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NushIsh

@NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Maham...

I have always loved to read your reviews be it a 10 second precap or a 5 minute Virman scene...I have always loved the way you put your view out there...The way you express yourself always gave me a different way of looking at the scene..

This however has taken me to whole new level...I loved EHM from the very beginning and loved Virman to the core...The cancer track showed us an intense and passionate side to both Virat and Manvi although towards the end the execution of the scenes left us longing for more but your FF has filled in the hole that was left by the show, the hole they made by ending the track in the way they did...

You are simply amazing Maham...please do let me know when you publish your first book coz you're that good...

love it

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

OK so I need a list of books that u have written I mean u can no way NOT be an author or writer! DUDEEE ur SS is amazing!!!! Like speechless! Seriously!! You truly know how to let out the emotion even while writing its beautiful! I think this deserves one more part to give it a good and pleasant ending! Great story!

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

-res-

I got final exams day after and here I am, reading your SS.

Don't have it in me though to type a proper comment. Will do right after 20th!

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Sorry fr the late editing Maham dear..! Guess wat.. I was waiting fr some randomness from you..!😉 !

The last part..*I hate to say that* left me speechless! You just dived into the hearts of both the brothers & Need i say that, U unearthed the unspoken, selfish perceptions of the mortal mind! Virat wanting to save Maanvi at the cost of the unborn's life & Viren wanting to let Maanvi die.. True that you love your brother, True that you care for him but ther's another part of a human soul, a deeper one, which secretly wishes that our own being stays intact even at the cost of excruciating pain caused to another person! Blame Love for taking multiple forms as father, brother & Lover roiling the soul & causing war!! Maham, u portrayed the raw soul & that touched my heart deep down..!

I quite liked the open ending you gave Maham..(Selfish part of me thinks of another part😉) The open ending filled with Love, with promises of a future... where there will be Virat, Manvi with their Love.. & Love only..!

Edited by ..Gowri.. - 12 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome update Maham... Wonderfully written.. Virat punishing himself.. He is hating himself for loving Manvi... U portrayed every emotions of Virat wonderfully and then Viren's condition.. He knw his brother and his wife cant live without Manvi.. he have to do dis.. take dis tough decision for them.. Loved It yar... And Last scene Virman... How she believe his love can never let anythn happn to her nd his guilt... Maham continue if u can.. plz.

Edited by Shivrajput52 - 12 years ago

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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I'm still crying after reading this..

How could you?? I wish this really happened in the show.. I really do.

I sincerely pray that no one goes through this in real life.

You are such an awesome writer and I have no words to express it..

Hats off

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Sanii

@SAnA.S.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Very well Written Maham!! 👍🏼

Loved it.. ❤️

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome Maham... How I wish the CVs had shown it like this instead of the mess they made..

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

words arnt enough maham jst loveee it

its sooo deeppp

can fell evrythng

thnk u for such beautiful stuff 👏

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

wow this was awesome...beyond words awesome...i dont usually cry at sad stuff...bt the vv bro conversation made me all teary-eyed...the abortion track had so much potential...and scope for all the actors involved...struggle abt choices , abt sacrifices whether it was j or viren or virat...all of it cud hav been explored so well...bt the cvs ruined it...i always imagined a scene like this where virat , viren and j think abt the choices they made and the price they had to pay for their choice...bt the cvs didnt show anything like that...khair this was a lovely piece of writing...

if possible update this...perhaps maanvi's side and reaction...

bt this entire ss was unbelievably well written...you hav a way wid words...keep writing...