of it from the begining, when virat is arrogant and broken to the part where manvi starts to slowly bring him out. Also loved the chemistry between the kids and virat. After finishing chapter 19 i was like " No i need to know what happens next" and then i found the second thread. And then i read till chapter 22 and i was like " no no no he cannot die he just cannot die" i went all melodramatic. By the way loved how you started chapter 22 with her standing in the balcony and then you hit us with the news of virat probably dead ( thats when i went all melodramatic :). ) Waking up the next morning i literally raped the refresh button on this thread thinking that there was a new update. Then i turned off my phone cause i had a class and then when i turned on my phone and re started raping the refresh button, there it was chapter 23. I was jumping! Then i read it and came to the conclusion that you are the kid of Nicholas Sparks and J.K Rowling. Like thay had a kid who writes a mixture of breath taking romance and mind blowing action ( sorry i don't really know an action writer). That last chapter was amazing zing zing. Sorry i kinda got carried away but this is how i feel right now, wish i had your number and i could call you and tell you in actual words how good this story is !
I'm definately going to reread it and come back with a huge comment for each chapter.
Love
Marissa
P.s could you please pm me when you update ( even if you don't,i'll just rape the refresh buttton again :) )
P.s.s i found your writing index and i'm just gonna go grab a coffee cause when i got wi fi and bluebolt's writing there is no why i'll be able to sleep.
( sorry for just giving you the story of my life but im kind high on sugar right now thus the long weird comment )
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