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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#471

Well written Zoya

Nirmala asked divorce that is unbelievable. She is not worried about her son, she never tried to reach him. Don't know how Shravan would react to this. Eric story was so painful what he went through was very sad one.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much!
Your comments, I love!
Your couplets, even more so!
Thank you soo much. ..means a lot !!🤗

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: orion23

Hey yo Nikka sa Nik😉
Take all the time you need bro!
Exams pehle!
All the best...
I'll see you soon 😃

Thanks buddy⭐️

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Shinynew

@Shinynew

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Hello again Zoya ...😊..Finally got the time to read this one ..Shravan is a sweetheart dear ...Deep down somewhere I really think this is happening in real...feeling so connected with the story Zoya ...I loved the Nirmala Ramnath convo..It just gave a sense of satisfaction over the utter crap they had shown on the show...Nirmala was wrong ...and she will have to repent for it...I am not at hating Ramnath here ...maybe it just the way story is progressing. ...Loved the duo 'SHRAVAN AND HIS DIARY '..he hasn't forgot sumo yet and his penning down his emotions in the flow...such is the innocence of this fellow. ...Can I just have him for myself ...😉❤️

All in all the chappy was worth the wait ...and can't wait for more...

Do come early..😊

P.S.This one turned out to be long😛

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 43

Posted: 8 years ago

#475

Shravan is so complex. Brilliantly written chapter. Continue soon!

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
Holla!!!
Main yaad hu?
Hopefully haan aur agar nahin to😭
Pehle to I'm really sorry I haven't unressed on 3 chapters straight..that's literally half of the ff..
More? Abhi to padhe bhi nahin...

So here goes my samohik Res for 3 chapters...ek-do din main unres karungi pakka😉

Love
Arpita

mere ek-do din kuch zyada hi extend ho gaye..nahin??

first of all sorry to keep you waiting and now lets get onto work without any freakin further delay😃

Chapter 4

He had started to believe more each passing day in his capabilities

finally bande main thodha confidence to aaya..

when suman said she was a liability..i felt for the poor soul..the feeling of being a obligation to someone is heart-wrenching that to for a teen and especially when you already have another emotional turmoil to handle..it just is too overwhelming

the dear diary entry is a boon to read, his trust in himself is slowly budding and that's treat to read because an is the start he had thought himself to be a loser but the slow 'i am something better' progress was much needed😆

Like my absence didn't matter, like I didn't matter

like now i wanna get that rustom swag and say "trust me darling, it does"😎

finally he read the freaking mail🥳

women..take a freaking bow..gawd brilliant job portraying her emotions in the letter and his emotions when he read it but the last line mashaallah!! 'i can't live without you' 👏

They both wept as though in each other's embrace.

Zo di i love you for this chapter ❤️

Chapter 5

That's my friends name..inaayat

but again the title ❤️

i love eric..i said that before i know but still quoting your words "its always good to be reminded" 😛

their conversation is so real and of course my fav part is 'you traitor' 👍🏼 ike how typical friends joke around

"I have a friend who is a girl, she ain't my girl friend.."

let's wait for the nearing future for this statement to be proved wrong😛 i hope you understood..

She could beat you to a pulp Shrav!"

She can definitely do that without a doubt

"Accha? Woh subah bohot khoobsoorat hai na, shayad iss liye.."

haan meri bacchi subah to khoobsurat hogi hi..raat jo suhaavni thi😉...wait in all the right manner..no double meaning

Sherlock frigging Holmes!

R.I.P Sherlock Holmes 🤣

Sumo se baat hui na? You'll are back at being friends?"

a brownie to pushkar from my side😛 but still they are obvious 😳

"Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."

i could imagine shravan choking on air 😲

this chapter was beautiful one indeed😳👏

Chapter 6

i did a punch in the air when the image read the same meaning i had assumed 😃

i practically wanted to skip the ramnath part but when i did..

Given their fights gave her decision impetus, given that he asked her to leave and never return to snatch his son away, but at least she could have called. At least she could have asked how Shravan was doing. Her reckless negligence only served to cement his notions about her. How could she desert them like they never existed.

i agreed with him for this part

but when i think that i cant hate anymore he gives me a reason to

Maybe if she apologized for her doings, just maybe, he would forgive her.

who the hell is he to be apologised to after being an a** of a husband to her😡...only person she should have apologised and reconciled with was Shravan

the explanation that Shravan gave for a best friend was 👍🏼

many people just do not tend to understand that relation needs space to breathe and if you give them it that does not mean disinterest

the amanda confession was honest from Shrav's side and understanding from her side and that should be the way you handle rejection 👍🏼

but when he asked her for prom..i know he was showing his kindness and friendship spirit but to be honest i was like a little, a little as a pinch was disheartened..😛

maybe i did expect sumo accompanying him overseas..*sigh* stupid me😭

when Sumo said 3rd aayi hu main class main..*gasp*, *wide eyes*😲

certainly library did work

about eric...i have this strange feeling that he has a thing for amanda..i'll confirm my doubts with the next chapter though😛

Zo di you get the award for the best titles from my side👏..i mean you relate them with the chapters very well
there were certain dialogue confession from Sumo's side like 'i need you shravan' & 'i always wanna be with you' these dialogues made me wonder that if Sumo could contemplate on that in her teenage years why couldnt her grownup self be a little more honest in the show
and the 3rd one...now that Shravan and Sumo are back to being friends..is there's a chance of SHRAVAN turning into the misogynist like in the show or no?

and the last one i'm so sorry i unressed so late..i hope you understand😳

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#477

abhi ek unress kiya to dusre ke liye RES😉

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Nik03
Here I am Zoya with my Ress😛
Cant promise when I'll be able to unress.
Bas exams khatam ho jaaye n I'll be there straight!!
****
Unres
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Nikka sa Nik 🤗
Finally am here!!
So am I!😆
Iztiraar~ Restlessness ❤️
There was restlessness in this upii...Shravan, Ramnath, Nirmala, Eric!!
Every character was in a state of restlessness!!
Perfect⭐️
Shukriya!!!! 😳
Sharvan and his Diary
One of my fav. part...always.
Mine tooo!!!
You should slow down if the world around you turns faster than you can handle...What a beautiful thought!!
A person with experience and pateince can live a life with it.
I agree! It's quite a deep advise to live by...
Shravan had forgiven Sumo but he cant forget!!
Soo damn loved it Zoya...❤️
Well, I've forgiven a lot many too, it's the forgetting that's difficult.
This is human nature..!!
Isnt it what happens with us all??
It absolutely does...
We can forgive but cant forget easily...its not that easy.
That memory remains somewhere deep down even we are unaware of it sometimes...You just need some time to forget and move on without any hurt.
That's the most impossible bit...
When it came to people that were important, Shravan trusted no one other than himself...I Love this Shravan n I love you Zoya.🤗
Love ya tooo!!!!!!
Pur-sukoon the ruhaniyaat ke noor mai iss qadar
Saa.at-e-izteraar ki aahat bhi na hui...Loveddd it zoya!
You should write shayari more often...Its just love!!
It is? Well when it happens in flow, it happens... Especially if I try, nothing ever happens😆
Eric and Shravan...The bond between them is just pure Love!!
A friend in need is a friend indeed...Thats their friendship!!
A friendship soo rare.
It is! I feel you need at least one such person! Eric is going to be a constant throughout life...
Ramnath-Nirmala scenario was a much needed one.
Beautiful and much more reasonable...Loved it buddy!!
Yeyyy!
You gave a bit closure where there was confusion and questions without their answers in the show...we got those answers here.
Closure? Well I may have answered a few questions but I have a lot more to throw light on😆
Kamini...Bang on!!
Kabhi khatti kabhi meethi...Tedhi hai par humaari hai😆
I loved her! She's going to be around!
N this Nimmo Mata...Are you really a mother??
Whatever Ramnath said is logical...Saw a glimpse of a Lawyer Ramnath Malhotra that he was!!
I know right! I hate Nimmo! And hated Ramnath towards the end, so mai chun chun ke badla loongi😆
Divorce...The nerve of Woman!!
She had ba**s!
She still have guts to ask for divorce even after the reality check by Ramnath, even after knowing everything that her gem of a son had suffered...This is the limit!!
She is hopeless!!
Ummm... Hope shines at the end of the road... Always does! So wait for the turn...
N Alimony...Ramnath is right...she is still thinking all about money.
All she had thought or cared about was Money and her so called self Respect.
Nothing n absolutely Nothing can overpower your love and care for your child...not even your self respect!!
But here we have Nirmala Ahuja as a mother...so anything can be expected!!
Well on the show we had reasons only to hate her! But I'll make sure if you don't like her, you won't hate her anymore...
Soo loved the care Shravan had for Eric.Such a beautiful relation these two shares.
A friend like Shravan and Eric is a bliss and you are a blessed soul if you have one!!
WORD!
Sumo -Shravan chat was soo good. Sumo's care for Eric and Shravan is too good. This Sumo...she was the real Sumo...the innocent soul.
Loved how Shravan shared his innermost feelings with her.
It's the start of something deeper... I can't wait to develop that bit
Eric...I knew it was much more serious than it seems.
Eric isnt one who is as carefree and jovial as he seems from outside.
He is a character with layers...It isnt easy to understand him...inside out.
In many ways, he is like a lot of us... Always behind masks...
Such people who laughs and lives carefree are the ones who are the ones with unstable lives...they are deep souls and they can be the best friends you want coz they have an understanding that not everyone have.
Why does this sound like someone I know?
Everyone have problems and issues in their lives... n Everyone have their own way to express themselves.
I agree!
Some hides their sorrows behind their indifferent behavior , some with their anger, some with spending time alone and remain aloof all the time but very few ones have the guts to put a smile on their faces and spread happiness around...Eric is one such soul.!
I totally agree!!!!!
The person who smiles and laughs all the time, joking around are hiding their tears behind the facade of it.
Masks, we wear different ones... Capes are what people hunt for to name a hero, these masks are that which should be honoured... For they keep us sane.
Whatever happened with Eric...it was bound to happen.
What he did wasn't his fault but a result of his anger that crossed its limit...Ofcourse it is not easy to see you father raising his hand on your mother specially when he was at fault that too this kind of.
But it was bound to happen n it happened.
It wasnt Eric's fault.
Haina... Don't worry, the resilient boy that he is, he will bounce back soon enough ...
Father in coma...Damn!! Its terrible.
But atleast there is a hope.
Hope! It keeps the world going!
Eric is fighting the worst kind of feeling in this whole World...Guilt.
Helplessness and Guilt are the worst of all the feelings for any individual.
I couldn't agree more... There is nothing one can do about either...
You can live hating anyone, you can live with anger within you for someone but...How to live when you starts hating your own self, when you are angry at yourself.
I hope his Father recovers.
He will, in due time...
Shravan...this soul is going to get hurt again...that too coz of his dear ones.
Well, let it unfold...
But this time we have Zoya as a writer and therefore he has his Sumo n Eric with him...so am relaxed and exited at the same time.
Thanks ya.. You have too much faith in me!
This was one hell of a beautiful upii Zoya👏
Yeyyy!!!!
Loved and enjoyed reading it!!
Glad you did 😳
Cont soon buddy.
Soonish...
Will Wait eagerly😳
Won't be long now...
Love ya 🤗
Nikka sa Nik

P.S. I always love reading your notes...before and after upii.
Yeyy!
They are notes with beautiful learning and msg within them.
Keep them coming bro!!
Absolutely, Always.. It gives me a connect with my lovely readers!
P.P.S. Tried keeping it short.
You didn't need to!
Though don't know how long it is😛
It's fine, don't worry 😃
Koi na...Aapko aadat hai na😆
Ji hai toh!
Achi aadtaein chodni nahi chahiye😉
Never!!!

@Bold Thank you so much Nikka Sa Nik 🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Well written Zoya
Thank you so very much Vinu!!
Nirmala asked divorce that is unbelievable. She is not worried about her son, she never tried to reach him. Don't know how Shravan would react to this.
Well, at this point all I'll say is, Wait for it...
Eric story was so painful what he went through was very sad one.
I know right...
Thanks for PM
Always!
Vinu

@Bold Thank you so much Vinu!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#480

Hola! So I cut it down to the parts you replied 😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Bikhre hue panno ko dekhkar sochta hai har koi,,
Berang si thi zindagi ki kitaab par Simti hui to thi !!
Oh wow... This is so deep! I'm going to quote you someday bro!❤️
All yours! !😳
Hayye thank you!!❤️

He asked her to accompany him to the prom !!aww !!
Darling isn't he!
He is !!😉
Aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😎

Why do you avoid though? I love them😃
Saving them for Mr. And Mrs. 😛
Phir toh I will have to chalk up an update super soon!
Substance over style... doing part time... donating pocket money! ! Do you realise what are u creating Zo!Ya! ! 😲 we are already love struck n... 😳
Yes, yes I do. I'm creating the Shravan of our dreams ❤️
I can see my doom !!❤️
I envision mass doom, if you know what I mean 🤪

@Bold Thank you so much!
Your comments, I love!
Your couplets, even more so!
Thank you soo much. ..means a lot !!🤗
You deserve a lot more!

@Bold Love!

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