Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorrryyy
mujhe ni pata tha aap logo ko di ki ye story bhi itni pasand hai...
Pakka aaj kaise bhi karke update de dungi
paakkka...
-debo
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx alott ya ...waiting for the update
pritivirman thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
stry end mt kro... nxt updt jaldi...wtng for updt...
pritivirman thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk god stry end nhi hg... i lovd it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry fr not commenting lately :(... just now read all the last five chapters in one go and I must say they are awsm... loved reading... pls cont soon khushi...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
but y did end it that fast
loved the way manvi manao virat
plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
plzzz don't end this story...
i love this story...
plzzz plzzz update update...
waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was scared Debo that u end this story
thank God u didn't
waiting for update
cont soon😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.. loved it..

Supriya ask help from maanvi for party nd told her to organize one party for their relative..
-for that maanvi change her plan with virat for rehsal
-when virat come to know this he get angry nd left without talking with maanvi for rehsal...
-he didnot come home at night to nd make excuse
-in party next day he ignore totally which noticed by his parents
-in party manao him with her innocence nd apologies
-in party their parents gve them gift
-tickets of haneymoon in switzerland for week..
-maanvi blushed nd virat jumped in ecxitment
-in honeymoon virat try to come close to her...where she unknowingli hurt him
-he get angry nd went to pub in hotel
-there maanvi again try to mano her angry husban
-bt he ignore her nd starts dancing with his fans
-maanvi get jelous..she drink 10 vodka shots one by one in pub
-in drunken stagr she create drama there nd in end she confess that she love him so she cannot saw him with any other girls...
-virat felt over joyed nd that night he found his love
-he took her in their room with him nd just admiring her who;e night..
-next night he make her confess again in real sense nd she did..
-that night maanvi gve all right to him on her as wife..
-from houney moon they come as reall husband nd wife... What is this???? Promo. Nice Promo i lyk it.. Continue soon..😊
Edited by .jai. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello di!😛

The update was awesome!👏

Last part, END OF THE STORY - did u end it here!😲

You know very well di, this story is really close to me after destiny... infact equal to destiny...😛

I know you are little busy, but if you want to end it here! No probs! I will support you even in this!😉

Will miss you di! Take care! 🤗

I love you a lot! I can't afford to loose contact with you... never!😳

Coming to the story... I would say it was short and simple but held a lot of emotions! 😛 It would always remain close to my heart!😉 I loved it a lot!😳 Awesome story!
🤗

- Arthy.

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