VIRIKA OS *YOU CANT LEAVE ME *LAST PART PAGE 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awesome start cannot wait to read more please pm me when you do thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
wow maria ❤️
u r superbb continue soon .. waiting eagerly and thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
THANK U GUYS FOR THE AWESOME FEEDBACK .I WASNT EXPESTING SUCH A HUGE FEEDBACK BUT THANK YOU .DO CONTINUE IN GIVING YOUR LOVELY COOMENTS IT FEELS GOOD AND MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE MORE SO HERES THE NExT UPDATE

PART 2
After an hour doctor came out .He had a dead expression on his face which made jeevika more tensed that shewas not even able to ask the doctor what happen .Before she could say anything the doctor said everything which was enough for jeevika to be shattered .

doctor :sorry mrs vadhera he is no more .

jeevika couldnt digest the words of the doctor .she cant believe that a part of her body is no more her virenji is no more .how can he do that he promised me he ll never leave me so how can .She was completely shattered and fell on the floor .Virenjii you cant leave me how can u do do this .we promised each other that we ll be tagather till our last breathe

nurse : mrs vadhera mrs vadhera

jeevika came out of her thought n realised that it was her dream the worst dream of her life .she quickly got up and ask the nurse about viren

nurse:he z still unconsious and there r very less hopes but we r trying our best .we ve shifted him in the other room n kept under observation if u want u can go n meet him

tears start falling from her eyes .She immidiately went to meet viren .he life was lying lifeless on the bed all this becayse of her .She went near him and place a kiss on his forehead with the assurance that she wont let anything happen to him .

I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT I VE TO GO BUT STILL I UPDATYED AS I PROMISE I LL UPDATE SOON .THE NEST PART WILL BE A LONG ONE N WILL BE THE LAST PART FOR THIS OS AFTER WHICH I LL CONTINUE MY OTHER OS

HOPE YOU LIKE IT DO LIKE AND COMMENT




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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

*UNRES*

First one to comment

The update was amazing

I literally had tears in my eyes

U really scared me the dream wala part

But thank god Viren is still alive

Continue soon

Will be waiting for the next update

And thanks for the pm

Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
dream part was very scary...
update was nice...
continue soon n plz try to make next part long...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome update,hope nothing happens 2 viren.
Dear u always leave the story on such part after which we just eagely wait wht will happen next,which is interesting.
Continue soon wth a long part n thanx 4 the pm
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
arey nhi nhi ree...not at all disturbed wit ur PM..plss do continueee..eager to know what happened... reallyyy awesomeee updatee!!!! i hope Viren is alive...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome yaar plz continue soon with a longer part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
such a emotional and lovely update...! eagerly waiting for the last part...:):) thanx for the pm...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
so emotional😭
thanks for the pm
continue soon😃

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