Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 32

Originally posted by: bworm

Awesome

Finally connected. ...true friendship. ..there when they need each other.

Thank you so much worm!😛

Beautiful journey you are taking us on.

I'm glad you found it beautiful so far😃

Thank you for the pm

You're welcome!

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wowww 🤗

Yippee wat an update !!!!

Thank you so much LavSriya!!🤗

Loved loved loved it...

Yeyy😛

The mail was ❤️ touching man...

It was right!

Eagerly waiting for their phone conversation...

Me too😆

Loving Ur titles 👏

So pleased to know!

Plzzz continue soonnn...

I will try!

Luv.,..,

LavSriya

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Wonderful update! Love the way the story is shaping up. I'm a fan already.

Thank you so very much!!!😛

I sincerely hope they solve their differences soon, although 90% is almost done. Waiting for the telephone conversation.

Me too😉

Cheers!

Nuts

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Wow ..

Its lovely to see how the distance & separation is proving Shravan's weapons of change .. Indeed he's finding his strengths & confidence - far from home .. Eric is a welcome friend;showing him his true colors;helping him to believe in himself .. He has a fan following 😉

Distance helps doesn't it? Moving out from shadows to find one's light...

He has a lot more than just a fan following😆 You'll see...

Actually the thing is, a decade later the Shravan that returned was a very confident and very intelligent man, who knew his strengths, I guess this is how he got there...

Its really heartfelt to be a liability in a place one calls home;that too at an age when u can't do much except thinking & listening .. Surely she has lost her only support;only respite;her knight in shining armour;her bff ...

I say why does she need a knight? Maybe all she needs is a friend, someone to talk to, to fall back on, she can win mountains then.. haina?

His emotions before & after reading the letter was expressed brilliantly .. First he was happy to see her smile & then he was angry to see that his absence has no affect on her .. He's torn between love & care & anger for her .. His words in diary were so touching ..

Thank you so very much, I'm glad I could drive it home😛

Sumo's letter was really so touching ;brought tears .. My heart goes to them .. The apology was truly made from heart without any pretense or ego ..

That's the beauty of their relationship... No pretence 😳

It was amazing how Shravan could leave his ego & feel the true feelings behind her words .. That she was waiting for his forgiveness & truly cares for her ..

It was never about the ego as much it was about the heart...

That phone call & their sobs were like the final nail on the coffin .. finally letting their emotions lose without any hindrance .. Speaking without words ..He was far;yet reached out to her at the time she needs his emotional support .. Soulmates they are ..

Soulmates indeed!

Ur cliffhangers are so bad .. Always making anxious for next .. update soon ..

Hahaha I guess it's got to do with TRPs😆

Joking, I love cliffhangers, what to do😉

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice.

Originally posted by: priety.priti

finally!!! 👏

take a bow for this masterpiece zoyi you nailed it each and every word was min blowing full of emotions

priti

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

so emotional

absolutely loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Very nice Ramnath and Shravan convo.. Glad that Ramnath wanted Shravan to share his happiness with him.. . This is what missing with Shravan in the show when he was in london, no one from his family with whom he can share his achivement, his success, he was all alone,but here Ramnath taking initiatives to talk to Shravan and making him realise that he is not alone..

I agree with you completely on this! He was an outsider until the very end. His pain or his happiness was his and only his..
Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk 👏
Very good Ramnath monologue.. He always wants Shravan to be happy so he send him to london so that he won't be feeling the pain of his mother's betrayal...

His intentions regarding his son were always pure, wether correct or wrong, but pure...
Sumo is right in thinking that Shravan probably in no mood to forgive her, if he is then he should have replied back but he didn't..

Its right on her part to assume so...

Sumo now knew that his parents taken a loan from Mamaji and she is a bhoj to her uncle and aunt.. Nanaji will always be there for suman no matter what happens..

Word!
So Shravan finally going to open his orkut account due to persistent effort of Eric..
Another excellent diary scene 👏 glad that Shravan trying to move on, Eric helping him out being a true friend, amanda is also a nice girl.. Shravan has a fan following 😉. .good that Shravan thinks he has the importance in london which he never had on Delhi and in his mother's life, if he has any importance in his mother's life she could never had left him alone..

He's seeing himself for he really is... And that's the reason I kept pushing off their talk.. Cause I wanted Suman to realize his importance and Shravan to recognise himself...
But despite having everything he still thinks he has a void in his life and that's due to sumo. . He also wants to talk to sumo so that he can show her that he can live with out her as well..
Shravan is content that she is ok but hurt that his absence didn't matter to her (but we know that that's not true)..

Assumptions are the mothers of all screw ups!
Shravan finally got the Email and angry at himself for not reading the letter before..
Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai really that's true, it's better to live alone than with the family having the same feelings of remaing alone, you feel like you are left alone by the family and that hurts..

Like hell...
Shravan after reading the letter realised that sumo changed after he left, he realised that how much she care for him, he felt like he has the importance in her life.. Shravan now feeling guilty thinking that sumo never care about him..

It was necessary to build their trusts back, this time such that it never dwindles...
His Heart knew sumo wasn't happy then how can he be happy, ye Dil ka rishta hota hi aesa hai..
Sumo's monologue is right that not only she was debted by her parents loan but also the kindness of her Mamaji and nanaji..
In the end finally they heared each other's voice after three months.. It was really emotional
😭

It was wasn't it😛
Thanks for pm
You're welcome!!!
Love
Smita

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Ramnath being a good father taking interest in Shravan's daily life in london, about hi study, about basketball matches.. Nice that father son duo sharing their feelings to each other.. By doing this Ramnath making sure that Shravan doesn't feel alone in a country where there is no one who he can say his own (except Eric)...

He's being a good father... One that Shravan deserved... And I'm glad that bit is being liked unanimously 😛
Ramnath's purpose is always to see Shravan happy and content though his deeds hurt him more than give him happiness but still he is happy that Shravan is moving on and the reason for Ramnath to send him to london was not only for good education but also to forget that his Mother ditched him for her ambition..

Yup! He wanted his son to be a well balanced individual😊
Suman now knows that her Mamiji didn't like her as because her parents taken loan from her which they didn't give back and now they have to take care of her and that's why she feels she is under the ehsaan of her Mamiji.. But Nanaji letting her know that she is not a burden to her but she is his responsibility and that will never change. ..

Nanu is bae for life!
Now due to Eric Shravan will open his Email and will find Shravan's letter, so Eric helps Shravan to clear the misunderstanding between Shravan and sumo are played indirectly a cupid role...

Directly bhi play kar sakta hai, who knows 😆
Another Brilliant piece of diary scene 👏

Thanks!!
everything has to go wrong before it can start to go right
Yes Sometimes that should happen so that things can Once again go right for you..
After his Mother and sumo ditched him everything looks terribly wrong in his life in Delhi but as he went to london he got a new life, new friend in Eric and a girl who is having crush on him 😉
He feels he has importance in other's life which he never feel when he is in Delhi where even his Mother didn't have time for him forget about others.. Shravan also trying to call sumo but nanaji always diverted the topic for which Shravan thinks sumo didn't want to talk to him..

Agreed! The clouds need to pour out before the sun can rise 😛
Finally Shravan found sumo's Email where she wrote a heartful apology to Shravan letting him know how much importance he has in her life, how he is the only true friend she had and due to her own stupidity she lost her best friend..
After reading the Email Shravan also feeling guilty that he misunderstood suman and then the Phone scene..

It will only get better from here on 😛
Both are at peace after hearing the voice...

Peace it is!
Thanks for pm and one Question what is the meaning of "MAYASSAR"
You're welcome, and I've replied to your question somewhere around here, else it's on the picture before the update!
Love
Shrujani

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Well I gotta do what I gotta do... call you Jahanpanah. And I am reminded more and more with each progressing chapter how well deserved that title is.

Hahaha shukriya 😆

It's sweet of you to say!!

Move mountains with your words girl !!

Thank you😳

There is a simplicity in this one like no other

Yey!

shravan is growing up gradually, fitting in his shoes slowly. Ramnath Shravan - yeah he loved the boy.

He does!

Orkut - old memories 😃

Nostalgic much?

Shravan's diary -

I am changing, living, breathing again.

But I know my heart is missing all this while.

Aww so true! Dil toh bohot pehle de aaya woh...

Sumo is growing up with a jump start.

Sadly yes...

Broken in a moment, gathered as mess in the next. I know you might have a different take on Sumo in your FF. But after all that she has seen, no wonder her own emotional range is quite short spanned when it comes to Shravan. how could she give anything she has never received well.

Agreed!

But this one will get love too😉

The Letter is love.

Thank you ji...

And their reactions on the phone... 😭... enjoy the pleasure of making us cry 👏

Hahaha if you insist😆