VirmanSS:Being Alive Part 9 updated (PAGE 18)

Hello friends, I m Disha .M an old but silent member of this forum.Some here might know me bcoz of a few posts n comments here n there. M crazy abt Virman & this craziness n some awesome writers of this forum has inspired me to write a story. But was not sure whether you all would be interested or not ,so thought of posting d Intro only. So plz share ur views n suggest whether I should continue or not'.Sorry for d boaring speech.but plz do suggest coz ur comments mean a lot to me.

In my story I have changed Virman background slightly. Manvi is the only child of her parents and she lives with her mom. She is from a middle class background. On the other hand Virat's family is same as described in d serial. Its been 1 year since Virat is back from US, leaving his music studies incomplete. But in my story no one taunts him for that or accuses him as being useless (not even Dadaji or Bua).every1 has decided to give him space but is also worried abt his future. Jeevika will also b there in d story. She will b Viren's wife. But d only difference is, she is not Manvi's sister.

Intro:

"Being Alive" is the story of a 21 year old girl ,Manvi Chowdhry .Anyone who knows Manvi well, would define her not only as a bubbly & cheerful girl, but also as "life". Yes Manvi was life; she was the definition of being alive. She applied this theory to herself & also to others who surrounded her. Until one day when her life was changed completely. Now its been 2 years since she is living a life she has never wished for. She is just alive, but her soul is dying somewhere within.

Being Alive is a story of Virat Vadera. Life has been generous to him, and why not? After all he was d grandson of rich Vadera family. But deep down his heart he felt sth was missing. He felt his life was incomplete. He missed being alive.

This is the story of Virat and Manvi who had their own definition of being alive, until one day they encountered life, the day when they met each other. Little did they know, this encounter will teach them a completely new meaning of being alive.

Part 1: Coming soon''

N.B. Guyz I plan to post d 1^st part tonight.but I'll do that only after getting ur response.coz I don't want to disturb u guyz if u don't want any such story.

Index :

Intro- page 1

Part 1 & 2- page 4

Part 3 & 4- page 7

Part 5 & 6 - page 10

Hey its really nice cont soon i will be waiting 😛

Hi Disha... You are a writer. I better watch carefully about my stories. This is a cool concept. Wanna read more. Thanks for the pm and update soon.

Seems intrestng bt confused abt manvi past prob is realted to virat

oohhh pls continue soon :)

Sounds interesting
update soon
pls pm me

It sounds interesting plz pm me

Intresting.. continue soon.. n plz p.m me too..😊

wow really nice do continue

Nice concept.. Sounds interesting.. Loved the title.. Eagerly waiting for the first chapter.. Please pm me 😃