SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 8

Finally...!!!!
Tumhare description se he pata chal gaya ke she was Suman...Those hazelnut eyes..!!!😃
Song❤️
So Seher Khurana is the girl...😉
Toh aab jab Seher aur Suman mil he gaye hai lets see whats goona be in our plate next...😆
Lemme take a guess...Does Sumo know about Seher through Shravan??And I think Seher won't feel much bad now
this night would be changing the course of my life going forward.
I think this line suggest the same...
U write so beautifully yaar...👍🏼
All thanks to the person who nudged you to write...
your descriptions are just fabolus and intriguing...!!!👏
Love ya..
ANU😳

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Oh god my poor little confused soul

Me kaha ja ke sar phodu bata meko

Such a dumbass i am I thought ki suman is narrating this story and you wrote her name in the first part oh god !!! Foolish me

But this was just👏👏👏

You know what the song was too good and took my heart away but could not feel the emotions as i thought someone else singing it for shravan and when it came out to be sumo I want and read the song again...the lyrics suited than so so perfectly that I had tears In my eyes😭😭😭 thanks to making me cry😛

You rock reshma baby👏👏👏

Such a wonderful writer you are

And water bodies can bring peace to any soul they're always so soothing

And when she said call me suman my heart stopped beating for a second and stupid me has to read both the parts again to realise that you never mentioned suman narrating this story 🤣

So finally i am breathing properly and have a smile on my face thank you so much for this reshma

And excitement me zyada hi bada comment to gaya so pardon me for this continous blabber

Thanks for p.m

Update soonish

the Super stupid dolly😛

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

I am finally out of danger after knowing that suman is not the one who is narrating the story!

I am laughing at my own dumbness and went back to read the first part again🤣

I don't know what should i say now, it is really amazing! 👏

Thanks for the pm😊

Update soonish!

Originally posted by: evaviego

Oh God. Popat ban gaya mera. 🤣 Well that's a compliment for you . I did not even have a slightest idea that this is what was coming.

And look at that. You revealed at the very end. Dil pe patthar rakh ke I read the whole chap. 😆 And then I was laughing hysterically at my popat-panti. And then read again. 🤣

Okay so SEHER's POV was beautifully written.😛

Suman wears Mangalsutra and sindoor.

I love the song she sang for him.❤️

The way Shrav is looking at Suman. (I can visualise it.)

Whats with Seher though?😛 Kyon Rishabh ka dil dukkha rahi hai. He is such a wonderful guy.😉

Water bodies, serendipity and Piscean . wow. Nicely penned.👏

Amazing one. Loved it. 👍🏼

This is dedicated to me.😲 Cutest and loving . 😳 Oh My God I will die blushing. ☺️ *Blush Blush Blush*

If I am your sunshine, then you are my moonlight. 😉😆😛

Thank you so much Love 🤗

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

I thought I had enough hints while describing her Eva😛

And Shravan would never look at anyone with that love.

Wanted to do something different, but it clearly backfired 😆

Barring a few, no one caught on.

I had never mentioned the names of both the ladies😃

Hmm..see it happens at times in marriage. .snapping just happens.

Water body and Piscean. ..that's me Eva!

Lol..moonlight 😉

Oh God reshma, what a update 😃..
You are like edkv cvs, pura poopat bana diya 🤣
Actually I guessed a bit in first update when you didn't mention the full name instead Only use S 😉, par kya haina Shravan ki tarha mera dimag thoda kharap hai 😉
Shravan and sumo are married... Dil ko thandak mili...
Sheher checking sumo out... The song was beautiful... Shravan and sumo's love is just as good as it can get...
Love their hug as well...
But still the Question is what sheher has to do with Shravan? Are they in love before?
Update soon...and thanks for pm...

Love
Smita

OMG, pura band baja diya mera 🤣... That's a compliment for you as you kept the suspense beautifully.. .
Relived that ShraMan are married... Song was beautiful
Hug give me goosebumps as I can imagine they are hugging each other...
If Shravan and sumo are married then what relation Shravan had with sheher?
Continue soon to clear our confusion and thanks for pm

Love
Shrujani

Mera nishana teek laga choota nehin... 😆 aur tu mujhse bach gayi... 😉

Heyyy 😃