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Posted: 12 years ago
Nope its not a filler..Loved it..their mere presence heals off pain..ur description is awesome..And Maanvi's out burst apt..she had to remove her vent up frustration...she has no proper idea on whts happening...It ws emotional..Loved kids, their behavior was also right..Ria is mini Maanvi..😆Waiting for next Anu..~!!
P.S: Come back soon Anu!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg u called dis awesome update a filler seriously.. Anu just loved it.. Virat sharing his fears.. Manvi's breakdown nd Nikki nd Ria's reaction.. nd Vadhera ladies buhaha.. bt its incomplete.. would love to read more on father daughter relation.. will wait for one week 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey this part was just amazing...
i love every part especially ria and nikky scene
it was so cute and too emotional'...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh!!!! finally...a DHANSUUU updateee!!!😃 it's like all in one..emotion,laughter ,care,worry...everything...!!! it just made my dayyy!!!👍🏼 muah..my writing queeenn🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb...
To good...
Loved maanvi nd her fear...
Amazing...
Kids were like always to awesome...
Nd
week?
R u kidding...
Cannot wait..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely...got very emotional...Loved the way you brought out VirMan scene in the hospital...thanks...but yeh dil maange more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
All hail anu!!!!!!! ADDICTED was just amazinggg!!!!!!!!! Loved how u started with manvi's POV n it continued to normal pace... Virman hardship, pain and care all was clearly shown to a single part!!! I was sooo emotional n this part touched my heart!!!
I love te kids section n manvi blurring out Wat she felt was the best!!!! Gosh how do u manage to do that huh???? N now u say u can't UPDATE???? R u kiddinggg hume maarwaoge n will kill u as well! Plz figure out a way to continue! Be fair lol!!!! Muaaah! N today for a change I don't haw any complain for a short update cux this short one was a patakaaa n I'm stunned :))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!! Wait man!!!!! I have not even commented on your previous update, & here is your next!!!!😛
Okay, I know I am the only one culprit over here!!! So, here first I am commenting on your previous one!!!!!😊
I seriously have opened this post reply on new tab, I need to mention lot of things!!!!😆😆

Okay, first I thought you are an entrepreneur, then i thought you work with some sought of you know CBI people😛, again wrong!!!!!! Now with this update of yours(23rd), I am damn sure you do part time job in some secret organization!!!!!!😆

I MEAN WHAT ARE YOU?????????? YOU ARE TALENTED BEYOND LIMITS!!!!!!!!!!!!
And your mind works at a speed of a light year, I must say!!!!!!!!

God!!!!! How much do I praise you man!!!!!! I am seriously what do I say tongue-tied, tired or what!!!!!!!
Uff!!!!! In the update the way virat was thinking, I mean the way "your" imagine is reflecting in the form of virat's pov, you seriously have entrepreneur skills, thinking out of the shell skills, & I will keep mentioning about your other skills you have!!!! What do I do you are so talented!!!!!!😛😃

The way virat cracked pete was mind blowing, you had used great mind over there!👏👏

Then the way he was dealing with upcoming problems, I mean thinking about ways about what can be the possibilities, before-hand planning how to get out from this mess, for all this hats off man!!!!!👏👏

And then they shoot virat!!! Shit!!!! But man...he has guts to stand up in such a pain for his family, for his manvi!!!!! God!!!! In the beginning I was so wrong about virat!!!!
Seriously man!!!! Why all this is happening!!!!!!!

Uff!!! I still have to read your latest part!!!! But hey wait, i have not stopped to praise you yet!!!!!😛😃😉

Okay, as I mentioned before the update was just amazing & incredible!!!!!
Do you know what you should seriously work as a writer in the TV or film Industry, I bet you that TV show or film will rock & will hit beyond expectations!!!!!! Hey, why don't you mail some of your ideas to the EHMMBH's stupid writers, & put some sense in their brains, maybe our show will be saved then!!!!!
Or yes!!! You can also work as a detective in a secret agent company, or in police department!!!! Oh god!!! if everybody will start working & use their brains at the speed of yours, I am damn sure India will be free from all crimes!!!!!!!!!!!😉

See, I have listed so many career options for you!!!! What am I saying???? Arree, what to do??? what you are such a great talented personality!!!!!👏👏👏

Oh god!!!! YOu are seriously unbelievable man!!!!!!!! Cheers to you!!!!!!!!!👏

Again HATS OFF!!!!!!!!!!👏

I wander have I even commented about your update???? well i am afraid if you are gonna continue to write such amazing updates, I will never be able to comment about virat 7 manvi. Kuch toh space chod do yaar bechaari virman ke liye!!!!!!!😆

Okay, anyways now going back to your latest update!!!!!
Oh god!!!!! now for that update I now have to search google for some praising words & phrases!!!!! Seriously I am out of stock gal!!!!!

Listen do me a favor, if you find any book which has praising words & phrases in it, please buy that & deliver to me!!!! have some mercy yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

Hehehe...okay now going back to your latest one, vcan't promise to comment on that today!!! But of course will do in couple of days!!!!!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so relieved to see that Virat is doing fine, and is safe and sound.
Emotions on the top... Maanvi and Vanishika feelings towards Virat.
Virat and his children hug was so sweet ❤️

Wonderful job! Do continue! 👍🏼
thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update yaar..
Loved it..
Loved the last part the most..
Virat,Nikki and Ria are soo cute..
Thanks for the PM...
And pleasee update soon..

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