Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey lady, read both chappies in one go... and all I have to say is "Wow!" Love the intensity of these two pagal lovers...

BTW you deserve one extra Hi5 for making Shravan say: "I'm done. Done trying to win you over. Cause you don't want to be won cause that for you would be loosing. You'd do anything to get back at me and I fear for you. I don't want anything wrong happening to you. In your spite you might not realize when to draw the line. So I'll draw it between the both of us."

You know well how ardently I hated the viciousness of their relationship in the latter phases of the show, and I sure am glad you are writing these updates... Don't ever think we'd get bored of your writing, cuz they r awesome! 😛

Hugs,

Anu


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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing chapter ❤️
Finally our hero could understand the strength of jealousy trick! Sure it's the most tried but it's an effective formula😉
Woh gaane sunn kar mujhe padte-padte jealousy ho rhi thi toh humari bechari heroine ka toh bura haal ho rha hoga!
Wow! Aditya received his much deserved slap!
Loved their convo in the end
Finally she spoke up
Oooh! Shravan is Love.
Dying to meet the Real Shravan Malhotra!
And never ever think that we can get bored of your works
Keep writing!
Swarnima
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
What an update...!!! 🤗
Shravan's Tashan Mode ON... 😎

Jealous Sumo was 😆
and she surely has got some wit too...she called her Nangi..!!! 🤣

Awesome songs selection Zoya... 😳

I loved the punch part... ache se kutaaai honi chaiye thi uski... 😉😉😉

Finally she confessed...!!!

The dialogues were apt and absolutely beautifully written... How do you manage to write so well..!!!! 👏

Your writing style is just fab Zoya.. I fall more and more in love with your writings with each new updates. ❤️

I just cant wait to see how the story unfolds from here...
Please do send me a PM 😊
Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya what an amazing update.👏 The way you have described every single detail about shravan's look for sangeet I can totally imagine how handsome he must be looking.Poor jealous sumo but I think i was way more jealous than her
Finally she uttered that three magical words, now without a doubt I can say that shravan will make everything alright.
Edited by Naamika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
And RESH
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Zo you updated and Resh you unresed part 1 before I could kill you 😆

Yes baby


Haye Shravan in black pathani . Namik would have slayed that look
Someone is burning 😉 😆
I think I could help 😆
🤣
Aur kha le bhav sumo. Shravan's gonna dance with shyra . Chal Sumo apan kabootar ko daalte🤣 dono free hai🤣



Zara Zara , aaj fir tumpe, humma humma 😲
Planning to kill sumo, are we? 😆
Imagine namik grooving on these numbers
Sorry for the distraction 😆 Back to the update

Pehna hi kyun kurta, ehsaan kia, nanga hi aajata...


😳
That would be a bloody massacre !!!
Lawyer sahab lambe jayenge 😆

Lagti toh bilkul nahi hai yeh kisi bhi angle se shy."
🤣 Lagti toh sumo bhi sumo nahi kisi angle se

Omg! What is is trying to do ? She agreed to dance with chep chomu 😲



"Yes I wanted to burn you. I wanted to hear from you that you care! But mai gira nahi tumhari tarha."

"Gire nahi? Sensual dance with a girl barely dressed!"



Idhar toh World War III start ho gya 😲
Ye pada chomu ko
🤣
Ekta Style 🤣

"Ladki jab ek baar na bole, toh uska matlab na hi hota hai.."
Whistles for shravan malhotra 🤪
Shravan is trying to pacify her ...This man is rarest gem❤️
She confessed !!!! I love you uske muh se nikla that's more than enough.
So we are yet to see the Real hot shot lawyer shravan malhotra ...
You really love cliffhangers
Mindblowing fantastic update 👏 👏


PS.- Resh I've unresed first...ye le 👎🏼

But I resed first [BD]

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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unres
Zoyi 🤗
Resh 🤗
This chapter should have been named The rising of the green eyed monster 😛 Sumo deserved it all.
Hahaha, point!
Shravu in black pathani [:->]
What a sight it would have been.
To die for!😉
Lagti toh bilkul nahi hai yeh kisi bhi angle se shy." 🤣
Jealousy at its peak
LMAO!
Whatever! Tum apni iss no angle se shy almost nangi girlfriend ko entertain karo. I have a lot more important stuff to do!" 🤣
I m very sure agr kuch der aur chalta unka dance toh Shy ki story hume Crime patrol mein dikhti 🤣 🤣
Oh shit 🤣 Gaur se dekhiye iss no angle se shy ladki ko, ek mahshooka ke haathon maari gayi! ROFL!
Gaane v kya chune hai tune.
Thank you
Par Sumo se yeh expected nhi tha. Chomu? Really? [:/] Haad hai.
Sumo se koi expectation hai tujhe ab bhi😆
Shravan's reaction was totally justified. He wasn't jealous but hurt. And our devi fail to see this. Shravan's dialogues were bang on.
Shravan himself was bang on 😆
Shravan punched cheepo 😃 [<:p] Mja aa gya.
Aditya in any version should get punched... That's all he deserves!
I loved Sumo's confession though it was just a I Love You. Shravan got so happy but khushi kaha tikti uski life mein 😔
Arey next part mai tik jayegi, don't worry😃
She left him hanging from nowhere. But his resolution is firm. I m so excited to see how you take this forward.
Me too!!
Jo show k writers ne nhi dia woh tu de rhi. My Genie 🤗
Awww 🤗
Love you loads ❤️
Love you more!
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@Bold Resh! Thank you❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
And RESH
-------------------------------------
Zo you updated and Resh you unresed part 1 before I could kill you 😆
Hum bohot talented hai waise!😉

Doctor ji, I hope yehi image tha jo nahi dikh raha tha, hum ne apni samjh se laga diya😆

Haye Shravan in black pathani . Namik would have slayed that look
I swear! They had so many chances but they gave him hideous outfits! Woh toh Namik itna hot hai ke chal gaya warna those clothes were disastrous. As if Spot dada's brief was to find the worst outfit on the planet and he excelled!
Someone is burning 😉 😆
Dheemi aanch pe😎
I think I could help 😆

Fire Brigade mangwa de tu angaaro par hai arma😆
Aur kha le bhav sumo. Shravan's gonna dance with shyra . Chal Sumo apan kabootar ko daalte🤣 dono free hai🤣
Kuch bhi !!! ROFL !! 🤣


Zara Zara , aaj fir tumpe, humma humma 😲
Planning to kill sumo, are we? 😆
Plan toh yehi tha, bach gayi saali😆
Imagine namik grooving on these numbers
Sorry for the distraction 😆 Back to the update
Bro I wrote it! You can imagine how I must have imagined ☺️
Pehna hi kyun kurta, ehsaan kia, nanga hi aajata...
I know right! Aa hi jaata!


That would be a bloody massacre !!!
LMAO🤪
Lawyer sahab lambe jayenge 😆
What for being too hot? Chaddo ji! Uski koi dafa nahi hai... Lawyer sahab would justify, ke shirtless hona agar saza hai toh Sallu bhai kam se kam iske liye andar hote😎
Lagti toh bilkul nahi hai yeh kisi bhi angle se shy."
🤣 Lagti toh sumo bhi sumo nahi kisi angle se
Yaar teri baaton ki depth na tujhe khud nahi samjh aati! Kamal 👏
Omg! What is is trying to do ? She agreed to dance with chep chomu 😲
We had established long back ke that she's brainless!


She never had it!

"Yes I wanted to burn you. I wanted to hear from you that you care! But mai gira nahi tumhari tarha."

"Gire nahi? Sensual dance with a girl barely dressed!"



Hahahahah! Andaz Apna Apna! This movie is lit!😆

Idhar toh World War III start ho gya 😲
Ye pada chomu ko
🤣
I love it! Par woh mukka tha...
Next time use Ansh Gujral goli scene at filmcity! I'd love it!😆

"Ladki jab ek baar na bole, toh uska matlab na hi hota hai.."
Whistles for shravan malhotra 🤪
And hoots too!😳
Shravan is trying to pacify her ...This man is rarest gem❤️
He's a jaan!
She confessed !!!! I love you uske muh se nikla that's more than enough.
So we are yet to see the Real hot shot lawyer shravan malhotra ...
Oh yeh!
You really love cliffhangers
Oh hell yeh!!!
Mindblowing fantastic update 👏 👏
Shukriya!

PS.- Resh I've unresed first...ye le 👎🏼
World war III toh yahan chalu hoti nazar aa ri hai😆

@Bold Thank you Prii!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
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Unres
Ek 🤗 for this update buddy...
Mind blowing update dear..!!
Thank you Nik! 🤗 Back!
Shravan's teasing session with Sumo at TK was awesome... 😊
And (for a change) ,a flustered Sumo... 😳
I wonder how she was so unperturbed on the show😆
Shravan in Black pathani... Oh man!!
OOO man!
Sumo's jealous avtaar...too good!!
Shy is not so shy..!! 😆
Hahaha...
That poor girl has been the bane of my existence, its time she owns up to it...Oh Man!!!
Dialogues buddy!!! 👏
Shukriya😳
The hottest couple will always be Suman Shravan n not Shy Shravan 🤣 ..
Shy Shravan😆 Never!
Zara zara behekta hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Humma Humma
Shravan's dance on these that too with Shyra...Poor Sumo!!
She had been a bane after all...
Even Mamiji seemed to be enjoying blatant display of shamelessness...It cracked me up!! 🤣
Mamiji I felt was a closet romantic 😆
Top four buttons open...Shyra stay away 😡

Pehna hi kyu kurta, ehsaan kiya, nanga hi aajata...Oww! Sumo😳

Lagti to bilkul nahi hai yeh kisi bhi angle se shy...Full on Sumoness!!! 🤣
Yo😃


Sumo danced with chomu just to irritate Shravan...Not a good move Sumo!!
But Sumo karne se phle sochti kahan hai!!
And the fight btw them ...Omg!!
Well Shravan was right ,Sumo shouldnt have danced with that Aditya just to make him jealous!!
Haina...
I just loved how Shravan lash out at Sumo and expressed his frustation...amazingly penned down dear!! 👏
Thanks!
Aditya tried forsing Sumo to dance with him...and here comes our protective Shravan..!!
Ladki jab ek baar naa bole, to uska matlab naa hi hota hai...I just sooo love this dialogue...!!
Me too!
The thing I loved most about Shravan is that whatever happens he would always be there by her side when she needs him...and you have penned it down soo beautifully dear...!!
Yey😛
And the most awaited confession of Sumo... ❤️
But we cant be together... 💔


But Shravan wont let her go away from him no matter what...Love this avtaar of Shravan!!
He is back!
Wonderful update dear...really enjoyed reading it!!
Dil khush kar ditta tussi..!!! 🤗
Glad 😃
Oh!!..I havent written this long before!!
But i guess you wont mind.. 😳
Nah it's cool, I've gotten used to it by now😉
Thanks for the pm... 😊
Anytime!
Loads of Love
Nik

@Bold Thanks so much Nik!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow it was amazing ... plz pm me when u post the last part ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was really good, Zoya! Poor Suman had to succumb to Shravan's ploy. I liked Shyra, she seems cool. And i look forward to the next chapter. Will await your pm. Cheers!

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