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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..

Glad you liked it sweets..Thanks😳

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Oh God reshma, what a update 😃..
You are like edkv cvs, pura poopat bana diya 🤣
Actually I guessed a bit in first update when you didn't mention the full name instead Only use S 😉, par kya haina Shravan ki tarha mera dimag thoda kharap hai 😉
Shravan and sumo are married... Dil ko thandak mili...
Sheher checking sumo out... The song was beautiful... Shravan and sumo's love is just as good as it can get...
Love their hug as well...
But still the Question is what sheher has to do with Shravan? Are they in love before?
Update soon...and thanks for pm...

Love
Smita

Hi Smita!

You know Smita is the name of a very close friend of mine too..

Lol...aise hi ched rahi thi aap logon ko😆

Actually the fact that I didn't use her name should have been a clue😛

Sehar checking out Sumo. .I am so pleased you noticed that. That's me. .I check out all the other girls in the parties I go to 😆

Haan. .their hug always makes me happy. .and that song is my favourite.

Seher aur Shravan ka rishta. .jald pata chalega.

Thanks for liking my story!!

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Relieved,hahaha😃

Marvelous update...

Thanks for the PM...

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: deltadawn
First things first

ahem ahem Sparkplug !! BEAT YA !! me first😎

I Knew it. I knew you would say something like this for sure. but,

Well that is only because maine aapko chance diya is baar.

Because you couldnt last time.

Okay. 😛

But comment toh kaatil maaraa hai. I am impressed.👏👏👏

Aur Resh Chechs. Next time please aise time pe update karna jab Americans so rahe ho. 😆

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Hey Reshma,

What a great surprise. You know what this is the best gift from you for the 1 year celebration for our Forum!!! Reshma starting writing. I knew it you could write. It comes naturally to you. You know I haven't even replied to anyone who commented on my update. As soon I logged in here today, I see your SS, I smiled like crazy. Thanks for this gift.

Part- 1: Amazing start with with details describing everything so beautifully. (This shows how much you observe everything). Was feeling really bad to know Shravan was married to someone else. And Shravan looked happy "Biwi sings", that part hurt me as I couldn't imagine Shravan happy with someone else. Cliffhanger!!!!👏

Part- 2: Great start with the song and the emotions that went along with them just gave me goosebumps. You kept the suspense. I didn't even think that this could be a third person's POV. Totally loved it. Now the title makes sense. You know I read an OS in this forum "Them", I don't remember who wrote but I really loved it, it was from third person's perspective too.

You are a great writer and now we have to match up to you by giving you as good comments as you gave to us. We'll try!!!

Thanks for this gift. Welcome to the writing side of the forum.😆

Lubna.

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: evaviego

I Knew it. I knew you would say something like this for sure. but,

Well that is only because maine aapko chance diya is baar.
Because you couldnt last time.
Okay. 😛

But comment toh kaatil maaraa hai. I am impressed.👏👏👏
Aur Resh Chechs. Next time please aise time pe update karna jab Americans so rahe ho. 😆

Sorry tere gifs nikal diye maine sparky. cause soon I will be ousted from Resh's post for spamming it 😉😆

Bete AMERICANS kabhi nahi sote !! kyunki internet chalu rehta hai 🤣

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: deltadawn
First things first

ahem ahem Sparkplug !! BEAT YA !! me first😎
Ya I saw that😆

Resh meri helicopter.. 🤗we should do a - you post I post game here. Readers thak jayenge par hum nahi😆

Baap re. .main itne mein hi thak gayi. .tu Annu ya Dolly ke saath khel le Yeh game😃

Now story bottom to top

Seher Khurana - Tumhara naam sun ke meri saas jo kal subah 7 baje se atki padi thi wo bahar nikal gayi. 😆Thank you for being Seher. Be nice to your hubby. seems like a nice guy.
Ab tu ne kaanda naahin cheela, toh Seher kya kare😆...yup her hubby is a gem.

If he could read your expressions... Either he knows your heart is not 100% his, or he knows something disturbed you today. Both ways be nice to the guy.
Torally agree there👍🏼 . Apne pati ki bhaavanao ko samjho Seher.

No snapping you see how shraman had to face so much because of such stuff. if not you will see soon enough.😉
Abhi toh mile hain. ..abhi to baatein hongi dil ki.

I hope she gets to know about shraman but really wish Sumo would not judge Shravan having met this girl and their relationship... abhi to gana gaya😕
Lets see if they have worked on the trust aspect of marriage.

Shraman question - wife hai and he proposed...means what I mean? (> episode 155?)
Or after😉

The song, your description of Sumo, and then the portrayal in words of every expression and change in it on Shravan's face. marvellous.👏
The song is my favourite Dips, the Shreya Ghoshal part, the pain tears me every time. Expression ke liye series ke Shravan ko yaad kiya.

I can see the guy in grey suite watching his wife in the sea blue drape wondering how that angel is kind enough to not only love him to but shed her inhibitions and sing it out in front of a crowd. what a response to his proposal.And what a hug...that is so #shraman.😳 Your lines to describe their feelings in that embrace I have no emoticon for swooning, overwhelmed with emotion and still lost for words.

Aww..Thanks yaar. Irrespective of the closeness that we share, I truly treasure your inputs as a fabulous writer as well, so please be honest with me. .I demand that.😳

dil ki baat kahein tumse socha tha aaj mere humdum

kya misaal dein, kaunse labz uthaaye ye bhi tha taye lagbhag

par jo hamari nas nas se hai waakif us humraaz ko aur kya batayein

jis dil ki baatein kehni thi wo dil hi nahi mila dhundne par...
SUBHANALLAH!! .kya baat keh Di yaar..dil jeet liya!!

Thanks Dips..Sigh!!...Will an I love you suffice? Ever?❤️

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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minho

@minho

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

I knew you will not separate shraman coz they are meant to be together.. Nice story dear 👏

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Finally...!!!!
Tumhare description se he pata chal gaya ke she was Suman...Those hazelnut eyes..!!!😃
Song❤️
So Seher Khurana is the girl...😉
Toh aab jab Seher aur Suman mil he gaye hai lets see whats goona be in our plate next...😆
Lemme take a guess...Does Sumo know about Seher through Shravan??And I think Seher won't feel much bad now
this night would be changing the course of my life going forward.
I think this line suggest the same...
U write so beautifully yaar...👍🏼
All thanks to the person who nudged you to write...
your descriptions are just fabolus and intriguing...!!!👏
Love ya..
ANU😳