VirmanSS:Being Alive Part 9 updated (PAGE 18)

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cukky

@cukky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow it was awesome

loved it a lot

but pls next time more virmaan pls.

cont soon😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

thanx alottt for the double updates...😊
the updates were no doubt awesome wanna exactly know wats going on with manvi wat is really bathering her that she changed...jeeman moments were soo cute and emotional and the moments how easily virat understood her and explained her the whole thing his concern and care are just soo adorable 😊
waise manvi's concept on marriage is a thought in every galz mind these days no doubt but the most amazing part is we trust our parents blindly that we are soo sur ethat they will select the rite person for us and next that its based on trust how we trust one person and enter a new life next that we galz are so strong that we are selected to do this means we are considered stronger be proud of it 😊
soorryyy for that lecture but wanted to share mine thought 😆

the update no doubt was just awesome 👏👏but want more of virman 😊
update soon 😊

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@.jai.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Awesome update loved it..
pls continue soon..😊

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Dorae

@Dorae

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Wow such a beautifully written.👏

When I started reading I was like how did I missed it... You are an awesome writer...

Character sketch was beautifully... Glad to know that virat has a support of his family...

I am happy that virat and maanvi's not a love at first sight *i don't believe in it*.

...So virat was searching was article writer i.e maanvi...Waiting for his reaction when he will learn about writer.

Destiny made them to meet again in the name of theif or in park which made them friends.

But why maanvi have negative feeling about herself. I think virat will change her feelings.

Liked how virat trashed the manager...This made virat and maanvi to come in close bond of friendship and also made her smile after long time...

Articles are beautifully written by you...

Liked jeevika and maanvi relation...also liked virat perspective towards marriage...Hope maanvi understands this...Waiting how their relation will turn in the name of viren and jeevika marriage...

liked the title so much...

Thank you for beautifully written disha.

Takecare.

Edited by sonu0111 - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Both the parts was fab dishu...jeeman bond was just adorable...loved virman convo...cont soon

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sonu0111
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😕 ??

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: cukky
wow it was awesome
loved it a lot

but pls next time more virmaan pls.

cont soon😊

thanx 4 liking yaar.yup,i promise next tym virman hi virman milega😊😉

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
thanx alottt for the double updates...😊
the updates were no doubt awesome wanna exactly know wats going on with manvi wat is really bathering her that she changed...jeeman moments were soo cute and emotional and the moments how easily virat understood her and explained her the whole thing his concern and care are just soo adorable 😊
waise manvi's concept on marriage is a thought in every galz mind these days no doubt but the most amazing part is we trust our parents blindly that we are soo sur ethat they will select the rite person for us and next that its based on trust how we trust one person and enter a new life next that we galz are so strong that we are selected to do this means we are considered stronger be proud of it 😊
soorryyy for that lecture but wanted to share mine thought 😆
the update no doubt was just awesome 👏👏but want more of virman 😊
update soon 😊

thanx for liking cutie🤗 .

every tym i see a long comment ,mera dil garden garden ho jata hai yaar.😃 n no sorry, coz it wasn't a lecture at all. i apreciate ur pov.

yup, i promise next tym virman hi virman milega.isi liye toh virika k zariye unka rasta clear kar rahi thi😉

luv u. tc.😊

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Both the parts was fab dishu...jeeman bond was just adorable...loved virman convo...cont soon

Cutie main kuch bhi likhu,tu hamesha tarif karti hai😊. thank u ji,thank u. I thought this tym every1 will throw jootas n chappals on me coz there was less virman.

but promise,next tym se virman hi viman milegaThanx again 4 d comments.❤️