VirmanSS:Being Alive Part 9 updated (PAGE 18) - Page 8

Originally posted by: nishal310

hey Disha how are you??😊

i just came accross to your ss and i'll must say you had done awonderful job👏👏👏.First the title of this ss "Being Alive" is perfect for this ss. i fell in love with this title😳😳😳

okey now coming to the updates 1st and 2nd chapter was simply superb👏👏 i like the positive virat here and thank god his family do not called him loser.virat and manvi's pain is kind of same. lively and bubbly manvi now become sad. feeling very bad for her. and virat what is the pain he is going through. love his bonding with his mom and brother. love the virman's first meeting

now coming to the 3rd and 4th chapter its also very amazing..love virman's friendly talk.these two bumps each other again and again like destiny also want them togather.it's natural that sometime we feel comfortable to share our problem with strangers and we feel relax.the mysterious writer must be manvi.b'coz as you say manvi's father had been died before sometime ago and the director of the newspaper also said that the writer had stopped writing and they even don't know the writer's name. hmm something is fishy. love the way you describe manvi's thoughts and her fear.she is pretending to be strong in front of her mother and tanu but in real she also want someone's shoulder to cry her heart out.

now what could i say about 5th and 6th part. it was more than amazing disha. i loved it to the core. manvi was walking on the road emotionless and the car could hit her if virat couldn't reached on time and save her.i love it when manvi share her feelings with him.and i loved it how virat got angry when manvi told him about the interviewer of vadhera associates and how he beat him. i hate that rahul mehta, i mean how can someone be so low yaar.and one more thing in the 6th update i got 101% sure that the mysterious writer is none other than manvi.b'coz when virat was reading those articles i am feeling like these kind of stuff could say only manvi.and the dream part made me sure that these articles written by manvi. loved to see a smiling maanvi. now wants to know the virat's past.

so in the end i only want to say that all the parts were superb👏👏

please cont soon and pm me😊

love

shivali

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Superb updt...truly amazing...i likes the way virat taught the leason to that bloody manager...i even hate this kind of low minded, lusty ppl...virman frdship is starts growing...but y manvi is so depress? What happend with her, that she lost all her hopes?...intrsting...cont soon