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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Anchal_Kamli

Wow!!! Bth d parts were amazing... Beautifully written... ❤️ So Virat saved her again... Her bodyguard...:D N he did absoluty ryt wid dat bloody manager... He deserved dis only... Manvi smiled because of him... :D N dos articles... Dor were amazing... Really flt cncted... N it gives strength too... Virat belived n dem but manvi is opposite... Bth r diffrnt frm thnking attitude n evrythng... Loved it very much... Thnx fr d p.m... ❤️


Hi Anchal,u lyked ma updats dat much!! yaar comments pad ke dil garden garden ho gaya😊.It feels gr8 to know u felt connected to those articles.in future ,will try to updt often.will defo pm u.till den,luv❤️ u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Garimavirmanksg

O god its jst amazing... specially the articles written were great. Precap is awesm waiting for futhur parts. Do pm me whn u cont.


thanx 4 lyking dem yaar.will defo PM u.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

wooow disha jst loved these updates .its just amzing ..the words of motivation words of dreams words of support all are very well written and very encouraging 👍🏼👏

their frendship is growing she is feeling comfortable with him and smiling thats amazing 😊

the story is getting very interesting 😃
thanx alott for the pm 😊
and pls update soon 😊


Hi Kulsum,m on cloud 9 after seeing d comments from u all, n specially from u😊.wat i wrote in those articles,all came from heart yaar. fells nice to know u lyked dem so much.will try to updt soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Double updates again 😃.. Wow.. Updates were great ⭐️⭐️.. Beautifully written 👏👏👏.. So Virat the savior saved Manvi again.. Loved the part where he thrashed that manager.. Hate such people 😡.. Virat is really a nice person.. Manvi is quite comfortable with him and he made her smile also 😃.. Liked Dadaji here.. He didnt scold him, in fact he wanted to help Manvi.. Thats nice 😊.. Those articles are just awesome 👍🏼.. Very well written 👏👏.. Really eager to know whats gonna happen next.. Precap is good.. Jeevika's entry.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊



Hi Meera,
thanx a ton for ur long comments yaar.😊
.feels gr8 to know u lyked it.
hope to not keep u waiting long this tym. U also take care❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: helina


Hey Disha... Again two updates. I just can't stop myself to appreciate you for that. And that too super long. Now updates!! both are awesome. The way virat supported manvi (in job and from the accidents) was so nice. eager to read next parts. Thanks for the pm. I hope i m not late this time to comment.

Be safe.



bas kar yaar, ajeeb lagta hai.😊m not dat good a writer as u all think me to b😳.but honestly yaar,feels gr8 to know u lyked it.
N of course u r not late to comment.
take care ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome...~! like the way u'v written so well specialy abt life, postitvity...simply Superb...loved it hope they find out their real identities...N Maanvi has changed drastically from the person she use to b...eager to know more abt her past...Lovey Thanks for the PM...~!


Hi,thank u sooo much 4 going through ma updts.😊 Feels gr8 to know u lyked dem sooo much.have a little more patience to know abt manvi's past😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yaminnthida

WOW...disha...double updates again...i m so loving it...😳...both parts were awesome...👏👏👏...really loved every bit of it...⭐️...the way u described everything was superb...👍🏼...beautifully written...⭐️...manvi smile after such a long time woh bhi virat ki wajah se ...great⭐️...the way virat reacted on that manager was superb...n the line virat tells to manvi...such a overwhelming and great...😃..."dosti dosti hoti hai manvi, chahe woh 2 saal purani ho ya 2 din."...loved this line a lot...😛...so virat has suffer alot too...waiting for his past to revealed...really a great update disha...n precap is interesting...😳...really looking forward for next update...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm...😊


Hiii, most welcome dear.
u lyked it??!! thanku ji thanku😳.Thankuuu for ur long comments.🤗I feel to b on cloud 9 every tym i read dem.😃
Yeah dat dosti wali line is my fav too😊.

will try n updt soon.Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Imsecondlife


Hey Shivali, m sooo happy to see ur looong comments dear 😊i am glad that you liked my long comment.Thanku thaknu thanku a lot, for liking ma story.❤️hmm don't thanks me baby b'coz i like it when someone write so beautifully😊
da way u mentioned abt every small bit from every chapter, made me really happy.😊😊😊M glad dat i could make u guyz connected to ma story.N yes,d title is very close to ma heart,even i like this title too😊😊dats y i chose it.❤️if i start thanking u it will take sooo long.
aare yaar, woh articles maine likhe hai,ye manvi kahan se aa gayi!!! lolzzz.just kidding.😉i know yaar that you were just kidding😉
I'll defo pm u next
tym.luv u too cutie❤️ .stay f9.Muuuahh🤗

a world's tightest hug to you🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello girlies,❤️ well, m here again with my boring updts to irritate u ol.😃 D more i read ur comments, i become more happy but nervous too.coz now I've to b conscious before writing anything.So i've scetched down d whole story in my mind ,trying to b careful this tym.hope i don't make any silly mistake n u m8 njoy ma story.Ok,enough of ma blah blah..Njoy reading.

Chapter_07:

After 2 days manvi got a call from 1 of d renowned schools of Chandigarh. They said dat they got her CV from online job posting site N called her for an interview. Manvi went there with a fear of rejection but after clearing d interview came out with d appointment letter in her hand. Standing at d school premises she looked up n thanked God n then rushed home.

Shetal was in kitchen wen Manvi entered. Sensing her presence she asked "Manvi ,subha se kahan gayab hai tu?aur itni der kahan ho gayi?at least bata k jati beta,mujhe teri chinta ho rahi thi……

Manvi hugged her slowly from back n said "Happy Mother's day Mumma" n gave d envelop in her hand.sheetal was really happy but a bit surprised by Manvi's gestures & her happiness was multiplied a million tymes wen she opened d envelop n found Manvi's appointment letter there.

"mumma,mujhe job mil gayi hai. Now u don't have to worry abt anything" Manvi said.

Sheetal caressed manvi n kissed her forehead gently. manvi could see tears glistening in Mumma's eyes .Shetal hugged her n said "beta, all I want is to see u happy". Manvi's small smile vanished n she released an unheard sigh!!!

Next afternoon: a black Mercedes Benz stopped in front of d small but beautiful house as d owner of d car signaled his driver .Vikas kahnna , d well known UK based business tycoon was back to India after 5 years.He looked at d house anxiously. It took only 35 minutes to reach this place from airport, but it seemed lyk ages to him. N now wen d moment has come, he really had to gather all his courage n strength before opening his car door. He let out a long sigh n got out of d car. A girl of petite figure, wearing a beautiful pink anarkali stepped out from d other side of d car. She was wearing simple make up n Jewelry which was complementing d calm n composed look on her face. She came near Vikas and said "chale Dad?" Vikas looked everywhere but her daughter's face as he didn't have d courage to meet her eyes. After hesitating a little he moved forward towards d house.

Sheetal was busy preparing some food for Manvi who has just came back from her 1st day of work n went to have a shower. Shetal was thinking abt manvi. After so many days manvi seemed a little bit happy. Shetal was only concerned abt manvi, may b this job can help manvi gain her lost confidence n restore her faith in lyf. Finally things seemed to get a little better. She came out of her thoughts as she heard d doorbell. As she opened d door she was shocked to see Vikas Kahnna standing there with his daughter. manvi's father Ram Chowdhry n Vikas were really close college friends. N their friendship deepened as time passed. Vikas took over d family business after his father's sudden death n Ram joined an MNC .Both families were neighbors n were really close to each other. When Jeevika was 10, her mother passed away.From then on Shetal tried to give more luv n affection to her. Manvi n jeevika grew up like sisters.N to Jeevika , Shetal was her Choti maa. But, d relations which r too close, smtyms faces too many black clouds. Such a moment came in their lyf too.One day Ram realized dat Vikas's manager was making big scams in d company n told him abt it.But d manager was too smart n last of all Ram Chowdhry was unable to prove anything. Ram was more than hurt wen he realized dat his friend didn't trust him in this matter. All this created a rift b2in them.Both of them even didn't allow their daughters to meet. Manvi cried a lot but for his Papa's sake she kept her word n stayed away from Jeevika.But matters worsened wen one day Jeevika came to meet manvi n Choti maa at their house secretly n was caught by her father. After a few days Vikas decided to shift to US, as he considered it to b good for both families.Jeevika hated her father for all this, but she had no choice but to go with him.Shetal knew that Ram was upset with all this but had never shown it on his face. She often saw him standing at d terrace, looking at Vikas's empty house sadly.

"Andar aa sakta hoon vabi?" Vikas said n Shetal came out of her thought. She nodded yes n they came inside.

"Baithiye" Shetal said trying to keep her tone normal.

"nehi vabi" Vikas said "May b I don't even have d right to stand here.I've just come to say sth.Actually….(He said hesitating) I should have said this a long tym ago. m here to say sorry to all of u ,sorry for all that I did.May b what I did is not pardonable at all.I've hurt every1. U,Ram,manvi n even my daughter. N may b it's too late for all this. Coz whatever I m8 say,I'll never get to apologize to my friend" (saying this he looked at d picture of Manvi's father hanging from d wall)

"Bhai sahab,aap…."Shetal tried to speak but was interrupted by him "let me finish vabi,plz.After I went to US I engrossed myself more in work to forget all those incidents. But,I was blind n I was a fool who was misguided by an outsider n didn't believe a friend .After 6 months my manager flew with a huge amount of money. Later,d police managed to catch him n bring back d money but by then I had lost more precious things in lyf-- My friend, n all of u.I was so ashamed dat I couldn't muster d courage to contact any1 of u.i had somewhat accepted dat I have to live with this burden for d rest of ma lyf.But, last week I came to know abt Ram.N realized I've been late again."He paused for a few seconds n then turned towards Sheetal. "vabi,plz ho sakein to mujhe maaf kar di jiye"

Shetal was listening to him silently all d while.Now she spoke with teary eyes "bhai sahab, U were not only my husband's friend,I've always looked upon u as my elder brother.m really happy dat u've realized d truth. I've no grudges against u. U also try to 4get everything"

"I can't, even if I want to vabi." He said "aap ka dil bohot bada hai,isi liye aap ne mujhe itni asani se maaf kar diya"

"agar aaj Ram hotein ,to woh bhi yehi kehtein,m sure" shetal said while tears escaped from her eyes. She sighed n continued "we can't change what has happened. If we could, today Ram had been among us. But ……But I've learned 1 thing in these 3 years. U must try to accept d reality n move forward"

After a pause she said "today m really happy. Today both of u came home n Aaj hi manvi bhi pehli baar job pe gayi "

"Meri Mannu itni badi ho gayi hai, k job bhi karne lagi hai?" Shetal heard Jeevika speaking for d 1st tym since she entered. She went near her. " Badi to meri gudiya bhi ho gayi hai!!" she said while placing her hand on jeevika's head n then hugging her.Both were in tears.

"I missed u Choti maa, a lot" Jeevi said sobbing.

Shetal : I missed u too beta

Jeevi: Choti maa, mannu kaha hai?

S: apne kamre mein hai

J: can I go n meet her?

Shetal nodded yes n Jeevi left quickly.

Vikas came near Shetal n said "vabi, main apni beti ka bhi gunehgar hoon.She never complained but I knew ,Jeevika was upset with me.after going to US she shut herself in her own world.but from d day she came to know we r coming India,she was really happy.N today I can see my old Jeevi back.Its all bcoz of u"

Shetal: bhai sahab,a daughter can't b upset with her father for long.

Vikas nodded. "waise bhabi,I've decided to settle down in India.N there's 1 more thing…

Shetal gave him a questioning look.

Vikas :jeevika k liye ek rishta aya hai.ladke wale humse jald milna chahte hai.

S:does jeevi know abt it?

V:no,I thought I'll talk to her once we come to india.But, I think now it'll b better if U talk to her.she'll b more comfortable with u to talk abt it.N I'll proceed only if she's ready for all this.

S:ok , Main usse sahi mowka dekh ke baat karungi.

After taking a shower Manvi stood in front of d mirror.But as soon as she picked up her hair brush she heard sm1 calling her name "Manvi !!!"

d hair brush fell from her hand hearing d voice n she froze as she saw d reflection of d person in her mirror.She couldn't believe her eyes. tears welled up in her eyes & she hardly managed to utter " Di !!!" .Jeevika was standing at d door with teary eyes.It took manvi a few seconds to gather strength n then she ran towards Jeevika n embraced her in a tight hug. manvi felt, if she loosened her grip, she'll loose Jevika again.(guyz u can imagine d sad EHMMBH tune here)

"di…"Manvi uttered almost in chocked voice ,breaking d hug finally "aap yahan?"she touched her again n said "aap sach mein ho?"

Jeevi cupped her face n said "haan Mannu ,main sach meein aa gayi hoon."

M: but di,aap yahan kaise?Uncle ne aapko kaise aane diya?

Then Jeevi told her everything.

M:sach di,u'll stay her?

Jeevi nodded yes.

J: mannu,what dad did was really wrong.He has hurt ever1.Specially uncle.(saying this she looked at Ram uncle's photo).manvi also looked there.jeevi noticed manvi's eyes were filled up with tear. She held her with both hands n said "mannu,mujhe maaf kar de,I wasn't with u wen u needed me most."

Manvi hugged her again, this time even tighter N said "no di,don't say sorry.Now u r here na?So,plz don't leave me again"

J :I won't

Suddenly manvi's face became pale as she remembered sth.

M:Di…

J:Hmm

M:u won't leave me na,pakka??

J:jeevi broke d hug n said "Mannu!!aise kyun bol rahi hai!!

M:kya karun di?woh kya hai na,meri kismat hi itni kharab hai,jisse bhi pyar karti hoon woh mujhse dur chala jaata hai.

Jeevi cupped her face again n said "mannu, zaroori nehi hai jo past mein hua hai wohi future mein bhi ho! so plz stop thinking lyk this." N wiped her tears.Manvi gave a pale smile.

Just then Tanu entered. "di woh Aunti apko bula rahi…..sorry, did I came at d wrong tym!!"

Manvi turned n said "nehi tanu, its ok.come in."

J:yeh Tanu hai?itni badi ho gayi hai!!

T:aab di…., 5 saal k baad mile hai.baadi to hongi na!!

J:kaisi hai?

"m fine di" she said while giving her a small hug.

Just den manvi's phone rang. As tanu was chirping with Jeevi , she excused herself n went to d balcony to receive d call.

M:hello?

V:Hello dedh futiya!!

M: Excuse me !!who's this….(it took manvi a few seconds to realize who was on d line) Virat!! Tum! how did u get my number?

V:well, m a magician, u know!
M;viraaat!

V:ok ,ok, u had ur CV in our office remember? i got it from there.woh kya hai na, I just wanted to know if u r f9.waise toh I know ur home,but har baar tum kaisi ho ye janne k liye tumhare ghar to nehi aa sakta na,it won't look good.

M: M f9. N by d way y wouldn't I b? (Though she was moved by his concern, she didn't show it in her voice)

V: nehi,woh…, u say urself na k musibat tumhari friend hai,toh..

M;yeah ,r8!! But seems lyk musibat is on a short vacation now! in fact m more dan f9 2day.
V:Really !!dats nice!!well,tell me also,wat's d reason of ur happiness?

M:kyun bataun?(she said teasing him)

V:Manviii (he said impatiently)

M;ok baba,well, I can tell u 1 reason, I got a job.

V:really!! (virat sounded extremely happy).congrats!! well ,ab to treat banta hi hai.coffee?

M:u r such bhooka yaar!!

V:what!!

M: no, I was just kidding! U r welcome for a coffee, anytym.

V:hmm,phir thik hai.hey u know,even I have sth to tell u.

M:what?

V:bhai ka rishta tai ho raha hai.

M;wow! congrats!
V:thanx .waise abhi kuch tai nehi hua.abhi bas ladki dekhne jaana hai

(just den manvi heard Mumma calling her)

M:virat,Mumma is calling me.i'll talk to u later.

V:okiiis!no problem.take care ok.

M:yup,u too.Bye

V:bye

While manvi was talking on phone tanu got a chance to talk to Jeevi alone.

T:di ,m really happy dat u came back.Manvi di really needs u.

J:janti hoon.

T:No di,u don't know anything.n even I don't

J:matlab !! main samjhi nehi !!

T:Di,after uncle's death manvi di handled everything so bravely. But don't know wat happened, suddenly she has really cut off herself from everything.(Den she tells jeevi how manvi remains upset most of d tym. jeevi is worried to hear all this)
T:di,u know her more dan me.u know she has always been a strong girl. There must b sth wrong which is bothering her. i never got d r8 chance to talk to her.But I guess u r d r8 person to do that.

Just then Tanu stopped as she saw Manvi coming back.

M:kya batein ho rahi hai?

T:kuch nehi di ,aise hi..

M: lets go,mumma's calling ,na?

T:ya,chalo.

jeevi accompanies them but with a worried look on her face as she was thinking abt what tanu told her.

Manvi sees vikas Uncle sitting in d living room n talking to her mumma.She greets him n seeks his blessings.

Vikas :how r u beta?

"m f9 uncle." (she replied slowly)

V: manvi,m really sorry beta.main tumhara bhi gunehgar hoon .u had to stay away from ur Di,just bcoz of me

M:plz uncle,don't say sorry.u r our elder. N elders should raise hand only to give blessings not to apologize.

"ye to tumharein sanskar hai beta" N he hugged her, saying "jeeti raho"

Sheatal wiped off her tears n said "chalo bohot hua .aab baton se hi pet bharna hai,ya kisi ko dinner bhi karna hai?"

J:karna hai na! bhai mujhe to badi bhook lagi hai.N kitne din ho gaye apke haat ka khana khaye(she said side-hugging Shetal)

S:den come n help me.

After dinner jeevi n her father stayed there for that night. Vikas said that he has told d servants to clean their house n they'll b f9 there, but couldn't object to Shetal's request as jeevi also wanted it.

Next morning all join Sheatal for d pooja. After pooja,Vikas goes out saying dat he has some work.jeevi was leaving after taking d Prasad when Shetal called her n said she had sth important to ask her.She talked To jeevi abt d marriage proposal. Shetal noticed jeevi's face turning pink n she nodded shyly saying "jo aapko thik lage". Shetal blessed her n assured dat there's no force on her n d proposal will only go forward if she lykes d boy after meeting him. After Shetal left tanu teases jeevi abt her marriage, but b2in all this Jeevi suddenly notices manvi's face has become pale. She asks manvi wats wrong but manvi avoids saying she has to get ready for school.

Jeevi follows her to her room.She hugs her from d back saying "mannu, kya baat hai?apni di ko nehi batayegi?

M:manvi had tear in her eyes.she looked at Jeevi n said,"kya Di !! kal hi toh aapne mujhe promise kiya na,k aap mujhe chod k kahi nehi jaogi.Aur aaj ye shadi ki baat kahan se aa gayi !!(she sounded lyk a child)

J : Achcha,to ye baat hai ! mannu ,maine shadi k liye haan thodi na kaha hai?Choti ma ka kaha main nehi taal sakti,u know dat.rishta wishta pakka hona, na hona ye to baad ki baat hai.aur…kya pata main unko pasand aaun bhi ya nehi !!

"of course pasand aaogi." Tanu said while entering d room "humari Jeevika di is d best .koi unko pasand na karein,not possible.kyun?"she looked at manvi for approval who also nodded yes, sadly .Tanu continued "Di,….pasand to aap ko karnah hai.agar wo ladka kuch khas nehi hua na,to ade tede shakal banke usko bhaga dena,ok?"

Jeevi couldn't but help laughing at Tanu's words. She hit her head playfully n said "pagal" to which Tanu giggled. but manvi was still upset with this whole arrangement.

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Sorry girlies,if u r irritated to see so less virman.But m making virika d ground over which i can give u Virman.A lot of virman n only virman is on d way,in next updts,promise.Thanx 4 bearing.Njoy d next part--

Chapter_08:

Next afternoon: After trying to do justice with her new job, manvi rushed at jeevika's house well aware of d fact dat jeevika Di will b mad at her for being late.But She was stopped at d hallway by mumma according to whom she was looking lyk a mess.So she had no choice but to return home n come back after getting ready asap.Manvi let out a sigh as she looked at d stuff lying on her bed.Oh plz!! Come on, is mumma really serious!! Y can't she understand dat d boy's family was coming to see Di, not her!! But she had no tym now to think abt it,as she was already running late.so she quickly put on everything n rushed back.Shetal was busy with d preparations .D boy's family were abt to come n manvi was told to help Jeevi get ready. She went upstairs n saw d whole room in a mess. jeevi has thrown almost every piece of her clothing on bed not being able to decide, what to wear. Jeevi turned sensing d presence of Manvi but d confused look on her face changed n she stood there adoring manvi who was looking lyk an angel in her white Anarkali , clad with simple matching silver jewelry .

"what !!" manvi asked raising her eyebrow.

"meri mannu kitni pyari lag rahi hai!!" she said smiling

"oh plz di !! Don't start.pehle mumma ,ab aap!!" she said a bit annoyed "aur ye saab kya hai? u r not ready yet? jaldi se ready ho jao,warna ye bill bhi mumma mujhpe hi phadne wali hai !"

"Kya karoon mannu, mujhe to kuch samajh hi nehi aa raha !!" jeevi said n manvi knew she was nervous.

"no worries di,let me help u.n u'll look pretty in anything u wear anyway" she said while fishing for an outfit from d pile of cloths.

Virat rolled down d glass of his car as he stopped in front of Khanna mansion.

"virat,beta open d locks" vanshika maa said.

"Haan?? oh yes mom,sorry ! He said coming out of his thoughts. "mom r u sure d address is r8?"

Vanshika: of course beta,kyun!

Virat : no, nothing! Let's go.

As they walked through d pathway surrounded by d huge area filled wid plants n flowers, his eyes were cast at d house.No,not at khanna mansion but at d house adjacent to it. "Virat vadera, what a coincidence! Hum bhai k liye ladki dekhne aye hai, wo bhi manvi k ghar k pass!!" he thought.

Viren noticed virat was looking a bit lost but when he gave him a questioned look virat nodded in negative signaling 'it's nothing'.

"perfect" Manvi said as she looked at jeevi who was sitting in front of her dressing table.Just den Tannu came to inform dat d boy's family has come n Aunty was calling them downstairs.manvi grinned at d bad news inwardly n jeevi held her hand saying "Mannu, m feeling nervous"

"uffo Di,don't worry main hoon na." she said holding her.

"Akhir hum bhi to dekhe k woh namoone hai kaun !!" she said in her mind.

Manvi's mom n Jeevi's dad were sitting with d boy's family n already had their primary introduction session.D v bros were sitting with SB,Vanshika n Dadaji . "loh, bachchiya aa gayi" Vikas said as JeeMan came downstairs n every1 turned towards them .Virat didn't know y, but he was wishing to see manvi around from d tym he entered this house.but was this manvi?she was looking different!! manvi looked at d whole vadera clan but her eyes popped out to see virat sitting there. N moreover it looked lyk he was checking her out.manvi narrowed down her eyes, where on d other hand virat gave a mischievous smile n raised his eyebrows at her. Manvi threw a forced smile at him n virat chucked inwardly.Both d girls greeted d elders n Vikas introduced them to every1.Jeevika, who was dressed in an orange Anarkali was also looking no less than an angel.& no one failed to notice dat viren was continuously gazing at her.After some formal talks Dadaji offered dat d kids should b given some space to talk amongst themselves.So Shetal asked Jeevi to show viren d garden while manvi n Virat were also told to accompany them.Manvi was asking occasional questions to viren on d way but once they reached d garden an awkward silence fell. Virat signaled manvi to leave them alone to which manvi loudly said "kya hai ??"

Virat: aare akal ki dushman ,in dono ko akele mein baat karne do.agar hum dono aise inke saath chipke rahein to ye bass ek dusrein ko ghurte reh jayenge,par kuch nehi bol payenge.

Virika smiled shyly hearing virat's words.

Manvi: but…

VIrat: no but.( he said to manvi then turned towards viren) bhai aap log batein karo hum yehin paas mein hai ( n she almost dragged manvi with him)

Viren embarrassedly smiled at jeevika n spoke "sorry woh mera bhai thoda sa…."

"no its ok,kabhi kabhi Manvi bhi bachcho jaise react karti hai" jeevi said n they both smiled.

Manvi sat with virat on a bench in d garden near d fountain. This was her favorite place. well, after her room n her balcony of course. She used to spend most of her tym with Jeevika di here.Virat looked around to cast an eye at d surroundings. D whole area was tastefully decorated with flowers n trees.

"its really nice here,isn't it ?" he asked manvi

"Hmm" was d only response dat came from manvi. Her concentration was on Jeevika n viren who were sitting a little bit far from them. Her di seemed to b really comfortable with that guy.n manvi noticed Jeevika's cheeks were getting crimson at tyms. wait , was she blushing!!

Virat continued "woh, khanna uncle was saying, tumharein Papa aur woh bohot achche dost thee"

M:Hmm

V: n both of ur families r really close to each other.

M:hmm

V:N jeevika ji n u have grown up lyk sisters

M: hmm

Virat followed manvi's gaze n realized she wasn't even listening to him properly.

V:tumharein kaan mein micro sensors lage hai kya?

M:hmm.(Then she realized n asked) kya!!
V:yeah.coz agar nehi hai toh khamakha koshish maat karo.itne dur se kuch sunai nehi dega.

M: excuse me !! i wasn't trying to hear d convo,ok. its just..

V:just what?tell me?sth is bothering u.

M:leave it.u won't understand.

V:achcha!!
M:oh plz virat!(manvi said looking at him)u know ek to mujhe is poore arrange marriage ka concept hi samajh mein nehi ata! I mean, agar unko akele hi baat karne dena hai,to sabne humein unke saath kyun bheja,batao? N sabse badi baat,ek mulakat mein kaise koi kisiko itna jaan sakta hai k ye decide kar le ke yehi r8 banda hai, jiske sath main apni poori lyf guzarna chati hoon!!

V:apni apni choice hoti hai Manvi

M:ye saab kehna asan hai virat.but kabhi uss ladki k barein mein socha hai ? I mean,ek ladki jo itne saal apno k beech rahi hai ,achanak koi ladka ata hai, aur ek hi din mein rishta pakka? aur phir woh uss ladki ko sabse dur le jata hai, uske apno se ,uske parents se,behen se…

V:Hmm, to yeh baat hai !!
M:kya... kya baat hai?

V: tumhe is concept se problem nehi hai,actually tumhe iss baat ka dar hai k agar ye rishta pakka ho gaya to tumhari di tumse dur chali jayegi !

"nehi…woh…main actually.." manvi fumbled for words as she knew virat was r8.

Virat took a deep breath said "Manvi, look at me."

Manvi looked at him with hesitation & he continued "rishta tai hona ya na hona ye humarein haat mein nehi hai, ye to Bhagwan k haat mein hai.par,ek ladki jab shadi karke kisi aur ghar mein jaati hai to uska apno se rishta nehi toot jata,balki aur bohot sarein naye rishtein ban jatein hai.tumhari di agar kalko meri bhabi baan bhi gayi,to bhi woh sabse pehle tumhari di rahegi.aur rahi baat kisi ko jaane ki,to kabhi kabhi aap ek mulakat mein bhi kisi ko jan letein hain,aur kabhi puri zindegi bhi kam padti hai.& jahan tak main apne bhai ko janta hoon ( he said looking at viren) woh is rishtein ko tabhi aage badayenge agar usmein tumhari di ki razamandi ho toh"

manvi realized however hard she might try to deny, virat's words carried a truth. Seeing manvi silent,virat also understood dat he could make manvi realize d point.

Just then Tanu came with d message dat d elders were calling dem.as all 4 of them proceeded to d house tanu talked to virat walking by her side.

Tanu : hi, m tanu

V: hello,hum mil chuke hai

T:haan woh to hai,but actually mujhe aapse kuch poochna tha

V:kya?

T:aap manvi di k dost hai na? I mean, u were d one who came here to drop her d other day?

All of dem stopped n virika gave a confused look at virat n manvi, while manvi glared at tanu.

V:yes (virat said casually)

T:Oh, so if u r her friend can I call u Virat bhaiya?

V:yes of course u can ( virat said smiling gently)

"umm...every1 must b waiting .we should go inside" manvi said quickly n every1 proceeded.

D vadera's left after a while saying dat they'll let every1 know their decision after talking amongst themselves.

At night : dadaji called Jeevika's dad to tell dat Viren n all other family members have liked jeevika very much.

As Vikas disconnected d call he noticed every1 present at d room was staring at him. He paused a while n said "well,…It's a yes from them." Every1 was happy, tanu hugged jeevi, and she blushed,

; while manvi remained silent. "but…" he added n every1 gave a questioning look . he continued "…. jeevika's yes is also important for them.d vadera's also want to give d kids some more tym so they get to know each other well.n I agree with dem. They should meet a few tyms more n then take any decision." he came near jeevi n asked "is it ok with u beta?".jeevika nodded her head affirmatively n gave a shy smile.

jeevika came out of d wash room n saw manvi sitting on d bed lost in her thoughts.

Jeevika : mannu, Kya soch rahi hai?( she said while sitting on d bed)

M: di aapne bataya nehi,apko Viren ji kaise lage?

J:pehle tu bol,tune mujhe kyun nehi bataya k virat tera dost hai?

M:mowka hi nehi mila na di !

J: aab to mila hai na! aab bol.

So manvi told d whole thing how she met virat n how they became friends.Manvi noticed ,Jeevika seemed to b really impressed to know abt Virat.

M:di,woh saab chodo, u didn't answer my question.Viren ji kaise hai?

J:he's nice mannu.I mean, he's actually really nice.Bohot suljhe huye insaan hai.

M:achcha! aur ye sab apko ek hi mulakat mein pata chal gaya!!
J:Mannu!! kabhi kabhi aap ek mulakat mein bhi kisi ko jan letein hain,aur kabhi puri zindegi bhi kam padti hai.

Manvi remembered virat's words while listening to Jeevika.But somehow she was still not impressed with d idea.

M: Whatever di ! chalo aab so jao,aur mujhe bhi sone do.bohot neend aa rahi hai.( saying this she switched off d light n covered herself with d blanket ,not giving a chance to jeevika to say anything more.)

J: aare!! ...chal ok.good night. ( n she turned off d light too)

Manvi closed her eyes to shut d door of her thoughts, but in vein.Why does her lyf has to be so unpredictable? she felt like something heavy was pressed against her chest and she had to swallow to get rid of that feeling. She sighed, sometimes life was good. If her di was happy, that's what mattered most to her. N she can't b selfish here. It is just that, it's so hard to adjust to new situations and they again change just when you've adjusted. Is it a kind of rule that must happen with her? Some weird logic she would never be able to understand. God!!! Why were there so many questions with no answers!!

That's ol 4 2day girlis😊🤗

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