Originally posted by: alicemath
Wot a mind-blowing story dear...u hav left me speechless...👏👏
Started noticing this story wen u updated the 7th part...Gosh hw cud i hav been so blind to hav not noticed such an amazing piece of work... There ...u hav caught me red-handed for not commenting since past 2 updates...Sorry...wil try to comment regularly frm nw on😃
Well cumin to the updates...well i m luving this cute bubbly Maanvi n Jeevs too...Absolutely adore the Jeeman bonding in ur story than in the real series...Their hoemance r truly a treat to read...Luv hw jeevs z always protective of manvi...Hav to say a lovely pair...😉
N secondly Aran- Manvi update wz just uber-cute ...awww ...n how well he bonded wid Virat in no time...Aran z such a cutiepie...wish to c this character more often in the story 😳😳
Manvi's bonding wit the boys r so cute...They share a gr8 bond...The latest update where they too eager to meet their lil sisii like figure aftr soo loong wz tooo sweet an adorable shows how much they missed her during their tour...Want them to blast on Virat atleast once for hurting Manvi ..😡
N nw our Hot Rockstar Virat...Luvd hw he started flirting wid Manvi frm the very first moment they met...hw he wz so hell bent on getting close to Manvi...n Manvi's "Hard- to get- me" game ...n my fav part z the time wen virat came ovr to comfort her wen she wz stuck up alone wid her cranky mood... those tiny-winy virman moments...n finally wen their friendship slowly bloomed n grew stronger...hw comfortable they wer wid each othr...
n Then suddenly one fine morning he started ignoring her ...well i wz fine wid dat tooo...coz since a loong time Maanvi stil saw him as her bestie n nothin more...But started hating him frm the very moment he get along wid a bitch like Christa...How dare dat Crappy coward heartless jerk Vadhera do sumthing like dat just to get ovr his feelings for Maanvi...😡😡😡I thot atleast the boys wud b able to knock sum senses into him...but guess Viren wil oly b able to handle him nw...once he cud to knw abt evrythin thru Jeevz...
Itz truly a treat to read ur work...Plzz cont soon...
Would luv to recieve pm for ur future updates...n Plz dont keep us waiting for loong
Luv n huggiess🤗
-Alice
Hey dear...Alice again...Forgt to mention a few ...Luvd hw u mentioned Barun- Pashmeen...😳😳
N Manvis mommy seems to b a super kewl mom...n hw well she knows Virat
Last but not the least ...hope we wont hav to bear wid that bi**h Christa for loong...😡😡😡
Luvd how Jeevz handled her ... But the last part ...hate Virat more n more for hurting that poor soul...Would hav been if hez doin al dese aftr she had rejected him aftr letting her knw him feelings...But..
Would luv to c Jealous Virat seeing Manvi wid sumoneelse...
My fav line so far " Why do I care so much? If he wants me out of his life so bad
without an explanation than fine... his wish is granted. Congratulations Vadhera
you officially lost me. "
Plzz Cont soon...thank you 😊
Thank You so much Alice🤗
Woah god such a huge comment!😲
When i was checking it at first i thought it would be a small thanks or awesome!
But you typed an Essay???😲
Thank You So much for that!🤗
Ahh its okay i understand you must be busy you don't have to say sorry!😊
Yeah i always wanted Jeeman to be like that!😉
You will soon see what will happen!
I PUT A KARAN AND VIRAT CONVO NEXT UPDATE YOU WILL LOVE IT!❤️
I agree Virat is such a Jerk!
And i guess you are loving Christa more than Virat🤣
I love Barun and Pashmeen Ka jodi a lot too!
Noo You Wouldn't have to bear for long she will be out soon!😉
You Love that Line i know it sounds weird when i say but even i love it too!
From the moment i wrote it i started loving it!😳
Thanks You so much Dear You are truly Awesome too!
Must say a good observer!👏
Yeah i will surely pm You!😉
I wouldn't want yo to miss my updates either!😛
I will continue soon Too!😳
Luv and Hugs🤗
K.A.J.A.L❤️