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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweksha

OMG P.P. dear badi badi waali Nahi Nahi bahut badi waali jhappi for this...you know why...epi 72 is my most most most favorite episode...I have seen that epi more then 50 times... after that hug and aaj mujh phirse pyaar hua tumse scene I always wanted him to go tk and jaake zara use bol de chahta use Tu raha...after that episode everything was going wrong...now I am feeling like everything is going right no no everything is going perfect..this is really beautiful... and shraman's romantic and naughty chat was damn cute...thank you thank you thank you so much for writing this and making it from TS to OS...you made my day no no week...please continue soon


hsha sweksha dear ye sabka hi fav epi hai lagta hai sabne bahot enjoy kiya tha mera bhi fav hai esiliye continue kar rahi hu in my style 😉

thank you so much for your comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HI all, i am back with update to bore you all 😊
ya ya i know its too late really very sorry all kan pakadake (puppy face) , please maf kar dena 😳

i know last update me sabne bahot kuchh socha tha ki shravan ko kuch ho gaya, just to clear that the call was from pushkar not from shravan 😉

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Dil sambhal jaa zara Part 3

Suman POV

"sumo woh bhaiyya..." and i heard dead silence from other side

"Pushkar kuchh bolo kya hua shravan ko, damn it tell me what the hell is going on there pushkar please speak up!!!" i shrieked on top of my voice, i couldn't hold this anymore my breaths are getting heavier, felt suffocated and my head started spinning

i heard someone squealing shravan's name i concentrated on voice with all my ears yes that was ramnath uncle and another scream i heard of some femaline voice who was that? i tried to recognize Nirmala Aunty? and my eyes widen what she is doing in malhotra house that too in early morning. i searched all house for nirmala aunty but she was not there.

I am sure now my shravan is in a big trouble and he need me, without wasting a second i grabbed my keys and made my way to my car.

So here i am driving crazily in the verge of breaking all traffic rules driving furiously only toward MY LIFE!!!

yes he is my life i cant leave without him and no one no one i mean have right to hurt him he already gone through so many things.

After driving on the topmost speed my car can bear i reached malhotra mansion in 15 mins and there this two human beings who claim themselves as My chashmish's parents are fighting as usual.

i didn't find any importance to heed toward this two human beings and directly went to pushkar who was silently crying sitting in one corner of the living room

"pushkar" my voice came out as more like a gloomy whisper and i placed my hand on his shoulder
he raised his head and the moment he recognized me he clinged on me and started sobbing hardly and my heart twisted and sunk with nerves

"Sumo sumo woh woh bhaiyya meri wajah se...sab meri wajah se hua hai sab" he anathematized himself between his sobs couldnt even finish his sentence

i felt his pain he really love his brother unconditionally unlike other malhotra's "pushkar shuh sab thik ho jayega kya hua muze batao shravan ko kuchh nahi hoga" i cooed him so that he can tell me what was the matter exactly and gently patted his back to sooth him, i dont know from where i got this courage when i myself was in such a dreadful condition, but i know from where i got all this strengh its from my love yes My love for shravan
i felt pushkar was relaxing somewhat then i broke hug and stared him for my answers and he started

Pov ends...

Flashback...

when sumo and shravan was busy in their own world of dream on tarrace preeti came there to call suman since it was very late but she saw lovebirds there and left with broad smile.

she came to her room and since earlier she and pushkar pur bet on this topic she decided to call pushkar and give him this good news afterall he will be the most happiest person in the world when he will come to know about love relationship between his brother and his best friend for which he was literally praying from long time

she ecstatically dialled his number
"Hi preeti etane raat me call kiya kya baat hai madam ko meri yaad aa gayi?" he answered in flirty tone
she rolled her eyes "are mere pas tumhare liye ek good news hai" she replied gleefully
"good news are tumhari to shadi bhi nahi hui to good news kaise" he jested
"welli baato ke alawa kuchh nahi aata hai na tumhe" she chided
"are baba sorry please batao kya hua?"
"aise nahi pahale acchese sorry bolo"
"okay thik hai kan pakadke sorry ab to bata do please" he hold his ear with one hand
"okay suno tumhe yaad hai kuchh din pahale hum logo ne ek bet lagayi thi?" she asked cheerfully
he scratched his head to remember "hmmm...kaunsi woh bhaiyya aur sumo wali"
"yes yes wahi wahi wali" she exhilarated

"usaka kya un dono ne to bol diya tha ke woh log dost hai aur tum bet jeet gayi thi meine tumhe pastry bhi khilayi thi na" he shrugged

"are budhhu woh bet mein nahi tum jit gaye aaj" she replied with enthusiasm

"are kya bol rahi ho...wait wait you mean bhaiyya aur sumo matlab sumo aur bhaiyya really" pushkar clamored

"yes pushkar shravan yaha hai terrace pe di ke sath mein abhi di ko bulane gayi thi sajje pe to dekha dono eksusare ko hug karke baithe the" she beamed ardently

"ohh toh matlab bhiyaa kisi dost ke yaha nahi gaye hai wo tiwari killa me hai kya baat hai bhiyaa to bade fast nikale aaj ijhar kiya aur raat bhar sath me bhi wow man gaye bhiyya aapko" pushkar replied dramatically while giving imaginary salute to his brother

"achha chalo bye good night kal mein tumhe pastry khila dungi okay"

"kyu tum kyu pastry khilaogi?"

"are mein hari na hum logo ki bet but i am very happy that i lost so i will give treat"

"okay madam jaisa aap kahe good night" he ended call

Kamini eavesdropped pushkars conversation with preeti while passing "ohh toh ye baat hai matlab shravan ne bhaisab se zut bola ki wo apane dost ke yaha hai, agar bhaisab ko yeh pata chal jayega to shravan hamesha ke liye unake najaro se gir jayega and sone pe suhaga to ye hai ki nirmala bhi wahi hai, wah ji wah kamini chal lag jaa kaam pe yahi mauka hai mar de chauka" she mused happily ans went to ramnath's roon to inform him about her new discovery

In ramnath's room, ramnath heard knock on the door "etane raat ko kaun hai shravan to ghar pe nahi hai" he thought and open door and found worried kkamini standing there

"Are kamini tum etani raatme sab thik to hai na?" he asked with concern thinking something wrong happened with lala which bring kamini hare at this late

"nahi bhaisahab kuchh bhi thik nahi hai, mein kaise batau aapko muzase to kaha bhi nahi jaa raha hai..." kamini said with fake hesitance but her happiness was no bounds

"kamini kya ho gaya aisa ki tum etani pareshan dikh rahi ho please batao you are scaring me" he fretted with kamini's statements

"bhaisahab kya batau aapko shravan ne aaj aapse zut bola aur wo bhi us suman tiwari ki wajah se" she started shedding crocodile tears

"kya kah rahi ho tum kamini shravan ke baare me aise kaise bol sakati ho" he barked

kamini smiled devilishly internally "ab aayega maja"

"bhaisahab shravan ne aapko bola tha na ki wo apne dost ke yaha ruka raat me?" she stated and wait intently for his response he nodded in agreement but stared her in utter confusion "bhaisahab shravan koi apane dost ke yaha nahi hai wo tiwari killa me hai aur suman ke sath hai..."

she cutted by ramnath "kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum apane had me raho shravan aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta" he roared doubling kamini's happiness

"are bhaisahab mein bakwas nahi kar rahi hu meine apane kano se suna, aur to aur waha nirmala bhi hai, mein janati hu aisi ladkiyon ko muze to pahalesehi shak tha ki suman shravan ko apane jaal me fasa legi aisi ladkiyon ka yahi kam hota hai rich ladkon ko fasao aur unaki paiso pe najar dalo unnhe apane matlab ke liye use karo" by the time ramnath alreaddy started boilling in anger

"shravan mera beta hai kamini wo es sab me kabhi nahi fasega" he scrowled and kamini smirked devishly

"muze bhi shravan puttar pe pura bharosa hai bhaisahab wo mera bhi to beta hai lekin suman ka kya aur waha nirmala bhi hai kahi wo shravan ko unase na mila de..." she discerned ramnath's expression from corner of her eyes , he was seething profusly and continued "kahi aisa to nahi nirmala ne hi suman ko kaha ho ye sab karne ke liye taki wo aapse badla le sake aur shravan ko aapse dur kar sake" added last straw in his anger

he clenched his fists and jaw "nirmala tumane aaj sari hade par kar di enough is enough now you will pay for it and suman meine kaha tha ki en sabme mat pado lekin tumane nahi suna ab anjam ke liye taiyyar raho aur ab mein ye bhi bhul jaunga ki tum tiwariji ki natin ho" he roared with his back to kamini and kamini smiled slyly

He turned and kamini again and she covered her face with mask of sadness "haan bhaisab aapko kuchh karna chahiye esake pahale ki shravan aapse dur ho jaye" she did perfect job of adding some more fuel in the burning fire

Ramnath took his phone from side table and dialled number it was already 2 am so his call got unanswered even after attempting umpteenth time but he didnt gave up

it was 5 in morning when nirmala woke up and found suman is not in room and she took her phone to call her but by her surprise there was 25 missed calls from ramnath, she taken aback on his behaviour but before she could think much again her phone started buzzing

"what happen to this bizzare man?" she mused and answered call

"Muze nahi pata tum kya kar rahi ho? kaha ho? kisake sath ho? i want you here in next 30 mins muze tumase baat karani hai jitane game khelane the khel liye na ab mein tumhe aur shravan ke jindagi ke sath nahi khelane dunga"he glowered and before she respond anything the call got disconnected

"Ye adami apane aap ko samazata kya hai khud ke aage kuchh nahi dikhata use, aajtak meine tumhari baat suni MR. Ramnath malhotra lekin ab nahi bas, i want closure from you and today i will do that fir usake liye muze jo bhi karna pade i am coming to reveal your real face" she mused angrily and headed to MM after getting freshen up
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Ramnath was pacing angrily in living room waiting for nirmala it was already 1 hr passed since he called nirmala and she was not there yet

"Aurate aur kya kar sakati hai pahale logo ke jindagi ke sath khelo aur badme jab aamne samne aane ka waqt aata hai tab bhag jao" he frowned

"Mr ramnath malhotra apani jaban ko lagan dijiye mein kabhi bhi kisi se nahi darati hu aur na chupati hu" she retorted

ramnath started clapping "dekho kaun baat kar raha hai jisane apane bachhe aur pati ko chodake chali gayi woh yeh baatein kar rahi hai" he passed a dirty look to nirmala and continued while playing a cunning smile on his lips "jo apane hasate khelate family ko chod ke jaa sakati hai woh yeh batein kar rahi hai"

"Bas Mr. Malhotra aur kitna giroge yaha aur koi nahi hai jo tum ye zoota natak kar rahe ho" she snapped in high-pitched voice

Shravan reached home but stopped in doorway when he heard nirmala's voice, even though he believe that he dont remeber his mom and pretend same to others but in deep one corner of his heart his mom is still there and without seeing her face he can recognize her voice

"ye nirmala ahuja yaha kya kar rahi hai, yeh papa se kya baat kar rahi hai"he mused amuzingly and hide himself behind door

"Tumhe maine kaha tha shravan se dur raho tum fir bhi nahi mani na" he gruffed dangarously near her face there was something sinister about his murmuring voice which intimidated her

nirmala composed herself "etane salon se yahi to kiya hai meien apane bachhe se dur rahi hu aur aaj bhi hu jo mere zindagi ki sabse badi galti thi meri aur jiske wajah se mein aaj tak pachata rahi hu, kash us waqt tumse nahi darati aur shravan ko apane sath le jaati" her eyes welled up "aur ab mein tumase nahi darati ramnath malhotra dont you ever dare to talk like this with me" she snapped raising her index finger at him

shravan's whole world crashed with this revealation "mom muze apane sath le jana chahati thi lekin kyu nahi le gayi wo kyu muze chodake gayi? kya hua tha aur papa? papa aise kyu bol rahe hai?" he mused and felt some warm water on his chicks which unknowingly made its way from his eyes down

Jab Tadapata Hai Kabhi Apana Koi
Khun Ke Aansu Rula De Bebasi
Ji Ke Phir Karana Kya Mujhko Aisi Jindagi...
Jisane Jakhmon Ko Nahi Marham Diye

his thoughts broken down with ramnath's voice "enough is enough just shut up tum shravan ko muzase dur karati wo sirf aur sirf mera beta hai, koi nahi hai tumhara, tum jaise bachallan aurat kya usaki parvarish karati, jise apane pariwar ki koi parwa nahi thi wo aurat mere bete ko sambhalati aur yeh mat bhulo jo upbringing meine ki hai shravan ko woh tum kabhi nahi de pati use" he guffawed sardonically

"Agar aapko yaad nahi hai to mein aapko yaad dila du jab tumhare paas koi kaam nahi tha na tab meine job karke apane family ko sambhala and you, you was the person who forced me to do job and jab apana kam shuru kar diya to ego aa gaya tumame aur muze job chodane bola, tumhara ego hurt ho raha tha na ki tumhari biwi tumase jyada achhi job kaise kar sakati hai kyu? yeh baat tumase digest nahi hoti tha na?" she raised a brow and ramnath felt a tight invisible slap across his face which directly hit his manly ego

"raat raat bhar bahar rahna kam ke naam pe apane boss ke sath rukna yahio to kaam tha tumhara aur kya karati thi tum?" he gave her dirty look putting a last straw in disrespecting her self respect

Its enough for nirmala and before he could continue further whole room boomed with slap sound whose evidence exibits on ramnath's face, all malhotra clan gathered in living room

"ek shabd aur nahi ramnath malhotra yeh tum bhi achhe se janate ho ki aaj bhi tumhari biwi hu Mrs. Nirmala Malhotra hu and not Mrs ahuja, how you dare mere dignity pe shak karne ki aur us waqt bhi meine kaha tha aur aaj bhi yahi kah rahi hu mein sirf aur sirf esliye yaha se gayi kyuki tumane yahi apani gandi soch se mere self respect ko stain kiya tha jo muze manjur nahi tha, aur shravan ko meien sirf aur sirf esliye choda tha yaha taki tum use apane esi sick soch ka shikar na banao aur usake maa ki ijjat sare court ke samane na uchalo" her loathe for his thinking was clearly visible in her eyes

shravan rooted at place when he heard nirmala's revealation he never thought that his father can go such low to keep away him for his mom , its clear that his father was at fault for his longing of motherly love and family , he clenched his fists, he wanted to go and snap his father but the way where this discussion was going he knew that more things will be coming he just waited for whole nine yards of the truth

"I am feeling so disgusting ke meine tumhare jaise insan ke sath pyar kiya aur shadi ki, ye meri jindagi ki sabse badi bhul thi aur tumhare sath family shuru karna, tumhare nakamiyon ki wajah se sare ghar ki jimmedari apane updar lena ye meri kabhi na sudharane wali galti hai jisake liye mein jindagi bhar pachata rahi hu" she scrowled

"tum samazati kya ho apane apako tum kuchh bhi karogi aur mein kuchh nahi karunga?' he yelled at her

"meien us din bhi kaha tha aur aaj bhi keh rahi hu ki tum wahi ramnath malhotra ho jise meien 10 sal pahale choda tha aur mein aaj bhi mein wahi karungi jo muze thik lagega tumhare permission ki jaroorat nahi hai muze" her jaw clenched

here shravan lost his existance on his mothers statement "kya sach me maa yeh sochati hai ki unaki family unaki sabse badi galati hai? kya mein unaki bhul hu?" his thought were not stopping, he screwed up his face and pressed his lips together to supress his sobs but the flood of tears running from his eyes didnt slowed at all


Apane Bhi Pesh Aaye Hamase Ajnabee
Waqt Ki Saajish Koi Samajha Nahi
Beiraada Kuchh Khataaye Hamase Ho Gayi
Raah Mein Patthar Meri Har Dam Diye

"Aj mein shravan ko sab bata dungi usake bad use jo faisala lena hai woh le sakta hai aur muze koi tajjub nahi hoga agar woh muzape vishwas na kare akhir usaki upbringing hui hi aise mahol me hai jaha auraton ki koi kadar na ho , mein independant thi aur shayad wahi meri sabse badi galati thi jisake wajah se tumane mera hasata khelta pariwar tod diya" tears ran down her cheeks

"Are jao jise jo batana hai batao muze mere bete pe pura bharosa hai woh tumhari baat kabhi nahi manega, woh sirf aur sirf muzape bharosa karta hai, mere word ke aage woh kabhi nahi jaata hai" he smug

"haan achhi baat hai lagta hai akhir tumane use bhi apani tarah hi bana diya" she retorted,

all malhotra clan was standing there but no one have courage to interfere between them, but kamini felt very glad by witnessing this fight according to her it was a high melodrama and she don't want miss a bit of it

"hum dono apane jindagi me bahot khush hai hum dono ko umhari jaroorat nahi hai samazi"

shravan opened his eyes and stared in blank "how he can say i dont need my mom? how he know how much i longed for her love? jab bhi mein pushkar ko dekhata hu muze maa ki kami pata chalati hai, jab bhi school me bachho ko unake maa ke sath dekhata tha muze mom yaad aati thi, hamesha sochata tha ke meine aisi kya galati kar di jo maa muze chodke chali gayi? ek bachha jisaki subah apani mom ke good morning wish se aur raat apani mom ke goodnight wish se hoti thi woh bachha kaise apani mom ke bina rahega dad kaise socha aapane?" he clasped door as it was the only thing where he can show his anger and vulnarability

"haan muze pata hai tum logo ko meri jaroorat nahi hai lekin muze sukoon chahiye esliye mein shravan ko sari sachhai bataungi, aaj tak ek din nahi gaya jab meine shravan ko yaad nahi kiya, aur shayad yahi wajah thi ki meine nidhi aur aditya ko wo pyar diya jo shravan ke hisse ka tha, tum kya samazoge maa ke pyar ko" she shook her head in dismay

shravan felt a pang in his heart "jo pyar mere hisse ka tha wo kisi uar ko mila lekin maa ne ek baar bhi muze milane ki koshish kyu nahi ki kisi se to puch sakati thi na ek baar kahati aur mein unaki baat samaz jata kyu maa apne shravan pe etana bhi bharosa nahi tha aapko jo muze milane ki bajay aapne ye soch liya ki muzase dur chali jaye aap aur muze akele chod do?" but he know his questions can be answered by only one person and he need all those answers today

shravan unhide his figure and dragged his body to living room where his so called parents were busy in fighting with each other

"Tum?? toh aa gayi tumhe yaad ki tumhara ek ghar hai tumhara ek baap hai jise tumpar khud se jyada bharosa hai, jo tumhe apani jaan se bhi jyada pyar karta hai, woh beta apane baap ko etana bada dhoka de sakta hai?" ramnath glowered at shravan unknown to the fact that his son heard all the conversation till now and shravan stared him intently

"es aurat ne tumhe bulaya tha na waha aphi zooti kahani sunane ke liye" ramnath pointed his index finger toward nirmala "es aurat ki wajah se tumane muze zut bola na, aur haan ye kaise bhul sakata hu ke suman ne ye sab karne me esaka sath diya" ramnath frowned thinking suman was behind his meeting with nirmala oblivious to the reality

"aap ye kya kah rahe hai? matlab aapko pata tha ki yeh tiwari killa me thi aur esiliye aap etane pareshan the?" shravan tried to link events happened around him

"haan muze pata tha aur meine suman ko bola bhi tha ki es sab me bich me na pade lekin wo ladki kyu sunegi meri woh bhi to esi ki tarah hai self obsessed and independent, aur aisi ladkiyon ko mein achhese janta hu dosti ke maan pe fayaa uthati hai amir ladko ka" ramnath mimicked kamini but it was his biggest mistake

"Mr. Ramnath malhotra mind your toungue" shravan roared and ramnath taken aback on shravan's change, he retorted him first time and that too for suman "ek shabd nahi sumo ke liye nahi to muzase bura koi nahi hoga"

"tum muzase aise baat karoge?" ramnath said angrily

"haan kyuki abse aapka aur mera koi rishta nahi hai, aur aap chaho to mein yaha se abhi jaa sakta hu , i wont live here anymore" ramnath startled on shravan's declaration

shravan turned his frame to face nirmala "aap muze bataieye ek baat bas ki kyu etane salon me muze ek baar bhi contact nahi kiya, kya mein sachme aapki sabse badi bhul hu?" he asked her looking directly into her eyes to find his answers

"yeh kya bol rahe to tum beta" nirmala raised her hand to touch his face but he clasped her hand in midway
"muze beta mat bulaieye mein kisi ka beta nahi hu na aapka" and he turned his face to ramnath "aur na aapka"

"jinko lagta hai mein unaki galti hu aise galti ko aap apana beta kaise man sakate ho hai na?" his eyes burned with the anger for his parents

Ik Mukkamal Kashamkash Hai Jindagi
Usane Hamase Ki Kabhi Na Dosti
Jab Mili Mujhko Aansu Ke Woh Tophe De Gayi
Has Sake Hum Aise Mauke Kam Diye

ramnath and nirmala hold his hands but he free himself from their touch "dont dare to touch me again" shravan roared

"beta mein bas yeh chahati thi ki tum apani jindagi achhese bitao aur tumhe koi bhi aisi situation me nahi dalna chahti thi jaha tumhe dard ho esliye meine tumhe kabhi contact nahi kiya" nirmala tried to clear her point

"lekin kabhi aapne yeh janane ki koshi bhi ki ki aapka beta jinda hai ki mar gaya en das salo me?" he stated as matter of fact and nirmala lowered her gaze

ramnath smirked triumphantly "beta yeh aisi hi hai apane bete ko chodke kisi aur ke sath apana ghar basane me khush thi to kya tumhe contact karati" ramnath used his lawyer brain but forgot that his son is also a lawyer

"aap kya bata rahe ho Mr malhotra aap to es sabke master mind ho jisane apane bete ka use kiya apani ego ko fulfill karne ke liye, jis insan ne apani ego ke samne apane bete ke baare me ek baar nahi socha woh kya dusaro ke khilaf dalil pesh kar raha hai" shravan snapped

he closed his eyes and let out the tears beaming in his eyes "bas ab mein aap dono ke liya mar chuka hu aur haan ab muze jine ki bilkul echha nahi hai, har chuka hu mein, ek aisa insan hu jisane apani jindagi ke 10 sal zut me bitaye hai, lekin sirf sumo ke liye jina hai muze" with this left from there and headed to his room and hurled door behind.

Zindagi Ne Zindagibhar Ghum Diye
Jitane Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Num Diye

The only sounds coming from outside of the closed door was all family members bowl him to stop

Flashback Ends...


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so let me know how it is ? Please do like and comments and let me know you liked it or not
P.S. please ignore typo and spell mistakes 😳







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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Amazing chapter. I got tears in my eyes reading the flashback part. I am feeling very bad for shravan and his anger towards his parents is justified. I just wish that he doesn't take any wrong step and harm himself. I hope this story has a happy ending😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Superb! So the truth is finally out in the open. Poor Shravan is broken, shattered. Would love to see how Sumo supports him in his tough times with her tender loving care. Continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Blockbuster update! ! Full weekend wasool! !
Drama bhi tha,,emotion bhi...pyaar bhi tha,,pastry bhi..!
Song was perfect! !
Loved it..!
Thanks for pm!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Much wanted scene of EDKV!! You write it so beautifully, and the song so apt! Really, Father with full of ego, mother with full of self respect! He had to react like this! Let's see what sumo does now!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Tear jerker galore this was pretty priti. Tune badla le liya mujhe rula ka😭
Awesome showdown scene and Shravan oh my poor Shravan kitni insecurities hain uske dil mein... Whether he is unwanted since birth ugh.. thats terrible.

Ur writing is flourishing chapter by chapter hunny awesome job.

He still has hope in Sumo and really wish she lives. Upto it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Priti ki taraf se block buster wala chap. 😉

The way Sumo came by driving jumping all the signal, it show how she care for Shravan. 😕. Flashback was mind blowing, the parent of Shravan blaming each other for their mistakes. Shravan came to know the reality of his parents truth which has been hidden since so long. Breaking Shravan into pieces 😭 what a pity uski life ek mazak ban ke reh gayi. I hope he won't take any drastic step.

Nice & emotional update 👏

Thanks for PM

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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Super emotional chapter here Preety!

Shaven was a mess really. ..a dad who used him as a trophy of his win over his wife, a mom who let him go be caused she was too weak and tired to fight for him and a family where barring Pushkar, he didn't really mean anything to anyone.

You brought out the confrontation scenes beautifully. Emotions were bang on.

Suman has the key to his heart, I hope she is the one who turns out to be the light in his life.

Brilliant update!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So so so emotional!!!
Atlast Shravan came to know about everything... Good..

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