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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 7 years ago

#741

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Zealous si Zoya🤗

Aa gayi main finally!

😛

Sowiii am late...again!

Meyaar...

Main kitte naye beautiful words seekh gayi!

Ek baat boloon?

Writing style is changing but emotions ab bhi utne hi hain...samjhe?😳

Malhotra family together...haaye ❤️

Seeing your family like that is a feeling so special. Am so happy for Shravan!

Pushkie pie with Pop-Corn n blow horn...so like our excited pushkie😆

Nirmala Malhotra...Now it sounds better!

Saree...she always looked classy in them!😳

Really motherly feeling❤️

One need not hurt cause that is the only way to live life...Loved it so much ❤️

Aunt May...What can be better than to read that Shravan had her with him along with AmRic that too as a loving mother!

Dil khush kar ditta!!

A new happy family of Shravan in London!

AmRic...they were bound to happen😳

Cutest Couple ever!!

Eric Baby!

Honestly speaking I never liked this term. I mean baby...🤣

Its cheesy (for me) 😆

Punjabi clapping..haaye!

Punjab feels!!

The Fav Four...Shravan n we cant be happier!

This is something hatke feeling ❤️

Pagal or Crazy hai but meri fam hai!!

Eric's father is very much alive n healthy!

Sooo happy for him!

Or else the guilt wouldn't have let him live in peace!

Shravan Ramnath Nirmala Malhotra...Oh My ❤️

Loved it sooo much Zoya!

#Feels

He misjudged a step n tripped slightly...He smiled rubbing the back of his neck with his palm...

These lil moments Zoya...How much I love them ❤️ ❤️

So realistic n sweet at the same time!

Now the Speech...

One of the fav parts!!

Loved every bit of it...felt every bit of it!

And emotions flew effortlessly...

Oh n am a softie like Eric 😭

A beautiful speech, an emotional one, an inspiring one , presented in a such a beautiful way!!

It is special for me as a reader so I can imagine how much it is special for you!

N You shared it with us...thank you🤗

This is ❤️

It so reflects you!

Moment of Impact!!!!!

Lalaji hugging life out of Pushkar😆

Can Imagine it all!

Such a beauty!

Hamaara beta Ram...This is touching!

This is ❤️

The sky has nothing on us, heck the universe has nothing on us...So like Zoya😳

Sumo...she did it!!😃

Silver medalist...Am proud!

Jairaj...Yaha bhi!!

But koi chance hi nahi hai😆

Topper log n janta class..kuch yaad aa gaya!

Bheja hai...N My face fell too!

This Sumo...I am unable say anything here!

I Love her!!

Internship naam hai uska?...🤣

I am loving this Tanvi already!

Shravan came...O My God!!!!!!!

Glasses too

That hug...haaye❤️

He left his internship... for her. He did it for her❤️

Shravan, the ever so forgiving person...Even when she ditched him, when she hurt him in the worst possible way...He forgave her, he talked it all out with her, supported her, made her feel special...n now he left an important internship for her, just to be present with her on her important day, just to be there with her...

Shravan is Shravan❤️

Sumo, the once selfish girl...never told him about her problems, kept it all to herself ,studied harder, made him proud...for him.Nothing mattered more than him not any award too...just wanted him to be with her, just be with her n her happiness when he came...

Sumo is Sumo with her typical self ❤️

A bond so special !!!!!

Kaun hai phir tumhaara?...A Question their hearts had answers but both are unaware well one is for sure if not both!

Bechaare Jairaaj ki speech kharab kar di dono ne😆

Typical ShraMan...saath hain to sab kuch hai!!

Pushker wanted to join but certificate...haaye re ye majboori!

Sumo waali feeling best hai..

Shravan waali feeling better hai...

Aapke ShraMan waali ye feeling out of the World hai ❤️

The second hug is so soothing ❤️

I Missed you yaar..

I Missed you more...Haaye❤️ ❤️

That jumping moment

Never again Sumo...Always Shravan...Forever!!

Bas!!!!!

I Am aooo excited to read how it all happens n what happens in-between. 😳

Ye mazedaar hone waala hai!

This was one hell of a beautiful update Zoya❤️

It touched me!!

The Speech part...My Heart ❤️

Loved it so much!!

Thanks for the PM!

Waiting for the next eagerly!

Love you so much 🤗

Nikka sa Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold I love you Nik❤️

@Bold Love you more 🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#743

You're my favorite person Zoya!

Eeeksss... the soulmates are reunited at last!!

This calls for celebration... 🥳

Where's the cake?!!

Shravan's speech was awesome. 👏

The guy is all grown up now... to six feet four and he even thinks himself

smarter than Sumo, however... we'll have to see if that's true 😆.

When I saw the post ending to "...She couldn't get herself to look away.", those few

moments I found myself filling with anger. 😡 How can Zoya end it here?

Turns out, being at the receiving end of a cliffhanger... is not quite a nice feeling.🥺 Especially when I'm reading your Alfaaz and shraman are finally going to meet.

But then, I scrolled down and my eyes fell on "Meyaar continued..."

Do I need to explain how the relief felt in my chest?

And as I dived back into reading, I was in for immense satisfaction.

Loved their reunion, loved the dialogues,

Pushkar's disappointment over not being able to join the great fun of shraman 😆.

And then came the beginning of slight, very slight, but monumental flirting... oh the teasing and their inner thoughts... ☺️

Both of them are clearly smitten by each other.

Let's see how long Shravan beta will be able to keep his heart in check. 😆

Because we all know that hearts have their own freaking minds!

Now this journey will be interesting.

I'm super glad that you didn't delay their meeting anymore.

Now update fast, and give me lots of shraman flirting.The guessing games about the matters of heart are always the most fun at this stage. 😉

Lots of love.❤️

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sweksha

@sweksha

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#744

awesome update dear...I was damn curious about their relation after some years...finally he is not feeling bad after meeting nimmo...and sumo topped with second rank...ohhh thank god you didn't bring her on first position mujhe to dil ka doura pad Jana tha...this story is one of the most beautiful and unique stories... kaha se soch leti ho yrr...superb update please next part update soon

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#745

Hayee! Dil aa gaya is piece par

Zoya this was beautiful and I loved how the older Shravan and older Sumo met! Plus those lines "Sumo feeling best hai" and "Shravan vali feeling better hai." ❤️

Eagerly waiting for more!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#746

century wow...congrats zoyi .. 🥳

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#747

Beautiful update.

Loved the speech.

Eric and Amanda. ..cute.

Shravans suprise was too good.

Can't predict the future, but would love to see them accept each other, build their careers and relationship. They can go steady, get engaged etc etc

But love the way you are presenting each chapter .. so would prefer your version if rhe future.

Thanks for the pm

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#748

So both are graduated and their ceremony are best I'm 100% sure that shrvn will surprise sumo and that happened. Wounderfull when first part was ending I really want to read more and thanks to you you posted at down the reading part. Thanks once again its wounderfull update