Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 29

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Zealous si Zoya... 🤗
Sowii...again am late 😕
I read it now n couldn't stop myself from commenting... So here I am 😊
Coming to upii 😃

First of all a biggg 🤗 for this one ya.
Mayassar... Another new word in my dictionary..Thanks ya Zoya 😃
You are super awesome ya..❤️

Ramnath Malhotra n his love for Shravan...❤️
I have always admired his love for his son...He was much better parent than Nirmala. His love was pure...Atleast he cared for his son n was there for him.

For the development of confidence it was necessary to send Shravan away
True ya!!
Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk...Soo loved it ❤️ 👏

Suman...!!
A broken soul inside n a bossy n bully one outside!
A deep character but twisted by CVs.

Its really very painful when you lost your parents n have to live like a liability...A debt adding to it making it no less than a hell.
I So Loved how you have written Sumo's convo about herself with many...It feltRishta❤️ ❤️real 👏
Nanu is such a darling ...An angel for ShraMan ❤️

Eric...and a smile on my face 😃 😆
What a lively character ya 😳
Love Shravan-Eric Bond ❤️

Shravan n his Diary
Oh how much I love it always you write..❤️

Shravan gained so much confidence...Much needed self confidence!!
Amanda...Baby He is only Sumo"s...Better be a friend only 😛
Yes you do have value and potential Shravan...much more than you or anyone can think.


Itna kuch hai, sab theek hai, mai khush hoon, par phir kami si kyun hai? Yeh khali khali si feeling jaati kyun nahi? Aj bhi, ab bhi, jab bhi khush hota hoon, Sumo ki yaad aati hai.... ShraMan feels ❤️ ❤️

Mails...I was like..Check it Shravan...!!!
He smiled seeing her happy face in pic...Aww!

Here he was opening the mail n I was biting my nails !
While reading Sumo's whole letter...I was crying!!!
It did left that much needed impact Zoya...!!

Par Shravan Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai...True that...Poor girl 😭
I'm proud of you Lamboo,...That what Shravan wanted to hear...Meet too 😊
That empty feeling dissipated... it had to!!
Sumo had that much power n hold over Shravan's entire being always as we all saw in show but you had shown the power n hold of Shravan over Sumo... 👏

tu ne bola tha tu kabhi akele nahi chodega, Maa Papa toh chale gaye, unko mai wapas nahi la sakti. Par tujhe? Tujhe kasam hai, mujhe akela mat chodd. Please. Mai... I can't... I can't live without you. Please Maaf kar de na yaar....This gives the true ShraMan feels Zoya...The words n feelings feel sooo real n touching..❤️
It seems so real...❤️

Like Shravan, I too read it many times...Loved it ❤️
Shravan called Her not wanting to waste any moment... ⭐️

Ego..!!
A very heavy word...It had always separated ShraMan in show!
But here no more ego...Thanks buddy😊

Sumo ke dil ne Shravan ko pukaara...N Shravan felt it...Dil ka Rishta❤️ ❤️
N like Shravan I too chanted in my mind... pick the damn phone girl!!
She received it...Shock !!...Happy one 😛

Oh my my...!!
They both wept as though in each other's embrace... 😭
I can imagine ShraMan crying holding phones close to their ears...!!
Your words had that Impact Zoya...Hats Off Girl 👏

I don't know how many times am gonna say this , but your words do something to me Zoya..!!
Touch me deeply every damn time!

How can someone write this well?
Talented Soul you are...Gid Gifted Writer man!!!!
Thanks for being there, writing n posting them here n giving us all pleasure to read these marvelous pieces...Thanks a lot! 🤗

Okeii...I guess I have written enough 😆
Well That's how much I loved it 😉

Thanks for the pm buddy n do cont soon 😊
Loads n Loads of Love n Bone Crushing 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

P.S Will try to unres on other post too 😕
Life is hell busy these days.

Wow ..

finally!!! 👏

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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A/N ❤️ ❤️
I mean it though!

You two have been the best things to have happened here!

Friends for life!

Somehow when it comes for Klaus I end up blushing so hard☺️
Mayassar Beautiful title ❤️
Thank you Baitu!

Ramnath ...I really liked his character in the show until nimmo made her gracious presence
MCP, selfish , manipulative as we call him , his concern and love for Shravan was always genuine .
I'm loving your characters ..Flawed they maybe but there are ❤️
Arey tu ruk bas... Nimmo se bhi pyaar na karva diya toh naam badal de mera! And mind you I love my name!😆😆
Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk.
Word !

Haina!
Shravan now believes in himself we could give some credit to Ramnath as well.
Sending him away from home wasn't a bad decision afterall.
Kudos to you ...Ramu ke liye bhi pyar Jaga diya 😆
Yo baby!
Sumo- Nanu Convo 💔
I can't imagine how hard it must have been for her .
And manju that woman has a loudspeaker fitted in her vocal cords .
She is a barbed tongued woman here too but not all that bad.. Note she was talking to Mamaji not Sumo. My Manju wouldn't be that harsh😆

Sorry I got distracted 😳😆
Eric se distract nahi hue toh shaq hoga mujhe😆 DEVta swaroop hai woh bilkul

Dear diary 💔💔
Zo can i just hug you ?

Yes please!

Your GIFs are life bas! Although I voted for Fero, I had made a mental note to edit that, but I forgot I'm sure you won't care about nominations, you don't do it for awards! Me either 😆 Khud se jeet jaate hum. Got distracted 🤣 I was saying, for me your GIFs are life! Damon wali huggie!

Oh I forgot Tabi too! Her GIFs are so perfect!
I have said this earlier mere liye toh tu hi meri Nicholas Sparks hai ❤️
Tujhse better is character ko koi nahi samjhta .
Haye! Jaan le le! Nik sparks! 😳
He misses her 😭
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawaon mein bin tere
This song kept playing in my head as i read his diary

Fitting song!
Everyday he calls to talk to her ❤️
Oh yeh! Aa haan!

Finally he recovered his password
Ji...

When he was going through his email, mujhe kisi ke inbox ki yaad aa rhi thi 😉🤣
LMAO! Mujhe bhi samjh gaya tu kiski baat kar rahi hai🤣 Poor thing that person!😆
He got her email

Haye

Beautifully penned !!! So many feels !!!
And then he called

Arey re ro mat Prii!

Bina monsoon Gorakhpur me floods ke liye aap responsible ho maalik.
Gorakhpur ke bichare Sadakant Mishra ji, ab doob jayenge 🤣
They say at times, just the one step in the right direction can change your fate.
So true !!!
Super se bahot bahot bahot upar wali update !!

Thank you jaan!
Flow of this story is superb and I'm loving it !!!

I'm glad you are!
Love you ❤️ ❤️
Love you more!
P.s- Resh jyada nach mat haan...Next time dekhna 😎

Haan now you just wait👍🏼

Originally posted by: imshveta

FantaBulous
Thank you!
Why did I miss this one before? You have touched a chord deep down somewhere.
And me, you! Hello there! Pleased to make your acquaintance. I'm glad you feel this way😛
People must have told you this before but I will say it again. You write beautifully.
It never gets old really. It's nice to be reminded 😉
Keep it coming
Sure thing!
Love
Shveta

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Will be back soon,!

I am...

Elijah!! man of words!!😉
As much as I love the ring of that, where is my GIF🤔

I was waiting for some brialliant GIFs😆

Ramu kaka n Shravan's convo !! Feel good!!

(No wonder our Shravan's trusted him like he did)

Mental notes..!! Trying !!

Ji, Ramu was flawed in perspective but was a caring father...

Nerd will be gone for good.!?!

Oh never! The nerd lives deep down, resurfaces here and there. Once a nerd always a nerd 😎

So,,finally he is getting what he deserved !!

As they say, ,nothing comes easy! ! His wasn't easy either! !

So true!

Fans! ! Well ! !😳

#FangirlingForever! !

Makes two!

Karo khud par yaqeen... #ShiningShravIsIn !!

Oh yeh! That he is!

Sumo.!! Bojh! Liability !! Poor child! !😕 But Nanu !!🤗

More on that later😃

Napasandeeda hai jo har fard ki aankhon mein,, panah mili usey ek buzurg ki baaton mein! !

Kahan guzarti hai zindagi kisi Saraaye mein,,talab ghar ki milti hai har bashindey ki aahon mein! !

Oh shit! You killed it!👏

This was so apt and so perfect🤗

Orkut returned...so,,a friend request ! !

#nostalgia

Hahaha those days...

Dear Diary! !

Rising from the Ashes! !

I'm not turning into a narcissistic ass,.. #sigh..!

He's a phoenix... Aur yeh toh bas shuruaat hai...

Khushi ho ya gham mujhey tum yaad aaye! #Anchor..!

#Goals

nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon,.. #Heartbeat..!

Sigh! He does love her, but one scar and doodh ka jala chaas bhi phuk phuk ke peeta hai...

She was smiling. A smile crept up on his face too, his eyes lit up. She's okay. She's fine. She's happy...! #DefaultSetting..!

and would she feel what he did now? #SaneThought..!

He was initially shown as such a sorted out character. Then somewhere down the line feminism kicked in and to rpove Sumo right he was butchered

he sat frozen staring at the name, then the subject, "Sorry" it read...!

When It took me a while to absorb it,,Shravan had every right to be frozen !!

Aww man...

Sucking in a deep breath he read it..! MeToo..!

I love if that's the effect it had on you!

This letter took my heart away..!!

And I'm so glad it did!

She knew everything he always desired for..!!

Friends na...

Par kya itne badal chuke ho ke meri yaad hi nahi aati? Bhool gaye na tum mujhe? #HeartBreaking..!

Impact made then...

I'm proud of you Lamboo, and I'm sure you're going to make us all a lot more proud...! #FriendIndeed..!

Ji...

Tu mujhse naaraz rehna chahta hai na? Toh reh par mujhse baat karna band mat kar please...! #Desperation..!

At its best...

Shravan was beyond guilty now..! 🤗

Banda dil le leta hai...

tere bina khane mai maza nahi aya...! #ItsNotTheFood #ItsThePerson..!

Indeed it is!

And the last part! ! Too over whelming to even reproduce..!

Haye, kya compliment diya hai aapne...

Teri..! #Always..!

Hamesha yes!

The void is filling! !

Slowly and steadily...

Stalking part is on point! !

Shukriya!

Ranjishein thi...justajoo thi...they muntazir jiske..!!

Mayassar kar gaya khudko...khuli kitaab ke maanid..!!

Oh you did not!!!

Oh my GOD!

You wrote that for my titles!

Tabi🤗

"Shravan, I need you right now.." ..!😭

The phone call..!🤗

Sumo the questionnaire..! Adorbs!

Yey!!

Cry it out! !

Crying it out is necessary to flush it out of the system...

But little did they know...😲

Prii and you seem to have the same doubt. Stress nahi hai.. Bas unko pata nahi ke yeh conversation life badal diya... Nahi hota toh 10 saal nikal jaate...

What a fabulous piece! !

Thank you so much!

Kal pada tha,,took me a day to gather myself..!

Haye! Thank you!

Hum to sang dil types hai...Phir bhi..! 😆

Awww🤗

Thanks for p.m.😊

Pleasure is all mine😃

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

You know zoya, I have never had tears in my eyes while reading any of the stories here, though I love those!

Wow! Really!😳

But today, you just make me cry, I blinked back my tears quite a few times, while reading Sumo's letter!

Not that I'm happy you cried, but it's a huge compliment managing to stir emotions 🤗

You are just the best!

Aww thank you!

Lots of love and hugs to you!

Love and hugs back at you!

I really want to say many more things but I am lacking words!

You have said enough hon, the length doesn't matter, what you say does... And your words made home🤗

Thank you for this wonderful FF.

Pleasure is all mine!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was emotional part. 😭
It was wasn't it...
Shravan finally opened his mail, he was just about to delete the message I thought he would delete but thank God he decided to check all the mail one by one & he found mail from Sumo that too one month back. 😲

Haina! I just love drama😆 I'm too filmy..

but he opened it started to read as soon he read he couldn't control his emotions & cried. He was happy that his Sumo didn't forget him 😳 she cares for him, she knows everything about him, his play in the school, becoming basketball captain, he topped in the class every thing.

Just as he knows what's up with ehr, new phone, number, library, everything...

Finally he called her & spoke to her not exactly but through sobbing, at least they heard each other's voice after so long. 😛
Ahan...
Can't wait for longer, I want to see them talking.
Just a little bit longer...
Thanks for PM
You're welcome!
Vinu

Originally posted by: laavanyam

Zoya ... U should write novels ..

Hahaha really!

What are u doing here ??plz come to mumbai Tv industry and knock sum gud ideas into clueless hapless serial cv's ...

Come to Bombay? Umm.. how do you come to a place you already are in😆

Born and brought up right here...

Bumping into people from the industry is as common as the heat here...

And I hope the CVs get some sense themselves, cause hum yahin theek hai..

My dreams are different, I only write cause it's a stress buster... 😛

Jitna tarref Kia jaye utna kam hai tumhare writing ki utna kam hai

Aww man! Thank you so very much!! It's really sweet of you to say😳

Originally posted by: sweksha

This is not fair Yrr...my pillow is fully wet now how will I sleep on wet pillow...

Aww man! Apologies for having made you cry so 🤗

seriously dear this is so emotional... really heart touching update...

I'm glad it struck a chord! 😳

I have read all the parts of your story but this par made me cry 😭 ...the way you described shravan's guilt and suman's lonlyness and sorrow that was amazing...

Thank you so much!

eagerly waiting for emotional talk of shraman...

Me too!

please update soon

Sure hon!