Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 87

Originally posted by: Nik03

Yedi is here with her RES!!!!

Originally posted by: bworm

Loved the brothers fight...and kamini chachi thinking pusher as that ki and shravan gay🤣

Hahaha haina! Full on!😆

Shravan getting list in Sumo was sweet. They are too young...but it was very sweet nonetheless.

Yeah they indeed are too young yet! Its young love😉

Ramanath appreciating all three kids was lovely to see.

IKR! 😳

I want sumo to ask shravan why he was upset.

Don't worry, Sumo is on it!

Pushkar and varun to tease shravan abt getting lost in sumo.

Mind reader eh?

Nana ji talking to sumo amd sheavan...in general..giving advise as elders do.

Yeah.. Nanji is very important.. as all elders are in our lives!

Originally posted by: BloodRune

Love! Love Love!

Aww man 😳

That scene with Kamini Chachi! 😆

I'm glad it made everyone laugh

But my favorite is the silent moment between Shraman and Shravan realizing that he never fell out of love ❤️

Mera bhi fav hai

I really can't wait for them to start talking and be their amazing selves!

Sigh! Me neither!

Originally posted by: Safire

Simply superb!!!

Saf 🤗

I liked the last part as I felt the essence of the whole story lies in it...

That's exactly the effect I wanted! And you felt it, so happy!

👏

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

If I loved your comments earlier, I'm just so insanely happy with them now.. GIFs and all, full on What upsets me is that Wattpad doesn't have such a feature 😕 Nonetheless, I shall make the most of it as long as we are here 🤗

Really, loved the chapter! 👏👏👏

I'm glad you did

It had equal amounts of comedy, fun, friendship, family and finally--love.

Happiness, you asked for happy, I tried my best 😃

Kamini chachi's misunderstanding was hilarious. 😆

Kamini chachi in this series will be a darling, be rest assured! 😃

Poor Shravan was caught off guard. 🤣

And how! Nikal jayega ka bhi Chachi ne kya bana diya 😆

I should really get my mind out of the gutter!😉

Loved the cute fight between the bros.

Yeyy!

The jealous fit of Pushakr was damn cute. 😳

Pushkie pie is the only character I am downright unwilling to change! He was a jaan will remain so!

I'm sure his heart will soon locate that one girl meant for him.

We shall see how tharki or not he really is 😆

And once again a big round of applause

for the title--Noor, and the perfectly awesome way you

applied it to the chapter.👏👏

I'm glad you thought so...

🥳

It was a mixture of adoration and sadness that I felt

when ShraMan allowed themselves the night

to relish in their truest feelings.

Well then, you mirror my thoughts of this update ❤️

I have a lot more in store for you!

Hopefully one day they would be majbur enough before those feelings

that they won't be able to hold them back

or deny them ever, not even for a single damn moment.

Hopefully they will

Lots of love,

Lara.

Originally posted by: rajiti

Hey Zoya,

Hey there sweets 🤗
What do I say!! An awesome update! Loved loved the whole part.

I'm so glad you did 😳
And the last part- am just sighing. You just managed to bring out the Noor in their hearts.

Yikes! Really? Thank you so much!
I love all your writings, they are literature for me.

Oh damn! Now I'm blushing! Itna bada compliment ❤️
Thank you.
Priti.

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

You're here 🤗

Mind blowing update.

Shukriya!

Its superb update that line pushkar to tharki h or shrvn vo.. 😆😆😆

Hilarious na 😆

Ohh god itna hassi na m ur line pad k

I'm glad I could make you laugh!

and I think ramnath doesn't aware of shrvn feelings he want to continue his job from London that's why he is sad lets see what next😊

Well, I don't do spoilers, but are you a mind reader?

Originally posted by: kanash

Amazing. Your writing leaves me speechless, wish I could pen down my thoughts sooo well !

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Api 🤗

Zainab Jaan 🤗

Pushkar poor soul sari ladkiyan Chali gayi uske hath se and now he said jealous of his brothers height 😆

Hahahaha! Bechara! 😆

But Pushkar is cute

That he is!

Kamini Chachi 🤣 Apne ghar ke Mundo ka Naam kharab kar Rahi Hain

Chachi kamal hai 😆

Lalaji is right pura Khandan pagal hai

So toh hai!😉

Shravan is trying to ignore his feelings coz of past

Ji, but kab tak?

Shraman convo throught expression I can imagine that scene and it's lovely

Yeah, imagine the Noor ❤️

They have a connection which they also don't know ❤️

Maybe they do, haina?

Fantabulous update

Thank you love 🤗

Lots of Love

Zainab

Originally posted by: orion23

Hahaha!

Yedi hi hai tu, pet name bana liya 😆