SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20

priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: vimikrao
kya likha hai priti,
Shravan & Sumo ek saat chat par woh bhi chandni raat mein ek dusre ke bahon mein, 😉 they slept there on the roof with each others embrace, 😳 but someone watched them. Sumo asked Shravan meet his mother once, lets see what happens now.

thank your converting this in to SS

thanks for PM

vinu

vinu baby you have good cached its correct yes some one was watching them 👍🏼

yes wait till next part 😊

haan re kuchh request aayi then i gave a second thoght ki kya kar sakati hu so continued but it will be depend on all comments only really 😊

i am really thankful to you for commenting on my each update whatever it is good or bad i really mean it dear 🤗

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Res

Sorry for being this late! 1st wala part exam k time pe update kiya, aur 2nd wala bukhaar k time pe. Will unress tonight! Again a bada wala sorryyy! 😭

Unress

Priety!! It was really amazing! Every dialogue, every sentence is pure bliss!

Love this naughty Shravan, and sharmati sumoo hayeee

Sab kuch thik chal raha tha! But yeh Nimmo ka zikr hua aur dekho.. Please yaar, shravan ka accident mat karwana, agar karwao bhi to jaldi thik kara dena!

Loved it, baby, loved it to the core! Eagerly waiting for the next part! Really wish you could just update the next part now!!

Thank you so much, that you converted this to a ss!

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Hey Preeti...🤗
Ur title is beautiful yaar...!!!It one of my favourite songs...❤️
So for the first time ANUKULGR8 is unressing on time..😆😆
I had read the first part before par comment nahi kiya tha..
aaj phirse padhna shuru kiya tab yaad aaya ke ye already padha hai😆😉

yeah i too remember you have commented on earlier part 😊

Loved both the parts...
Beautifully penned..!!!👏👏

thank you kiddo 😊

I juz love the way u write yaar...Spellbounding..!!❤️
Beautifully penned dialogues..

glad you like my dialogues woh toh jo man me aaye likh deti hu jyada sochati nahi 😳

Shravan's permission from the moon...
Confession was too cute and beautiful...👏
I loved the second part the most..

moon is the sign of love as we all think hai na

Pyaar aache aacho ko pagal kar deta hai..Aur yaha toh besharam kar diya..😆😆

haha woh to hai besharam kar diya zut bolna sikha diya aur pata nahi kya kya karega 😉

Padosi☺️ Meri tubelight bhi baad mey jali..😆

ohh tubelight jalani padi tuze 😆

ShraMan convo about nimmo❤️
Sumo convinced him so beautifully..

yeah she need to handle it patiently as she said shravn in the only one who matters for her 😒

Aagar bas chalta toh pura convo yaha Highlight kar deti...😳
SharMan terrace convo was also beautifully peened...👏👏

thank you 😊

Aur ye kya???!!!!!Shravan ko kya hua???Accident???
Plz usko sahi salamat karhna preeti...

hmmm will try minimal damage nahi to mera jina mushkil ho jayega yaha 😉

Update sooonish...

next update after your exam okay i mean after 18th
aur abhi muze first soulmates ka update dena hai 😃

Luv ya..
ANU😳

luv you too hun❤️

priti

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shirly amirja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Superb update dr...plz do continue soon.

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Wow!! Wonderful update..

Shraman's conversation was so cute

Love the way Sumo convinced shravan to talk to Nirmala..

Also I m curious to know who was there on the terrace except shraman at night

Cliffhanger! Hope shravan is safe

Plz continue soon

And thanks for the pm

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: shirlys
Superb update dr...plz do continue soon.

thank you shirly will update it after soulmates

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Tinna28
Resi res
Preeti di
Aapne comment se bore karna
Coming to chappy
Its so good
I amm so happy and blushing while reading this
How do u write so well

oye my kiddo you are here no boring and all i loved your comment and your gif was soo cute, pahale ye talent dikgati to pakka award wale me tera nam hota 😉
blushing haan 😆
ohh really you think i write very well thank you so much but its like mere dimakh me jo bhi aata hai woh tum logo ko mil jata hai 😳

Haye shravan kitna romantic hai
Loved the dialogue...so cute and lovely 😳
Kitni soni baate karta hai
Kash show mein aisa kuch milta
Loved the dialogue!!!! Blushing!! Blushing

lagta hai koi jyada hi blush kar raha hai shravan k wajah se more than sumo hayo rabba ye ki kar diaya meine 😉
thank god you liked my dialogues 😃

And when shravan said "itensity toh itni hi rahengi "
Oh god !!!what a lines di
Too good

thank you ji to intensity kaha kam hone wali hai sach ho hai ulta badhegi 😉

When sumo start the conversation
I was damm nervous
But end mein
Its alll very good

👏

Lovely !!! Cute chappy di
Jaldi update karna di
Waiting
Plzzz

Luv
Tiii se tiinna

oye hoye meri Tiii se Tiinna t se thank you hai ji aur haan ab pahale soulmates and then ye😉

luv you kiddo 🤗

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Meri Pretty Preeti itni pretty kahaani likh rahi hai..wah !!

I was out the all evening baby and the first thing that I read is this beautiful update!

The way that whole terrace scene was described by you, I could literally watch the scene😃

Shravan finally got his Sumo and I can imagine his relief and his eagerness to spend the entire time with her.

'I have finally found my angel, it's like I have woken in reality living my dream'

And that song...love it!!

Good update here Preeti...thoda darr toh lag raha hai about the next one. ..toh thoda sambhal lena baby.

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res 😳
****
Unres
Priti...🤗

Nikka 🤗
So happy that you are cont it 😃
I so loved it ya ❤️

thank you 😊
ShraMan's kiss...
OMG!!...Shravan lied to Ramnath 😲 😆

sanskari beta bighad gaya 😉

Their lovey dovey moments were soo awesome... 😳
Naughty Shravan, Romantic Shravan, Chotu Shravan, Lover Shravan, Bestie Shravan...All in one there with his love Sumo...❤️

fifty shades of THE MR SHRAVAN MALHOTRA 😃

Loved the way Sumo talked with him about Nirmala...Assuring him that no matter what, she'll alwats be there fir him, with him, every step of the way..❤️

yes she will keep her promise 👍🏼
Aww!!..Both slept in each others arms... 😳 ..N who saw them?...Nimmo aunty??!!!

janane ke liye plz wait for next update 😆

But!!..The end 😲
Shravan ko kya hua???...No no !!
Update soon !!
haan haan but kya hua will see in next part 😳
next update next week
Thanks for the pm bud 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik

Thank you nikka for ur comment

Luv U too dear ❤️

Priti

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Ijazat ho tu Res karnay ki gustakhi kar lein hum😛...😃...😆

Ressi res!
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Unres

Angel!!🤗
Phly tu coming towards the tittle..haay...Really a lovely one❤️ btw..dil wakai hai hi bari kumbhakt cheez..kissi par bhi aa jata hai😛...ab Shravan ki hi example lay lo...his mere mention erupts thousands of buttrflies in me😳

Coming towards the upii...

Ohh song choice was..⭐️...my fav❤️
Woah...u knw wht Epi 72 for me wass like sumkind of a treat or a party popper...i was so happy after watching tht epi...i was relieved...k chalo finally humaray Oxford return without brain lawyer k pass finally brain aa hi gaya aur partially function bhi karny laga 😛😆

The moment he confessed "Mjhy aj fir se pyaar ho gaya hai Sumo...tumse"...I literally placed both my hands on my heart and cheerly shouted FINALLY!!!...n my family was like kon kahay ga yeh normal hai😛

Angel!...Angel!...Angel!...WOW!...The way u penned Shravan's predicament,his inner turmoil,his douts,his confusions,his anxiety,his queries n their solutions...ohhh...was just Mind blowing!👏👏👏

He loved her since his childhood...wanted to confess,to trust her, but all tht wss stopping him to do so was his fear...fear of a negative outcome..wht if she'll reject him..wht if she'll strand him more over how he'll cope up after such disastrous situation...thez all thoughts his turmoil his trust issues everything ws the tainted concequences of his bitter past experiences...As childhood plays a major role in our judgements and preception about certain someone thing or a situation in our adulthood n same.happened with him...his past experiences made him conscious..
but m.glad tht he letgo his fear and prepared himself to face anysort of results...no matter wht today he'll confesd his love to his only lady love!...woh kahtat hain na.
.Akhaitr mein pyaar ki hi jeet hoti hai😳

Awwh...he talked with the moon aur permession bhi li😆😳 "Kab tak chuapoge raz khud mein,Hisab-e-ishq hum bjhu dekhengay kyamat me"...
Wah wah..
Superb Angel!⭐️❤️

Shravan nevr and couldnt erase her memories from his mind N always loved her unconciously as conciously he hated her and a time came whn his unconscious sense of brain got overloaded with his unspoken love and desires n.now thty akll want their escape...Shravan finally wants to confess.

I really liked their secret patg though i always kept imagining ki Shravan a gigantic figure us window k paar gae kaisay hogi😛😆

OH...Angel...Sumo's predicament n her turmoil was pened really Brilliantly!⭐️

U really feel dishearted and helpless whn u fail.in making someone to believe in something which is actually the truth.and is against their preception!
The most beautiful part❤️...wgen Sumo.was confessing her love and was helplessly talking to herself...n whn She opened her eyes and found him standing rite infront of her with same emotions n feelings reflecting through his eyes as herz...oh..wonderful⭐️ the best n the loveliest part❤️

Uff..Shravan's love confession was really Beautiful!❤️

Aww...Their moment n their Kiss..❤️...Engaging one!...was hell beautifully penned!👏⭐️

Ohhh...Meri Angel🤗...I so so.so loved it...U literally nailed it👏
It was hell splendidly penned⭐️...The concept,Dialogues...really really amazing!

Aur ek baat bataon u r hell hell hell incredible at writing romantic stuff..
really..m a fan of ur such writings...the way u narate it..it just engages us to core❤️...so issi baat par ek darkhuast hazir hai...Special devil ki req...sochlo nhi mano gi tu dreams mein aa kar haunt karo gi😛😆...Aaannnggeeelll...Devil ko na ek aur fluffy/romantic upii chahiyay...OS tu doray ga!...i knw bari demanding hoti jaa rhi hon na mein...Sorry na..kya karon ab Angel hi itni captivative writer hai k dil mangey more more n more😳😛😆
Angel do give it a thought*puppy eyes*

Love ya sooo much🤗

Cheers!
Devil❤️

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