Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 29

Originally posted by: .jai.

Superb update.. loved it..



Supriya ask help from maanvi for party nd told her to organize one party for their relative..

-for that maanvi change her plan with virat for rehsal

-when virat come to know this he get angry nd left without talking with maanvi for rehsal...

-he didnot come home at night to nd make excuse

-in party next day he ignore totally which noticed by his parents

-in party manao him with her innocence nd apologies

-in party their parents gve them gift

-tickets of haneymoon in switzerland for week..

-maanvi blushed nd virat jumped in ecxitment

-in honeymoon virat try to come close to her...where she unknowingli hurt him

-he get angry nd went to pub in hotel

-there maanvi again try to mano her angry husban

-bt he ignore her nd starts dancing with his fans

-maanvi get jelous..she drink 10 vodka shots one by one in pub

-in drunken stagr she create drama there nd in end she confess that she love him so she cannot saw him with any other girls...

-virat felt over joyed nd that night he found his love

-he took her in their room with him nd just admiring her who;e night..

-next night he make her confess again in real sense nd she did..

-that night maanvi gve all right to him on her as wife..

-from houney moon they come as reall husband nd wife... What is this???? Promo. Nice Promo i lyk it.. Continue soon..😊

no i closed this story bt gve u the finat hint how story finished if i wrote this story...bt not...

Hwww khatam bhi kar diya? Kyu??? I can understand abt AM n UHTCB but wats wrong with this 1...now pls fr god sake dont do this with EJEJ...u know thats my frvt...so pls do full justification with that like AM n U HV TO COME BACK...pls khushi pls...debo pls convey this msg to ur di

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

no i closed this story bt gve u the finat hint how story finished if i wrote this story...bt not...

wht?? y r u closing this story??😭😭 Abrupt ending 🥺 dnt do this Khushi would love to read more from U..

plz kushi don't DC u'r stories plz u'r a good writter plzzz.

Amazinggg but plz yat explain all dis
It was too short I wana
Read all dat I mean d jealously session den confession nd den
Romance plz
Update it

hawww yu ended my fav story 😲
naah plz dnt do this complete in detail plz plz

nice ending finally
both are become husband and wife

Awesome
loved it
superb
like it ur each nd every work...