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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...it's amazing update...

I'm glad you feel so😛
Happy tat the diary is back...
Yes it is!
Loveddd ur shayari...
Thank you!
Eric poor boy...
He will be fine soon...
Yes... Ramnath and Nirmala I dnt like them at all...
Sometimes I wonder they really love Shravan????
They did, in their own selfish ways, and that's what cost Shravan...
Poor shravan he is yet to receive an another heart break...
And then a few more...
Hope sumo ll be there for him...
Oh yes, she will...
Take care.,..
You too😃
Update soon.,..
Will do!
❤️
LavSriya

@Bold Thank you so very much LavSriya 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey!

Hey!!!
First of all, I love Eric.
That makes all of us😉
I don't know why, but the guy makes me remember Ron from Harry Potter. 😕
Well, there might be the crazy bromance that does that...
Anyway, Eric's story's really heartbreaking.
It is, isn't it...
There's nothing more upsetting that seeing your parents in such a mess,
the affair; the abuse; the accident and his guilt!
I agree!
Phew... that's a lot and the guy is broken. 😭
But thankfully, Shravan's with him. 😊
Oh yes! And no sooner you will see him back on track!
And I loved it more where Shravan was writing in his diary about
forgiving Sumo but nor forgetting everything.👏
That's a true fact. Makes sense and makes the story more realistic.
I like sticking to reality, I try my best.. I'm glad it's reaping...
I can't tell you Zoya how glad I'm that
Ram the Ravan and Nirma the detergent are getting divorced. 🥳
Their personalities and values and morals are so very different that at this stage
it will only create an even bigger mess if they try to live under one roof. 🤢
I'll wait and see what you've planned to write for their fate. 👍🏼
Well no one said anything about living under the same roof, much like the show😕 And divorce? We'll see... Their fate is in a way at the moment open ended, I haven't decided on how to play this... Let's see...

Also, it's a great thing that Shravan shares his troubles and thoughts
with Sumo at the end of the day.
Already turning out to be quite the life partners... eh... ☺️
Eh Eh! Who's to say it's everything that is indeed being shared? 😎
Looking forward to more progress on their friendship and
more eagerly looking forward to with a binocular to see the kick start of
their romance.
Romance is still let's say 5-6 updates away if I pan out the story as planned... I will try to not keep you waiting too long 😳

Updt soon.
Look at 1st week of June for now😉

Lots of love,❤️
Lara.


@Bold Thank you so much Lara!
Much Love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shirlys

Well written dr...loved it...hope Shravan have the strength to cope up with their parents divorce news.

Thank you so much hon!
And I hope so too!
Take care!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so very much Anu 🤗
Take care hon!


Lub u di...!!!🤗🤗❤️❤️
Edited by ZehriliChidiya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

I'm gonna join the ress fest



Unress

Zoi bro !!
First off all SORRY in all capital letters, believe me I would have unressed it ages ago if it wasn't for the Advance hanging over my head.But now that JEE thing is done I can finally unress.

Coming back on the beautifully threaded words that you put up to form a marvelous update.Diary!!!! I so love that thing. That provide a kind of solace and keeps the story unique and charming.

Eric.He is everything humorous and intense in this world.His character is heart breakingly beautiful ,he is much more than what meets an eye. When Shravan needed someone like him ,he was there.

Shravan is the character that is most relatable, He is nor perfect neither gives off excessive bad boy vibes.The fact that he doesn't believe in the forgive and forgot rule makes him extremely likeable to me. He is truly a survivor who is trying to find a solace or closure.
For once I'm not hating any character ,surely I dislike Ramnaath and Nims but they are merely showing us the side that we usually like call 'ugly side'of humans.The destruction caused inside a family by chaotic human tendencies.A broken familyEverything cannot be rainbow and unicorns.

This is a rather balanced blend of construction of human relations orbonds as well as their destruction.

Love
Anshi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
-------
Unres

Zo 🤗

Priii🤗
Iztiraar ka hume beyhad intezar tha and it was worth the wait
I'm glad! Ab Raftaar se agli update hum upload karenge... 😉
Dear Diary ❤️
Yes! Dear indeed!
He has still not forgiven Sumo?
Forgiveness and Forgetting are two tangentially different things...
One may forgive, it's the letting go bit that takes time. The mind has it's wicked tricks...

Is this badla? For all the cliff hangers and all the tears? You just had to put this GIF. I mean yes, the face is gorgeous and the eyes are an ocean but this scene was heart wrenching. I had wept with him... Sigh...
It may take some time but he eventually will ...wishful thinking 😳
Of course I guess... We do tend to forget over time, but that really depends on the depth of the wound. Spoiler alert, in an update or two, you will be a witness to a war of words and I promise it will be anything but painless😃
Pur-sukoon the ruhaniyaat ke noor mai iss qadar,
Saa.at-e-izteraar ki aahat bhi na hui.


Bro you are another level of awesomeness 👏
Ji aapka shukriya...😛
Nimmo in MM
Karamjali kalmuhi kulta aa gyi tu
You sound like a hindi serial saas 🤣

LMAO!
Kamini i love you ❤️ . Tussi Chha gye
Haina! She would be 😳 in this FF, most of the time😆
Ramu ne nimmo ki band bajayi
Jaise ko taisa mila,
Kaisa maza aya,
Shravan ke pappa ne,
Shravan ki mummy ka,
Kaisa kachra kar dala🤣

That makes all of us!
Divorce? After all she did she has the nerve to ask for the divorce . Not once she cared about her son...useless mother
She came with that intention, but who knows what the tide might bring in?
Eric and Shravan ❤️ #FriendshipGoals
Yo!
His parents are getting a divorce ? That's terrible. No child should go through such pain.
Please please make his father alright . I would never want him to burn himself in guilt.
Mera Eric aise sad acha nahi lagta...
I may seem harsh but that level I will never go to.. I created his character, I love him, I will never think of hurting him so, be rest assured. It will take time, but it will be okay.
Abhi tu aur jhatke denewali? 😲 ...mera masoom dil 💔
Mujhe jhatke dena accha lagta, that's what life does 😆
Mindblowing seetimaar update 🤪
Shukriya!!
Loved it and love you ❤️
I love you more! But that you already know!
Can't wait for nimmo's narakpravesh 😆
Narkpravesh 🤣
Your one liners leave me in splits always!
Take care !!

@Bold Priii ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya


Lub u di...!!!🤗🤗❤️❤️

@Bold Love you too sweety!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius



Unress

Zoi bro !!

Hola!!!! 😛
First off all SORRY in all capital letters, believe me I would have unressed it ages ago if it wasn't for the Advance hanging over my head.But now that JEE thing is done I can finally unress.
Arey please! Stop apologizing, I was merely reminding...
I hope your exams went well😃 Padhai pehle!
Coming back on the beautifully threaded words that you put up to form a marvelous update.Diary!!!! I so love that thing. That provide a kind of solace and keeps the story unique and charming.
Aww thank you so very much hon 😳
Eric.He is everything humorous and intense in this world.His character is heart breakingly beautiful ,he is much more than what meets an eye. When Shravan needed someone like him ,he was there.
I agree with you on this! His heart is beautiful.. And yes he has more depth than he let's on...
Shravan is the character that is most relatable, He is nor perfect neither gives off excessive bad boy vibes.The fact that he doesn't believe in the forgive and forgot rule makes him extremely likeable to me. He is truly a survivor who is trying to find a solace or closure.
Isn't that how most of us are? Not so bad to harbour a hurt and deprive someone of forgiveness but neither so good as to forget, it's only human...
For once I'm not hating any character ,surely I dislike Ramnaath and Nims but they are merely showing us the side that we usually like call 'ugly side'of humans.The destruction caused inside a family by chaotic human tendencies.A broken familyEverything cannot be rainbow and unicorns.
Thank you! For bringing that to the fore.. That's exactly what I'm trying to portray... Life is like this... You just have to accept it and move on, for there is very little one can do...
This is a rather balanced blend of construction of human relations orbonds as well as their destruction.
Thank you so much! This particular bit of your comment, means a lot to me!
Love
Anshi

@Bold Thanks so much hon!!
Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Mesmerising Maraasim! !

Can I be the first to say, Yeyyy!!!

Bikhre hue panno ko dekhkar sochta hai har koi,,
Berang si thi zindagi ki kitaab par Simti hui to thi !!
Oh wow... This is so deep! I'm going to quote you someday bro!❤️

So, Nimmo never returned !! The way she had came back in the show and chali gayin after a dialogue or two... ussey better hai kabhi wapas na aana...that was a futile attempt to make a dark character grey !!
Hell! ! I dislike her so much !!
I couldn't palate it either. It was half baked. Implemented only to show Ramnath in bad light and Jai Jaikaar of women in biased shows!

Ramu kaka is missing his dysfunctional family and is even ready to absolve her for the sake of his son... very realistic! ! but if only madam had some interest in the duo..!!
I always believed he had a good heart, I'd like to eliminate the entire crap served in the last few months... Made no sense...


Jahan na ummedien beshumaar ho,, Sirf khayaal ki darkaar ho !!
Jo khush ho to tujhey yaad karey,, Jo udaas ho to terey pass ho !!
Hotey hain zindagi mein kuch Maraasim aisey bhi !!
Uff! How do you do this?
See this is why I can't wait for your comments... They hit the spot!
I need to learn this trait of impromptu Shayari from you!
Your couplets are life!

"Being a best friend has got to do with being there no matter what, support and aid. It's got to do with keeping secrets. And also not pestering the person into giving information. If Eric deems right, he will tell me."
These are my favourites from the chapter! !❤️ #Friendship!
I'm glad they are

"As cute as you look now... ahaan! My boy isnt hesitating in showering compliments... Charmer he will be!! 😉
He is on his way to steal everyone's girl😆 You just wait😎

Shravan thought for a few moments, looked at Amanda's crestfallen face and made his decision... hadn't he seen it all...! However,,Am is at a receiving end this time! !

He asked her to accompany him to the prom !!aww !!
Darling isn't he!

It accomplishes two things...saves Am from experiencing that unhappy feeling and helps him in getting rid of it !!
An Unencumbered heart !!
He is on a steady path of not just self discovery but liberation too. I can't imagine how Shravan lived that way for 10 years on the show! He didn't deserve living in that hell and hatred...

I avoid using gifs here but...I guess this one captures Am's reaction perfectly...!😆
LMAO😆


Why do you avoid though? I love them😃

"Shravan! Mere results aa gaye!" Spoke Suman excitedly, trying and failing to keep her voice in check. 🤗

"I figured! Warna tu call nahi karti.." Said Shravan smiling as he stood at his room's window, placing a palm on the glass as if trying to feel the downpour. I can imagine badka Shravan doing this !😳

That was the whole idea love!

Or so she showed...!! Most probably!!

She didn't have the heart to, because she knew it would put him in a spot... let her fight her own battle! !

Glad that Sumo didn't close her heart towards her family..! Or is burning in hatred..! Much of it due to Shravan's presence in her life... emotionally! ! When you have someone around who is so forgiving,,some effect is bound to happen..!! #fangirling #AmI 😛
Fangirling is the way to be! Anything less simply won't do😳

[I can understand where mami ji is coming from or even Kamini for that matter...it's Nimmo who is beyond my comprehension! ! ]
Nimmo was beyond all of us, she was so mahan, us Tucch praanis can't beging to understand her...

Substance over style... doing part time... donating pocket money! ! Do you realise what are u creating Zo!Ya! ! 😲 we are already love struck n... 😳
Yes, yes I do. I'm creating the Shravan of our dreams ❤️

Eric! !😕 what's up with the boy!? Some family thing I guess...
The next part is up, you won't have to wait too long to know😛

The cliffs !! Hmm...
The cliffs, yes 😆

I believe the answer is in the next chapter... which I can read now..! ! God these Res restrictions !!
Hahaha.. Poor you😆

P.S. i think its time to get a takhallus! !🤣
Ji, I believe so...🤣
P.S.S. extremely extremely sorry for being so late! !
Please don't be... It's no issue at all😳

@Bold Thank you so much!
Your comments, I love!
Your couplets, even more so!

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