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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome update di... Loved it
The song choice❤️ it's lyrics are beautiful
Finally we know the name "Seher Khurana"😃..Btw I really like the name Seher
Can understand that Seher still have some feelings for shravan but Rishabh seems a nice guy..
I m sure shraman are going to play Cupid's role in Rishabh-Seher's life knowingly or unknowingly..
Thanks for the pm
Excited for next update to know shraman's love story.. Plz continue soon😳


Meera!!..I am happy that you liked it baby!
The song is with me always these days..it's makes a good listen while I drive!
Seher has only a tiny part of her still attached to Shravann.
Cupid's role..is one of the most sweet roles anyone could play..let's see.
Thanks for your excitement. .It helped me in this chapter..and it will definitely help me in the next one.
Lots of love little one!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amks2016

Phewww !!

Seher Khurana 😳 nice name :)) .. Hmmm interesting turn of events ( I did go back to read the first update again 😆)

Loved the part whr Shravan laughs when hearing his wife is going to sing .. I almost visualized Sumo on stage n Shravan
The intensity with which u described Shravan n his wife eye contact during the song had butterflies in my stomach !! Being the ever romantic at heart .. I feel there are ppl who love like this 😳

Did feel a lil bad for Seher n her Husband 😕 wanna see how they progress

Can't wait for the story to unravel Resh but every time I see the title I see " Goodbye Shravan " my heart sinks

N lastly ur rite Eva is the little miss sunshine ❤️


I so badly want a scene whr Sumo is jealous .. Wanna a see ur version of it Resh 😳 if that is possible :))
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Posted: 8 years ago
ur story is amazing plzzz continue ...next episodes
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amks2016


I so badly want a scene whr Sumo is jealous .. Wanna a see ur version of it Resh 😳 if that is possible :))

Thanks for your love as usual Mayu. .I have always felt super attached to you..don't know why😳.
Jealous Sumo is a dream for mine too Mayu...haven't really thought about the next chapter. .I will try though.
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ressi res 😳
****
Unres
Reshma... 🤗

Deekshu baby🤗

Why didnt you wrote it before????!!!!
I had lost the touch sweets.didn't know if I still had it in me to write.
You are a freaking awesome writer you know ...!!
👏
Aww.thank you darling, you always pep me up!

Kya Suspence banaaya ya... 😉
Well a confession here...I was contemplating whether to read the first part or not as I had read the ending first not the starting..😛
N seeing ShraMan married to other individuals...No No I cant deal with it!!
Then I read it finally thinking that you cant do that to ShraMan...So lets give it a try.N am sooo glad that I did 😛
Sorry ha? 😳
Nahin re...I would hate the idea of them being married to different people myself. No apologies needed there babe😛

Coming to the upiii
Blasting one I would say... 👏
So it was Seher's POV...loved it though!!
Sumo in a saree with magalsutra n sindoor...
Song choice...Too beautiful!!...I love this song...Its lyrics n voice...❤️
I am so pleased that you liked it Deekshu!..Sumo'so look was my imagination totally. The female version of this song always reminded me of Sumo, for what she would want to express to Shravan. I love the song too!

You described soo beautifully how Sumo sung it...how Shravan looked at her...how Shravan hugged her being overwhelmed...kiss on forehead...Everything was oh so perfect!!...❤️

That scene is my favourite too..could literally feel Nimik doing it!

This Rishabh seems nice guy...but Seher...keep your eyes n mind Off Shravan !!
Your husband loves you...dont hurt him!!

Love is a complicated emotion. We nevery really understand it . Aur Shravan se toh door hi rakhegi Sumo sabko!

N water bodies calm me too yaa... 😳
Pisces...Loved it!!.❤️

Really. ..that part was me actually. ..I am a piscean and any water body always soothes me.

So Sumo-Seher met...talked...laughed!!
Lets see whats in store for us next... 😳

Looking forward to the next part...
Thanks for the pm bud n plz do cont soooinsh... 😊
Loads n loads of Love n 🤗 your way!!
Nikka sa Nik 😆


Aww..mera chota sa nikka sa Nik😆..kinni cute si tu!
You are a writer's delight. .you know that!..I always want to know what you thought about the story 😛
Thanks for all the love, sending you tons of love from here!
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Reshma Well am a piscean too(By Indian astrology) 😉
So I can totally relate to that particular part as am just like that ... 😳

Aww!! ☺️
Am I really cute??!!... 😛

Writer's delight...Oh!!
Heavy word!! 😛
Like really ya??!! 😳
Thank you yaa...🤗
But it suits you more...!!
Tussi bade sweet ho ji... 😉
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nik03

@Reshma Well am a piscean too(By Indian astrology) 😉
So I can totally relate to that particular part as am just like that ... 😳

Aww!! ☺️
Am I really cute??!!... 😛

Writer's delight...Oh!!
Heavy word!! 😛
Like really ya??!! 😳
Thank you yaa...🤗
But it suits you more...!!
Tussi bade sweet ho ji... 😉


Am I really cute you ask...baby..abhi tu mere saamne hoti na , toh tere gaal kheeckar tujhe 2 kissi deti main😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

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Am I really cute you ask...baby..abhi tu mere saamne hoti na , toh tere gaal kheeckar tujhe 2 kissi deti main😆😆



☺️ ☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Thanks for your love as usual Mayu. .I have always felt super attached to you..don't know why😳.
Jealous Sumo is a dream for mine too Mayu...haven't really thought about the next chapter. .I will try though.


Awww Same here homie 🤗 waitinggg 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Mera nishana teek laga choota nehin... 😆 aur tu mujhse bach gayi... 😉

Such a beautiful & meaningful song it's just perfectly fit into the situation...

Shravan became too emotional!. When u have such a wonderful & loving wife emotional hona ban tha hai.. 😳 & their bone crushing hug we always waited for that..

It was POV of Mrs Seher Khuranna.. 😛

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Vinu🤗

Haan Ji bilkul theek Laga aapka nishana😆...aur main sach mein Bach gayi Vinu ke Gusse se!
I had thought about Sumo, the minute I had heard the female version of Hasee ban Gaye, so used it here.
Haan yaar..and Sumo is so overwhelmed in his love...so it's but natural for Shravan to be emotional!
Bone crushing hug is one of my fondest memory of them..it will always remain with me.

Glad you are happy now😛

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