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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#851

Loved the brothers fight...and kamini chachi thinking pusher as that ki and shravan gay🤣

Shravan getting list in Sumo was sweet. They are too young...but it was very sweet nonetheless.

Ramanath appreciating all three kids was lovely to see.

I want sumo to ask shravan why he was upset.

Pushkar and varun to tease shravan abt getting lost in sumo.

Nana ji talking to sumo amd sheavan...in general..giving advise as elders do.

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#852

Love! Love Love!

That scene with Kamini Chachi! 😆 But my favorite is the silent moment between Shraman and Shravan realizing that he never fell out of love ❤️ I really can't wait for them to start talking and be their amazing selves!

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#853

Simply superb!!!

I liked the last part as I felt the essence of the whole story lies in it...

👏

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#854

Really, loved the chapter! 👏👏👏

It had equal amounts of comedy, fun, friendship, family and finally--love.

Kamini chachi's misunderstanding was hilarious. 😆

Poor Shravan was caught off guard. 🤣

Loved the cute fight between the bros.

The jealous fit of Pushakr was damn cute. 😳

I'm sure his heart will soon locate that one girl meant for him.

And once again a big round of applause

for the title--Noor, and the perfectly awesome way you

applied it to the chapter.👏👏

It was a mixture of adoration and sadness that I felt

when ShraMan allowed themselves the night

to relish in their truest feelings.

Hopefully one day they would be majbur enough before those feelings

that they won't be able to hold them back

or deny them ever, not even for a single damn moment.

Lots of love,

Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 7 years ago

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Really, loved the chapter! 👏👏👏

It had equal amounts of comedy, fun, friendship, family and finally--love.

Kamini chachi's misunderstanding was hilarious. 😆
Poor Shravan was caught off guard. 🤣

Loved the cute fight between the bros.
The jealous fit of Pushakr was damn cute. 😳
I'm sure his heart will soon locate that one girl meant for him.

And once again a big round of applause
for the title--Noor, and the perfectly awesome way you
applied it to the chapter.👏👏

It was a mixture of adoration and sadness that I felt
when ShraMan allowed themselves the night
to relish in their truest feelings.

Hopefully one day they would be majbur enough before those feelings
that they won't be able to hold them back
or deny them ever, not even for a single damn moment.

Lots of love,
Lara.

I very earnestly hope that this fits in well for the real two...

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rajiti

@rajiti

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#856

Hey Zoya,
What do I say!! An awesome update! Loved loved the whole part.
And the last part- am just sighing. You just managed to bring out the Noor in their hearts.
I love all your writings, they are literature for me.
Thank you.
Priti.

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#857

Mind blowing update. Its superb update that line pushkar to tharki h or shrvn vo.. 😆😆😆Ohh god itna hassi na m ur line pad k and I think ramnath doesn't aware of shrvn feelings he want to continue his job from London that's why he is sad lets see what next😊

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kanash

@kanash

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#858

Amazing. Your writing leaves me speechless, wish I could pen down my thoughts sooo well !

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#859

Zoya Api 🤗

Pushkar poor soul sari ladkiyan Chali gayi uske hath se and now he said jealous of his brothers height 😆

But Pushkar is cute

Kamini Chachi 🤣 Apne ghar ke Mundo ka Naam kharab kar Rahi Hain

Lalaji is right pura Khandan pagal hai

Shravan is trying to ignore his feelings coz of past

Shraman convo throught expression I can imagine that scene and it's lovely

They have a connection which they also don't know ❤️

Fantabulous update

Lots of Love

Zainab

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: Ivvy
Lovely update
Thank you so much Siddhi!!!😛
Comedy, romance n drama...Sab kucch tha isme...
Yeyy!
Pushkar toh bhaii namuna hai...Shravan bhi kam nahi hai...Bichare ka perfume swaha ho gaya😆
Chachi toh hilarious hai...Pushkar tharki hai🤣
I thought some light moments would be helpful.. I'm glad you liked it!
Rmanath is fab here👍🏼...Thank God for that...
Ramnath of my story is worth his salt! The mature lawyer that he should have been, not the saas who played kitchen politics 😆
Oho...Shravan is smitten by his Sumo...But woh toh ziddi hai...Manega nahi...Chalo koi nahi...Hum wait karlenge
Ji.. Intezaar karna padega.. It will be long before anything moves on that front...
After all sabr ka phal mittha hota hai...
Haanji! I shall try and make it the densest dark chocolate cake!
Thanks for the pm Zoya
Pleasure!
Love, Sidhi

@Bold Thank you so much Sidhi!

Its really good to have you back!

🤗

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