VIRIKA OS *YOU CANT LEAVE ME *LAST PART PAGE 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AS I TOLD YOU THAT I LL BE UPDATING ALL MY STORIES FROM WEDNESTAD SO HERE IT IS .I LL BE UPDATING THE OTHER BY TODAY .

part 1

With each second the gun was coming close to jeevika and with each second she was remembering the 7 vow she took >the beautiful moments and all those moments were her virenji was with her .She was not at all sad because she was here for her virenji to protect n she was loving to die in this way .

After sometime there was complete silence ,jeevika eyes were closed and suddenly she heard the sound

manvi:jeeejuuu !!!!!!!!!

she turned back and saw her love her life lying on the floor .Karan was completely frightened because he just wanted to threat jeevika by shotting the vase behind her but viren came at the end moment and got shotted

jeevika:virenjiii(in tears )

she went near to viren and cupped his face .Viren also cupped his face and said

viren : i ve promised you that i wont leave you in beteween and i will never break my promise >>>>> i loveee uuu jeeevviikkaaa and then he fainted

Jeevika was all panicked what to do she immediately called for ambulance while manvi called police to get karan arrest
jeevika:virenji aap ko kuch nahi hoga mein aap ko kuch nahi hone doo gi

Soon the ambulance was there she sat with viren in the ambulance n from the time viren was lying he holded jeevika s hand and was still holding .The reached the hospital and viren was laid on the stretcher .the doctor came and said this is a police case n until police dont cum we cant do anything

jeevika:yaha mere pati zindagi aur maut ke beech mein lar rahe hai aur aap ko formalities poori karnnt hai

she hiolded his collar n told her that if anything happens to her virenji she will kill the doctor

The doctor agreed and immediately took him to the OT .With each passing hour jeevika was getting more desperate and was cursing herself for all .she couldnt imagine her life without virenji she would rather prefer to die instead of living without viren

After an hour doctor came out

PLZZ DO SHARE UR VIEWS N COMMENTS DONT ONLY READ BECAUSE ITS TAKING ALOT OF EFGFORTS UR COMMENTS MOTIVATE US TO WRITE MORE SO PLZZ DO GIVE YOUR FEEDBACK
THANK YOU

MARIA RAUF ...
Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awesome update dear just cant wait 2 know wht happens next so continue soon.
Thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awesome update dear just cant wait 2 know wht happens next so continue soon,hopping viren is fine.
Thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesomeee update dear!!!!!! seriouslyy, im sitting and wondering ab kya hoga!!!!! jaldi update kijiyee... pls PM me..thnkuuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awesome part i really want to read more wondering what'll update next plz update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Awsome babe..
Thanks for the pm and pm me agen when u update..
<3<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
superb!
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
it was a freaking awesome update dear...:):) eagerly waiting for the next part...!! thanx for the pm...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Lovely update!

I loved Viren's dialogue! 😳

Hope Viren's fine! *Fingers crossed*

Continue soon and please pm me! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hi Maria,
This is not fair, leaving at such a point :(
But see my thought process matched yours :D
Really eager for next part, thanks for pm, plate soon :)
Loved jeevika's anger on doc

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