Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 30

Very nice Ramnath and Shravan convo.. Glad that Ramnath wanted Shravan to share his happiness with him.. . This is what missing with Shravan in the show when he was in london, no one from his family with whom he can share his achivement, his success, he was all alone,but here Ramnath taking initiatives to talk to Shravan and making him realise that he is not alone..
Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk 👏
Very good Ramnath monologue.. He always wants Shravan to be happy so he send him to london so that he won't be feeling the pain of his mother's betrayal...
Sumo is right in thinking that Shravan probably in no mood to forgive her, if he is then he should have replied back but he didn't.. Sumo now knew that his parents taken a loan from Mamaji and she is a bhoj to her uncle and aunt.. Nanaji will always be there for suman no matter what happens..
So Shravan finally going to open his orkut account due to persistent effort of Eric..
Another excellent diary scene 👏 glad that Shravan trying to move on, Eric helping him out being a true friend, amanda is also a nice girl.. Shravan has a fan following 😉. .good that Shravan thinks he has the importance in london which he never had on Delhi and in his mother's life, if he has any importance in his mother's life she could never had left him alone..
But despite having everything he still thinks he has a void in his life and that's due to sumo. . He also wants to talk to sumo so that he can show her that he can live with out her as well..
Shravan is content that she is ok but hurt that his absence didn't matter to her (but we know that that's not true)..
Shravan finally got the Email and angry at himself for not reading the letter before..
Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai really that's true, it's better to live alone than with the family having the same feelings of remaing alone, you feel like you are left alone by the family and that hurts..
Shravan after reading the letter realised that sumo changed after he left, he realised that how much she care for him, he felt like he has the importance in her life.. Shravan now feeling guilty thinking that sumo never care about him..
His Heart knew sumo wasn't happy then how can he be happy, ye Dil ka rishta hota hi aesa hai..
Sumo's monologue is right that not only she was debted by her parents loan but also the kindness of her Mamaji and nanaji..
In the end finally they heared each other's voice after three months.. It was really emotional
😭
Thanks for pm

Love
Smita

Ramnath being a good father taking interest in Shravan's daily life in london, about hi study, about basketball matches.. Nice that father son duo sharing their feelings to each other.. By doing this Ramnath making sure that Shravan doesn't feel alone in a country where there is no one who he can say his own (except Eric)...
Ramnath's purpose is always to see Shravan happy and content though his deeds hurt him more than give him happiness but still he is happy that Shravan is moving on and the reason for Ramnath to send him to london was not only for good education but also to forget that his Mother ditched him for her ambition..
Suman now knows that her Mamiji didn't like her as because her parents taken loan from her which they didn't give back and now they have to take care of her and that's why she feels she is under the ehsaan of her Mamiji.. But Nanaji letting her know that she is not a burden to her but she is his responsibility and that will never change. ..
Now due to Eric Shravan will open his Email and will find Shravan's letter, so Eric helps Shravan to clear the misunderstanding between Shravan and sumo are played indirectly a cupid role...
Another Brilliant piece of diary scene 👏
everything has to go wrong before it can start to go right
Yes Sometimes that should happen so that things can Once again go right for you..
After his Mother and sumo ditched him everything looks terribly wrong in his life in Delhi but as he went to london he got a new life, new friend in Eric and a girl who is having crush on him 😉
He feels he has importance in other's life which he never feel when he is in Delhi where even his Mother didn't have time for him forget about others.. Shravan also trying to call sumo but nanaji always diverted the topic for which Shravan thinks sumo didn't want to talk to him..
Finally Shravan found sumo's Email where she wrote a heartful apology to Shravan letting him know how much importance he has in her life, how he is the only true friend she had and due to her own stupidity she lost her best friend..
After reading the Email Shravan also feeling guilty that he misunderstood suman and then the Phone scene..
Both are at peace after hearing the voice...
Thanks for pm and one Question what is the meaning of "MAYASSAR"

Love
Shrujani

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Zoya, can I just hug you for this beauty🤗

Reshma 🤗 Aa gale lag ja behen!

You know I started staying in a hostel since I was 11, and all the years after that, college, working abroad, family, if there was one thing I was confident about it was the fact that I am totally in control of my emotions, I don't cry easily. ..but today is one of those rare moments when you got tears into my eyes..take a bow there Zoya. ..this is a masterpiece 👏

Oh my gosh! Are you for real😲 Not that I'm glad you wept, but it's just a huge compliment! Means a lot to me that I can hit a spot with my writings ❤️

Everything about this is heart wrenching.

Yey! It was aimed to be that way, and I'm honored you found it so😛

I have always wondered how hard it must be for Sumo, to grow up between people who considered her nothing but a liability.

That you are nothing but a waste of space in their house.

I know right. Must be so painful...

No wonder then that she hung to Shravan and Nanu for her life.

Cause she had no one else..

Shravan on the other hand was blooming, success and attention worked as manure and he blossomed into this happening boy in the college, but the fact that he never felt his success completely without her was so sad yet so relieving. It's like they say, the sun comes up on another morning but my mind never wakes up without you on it.

@Bold Oh my! This though❤️

When Shravan went to Check his mails, my spirits soared, then he moved on to Orkut, they sank, he checked her profile and deduced that she was happy without him, my spirits sank further, he started clearing his junk mails, my spirits flickered with hope, and he finally spotted her mail. ..my spirits rejoiced the relief.

I am sure that I might have made a funny sight with all those emotions just fleeting across my face😊

I wish I could witness all of those emotions, it would be a treat! 😆

That letter, it broke my heart Zoya. I so wanted to analyse each sentence of it, but sanity prevailed and I decided to spare you the bother😳..I could write paragraphs and it would still be such a waste of an attempt to let you know what I felt.

Aww dude!! I'm at a loss of words here.. Each of the sentences in your comment, puts me in a bigger bubble! Thank you so much for all the praise!

He dialled her number and after those absolutely agonising sentences when she picked up the phone, I swear I went numb in anticipation, the sound of Sumo and her breaking into sobs choked me , he cried with her and I was like, the surrounding and

the people around me could go take a hike, for I am going to let my tears flow unbashedly, tonight there's no stopping them.

Ayioo! Ro diye aap! Sowii!

This one phone call might have given them so much of strength :

It will, trust me...

'Tum saath ho toh muqqadar par hai hukoomat apni,

Bin tere zindagi ki aukaat hi kya hai'

Dude! Are you and Tabi competing? Who can make Zoya blush harder? Damn! You guys are brilliant! I so want to read your works! First, on to do list after my exams!🤗

Goodness ..did I actually write all that above this line, I better stop it now😃

Yes yes you did! And please stop for else I'll be a blushing piece of goo!😆

Thank you for writing this piece Zoya!!

Thank you for being so kind!

Originally posted by: Faith28

Beautifully penned zoya👏

Thank you so much!

Loved every bit of it...abd im glad he read her email..and she answered his call😊

Makes two!!

Pls update soon

I shall try😃

Originally posted by: Shahprincess99

hai dii🤗

Hey there princess!

Thank you so much for your encouraging words on the previous piece. Means the world to me...

Oh come on.. you were good in all honesty! You deserved it!

I like how all of you have accepted Eric whole heartily. You guys don't seem to like Amanda much, let me clarify, she's a darling, a sweet and innocent girl who likes Shravan, nothing more and nothing less.

thanks 4 clearing all mu's dii😊

You're welcome!

Also, Shravan hasn't forgotten the password of his primary email ID, the one on which Suman has mailed, he simply hasn't checked it. He's forgotten his Orkut password linked to another ID. More clarity on that later.

love ur intial explaination even though i am dying to read the update😉

can't just miss this imp note here😆

Hahaha you're cute!

I loved how you all couldn't wait for the next update. Patience is a virtue *Winks* *Sadistic laugh heard in the background*

love ur nasaakhat of wrirting di😳

Aww thank you!

Coming to this update, Will Shravan finally see the mail? Will he respond? Will Suman assume he's forgotten her? What's in store ahead? Answers to all of that and more in this update!

so many quetions would surely find answer in ur update dii😆

I promise you will😆

This one will focus on a lot more than just Suman-Shravan and their current animosity.

that would be awesome👏 nishani of great writer zoya dii⭐️

Shukriya!

Chalo, let's take this forward now shall we!

yes!!!!!!!!!!! maine saara update quote kar liya may be😛 mai toh aapke update ke liye future machine invent karke aana chah ti hoon di😆 this is the most awaiting update award mere taraf se dii👏

Oho! Thank you ji... That puts this month's tally on 10😆

lovely convo between father and son waise bhi serail me toh sirf yahi dekhne ko mila but here it's

felling even more real where sometimes distance is needed for better future and seperation however resulted in fruitful result .😊

Yup, whatever gets results right...

sumo really needs shrav here as she willl never be a liability 😭but his friend and even more deep down the heart his first love.😳

Ji bilkul...

naanu and sumo bonding depicts a true family relationship👏 .itni kam age me itne responsibility lena padha sumo ko this journey will surely be endering along with shrav's

conversion from chashmish to our killer shravan malhotra 😉, it's worth is amplified by these two being together in there path of life till the destination❤️ agar mere pass magical powers hote na dii toh mai aap ko edkv ka script designer bana ti😉.hame dass saal seperation track ke badle itni amazing friendship dekhne ko milti .💔

Awww that's sweet of you to say hon! 😳

koi nahi but eric pe ham sab ka crush already hai ab kya karne apne toh ek naam

ko bina kisi chehre ke hi itna creatively design jo kiya hai👏.always in love with there bromance 👍🏼,expecting it even more in future updates.😛

Hahaha talent😆 Thank you ji... Yes loads of Bromance!

di dairy has absolutely become true companion of shravu here and it loved his pov and selfconfidence boosted to max over here⭐️

That's exactly why the diary exists... Self recognition...

Yes! Me! Unbelievable right? But I do. Poor Amanda really likes me, she asked me out, what could I do? I had to politely turn her down, we are friends now.

abhi toh shravu ne friendzone bhi kar diya no more hate towards amanda😆

Hahaha you're funny!

I do have some value and I'm only beginning to understand my potential now.

this really proves me that we r going to see even more selfconfident shrav shortly

and really am happy with his*yeah* .even his hatered is atleast justified as who wants to be the unwanted.😭

Haina?

Sometimes I guess, everything has to go wrong before it can start to go right. It's good, what happened. Ek baat boloon? Itna kuch hai, sab theek hai, mai khush hoon, par phir kami si kyun hai? Yeh khali khali si feeling jaati kyun nahi? Aj bhi, ab bhi, jab bhi khush hota hoon, Sumo ki yaad aati hai. Udas hota hoon tab bhi uski yaad aati hai. Aaisa kyun hai? Woh mujhse baat tak karna nahi chahti. Maine jab bhi Nanu ko call kia, usse baat karne ki koshish ki. Nanu bhana bana dete ke nahi hai, busy hai, ya jo bhi. Par mujhe pata hai na, ke woh mujhse baat karne se mana kar rahi hai. Kyun? Meri kya galti thi iss mai?

my feeling after reding this was abhi jaldi padh lo abhi jaldi sumo ka mail padh na hai 🥺.i really felt like crying over his pain but aansu bacha rahi hoon abhi sumo ka mail nahi padha.😳

Hehehe I'm saying this again, you're too cute!

I'll just keep trying I guess. Kal call karoonga Nanu ko, phir Suman se baat karne ke liye poochoonga, aur woh phir mana kar denge. Par Sumo, understand this, tumhare bina bhi theek hoon mai! Sambhal liya hai khud ko. Par dost thi tum meri, pyaar kia tha tum se kabhi, aj bhi tum ho shayad mere dil ke kisi hisse mai, nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon, yeh bhi tum samjh lo...

pyaar dono taraf bhi hai kaash ki kismat meherbaan ho jaye.shraman bana de inhe.😳

after this when shravu saw sumo pic my heart was screaming like don't misunderstand her abhi jaldi open karo emaill itna suspense james bond ke series me bhi nahi hoga mere liye🤣🤣🤣.from here can't alter any part of letter.😳

LMAO! Aaisa kya? 😆

Dear Chashmish,

nikname se hi dil jeet liye felt really close at this very point❤️

Glad about that..

Kaise ho? Nanu batate hai mujhe tumhare baare mai. Pehle bohot pareshani hui na tumko? Akele rehna kitna mushkil hota hai, mujhe pata hai. Tum kahoge kaise, tum toh family ke saath rehti ho Sumo. Par Shravan Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai. Khair, Nanu ne bataya, Class top kar rahe ho. Kya nayi baat hai? Hamesha hi karte ho. Itne intelligent jo ho. Basketball team mai bhi select ho gaye? Sapna tha na tumhara, kisi din basket ball team mai hona, tumne kar hi dikhaya. Aur theater? Kamal ho gaya. Stage fright ko hara hi diya tumne. Kitni jaldi jaldi badal gaye na tum. Par kya itne badal chuke ho ke meri yaad hi nahi aati? Bhool gaye na tum mujhe?

ab samajh me aaya stalking dono side se chal rahi thi this one is 4 shravu 😆and same void being in both hearts.rememberence of shortest detail was there here it's totally toucing wala part.how can she forget anything as she loves u not yet realised complely though. 😉

Satyavachan...

Tumhe pata hai Shravan, I regretted what I did to you immediately. Mai maafi maangna chahti thi, par tu ne gaadi roki tak nahi, meri baat suni bhi nahi. Teri galti nahi hai, mai teri dost thi, mujhe jab sahara dena chahiye tha maine tera mazak bana diya. Kyun ruk jata tu? Phir apni beizzati karvane? Sahi kia jo chala gaya. Dekh kitna confident ho gaya tu. Kitna kuch achieve kar liya kitni jaldi. Yahan rehta toh mere chakkar mai kabhi aage nahi aa pata tu, itni bossing jo karti hoon mai. I'm proud of you Lamboo, and I'm sure you're going to make us all a lot more proud.

nishani of true friend is actually this eventhough they bear the pain of seperation and still encourage u👏 .galti maan ke maafi magna proves the worth of the person in ur life⭐️

Sahi kaha...

By now Shravan had broken into full blown sobs. She cared. So damned much. She was proud of him. Suman, Sumo, his best friend, was proud of him. All this while he thought himself unimportant to her. All this while as he won accolades and hearts alike, he had an empty feeling, which seemed to suddenly dissipate with her statements. She was proud and he felt content like never before. He felt like the most important person on earth.

finally ham dono ka heart shravu's and mine both r at peace after reading this well awaited letter.

I'm so happy that you felt that way...

Shravan? Tu naaraz hai na mujh se? Tujhe pata hai kya? Tere jaaneke do din baad hi maine unn sab mere "So called" friends se dosti todh di. Maine kaha unko ke cool banne ke chakkar mai maine apne sabse acche, sabse pyaare dost ka dil todh diya. Maine uska dil todh diya jo hamesha mere saath raha. Mai kitna bhi pareshan kar loon usko, woh kabhi nahi jayega, yeh sochti thi mai. Par iss baar maine saari hadh paar kar di. Usko zaroorat thi meri aur maine kya kia? Mazak bana diya uska, humrai dosti ka. Tu ne theek kia ke chala gaya, par mujhse kab tak baat nahi karega? Kab tak saza dega mujhe? Pushkar ke alawa koi dost nahi hai mera. Aur uske saath mai waise nahi hoon jaise tere saath thi. Apni har baat nahi bata sakti usko mai jaise tujhe bata sakti thi. Tu mujhse naaraz rehna chahta hai na? Toh reh par mujhse baat karna band mat kar please.

best step from being selfconscious to selfrespecatable sumo here👏.love ur sumo dii.😊

Me too! 😆

no one can take the place of special someone in ur heart.❤️

Agreed!

shravan was beyond guilty now. Here he thought she didn't care, when it was his fault for not having checked his mails. Had he checked it, all this anger would have dissipated a month back.

don't feel bad shrav it's not just ur fault even it's zoya dii's also hame iss cliffhanger pe rah ne ke liye😆 .par intezaar ke baad haasil huyi har jeet baaki sab se pyaari hoti hai🤗🤗🤗

Guilty as charged 😎 But as you said, Intezaar se it gets sweeter...

Maine na teri favorite sev ki sabzi banayi thi aj par tere bina khane mai maza nahi aya. Shravan, I'm sorry, dil se sorry hoon. Dekh, tu mera best friend hai, tu ne bola tha tu kabhi akele nahi chodega, Maa Papa toh chale gaye, unko mai wapas nahi la sakti. Par tujhe? Tujhe kasam hai, mujhe akela mat chodd. Please. Mai... I can't... I can't live without you. Please Maaf kar de na yaar.

sumo's wrds really made us cry and these heavy wrds would surely hv burdend

Teri, shravu's heart with guilt of nt replying to it.😭

Sumo.

waiting 4 it to convert it into shravan ki sumo&sumo ka shravan.😳

Mai bhi waiting.. Won't keep you guys waiting too long...

here, no time is right or wrong when it comes to briging the gap between two burnded souls👍🏼

So true!

it's only done by mending them together. after that soumo ne toh hame heartattack hi de diya😕 without lifting the call but eventually both prayers had been answered at a time and both of them finally hearing eachother's voice after three months🥳.di apne rok diya yahan pe itna sudden break not fair next time jaldi jaldi haan😭.longest reply ever

Ji hum koshish karenge.. Agreed! This is indeed the longest reply ever!

They say at times, just the one step in the right direction can change your fate. This was to become their destiny. But little did they know...

loved the quote di .awaiting future's outcome in shraman's life

Thank you!

Did the wait pay off?

surely sss👏

Yey!

He not only read the letter but he called and she answered!

love u for this dii🤗

Love you right back 🤗

They finally spoke, if not in words then in sobs, crying does have the power to speak your heart.

yeah mending of broken hearts does takeplace at this point💔❤️

Ekdam correct!

Happy days are here! Almost! Don't worry, I will complete that phone call. Patience...

I just love cliff hangers!

curiosity ki queen ka title se ajj maine toh apko nawaz diya hai aaj⭐️⭐️⭐️

Ji nawaz toh diya hai aapne!

one most imp thing urdu titles yani muntazir and mayassar wait and available both are stupendous wrds app toh urdu word bank ho mere 😉 akhir alfaaz ka

asli matlab samjha diya aapne hame👏

Aww thank you ya! I just love the language! 🤗

loved it dii plzzz jaldi update karna *puppyeyes*

Ji koshish yahi rahegi...

love u zoya dii🤗

Love back hon😃

ek badaa wala hug 4 both updating this part and dying 4 next one

Bada hug back!

~princess~

@Tabi


Your shayaris are killer !!!!
You rock buddy !!
Keep writing !

Originally posted by: sapphire3

@Tabi


Your shayaris are killer !!!!
You rock buddy !!
Keep writing !