I am not that easy ;-) {virman}Ch 18 on Pg 108 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keertu

THE UPDATE WAS FABULOUS.tat christia or christa watever i hate her to the core..

i loved karan's dialouge.the boys were fabulous.
jeeman are adorable.
but cming to virman they are hurting themselves.
pls yaar it's not fair i am happy u updated but it was really short.and there was no virman.
anyways thanks for the PM.
waiting for next part.😭

Thanks!😃
I know its so short but next one long pakka!😃
Will update soon!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Mind blowing update kajal👏👏...really loved it... 😃...tat Christa...i m gonaa kill her...bitchaa...really suits her...😡...the way she behave with manvi...arggh...😡...but hamari manvi sherni hai...the way she handled her...muaah...loved it...⭐️...and virat...wat is he doing...kissing tat chrita...eww...😡...loved the way all the boys supported manvi...it was so nice...😊...n pashmeen and viren is also very sweet...😳...haww...christa threatening manvi...wat the...😡...
now looking forward for next update...thank u so much for the pm and take care...😊

Thanks Yami!😳
Manvi the Sherni!😆
Christa is a bitch😡
Will update soon Take Care😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi13

hey kajal i jst read da whole story in one go.. nd it is mind blowing!!!😃

da concept is jst awsome... i luv all da charactersin da story except christa... in da strting da frndship between everybody was so nicely written..
den da tym wen virat cums 2 manvi's home was so cute... bt i strtd hating virat wen he strts 2 behave coldly wid manvi.. i knw dat he's trying 2 hide his feelings bt still feel bad fr manvi..
nd dis christa is so irritating... arghh... though she is nly a character she gets on ma nerves... she is so damn fake...
i luv jeevika's attitude 2wards christa... nd all other boys too...
christa is definetly jealous of manvi cz virat still pays mre attention 2 her... hpe virat confesses his feelings fast...
i hav nt given such a long comment till 2day... bt ur work has made me go 'wow'... u r a truly amazing writer...
plzz plzz cont soon nd do pm me next tym...😊

Hey Shruti,
Thank you so much!
Christa is surely jealous of manvi!
Virat will confess soon😳
EEekksss! Then I am the lucky person!
I am the one who got your first long comment
Thank you!😳
Will continue soon and pm you too!😳
Send me a request if possible caz i have some problems!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Kajal superb update 👍🏼.. Thank you for this quick update.. As usual I hated Christa 😆.. Bitcha suits her more 😆.. She is so damn annoying .. Even Inder cant stand her 😆.. I just hate her 😡.. She was being so rude to Manvi.. Im glad that Manvi handled her maturely .. Boyz are adorable as always 😃.. Loved the way they all supported Manvi.. Pashmeen and Viren both are really sweet.. Virat is such a big loser 😡.. One moment he is trying to say sorry through eyes and all & in the very next moment he is kissing that stupid girl.. Moron.. I really want Manvi to teach him a proper lesson.. You are an amazing writer Kajal 😃.. You made me hate Virat so much.. If possible please continue soon 😳.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😃

Thanks meera!😳
Manvi is Sherni na?😉
She can handle all dogs(christa)🤣
Haha i am sorry if i made you hate virat😆
will cont soon!
Take care!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Wot a mind-blowing story dear...u hav left me speechless...👏👏


Started noticing this story wen u updated the 7th part...Gosh hw cud i hav been so blind to hav not noticed such an amazing piece of work... There ...u hav caught me red-handed for not commenting since past 2 updates...Sorry...wil try to comment regularly frm nw on😃

Well cumin to the updates...well i m luving this cute bubbly Maanvi n Jeevs too...Absolutely adore the Jeeman bonding in ur story than in the real series...Their hoemance r truly a treat to read...Luv hw jeevs z always protective of manvi...Hav to say a lovely pair...😉

N secondly Aran- Manvi update wz just uber-cute ...awww ...n how well he bonded wid Virat in no time...Aran z such a cutiepie...wish to c this character more often in the story 😳😳

Manvi's bonding wit the boys r so cute...They share a gr8 bond...The latest update where they too eager to meet their lil sisii like figure aftr soo loong wz tooo sweet an adorable shows how much they missed her during their tour...Want them to blast on Virat atleast once for hurting Manvi ..😡

N nw our Hot Rockstar Virat...Luvd hw he started flirting wid Manvi frm the very first moment they met...hw he wz so hell bent on getting close to Manvi...n Manvi's "Hard- to get- me" game ...n my fav part z the time wen virat came ovr to comfort her wen she wz stuck up alone wid her cranky mood... those tiny-winy virman moments...n finally wen their friendship slowly bloomed n grew stronger...hw comfortable they wer wid each othr...

n Then suddenly one fine morning he started ignoring her ...well i wz fine wid dat tooo...coz since a loong time Maanvi stil saw him as her bestie n nothin more...But started hating him frm the very moment he get along wid a bitch like Christa...How dare dat Crappy coward heartless jerk Vadhera do sumthing like dat just to get ovr his feelings for Maanvi...😡😡😡I thot atleast the boys wud b able to knock sum senses into him...but guess Viren wil oly b able to handle him nw...once he cud to knw abt evrythin thru Jeevz...

Itz truly a treat to read ur work...Plzz cont soon...
Would luv to recieve pm for ur future updates...n Plz dont keep us waiting for loong

Luv n huggiess🤗
-Alice

Hey dear...Alice again...Forgt to mention a few ...
Luvd hw u mentioned Barun- Pashmeen...😳😳
N Manvis mommy seems to b a super kewl mom...n hw well she knows Virat
Last but not the least ...hope we wont hav to bear wid that bi**h Christa for loong...😡😡😡
Luvd how Jeevz handled her ... But the last part ...hate Virat more n more for hurting that poor soul...Would hav been if hez doin al dese aftr she had rejected him aftr letting her knw him feelings...But..
Would luv to c Jealous Virat seeing Manvi wid sumoneelse...
My fav line so far " Why do I care so much? If he wants me out of his life so bad
without an explanation than fine... his wish is granted. Congratulations Vadhera
you officially lost me. "

Plzz Cont soon...thank you 😊

Thank You so much Alice🤗
Woah god such a huge comment!😲
When i was checking it at first i thought it would be a small thanks or awesome!
But you typed an Essay???😲
Thank You So much for that!🤗
Ahh its okay i understand you must be busy you don't have to say sorry!😊
Yeah i always wanted Jeeman to be like that!😉
You will soon see what will happen!
I PUT A KARAN AND VIRAT CONVO NEXT UPDATE YOU WILL LOVE IT!❤️
I agree Virat is such a Jerk!
And i guess you are loving Christa more than Virat🤣
I love Barun and Pashmeen Ka jodi a lot too!
Noo You Wouldn't have to bear for long she will be out soon!😉
You Love that Line i know it sounds weird when i say but even i love it too!
From the moment i wrote it i started loving it!😳
Thanks You so much Dear You are truly Awesome too!
Must say a good observer!👏
Yeah i will surely pm You!😉
I wouldn't want yo to miss my updates either!😛
I will continue soon Too!😳

Luv and Hugs🤗

K.A.J.A.L❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
meri partner ki behna...
i am sorry...
please apni naina ko maaf karde...
please...
humse bhool ho gayi, humka maafi dei do...
kaan pakad ke sorry my devil pal...
i know i havent commented on the last 5 to 6 updates but what to do... .ye kambhaqt studies n all...
please muhse gussa mat ho kajal...
please...
but that doesnt mean i havent read the updates... i have read each n every update n that too twice... because you are a fabulous babes... you expressions and feelings of teh character so beautifully...
and one secret... shh... i ahve fallen in love with this ff n i have started loving 1d even more now... 😉
love you mrs. styles...
take care n i will comment on very chapter just gimme some tym...
loads of love
naina... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

meri partner ki behna...

i am sorry...
please apni naina ko maaf karde...
please...
humse bhool ho gayi, humka maafi dei do...
kaan pakad ke sorry my devil pal...
i know i havent commented on the last 5 to 6 updates but what to do... .ye kambhaqt studies n all...
please muhse gussa mat ho kajal...
please...
but that doesnt mean i havent read the updates... i have read each n every update n that too twice... because you are a fabulous babes... you expressions and feelings of teh character so beautifully...
and one secret... shh... i ahve fallen in love with this ff n i have started loving 1d even more now... 😉
love you mrs. styles...
take care n i will comment on very chapter just gimme some tym...
loads of love
naina... 😊 😊 😊

Oye meri behen ki partner tu kyun itna sorry bol rahi hain tujhe nahi pata how much i missed you!
But You are Back Now

I was never angry on you agar ek aur bar sorry boli tho...

Daant padegi
You read it na thats more than billion dollars to me!
But missed your comments a lot and you too!
It was all rookha sookhs without u and ur amazing comments!
You love 1D????
Yeah party time!!!!!!!!!!!

Love you too Mrs.Vadhera!😆{i know it}
Take care
and its okay dear!
Edited by Hazza.oneD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bitchh! 🤗 Another fantastic update. :D
Loved each and everything except for that Christa. 😡 She really needs to get away. Doesn't she understand that she's way tooo annoying. -.-
Otherwise than that I loved the eye lock part. :)
And I pity VirIka and Manvi. They have to bear that Christa.
Keep getting fat. 🤣 Loved that part :D
Keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates dear.. cont. soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Deeps-

Bitchh! 🤗 Another fantastic update. :D
Loved each and everything except for that Christa. 😡 She really needs to get away. Doesn't she understand that she's way tooo annoying. -.-
Otherwise than that I loved the eye lock part. :)
And I pity VirIka and Manvi. They have to bear that Christa.
Keep getting fat. 🤣 Loved that part :D
Keep it up. 👍🏼

Assy I missed you Agar yeh pad rahi hai toh scrap me!😉
It would beweird if you like Christa which i hope you wouldn't🤣
Main use jaldi nikhal dungi!😉
Thanks Assy😃
Love You too😆
Edited by Hazza.oneD - 12 years ago

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