SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 12

Originally posted by: nahisa123456789

ur story is amazing plzzz continue ...next episodes

Originally posted by: minho

I knew you will not separate shraman coz they are meant to be together.. Nice story dear 👏

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Heyyy 😃

So I was right😉😆

Jokes aside, this looks really really interesting!! I am looking forward to the next part!!

Update soon please and thank you for the PM😳

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Reshma,

Hey Lubna!!

What a great surprise. You know what this is the best gift from you for the 1 year celebration for our Forum!!! Reshma starting writing. I knew it you could write. It comes naturally to you. You know I haven't even replied to anyone who commented on my update. As soon I logged in here today, I see your SS, I smiled like crazy. Thanks for this gift.

Awwe. That's super sweet of you Lubna. I feel so overwhelmed, can't really explain. You came here to comment even before you replied on your own story, that's speaks a lot about you. Thanks for being ever so encouraging.

Part- 1: Amazing start with with details describing everything so beautifully. (This shows how much you observe everything). Was feeling really bad to know Shravan was married to someone else. And Shravan looked happy "Biwi sings", that part hurt me as I couldn't imagine Shravan happy with someone else. Cliffhanger!!!!👏

Lol..I know..I was just trying to give a mini heart attack here. Actually Shravan's glee should have been a big clue in itself. Like you said, it is unimaginable to see him this happy with anyone other than Sumo.

Part- 2: Great start with the song and the emotions that went along with them just gave me goosebumps. You kept the suspense. I didn't even think that this could be a third person's POV. Totally loved it. Now the title makes sense. You know I read an OS in this forum "Them", I don't remember who wrote but I really loved it, it was from third person's perspective too.

You are a great writer and now we have to match up to you by giving you as good comments as you gave to us. We'll try!!!

Oh you have already been wonderful in your comments. No scope for improvement there. .and no need as well😃

Thanks for this gift. Welcome to the writing side of the forum.😆

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Ufff I an so clever! 😃😆😉 Lovely update Reshma! Pity that girl! Sorry for being this late! Literally banging head because of exams! Hufff!

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Of course you were right Sara😛...it takes an established writer to see through an amateur .

I am glad you are still interested ..I will definitely try and update soon!

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

eshma update kab kar rahi ho???Waiting waiting...