I am not that easy ;-) {virman}Ch 18 on Pg 108

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

seriously this christa is gettin on my nerves - can she nt think of anythin else apart from sticking her tongue into virat's mouth bt then again he is no less u've made pashmeen so sweet in here i really lyk that hw dare this christa be lyk that with manvi she really has a big problem- i luv the smart remarks manvi gives bak to her lolz hopefully nw maybe things myt slowly becum alryt - realisation myt be on the way bt nt the confession thats wat i thinkfantastic update thanx a lot for that 😊

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

THE UPDATE WAS FABULOUS.tat christia or christa watever i hate her to the core..

i loved karan's dialouge.the boys were fabulous.

jeeman are adorable.

but cming to virman they are hurting themselves.

pls yaar it's not fair i am happy u updated but it was really short.and there was no virman.

anyways thanks for the PM.

waiting for next part.😭

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Kajal superb update 👍🏼.. Thank you for this quick update.. As usual I hated Christa 😆.. Bitcha suits her more 😆.. She is so damn annoying .. Even Inder cant stand her 😆.. I just hate her 😡.. She was being so rude to Manvi.. Im glad that Manvi handled her maturely .. Boyz are adorable as always 😃.. Loved the way they all supported Manvi.. Pashmeen and Viren both are really sweet.. Virat is such a big loser 😡.. One moment he is trying to say sorry through eyes and all & in the very next moment he is kissing that stupid girl.. Moron.. I really want Manvi to teach him a proper lesson.. You are an amazing writer Kajal 😃.. You made me hate Virat so much.. If possible please continue soon 😳.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😃

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Wot a mind-blowing story dear...u hav left me speechless...👏👏

Started noticing this story wen u updated the 7th part...Gosh hw cud i hav been so blind to hav not noticed such an amazing piece of work... There ...u hav caught me red-handed for not commenting since past 2 updates...Sorry...wil try to comment regularly frm nw on😃

Well cumin to the updates...well i m luving this cute bubbly Maanvi n Jeevs too...Absolutely adore the Jeeman bonding in ur story than in the real series...Their hoemance r truly a treat to read...Luv hw jeevs z always protective of manvi...Hav to say a lovely pair...😉

N secondly Aran- Manvi update wz just uber-cute ...awww ...n how well he bonded wid Virat in no time...Aran z such a cutiepie...wish to c this character more often in the story 😳😳

Manvi's bonding wit the boys r so cute...They share a gr8 bond...The latest update where they too eager to meet their lil sisii like figure aftr soo loong wz tooo sweet an adorable shows how much they missed her during their tour...Want them to blast on Virat atleast once for hurting Manvi ..😡

N nw our Hot Rockstar Virat...Luvd hw he started flirting wid Manvi frm the very first moment they met...hw he wz so hell bent on getting close to Manvi...n Manvi's "Hard- to get- me" game ...n my fav part z the time wen virat came ovr to comfort her wen she wz stuck up alone wid her cranky mood... those tiny-winy virman moments...n finally wen their friendship slowly bloomed n grew stronger...hw comfortable they wer wid each othr...

n Then suddenly one fine morning he started ignoring her ...well i wz fine wid dat tooo...coz since a loong time Maanvi stil saw him as her bestie n nothin more...But started hating him frm the very moment he get along wid a bitch like Christa...How dare dat Crappy coward heartless jerk Vadhera do sumthing like dat just to get ovr his feelings for Maanvi...😡😡😡I thot atleast the boys wud b able to knock sum senses into him...but guess Viren wil oly b able to handle him nw...once he cud to knw abt evrythin thru Jeevz...

Itz truly a treat to read ur work...Plzz cont soon...

Would luv to recieve pm for ur future updates...n Plz dont keep us waiting for loong

Luv n huggiess🤗

-Alice

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Awesome updt...crista is such...any ways i loved the whole updt...it was superb...cont soon

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Hey dear...Alice again...Forgt to mention a few ...

Luvd hw u mentioned Barun- Pashmeen...😳😳

N Manvis mommy seems to b a super kewl mom...n hw well she knows Virat

Last but not the least ...hope we wont hav to bear wid that bi**h Christa for loong...😡😡😡

Luvd how Jeevz handled her ... But the last part ...hate Virat more n more for hurting that poor soul...Would hav been if hez doin al dese aftr she had rejected him aftr letting her knw him feelings...But..

Would luv to c Jealous Virat seeing Manvi wid sumoneelse...

My fav line so far " Why do I care so much? If he wants me out of his life so bad

without an explanation than fine... his wish is granted. Congratulations Vadhera
you officially lost me. "

Plzz Cont soon...thank you 😊

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

hey kajal i jst read da whole story in one go.. nd it is mind blowing!!!😃

da concept is jst awsome... i luv all da charactersin da story except christa... in da strting da frndship between everybody was so nicely written..

den da tym wen virat cums 2 manvi's home was so cute... bt i strtd hating virat wen he strts 2 behave coldly wid manvi.. i knw dat he's trying 2 hide his feelings bt still feel bad fr manvi..

nd dis christa is so irritating... arghh... though she is nly a character she gets on ma nerves... she is so damn fake...

i luv jeevika's attitude 2wards christa... nd all other boys too...

christa is definetly jealous of manvi cz virat still pays mre attention 2 her... hpe virat confesses his feelings fast...

i hav nt given such a long comment till 2day... bt ur work has made me go 'wow'... u r a truly amazing writer...

plzz plzz cont soon nd do pm me next tym...😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Mind blowing update kajal👏👏...really loved it... 😃...tat Christa...i m gonaa kill her...bitchaa...really suits her...😡...the way she behave with manvi...arggh...😡...but hamari manvi sherni hai...the way she handled her...muaah...loved it...⭐️...and virat...wat is he doing...kissing tat chrita...eww...😡...loved the way all the boys supported manvi...it was so nice...😊...n pashmeen and viren is also very sweet...😳...haww...christa threatening manvi...wat the...😡...
now looking forward for next update...thank u so much for the pm and take care...😊

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kajal juneja

@Hazza.oneD

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
kajal thanx alot for updating so fast 😊
Again an awesone update 😃

The bitcha go bke protest frm the gang is fun ..i jst enjoy those sarcastic talks and luks [:P

Viren and pashameen added to the group they are sweet and positive characters 😊

Manvi getting hint of virat nt liking tht bitcha
That excitd me hope she knws the whole truth

Update soon

Ur welcome dear!

Thanks so much!

She will know it soon!😉

will update soon!

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kajal juneja

@Hazza.oneD

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: copypaste
with every update i m hatting jerk vadhera mre and mre
Omg suddenly he is trying to say sry through eyes wat an coward jerk he is cn't evn xplain how much i m hating viraat and christina uff she is jst so dam annoying a jealous a** i guess she is aware of viraat's feelings so she is insecure i wonder wat boyz vl do wen they vl knw hw she behaved with maanvi except that jerk viraat
Oh god i jst luv maanvi and boyz bonding hayee how they were answering tht bimboo
Hayee mera grovo ❤️
Maanvi is so dam sweet she really deserves a man an actual man
And jeevs i cn imagine her fce when bimbo was trying to hit on viren 🤣 bimbos r always bimbos 🤣
Now for me viraat dn't exsist in ur story
I m hpng maanvi to bump in to some one again i really wnt viraat to taste hs own medicine
Nxt saturday i m pakka dead

Hahaha!

Yes Christa knows it all!😳

Boys will definitely kick her like hell if they get to know🤣

Virat is an Mr.India now!🤣

Oh dear don't die if u die then who will read my updates??????🤣

thanks a lot!😃