SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20 - Page 8

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Kela me UNRESS...rahavat nhavta😆😆
aani jhenda aplach phadkanar..!!!😃😃

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Res

Sorry for being this late! 1st wala part exam k time pe update kiya, aur 2nd wala bukhaar k time pe. Will unress tonight! Again a bada wala sorryyy! 😭

Unress

Priety!! It was really amazing! Every dialogue, every sentence is pure bliss!

thank you so much and late nahi ho you have commented on last part haan waha late se kiya tha 😉

Love this naughty Shravan, and sharmati sumoo hayeee

haan apane dil ke arman nikal deti hu 😆😆

Sab kuch thik chal raha tha! But yeh Nimmo ka zikr hua aur dekho.. Please yaar, shravan ka accident mat karwana, agar karwao bhi to jaldi thik kara dena!

okay jaisi aapki agya 😊

Loved it, baby, loved it to the core! Eagerly waiting for the next part! Really wish you could just update the next part now!!

haha abhi to muze dolly ki dhamaki mili hai soulmates ke liye kal tak samay hai sirf mere pas 😳pahale use update karna hai badme ese 😉

Thank you so much, that you converted this to a ss!

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Wow!! Wonderful update..

Shraman's conversation was so cute

Love the way Sumo convinced shravan to talk to Nirmala..

Also I m curious to know who was there on the terrace except shraman at night

Cliffhanger! Hope shravan is safe

Plz continue soon

And thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ijazat ho tu Res karnay ki gustakhi kar lein hum😛...😃...😆


Ressi res!

P.S.Wil take some time...do do upii jo hain😳

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Meri Pretty Preeti itni pretty kahaani likh rahi hai..wah !!

thank you so much reshmaji...padharo mere des 😉

I was out the all evening baby and the first thing that I read is this beautiful update!

ohh so nice of you 😊

The way that whole terrace scene was described by you, I could literally watch the scene😃

thank you 😊

Shravan finally got his Sumo and I can imagine his relief and his eagerness to spend the entire time with her.

'I have finally found my angel, it's like I have woken in reality living my dream'

aww so beautiful line dear its perfect😊

And that song...love it!!

Good update here Preeti...thoda darr toh lag raha hai about the next one. ..toh thoda sambhal lena baby.

haan sambhalna padega nahi to sab muze sambhal lenge 😉😉

Originally posted by: priety.priti

haye meri devil aa gayi tu jitna samay lena hai le le aram se padh koi jaldi nahi hai😃

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ijazat ho tu Res karnay ki gustakhi kar lein hum😛...😃...😆


Ressi res!
***
Unres

Angel!!🤗
Phly tu coming towards the tittle..haay...Really a lovely one❤️ btw..dil wakai hai hi bari kumbhakt cheez..kissi par bhi aa jata hai😛...ab Shravan ki hi example lay lo...his mere mention erupts thousands of buttrflies in me😳

thats true uska naam aate hi lakho butterflies udham macha deti hai 😆 aur title jab meine ye valentines ke din likha tha usi ka hai to socha wahi continue karu 😊 bcoz its opt for him

Coming towards the upii...

ji bilkul dil thamke baithe hai

Ohh song choice was..⭐️...my fav❤️
Woah...u knw wht Epi 72 for me wass like sumkind of a treat or a party popper...i was so happy after watching tht epi...i was relieved...k chalo finally humaray Oxford return without brain lawyer k pass finally brain aa hi gaya aur partially function bhi karny laga 😛😆

yes its one of my fav too 😊 yes es epi ke baad laga tha sab thik ho jayega but cv's ne aisi kalti mari k puchi mat 😭

The moment he confessed "Mjhy aj fir se pyaar ho gaya hai Sumo...tumse"...I literally placed both my hands on my heart and cheerly shouted FINALLY!!!...n my family was like kon kahay ga yeh normal hai😛

haha sahi hai ye mast tha thank god uthak doc ke pas nahi le gaye 🤣

Angel!...Angel!...Angel!...WOW!...The way u penned Shravan's predicament,his inner turmoil,his douts,his confusions,his anxiety,his queries n their solutions...ohhh...was just Mind blowing!👏👏👏

bada wala thank you 😃

He loved her since his childhood...wanted to confess,to trust her, but all tht wss stopping him to do so was his fear...fear of a negative outcome..wht if she'll reject him..wht if she'll strand him more over how he'll cope up after such disastrous situation...thez all thoughts his turmoil his trust issues everything ws the tainted concequences of his bitter past experiences...As childhood plays a major role in our judgements and preception about certain someone thing or a situation in our adulthood n same.happened with him...his past experiences made him conscious..
but m.glad tht he letgo his fear and prepared himself to face anysort of results...no matter wht today he'll confesd his love to his only lady love!...woh kahtat hain na.
.Akhaitr mein pyaar ki hi jeet hoti hai😳

yes it was his fear for rejection which was stopping him from confession of his love 😕

Awwh...he talked with the moon aur permession bhi li😆😳 "Kab tak chuapoge raz khud mein,Hisab-e-ishq hum bjhu dekhengay kyamat me"...
Wah wah..
Superb Angel!⭐️❤️

that was my first ever attemp of shayari with the help of my shayar hubby 😛😳

Shravan nevr and couldnt erase her memories from his mind N always loved her unconciously as conciously he hated her and a time came whn his unconscious sense of brain got overloaded with his unspoken love and desires n.now thty akll want their escape...Shravan finally wants to confess.

yes he cant pata nahi etani koshish bhi kyu kar raha tha man i mean just go and tell har etana sochoge to budhape me bologe kya 😲

I really liked their secret patg though i always kept imagining ki Shravan a gigantic figure us window k paar gae kaisay hogi😛😆

yes ye doubt muze bhi hai but ab jab show mw dikha hi diya hai to we can use it 😉

OH...Angel...Sumo's predicament n her turmoil was pened really Brilliantly!⭐️

U really feel dishearted and helpless whn u fail.in making someone to believe in something which is actually the truth.and is against their preception!
The most beautiful part❤️...wgen Sumo.was confessing her love and was helplessly talking to herself...n whn She opened her eyes and found him standing rite infront of her with same emotions n feelings reflecting through his eyes as herz...oh..wonderful⭐️ the best n the loveliest part❤️

are woh mera last moment thought tha ki aisa ho to kya hoga likhane ke baad achha laga 😃

Uff..Shravan's love confession was really Beautiful!❤️

Aww...Their moment n their Kiss..❤️...Engaging one!...was hell beautifully penned!👏⭐️

hehe kiss firse my god mein to besharam hote jaa rahi hu shravan ke sath sath 😆😆

Ohhh...Meri Angel🤗...I so so.so loved it...U literally nailed it👏
It was hell splendidly penned⭐️...The concept,Dialogues...really really amazing!

oh my devil i love you so much tu hamesha 200 w wali smile lati hai mere chehare pe 😃😃

Aur ek baat bataon u r hell hell hell incredible at writing romantic stuff..

jo muze bilkul nahi lagta 😳😳

really..m a fan of ur such writings...the way u narate it..it just engages us to core❤️...so issi baat par ek darkhuast hazir hai...Special devil ki req...sochlo nhi mano gi tu dreams mein aa kar haunt karo gi😛😆...Aaannnggeeelll...Devil ko na ek aur fluffy/romantic upii chahiyay...OS tu doray ga!...i knw bari demanding hoti jaa rhi hon na mein...Sorry na..kya karon ab Angel hi itni captivative writer hai k dil mangey more more n more😳😛😆
Angel do give it a thought*puppy eyes*

hmm ab etana puppy face karegi to kya karu mein lekin abhi kuchh nahi aa raha hai dekhati hu agar epi hota toh wo ya fir od are lekin abhi soulmates baki hai usame bhi to aayega future me romance 😳😳
blackmailer tuze pata hai i cant deny you 😆

Love ya sooo much🤗
love you too so so much 🤗


Cheers!
Devil❤️

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Priti,

Firstly so so sorry for always being the last to comment on your updates. Secondly very happy happy as you are taking the story forward. Loved the first part, it was pure Love and this one too. Very beautifully written. Their moments were amazing Shravan just got his love back, that he craved and yearned for, how can he let go of her?

no need to say sorry you are already commenting on my many posts so no complains hota hai bade bade desho me choti choti batein hoti rahati hai 😉 yes how he can leave her bewkoof ladki pata nahi kaise soch leti hai aisa ulta pulta 😆😆

Love this of Shravan, lying to his Dad. It's a treat for readers. Dil ko khushi mil gayi when he lied to him😆

hahaha mere bhi dil ko kya sukoon mila kya batao i was like finally you bro 👍🏼

He is content now. "Lag raha hai aaj pura ho gaya hoon, har taraf pyar pyar hai", just loved this. How much we wanted to see Shravan happy and content.👏

ya bas show ke end me 2 min dikha happy and content 😡 all other tome either dukhi ya drunken or angry bas yahi mila 😭

Their convo was so cute and romantic. Kya kya kiya hoga Shravan ne khayalon me??

pucha to tha na sumo ne ab batata to pakka padosi sare object karate aur fir usi ka kam badh jata 😉

Jungli billi suits Sumo and Shravan likes her that way, always fighting. Song selection was so apt, loved it.

thank you 😊 yes she is jangali billi 😆

Love where your story is headed, it's gonna be tough now as Sumo convinced Shravan to meet Nirmala once. But the way she made him trust her was commendable. This could change the whole story, and I'm eager to read what unfolds in their life after Shravan meets Nirmala. Will their love be intact or will Ramnath succeed in creating misunderstanding betwwen them?

in next update will find something shocking i guess 😲

Please update soon. Forgive me I didn't comment on Soulmates yet, I do it very soon. Pakka.

forgiven already no complains i know how difficult to comment on each and every update if you guys read atleast then also it will be like paid for me 😊 see i am trying to write soulmates update from morning but abhi tak nahi kar payi 😭 dolly ne dhamaki bhi de di hai ab lagta hai night marni padegi 😆😆 take your time dear

Thanks for the PM. 🤗

Lubna.❤️