Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 27

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PART-23
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maanvi come with tray of sweet dish which made..virat looking too nevouse nd wottied...tensed..as maanvi served her khir to everyone virat's tensions increase more..as he never saw her cooking anythingg..she olny made balck coffee every time..he thought she cannot cook..
Maanvi sit next to virat nd gve him his bowl of khir..he just look at everyone nd then khir nd maanvi nd again look at his family..
S-took one spoon of khir-humm...
I-also eat khir..
Virmaan both just looking at them to observe their ecxpressions nd also comments on khir...
S-took next bit also..
They just eating khir..maanvi who know she made good khir bt still want to know their comments on her cooking looking at them with little nervously...she bit her lower lip nd look at virat..bt she get confuse to see him eating his own nail on place of khir... As virat realise her gaze on him he move little away nd change his position..
Again both look at their family..
V-finally he gave-aap log khate hi rrahoge ya batoge ki kaisa bana hai?
All look at him with surprise nd shock first nd then starts laughing...
V-felt little embarccing..
K-bhai...hahaga...haha...hum...hum..haha...jaha hum to khir ke test me itne kho gaye ki bata na bhool h gaye..
S-stop laughing yes maanvi khir bahot testy hai...
I-bilkul..
She smile at them widly..
Virat also felt proud for maanvi nd then he also eat his khir nd he also found amezing testy khir..
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- supriya ask help from maanvi for party nd told her to organize one party for their relative..
-for that maanvi change her plan with virat for rehsal
-when virat come to know this he get angry nd left without talking with maanvi for rehsal...
-he didnot come home at night to nd make excuse
-in party next day he ignore totally which noticed by his parents
-in party manao him with her innocence nd apologies
-in party their parents gve them gift
-tickets of haneymoon in switzerland for week..
-maanvi blushed nd virat jumped in ecxitment
-in honeymoon virat try to come close to her...where she unknowingli hurt him
-he get angry nd went to pub in hotel
-there maanvi again try to mano her angry husban
-bt he ignore her nd starts dancing with his fans
-maanvi get jelous..she drink 10 vodka shots one by one in pub
-in drunken stagr she create drama there nd in end she confess that she love him so she cannot saw him with any other girls...
-virat felt over joyed nd that night he found his love
-he took her in their room with him nd just admiring her who;e night..
-next night he make her confess again in real sense nd she did..
-that night maanvi gve all right to him on her as wife..
-from houney moon they come as reall husband nd wife...
Nd with this they turn pain into smile...
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END OF THE STORY...
-DEBO

I completed this story here...
Sorry for shortly finish this story...

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Originally posted by: pritivirman

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