VIRIKA OS *YOU CANT LEAVE ME *LAST PART PAGE 11

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mariarauf48

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey guys as my exams getting over on wednesday so planning to write an os .This os will consist of two to three parts .I will only continue if i get a good response because it takes alot of effort and time to write an as well as pm so please give your feedback .

PROLOGUE

karan : manvi se pehle kyun nah tera khel khattam kar doo jeevika vadhera

jeevika standing all numb dont know what to do except remembring her virenji and the beautiful moments she spend with him

karan loaded the gun and with an blink of eye the bullet came out from the gun and ...

guys do like n plzz give ur feedbacks because it really means alot

THANK YOU

PART 1 :PAGE 5

PART 2:PAGE 8

LAST PART :PAGE 11

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sara arif

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Yayyy! Im the first one to comment on the story🥳 Yesss pleaseee! Hell yesss , you need to continue this ,I'm desperately waiting already😊, Continuee soon , am waiting😃

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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continue soon!!

eager 2 read now after reading amazing prologue..

plz pm!!

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..Amrita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome concept plz continue soon

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shefali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Plz continue soon..n pm me...😉

nice concept !!!

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Jennifer

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Would love to read on virika...😊

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--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Please continue soon! 😳 I was actually expecting a scene like that. 😛

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KatieDruzza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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yea you definitly should continue :D will be waiting . and continue soon with a long part :D

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-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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yaeh.. Maria Naik kaam mai dari kiu..

plz pm me..

-meHaK-

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fan123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

plz continue soon! PM me if possible

Thanks

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