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Posted: 7 years ago
@Nik Haan like ☺️...

And I do run out of ways to thank a person when I see your comment!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

You're my favorite person Zoya!

And you are mine!🤗
Eeeksss... the soulmates are reunited at last!!
This calls for celebration... 🥳
Where's the cake?!!
I ate it 😆
Shravan's speech was awesome. 👏
Yeyy!!!!
The guy is all grown up now... to six feet four and he even thinks himself
smarter than Sumo, however... we'll have to see if that's true 😆.
Eventually we shall see😉
When I saw the post ending to "...She couldn't get herself to look away.", those few
moments I found myself filling with anger. 😡 How can Zoya end it here?
Now that I think of it, I should have 🤣
Damn it! I'm becoming nice and that's not Good!
Cliffhangers game is absolutely off point!
Turns out, being at the receiving end of a cliffhanger... is not quite a nice feeling.🥺
Hahaha! Yeah it isn't!
Especially when I'm reading your Alfaaz and shraman are finally going to meet.

But then, I scrolled down and my eyes fell on "Meyaar continued..."
Do I need to explain how the relief felt in my chest?
Nah! I know! 😃
And as I dived back into reading, I was in for immense satisfaction.
Loved their reunion, loved the dialogues,
Pushkar's disappointment over not being able to join the great fun of shraman 😆.
And then came the beginning of slight, very slight, but monumental flirting... oh the teasing and their inner thoughts... ☺️
Well, this as the wise men say, is just the beginning! In story time, ShraMan are 21-22 years of age.. I don't intend to take it fast... so you're in for the slow ride!
Both of them are clearly smitten by each other.
The attraction was palpable always...
Let's see how long Shravan beta will be able to keep his heart in check. 😆
Oh trust me! His heart is treacherous... but he is wiser 😉
Because we all know that hearts have their own freaking minds!
They do for Sure!
Now this journey will be interesting.
I sure hope so!
I'm super glad that you didn't delay their meeting anymore.
I found it nonsensical on the show that Shravan never once returned in 10 years! Ouch! So yeah..
Also, it has a huge part to play in how I want to take it forward 😉
Now update fast, and give me lots of shraman flirting.The guessing games about the matters of heart are always the most fun at this stage. 😉
Hahaha... I I ma'am!
Lots of love.❤️

Love you more Lara!
❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweksha

awesome update dear...

Thank you!!!
I was damn curious about their relation after some years...finally he is not feeling bad after meeting nimmo...
Yeah!
and sumo topped with second rank...ohhh thank god you didn't bring her on first position mujhe to dil ka doura pad Jana tha...
Aapka dil keemti hai, iss liye toh second 😆
this story is one of the most beautiful and unique stories... kaha se soch leti ho yrr...
Pata nahi yaar, bas ho jaata hai...
superb update please next part update soon
Sure will do!

@ Bold thank you so much Sweksha!
Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BloodRune

Hayee! Dil aa gaya is piece par

Mera bhi 😆
Zoya this was beautiful and I loved how the older Shravan and older Sumo met!
I'm glad you did!
Plus those lines "Sumo feeling best hai" and "Shravan vali feeling better hai." ❤️
Haina😳
Eagerly waiting for more!
Me too!!

@Bold Thank you so much hon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

century wow...congrats zoyi .. 🥳

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Ranju meri Jaan 🤗
Thank you so much love!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautiful update.

Thank you!
Loved the speech.
Glad you did!
Eric and Amanda. ..cute.
Haina!
Shravans suprise was too good.
Yeyy!
Can't predict the future, but would love to see them accept each other, build their careers and relationship. They can go steady, get engaged etc etc
All in good time...
But love the way you are presenting each chapter .. so would prefer your version if rhe future.
Happy you would!
Thanks for the pm
Pleasure..

@Bold thank you so much worm🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

So both are graduated and their ceremony are best

Yes! Yeyy!
I'm 100% sure that shrvn will surprise sumo and that happened.
Well then, you know Shravan!
Wounderfull when first part was ending I really want to read more and thanks to you you posted at down the reading part.
Yeah I got hit with a size warning 😕
Thanks once again its wounderfull update
Pleasure!

@Bold thank you so very much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I just finished reading every chapter...N My God...Aren't they like magic...This is just freaking awesome...The way u described each n every feeling...Sorted out the silence between ShraMan n resolved Ramnath n Nirmala matter...That's commendable

Am just in love with this series...

N as the saying goes 'Above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don't believe in magic will never find it.' N Shravan is just gonna experience that now I guess...He's reluctant to give in again but little does he know that he believes and dwells in that magic...And Suman will have to be patience and indeed watch with glittering eyes around her for Shravan will drop indirect hints unknowingly and it will be really difficult for her to decipher her lamboo somtimes...

N really sorry for commenting too late n thank u Zoya for the pms...Looking forward to other chapters as am hooked to this now

Continue soon n once again sorry for the late comments
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so much love!
Iss mai aapka bhi bada haath hai!
🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Nik Haan like ☺️...


And I do run out of ways to thank a person when I see your comment!
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Oreo you na 😆

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