Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 28

It was emotional part. 😭

Shravan finally opened his mail, he was just about to delete the message I thought he would delete but thank God he decided to check all the mail one by one & he found mail from Sumo that too one month back. 😲 but he opened it started to read as soon he read he couldn't control his emotions & cried. He was happy that his Sumo didn't forget him 😳 she cares for him, she knows everything about him, his play in the school, becoming basketball captain, he topped in the class every thing. Finally he called her & spoke to her not exactly but through sobbing, at least they heard each other's voice after so long. 😛

Can't wait for longer, I want to see them talking.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Zoya ... U should write novels .. What are u doing here ??plz come to mumbai Tv industry and knock sum gud ideas into clueless hapless serial cv's ... Jitna tarref Kia jaye utna kam hai tumhare writing ki utna kam hai

This is not fair Yrr...my pillow is fully wet now how will I sleep on wet pillow... seriously dear this is so emotional... really heart touching update...I have read all the parts of your story but this par made me cry 😭 ...the way you described shravan's guilt and suman's lonlyness and sorrow that was amazing...eagerly waiting for emotional talk of shraman...please update soon

Zoya, can I just hug you for this beauty🤗

Beautifully penned zoya👏

hai dii🤗

Thank you so much for your encouraging words on the previous piece. Means the world to me...

I like how all of you have accepted Eric whole heartily. You guys don't seem to like Amanda much, let me clarify, she's a darling, a sweet and innocent girl who likes Shravan, nothing more and nothing less.

thanks 4 clearing all mu's dii😊

Also, Shravan hasn't forgotten the password of his primary email ID, the one on which Suman has mailed, he simply hasn't checked it. He's forgotten his Orkut password linked to another ID. More clarity on that later.

love ur intial explaination even though i am dying to read the update😉

can't just miss this imp note here😆

I loved how you all couldn't wait for the next update. Patience is a virtue *Winks* *Sadistic laugh heard in the background*

love ur nasaakhat of wrirting di😳

Coming to this update, Will Shravan finally see the mail? Will he respond? Will Suman assume he's forgotten her? What's in store ahead? Answers to all of that and more in this update!

so many quetions would surely find answer in ur update dii😆

This one will focus on a lot more than just Suman-Shravan and their current animosity.

that would be awesome👏 nishani of great writer zoya dii⭐️

Chalo, let's take this forward now shall we!

yes!!!!!!!!!!! maine saara update quote kar liya may be😛 mai toh aapke update ke liye future machine invent karke aana chah ti hoon di😆 this is the most awaiting update award mere taraf se dii👏

lovely convo between father and son waise bhi serail me toh sirf yahi dekhne ko mila but here it's

felling even more real where sometimes distance is needed for better future and seperation however resulted in fruitful result .😊

sumo really needs shrav here as she willl never be a liability 😭but his friend and even more deep down the heart his first love.😳

naanu and sumo bonding depicts a true family relationship👏 .itni kam age me itne responsibility lena padha sumo ko this journey will surely be endering along with shrav's

conversion from chashmish to our killer shravan malhotra 😉, it's worth is amplified by

these two being together in there path of life till the destination❤️ agar mere pass magical powers hote na dii toh mai aap ko edkv ka script designer bana ti😉.hame dass saal seperation track ke badle itni amazing friendship dekhne ko milti .💔

koi nahi but eric pe ham sab ka crush already hai ab kya karne apne toh ek naam

ko bina kisi chehre ke hi itna creatively design jo kiya hai👏.always in love with there bromance 👍🏼,expecting it even more in future updates.😛

di dairy has absolutely become true companion of shravu here and it loved his pov and selfconfidence boosted to max over here⭐️

Yes! Me! Unbelievable right? But I do. Poor Amanda really likes me, she asked me out, what could I do? I had to politely turn her down, we are friends now.

abhi toh shravu ne friendzone bhi kar diya no more hate towards amanda😆

I do have some value and I'm only beginning to understand my potential now.

this really proves me that we r going to see even more selfconfident shrav shortly

and really am happy with his*yeah* .even his hatered is atleast justified as who wants to be the unwanted.😭

Sometimes I guess, everything has to go wrong before it can start to go right. It's good, what happened. Ek baat boloon? Itna kuch hai, sab theek hai, mai khush hoon, par phir kami si kyun hai? Yeh khali khali si feeling jaati kyun nahi? Aj bhi, ab bhi, jab bhi khush hota hoon, Sumo ki yaad aati hai. Udas hota hoon tab bhi uski yaad aati hai. Aaisa kyun hai? Woh mujhse baat tak karna nahi chahti. Maine jab bhi Nanu ko call kia, usse baat karne ki koshish ki. Nanu bhana bana dete ke nahi hai, busy hai, ya jo bhi. Par mujhe pata hai na, ke woh mujhse baat karne se mana kar rahi hai. Kyun? Meri kya galti thi iss mai?

my feeling after reding this was abhi jaldi padh lo abhi jaldi sumo ka mail padh na hai 🥺.i really felt like crying over his pain but aansu bacha rahi hoon abhi sumo ka mail nahi padha.😳

I'll just keep trying I guess. Kal call karoonga Nanu ko, phir Suman se baat karne ke liye poochoonga, aur woh phir mana kar denge. Par Sumo, understand this, tumhare bina bhi theek hoon mai! Sambhal liya hai khud ko. Par dost thi tum meri, pyaar kia tha tum se kabhi, aj bhi tum ho shayad mere dil ke kisi hisse mai, nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon, yeh bhi tum samjh lo...

pyaar dono taraf bhi hai kaash ki kismat meherbaan ho jaye.shraman bana de inhe.😳

after this when shravu saw sumo pic my heart was screaming like don't misunderstand her abhi jaldi open karo emaill itna suspense james bond ke series me bhi nahi hoga mere liye🤣🤣🤣.from here can't alter any part of letter.😳

Dear Chashmish,

nikname se hi dil jeet liye felt really close at this very point❤️

Kaise ho? Nanu batate hai mujhe tumhare baare mai. Pehle bohot pareshani hui na tumko? Akele rehna kitna mushkil hota hai, mujhe pata hai. Tum kahoge kaise, tum toh family ke saath rehti ho Sumo. Par Shravan Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai. Khair, Nanu ne bataya, Class top kar rahe ho. Kya nayi baat hai? Hamesha hi karte ho. Itne intelligent jo ho. Basketball team mai bhi select ho gaye? Sapna tha na tumhara, kisi din basket ball team mai hona, tumne kar hi dikhaya. Aur theater? Kamal ho gaya. Stage fright ko hara hi diya tumne. Kitni jaldi jaldi badal gaye na tum. Par kya itne badal chuke ho ke meri yaad hi nahi aati? Bhool gaye na tum mujhe?

ab samajh me aaya stalking dono side se chal rahi thi this one is 4 shravu 😆and same void being in both hearts.rememberence of shortest detail was there here it's totally toucing wala part.how can she forget anything as she loves u not yet realised complely though. 😉

Tumhe pata hai Shravan, I regretted what I did to you immediately. Mai maafi maangna chahti thi, par tu ne gaadi roki tak nahi, meri baat suni bhi nahi. Teri galti nahi hai, mai teri dost thi, mujhe jab sahara dena chahiye tha maine tera mazak bana diya. Kyun ruk jata tu? Phir apni beizzati karvane? Sahi kia jo chala gaya. Dekh kitna confident ho gaya tu. Kitna kuch achieve kar liya kitni jaldi. Yahan rehta toh mere chakkar mai kabhi aage nahi aa pata tu, itni bossing jo karti hoon mai. I'm proud of you Lamboo, and I'm sure you're going to make us all a lot more proud.

nishani of true friend is actually this eventhough they bear the pain of seperation and still encourage u👏 .galti maan ke maafi magna proves the worth of the person in ur life⭐️

By now Shravan had broken into full blown sobs. She cared. So damned much. She was proud of him. Suman, Sumo, his best friend, was proud of him. All this while he thought himself unimportant to her. All this while as he won accolades and hearts alike, he had an empty feeling, which seemed to suddenly dissipate with her statements. She was proud and he felt content like never before. He felt like the most important person on earth.

finally ham dono ka heart shravu's and mine both r at peace after reading this well awaited letter.

Shravan? Tu naaraz hai na mujh se? Tujhe pata hai kya? Tere jaaneke do din baad hi maine unn sab mere "So called" friends se dosti todh di. Maine kaha unko ke cool banne ke chakkar mai maine apne sabse acche, sabse pyaare dost ka dil todh diya. Maine uska dil todh diya jo hamesha mere saath raha. Mai kitna bhi pareshan kar loon usko, woh kabhi nahi jayega, yeh sochti thi mai. Par iss baar maine saari hadh paar kar di. Usko zaroorat thi meri aur maine kya kia? Mazak bana diya uska, humrai dosti ka. Tu ne theek kia ke chala gaya, par mujhse kab tak baat nahi karega? Kab tak saza dega mujhe? Pushkar ke alawa koi dost nahi hai mera. Aur uske saath mai waise nahi hoon jaise tere saath thi. Apni har baat nahi bata sakti usko mai jaise tujhe bata sakti thi. Tu mujhse naaraz rehna chahta hai na? Toh reh par mujhse baat karna band mat kar please.

best step from being selfconscious to selfrespecatable sumo here👏.love ur sumo dii.😊

no one can take the place of special someone in ur heart.❤️

shravan was beyond guilty now. Here he thought she didn't care, when it was his fault for not having checked his mails. Had he checked it, all this anger would have dissipated a month back.

don't feel bad shrav it's not just ur fault even it's zoya dii's also hame iss cliffhanger pe rah ne ke liye😆 .par intezaar ke baad haasil huyi har jeet baaki sab se pyaari hoti hai🤗🤗🤗

Maine na teri favorite sev ki sabzi banayi thi aj par tere bina khane mai maza nahi aya. Shravan, I'm sorry, dil se sorry hoon. Dekh, tu mera best friend hai, tu ne bola tha tu kabhi akele nahi chodega, Maa Papa toh chale gaye, unko mai wapas nahi la sakti. Par tujhe? Tujhe kasam hai, mujhe akela mat chodd. Please. Mai... I can't... I can't live without you. Please Maaf kar de na yaar.

sumo's wrds really made us cry and these heavy wrds would surely hv burdend

shravu's heart with guilt of nt replying to it.😭

Teri,

Sumo.

waiting 4 it to convert it into shravan ki sumo&sumo ka shravan.😳

here, no time is right or wrong when it comes to briging the gap between two burnded souls👍🏼

it's only done by mending them together. after that soumo ne toh hame heartattack hi de diya😕 without lifting the call but eventually both prayers had been answered at a time and both of them finally hearing eachother's voice after three months🥳.di apne rok diya yahan pe itna sudden break not fair next time jaldi jaldi haan😭.longest reply ever

They say at times, just the one step in the right direction can change your fate. This was to become their destiny. But little did they know...

loved the quote di .awaiting future's outcome in shraman's life

Did the wait pay off?

surely sss👏

He not only read the letter but he called and she answered!

love u for this dii🤗

They finally spoke, if not in words then in sobs, crying does have the power to speak your heart.

yeah mending of broken hearts does takeplace at this point💔❤️

Happy days are here! Almost! Don't worry, I will complete that phone call. Patience...

I just love cliff hangers!

curiosity ki queen ka title se ajj maine toh apko nawaz diya hai aaj⭐️⭐️⭐️

one most imp thing urdu titles yani muntazir and mayassar wait and available both are stupendous wrds app toh urdu word bank ho mere 😉 akhir alfaaz ka

asli matlab samjha diya aapne hame👏

loved it dii plzzz jaldi update karna *puppyeyes*

love u zoya dii🤗

ek badaa wala hug 4 both updating this part and dying 4 next one

~princess~

Awesome

Wowww 🤗

Wonderful update! Love the way the story is shaping up. I'm a fan already. I sincerely hope they solve their differences soon, although 90% is almost done. Waiting for the telephone conversation.