SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi all EDKVIANS, Happy valentines Day 😃

everyone was writing something on valentines Day so i also thought that i should write something for our lovely couple SHRAMAN 😳
jyada nahi bas chota sa OS meri taraf se bhi 😊,
it starts from last scene of episode 72
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DIl Sambhal jaa zara...

Shravan was sitting on his car's bonnet at some isolated place staring at full moon in the sky.

"Jis ladki se mujhe pyaar hai wo mere bharose ke liye aaj apni jaan dene ko bhi taiyaar hai? Isse bada saboot kya ho sakta hai ki Sumo mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi degi! Mujhe aaj fir se pyaar ho gaya hai Sumo...tum se" he blushed

"Lekin ye bhi kaise bhul jau sumo jab meine pichali baar tumse apane dil ki baat karani chahi thi tum nahi aayi, agar es baar firse tumane..." he shuddered with thought "es baar nahi ji paunga sumo fir se tut jaunga" her expression hardened remembering past events when he asked sumo to go to the library and read his letter

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

"Lekin kaise roku apane aap ko sumo, 10 sal tumase dur raha taki tumhe bhula pau lekin kabhi mumkin nahi hua, jab tumhare sath, tumhare paas hota hu lagta hai sare duniya me mein sabse khushnasib insan hu" he turned red and corners of his mouth turned up
he remembered his first meeting with sumo when he came back to india "us din jab 10 saalon baad tumhe dekha tha na sumo, muze laga tha ki tumhe apani bahon me bhar lu aur kabhi nahi jaane du, etane sal ki tadap ko sukun de du, apane sare dard bhula du tumhari bahon me" he sighed "lekin bahot mushkilse roka meine apane aapko pagal tha gussa tha tumase " he laughed on his lunacy

Jab jab tere paas main aaya,
Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya,
Wo wajood mila
Jab aaye mausam gham ke,
Tujhe yaad kiya

"Har waqt tumhe yaad kiya in 10 salon me, ek din aisa nahi gaya jab akele me tumhe yaad nahi kiya, tadpata raha tumhare liye, rota raha, sochata raha aisi kya galati kar di meine jo tumne bhi mera sath chod diya" a lone tear escaped from his eye, he shut his eyes with angst of all those years when he was away from her
he slowly opened his eyes "aaj jab tum apani jaan dene ke liye tarrace par khadi thi tab muze laga ki shayad mein hi mar jaunga agar tumhe kuchh ho gaya to nahi jee paunga tumhare bina ab mein ek din bhi" he was fighting back tears which were threatening to come out
he gulp down hardly "kya tumane sach me yakin kar liya ki muze koi faraka nahi padata?" stared moon again who looks like laughing on his plight
"aise muskurane ki jagah tum hi bata do kya karu mein apane dil ko firse usake samane kholke rakh du" he asked question to the shining moon

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya
Hmm, dil, Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa
Main janu naa oh oh,
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

he smiled "lagta hai aaj tumbhi yahi chahate ho ki mein use apane dil ki baat bata du haina" he cocked a brow and waited for answer.

"kab tak chuapoge raj khud me,
Hisab-e-ishq hum bhi dekhenge kayamat me"
he realized his inanity and slapped his head with smile "muze nahi pata muze kya chahiye lekin abhi es waqt muze usase milana hai, abhi use nahi dekhunga to mar hi jaunga pakka"
He opened door of drivers seat and again stared moon "aaj tumhari permission lekar jaa raha hu kuchh galat mat hone dena aaj use jo bhi mangu bas wo de de muze" and he sat on drivers seat and drove off towards tiwari killa

Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra
shayad yahin dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata

On the way he found one small rose shop which is about to close, he applied breaks and stopped car near shop and brought a single red rose and kept delicately in his coat pocket

Kya hai yeh silsala
Janu naa, Main janu naa
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

he entered his car and started driving again "aaj samaz me aa raha hai jab mein sare naate todkar tumase dur gaya tab bhi kyu tumhe kabhi bhula nahi paya, kitani koshish ki tumhe bhulane ki lekin jitna bhulane ki koshish karta tha usase doguna gaharayise tumhe yaad karata tha, tumhare sath ke liye tadpata tha aur pata hai tumhe din me ek baar to tum muze dikhayi deti thi pakka, aur pata nahi dinme kitani baar tumhara FB stalk karata tha" he smiled and scratched back of his head

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaha ki de, tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa...
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janu naa
Main janu naa

"aaj samaz me aaya muze ye kya mamla tha jis pyar ko samazata tha ki mar gaya i have moved on, sach ye tha ki es pyar ko 12 saal se apane andar dabake rakha tha", he stopped his car in front of tiwari kila and took his coat from side seat " aaj agar tumne haan bola to dekhogi tum kitani mohabbat meine apane sine me chupa ke rakhi hai pichale 12 salon se" he squeezed his eyes shut, he got jitters with the feeling of thousands of butterflies in his stomach "sumo aaj plz plz mana mat karna jo bhi mangu bas haan bol dena" he plastered a smile on his face get out from the car.

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

He was thinking how to get into the house without sumo's perception, he took a look at terrace of tiwari killa and his heart missed a beat, there is she standing alone on terrace staring toward sky same as he did before some time and he chooses his secret way to reach terrace.
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sumo returned home from anjali's party but shravans thoughts never left her,
why he cant believe her?
why he have so much abhorrence for his mother and all women's?
how she can make him believe that she will never leave him?
cant he see love in her eyes?
there are hundred of unanswered questions was playing in her mind.
she felt stifled so decided to go to terrace and clear her mind, after changing in to her pajamas she tiptoed to the terrace.
she reached terrace and stared at moon
"kaise yakin dilau shravan tumhe ki mein tumase kitana pyar karati hu, kitana tadpi hu tumhare liye pichale 10 salon me, bas ek baar muze apanalo tum soch bhi nahi paoge utana pyar dungi tumhe" she smiled weakly

sun saathiya maahiya
barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
rang jaaun rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
hoon piya bas teri main
ho chhoo le to khari main

shravan tiptoed terrace, he heard her murmuring something so he hided his tall frame against a wall so that he can hear her without any hindrance

"mein tumhe khush dekhana chahati hu shravan 10 saal tumhara intajar kiya tumhe apane dil ki baat batane ke liye maafi mangane ke liye, lekin kaise batau tum etani nafrat karate ho auraton se, tum kab samazoge ke tumhi mere sabkuchh ho tumhare bina mein kuch nahi" she closed her eyes with agony


main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re..

a lone tear escpaed from her eye "tumhara pyar pana chahati hu mein shravan nafrat nahi, lekin tumhara pyar pane ke liye mein kuchh bhi karungi"

tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
dariya ye tar jaaun jee
ishq ye paake main tera
nikhar jaaun ri...

she opened her eyes and found shravan standing in front of her smiling with so much love in his eyes, its a dream she know he cant be here, she stared him with atheism in her eyes, he tenderly cupped her face and wiped out tear with pad of his thumb

piya bas teri main
ho.. chhu le to khari main
toh khari main khari main...

she slowly raised her hand to touch him face to believe he is there straight in front of her and not one of the dreams which are disturbing her every time nowadays

"yes yes he is real yes he is here with me" she thought and smiled through her unstoppable tears which are started now in full flow

"Shh sumo ro mat yaha mein tumhe rulane nahi aaya hu" he tried to wipe out her fresh tears "agar tum aise hi rogi to mein jo kahane aaya hu kaise bolunga sumo" he holds her chin and so that she can see in his eyes directly

"sumo yaad hai last time yahi meine tumase apani dosti mangi thi aur tumane di thi" he darted her eyes with all love in search of his answer "aaj kuchh aur mangu to mana to nahi karogi na"
a line of awe appeared between her brows and she bobbed her head giving him permission to go ahead with smile, he kneeled down in front of her and tenderly took out rose from his pocket

"So Miss Suman tiwari aaj tumase mein tumhe mangana chahat hu, 12 saal se tumase pyar kiya tumase dur hokar bhi kabhi dur nahi ho paya har waqt sirf tumhi hi mere zahan me thi, subah bhi lagati thi sham jaisi kyuki neend khulatehi tumhari yaad jakad leti thi muze, kitana chaha tumase dur rahu lekin ye dil samaze tab na" he smiled on his predicament

"Teri Yaadon ne goverment office bana rakha tha dil ko...
Naa koi baat sunta tha aur Naa koi kaam karta tha..."

she chuckled on his shayari "ye kab sikha tumane" she raised a brow

"sab aapki meharabani hai madam ab please don't disturb me" he vexed and wiggles a bit to get more comfortable position and she chuckled again

"tumhe pata hai jis din tumhe pahali baar school me dekha tha us din se tumase pyar kiya, har zarre zarre me sirf tum thi, ho aur rahogi, tumhare bina ye 6 foot 4 inch ka insan kuchh nahi hai, apani akhari sas tak tumhare sath rahna chata hu" she grinned widely with tears in her eyes
"kya tum es pagal, egoistic, khadoos qutub minar ke sath apani puri zindagi bitana chahogi" he stared her intently , she was lost in his romantic gesture "sumo yaar jaldi bolo mere knees me dard ho raha hai" he whined

"yes yes yes thousand times yes" she shrieked with laughter and took rose from his hand, he get on his foots and hugged her tightly and in next moment she was in air leaving contact with floor.
He nuzzled in her crook and she caressed his hairs with her fingers, both smiled contently.
Don't know for how long they stand there in same position after sometime he put her gently on floor "mein intajar kar raha hu" he whispered in her ear in husky voice
she felt butterflies in her stomach flapping their wings to the beat of the heart and she bit her lip, he gently pulled out her lip with his thumb "uhhh...sumo please don't do that" and her cheeks turned pink
"sumo mein tumhare muh se kuch sunana chahata hu please ek baar bol do 12 saalo se mere kaan tarase hai sunane ke liye" she gazed him intently , he stared her with all love he holds in his heart

"I LOVE YOU too shravan aaj se nahi jis din se tum muze chodkar gaye the tab se" her eyes were glossy "10 saal se tumhara intejar kiya taki tumhe apane dil ki baat bata saku, kitna pyar karati hu tumase ye jata saku, mera wajood tumase hai shravan, tum nahi to mein bhi kuchh nahi, kabhi muze akela mat chodna, nahi to tumhari sumo mar jayegi shravan" tears filled her eyes
he nodded to stop "nahi sumo kabhi nahi chodke jaunga tumhe, tumhe apane aapse dur karne ki galati ek baar kar chuka hu aur usake badale kitani takalif sahi hai muze hi pata hai aur ab jab mein janta hu ki tum bhi muzase utanaahi pyar karati ho jitna ki mein kaise chodke jaunga tumhe, tumhe chodne se pahale meri sase ruk..." she put her hand on his mouth
"chup karo shravan aajke baad ye sab baatein nahi karoge tum agar muzase pyar karate ho to" she admonished him
his eyes flickered between her eyes and lips, he gently removed her hand from his mouth "to tumhi chup kara do na sumo" sumo's cheeks were suddenly kissed pink like a spring rose, the blooming color looks so cute against her whitish skin and she did what he asked because today she cant deny him if he will ask her life she will give that too without thinking for a moment.

she tiptoed and encircled her hands around his neck, he muffled her with his big hands around her waist and pulled her close and leaned his head to match her height,and finally their lips met, their soft kiss turned into a passionate one pouring all love, longing and promising each other that they will be there with each other for whole life and giggling in between their kiss, with the witness who was smiling whole heartily from sky...

THE END
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pheww...my first OS he bhagwan finally i have done that 😆
i know its late but mera valentines day abhi khatama nahi hua 😉
pata nahi kya likha bas likh diya jo man me aaya 😛😛
tamator jute sab manjoor hai, lekin honestly comment jaroor de dena 😳

Luv,
Priti

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deltadawn thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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tamatar joote...

nahi tumko to ye milega 🤗


OS was itna sweet itna mast kaha se shuru karu..

episode that you picked purrfect !! I was watching it this morning.. valentines ke liye utna dekhna to banta hai..😉

The songs you selected 👍🏼 as usual.. how ..how do you pick them you have to tell me !!

his thoughts, his shayari.. ❤️

Terrace pe confession .. dil ki ek aur muraad puri ho gayi !! jo karna tha wo kar diya finally. Moon is also happy today 😆

sumo's confession sahi samay par sahi baat !!

and you ended in style my girl !! 😳


Kudos to you. Lagta hai koi boho tkhush hai aaj 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Amazing Os!!
Confession is so beautifull!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a lovely OS 👏
Shravan and sumo's confession mindblowing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

tamatar joote...

nahi tumko to ye milega 🤗

thank you 🤗 muze to sach me laga tha tamatar milenge 😉

OS was itna sweet itna mast kaha se shuru karu..

episode that you picked purrfect !! I was watching it this morning.. valentines ke liye utna dekhna to banta hai..😉

really yeh episode me finally shravan ne mana ki pyar hai 😊

The songs you selected 👍🏼 as usual.. how ..how do you pick them you have to tell me !!

subah subah sun rahi thi yeh song and outcome is here 😳

his thoughts, his shayari.. ❤️

shayari try ki es baar ... glad u loved it 😊

Terrace pe confession .. dil ki ek aur muraad puri ho gayi !! jo karna tha wo kar diya finally. Moon is also happy today 😆
haan ye mere bhi dil ki murad thi jo apane OS me puri kar di 😆
sumo's confession sahi samay par sahi baat !!

hahaha kabhi to sahi baat karani chahiye na
and you ended in style my girl !! 😳
inspired by you only 😆😃
Kudos to you. Lagta hai koi boho tkhush hai aaj 😉

hmmm ☺️


thank you thank u soo so much for lovely comment 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey buddy...!!
Awesome piece of writing dear... 👏
Shravan's confession ,wait ,longing in hus own words...❤️
Red rose... 😳
What a lovely confession bud... 👏
Sumo's I Love You was what he wanted to hear for 10 long years...n Sumo finally confessed giving him that much needed assurance n happiness... 😳 ❤️

Teri yaadon ne government office bana rakha tha dil ko...
Na koi baat suta tha na koi kaam karta tha...
😆
Loved it!!

Beautiful songs...n perfect ending bud... 👏
Loved it!
Thanks for the pm n keep these coming 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS..One of my fav episode just before that nirmala fiasco nd the songs are so apt..
Confession on Tiwari killa's terrace.. just Loved it
Shayar shravan is amazing..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is my 200th post. I wanted this to be special and it cant be more special than commenting on this beautiful OS.
This is awesome, amazing, perfect, superb...I'm just out of words.😳
This is just soo nice.
I always love this episode.
The way he says "AAJ MUJHE PHIR SE PYAAR HO GAYA HAI SUMO, TUMSE" looking at the moon... I love him.❤️
The way Shravan was talking to himself about how he tried to forget her and failed pathetically is just awesome. And he was questioning the moon and took his permission. It cant be anymore cuter.
At the same time, she was talking to the moon and speaking her heart out how much she loves him.
And and and he came to propose her.
The proposal is so perfect. who can say no for such a cute proposal.
And finally their kiss was cherry on the cake.😳

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT.👍🏼
INFACT YOU MADE MY DAY PRITI.😊

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS.

LOVE❤️
Madhu

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome writing!!
But ek objection My Lord!!!(Government Servant hone ke vaasthe)😉
Please don't get offended, this is just for fun!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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No tamatar no ande dear yeh tune kitni ache si likhi...They could have turned the story anywhere like this in the show...but girls u did good job...well done girl...

Happy Valentine's Day girl but belated & thanks for PM

Vinu

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