Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 12

zoyi.. 🤗
resh you got a beautiful gift.. 😃

just love it..
first part..lift scene..
omg damn hilarious..
shra ko uski height ne bacha lia.. 😆
sumo kuch bhi aiven. ..he us breathing toh pepper spray kar dia.. 😆
bag mein knife bho hai shra dialogue on this wa.. 🤣
love it ❤️
then.comes the kiss.. 😳
and then she denies great..but out lawyer thodi jaane dega..
part two..
dance and jealousy .. 😉
awesome zoyi.. 👏
fabulous dear..
thnx for pm... 🤗

Unressed at Pages 9 & 14 😊

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Let the game begin!

"Arey Sumo, tum toh aaise react kar rahi ho jaise Chachi ne tumhari shaadi announce kar di ho mere saath... naughty boy!😆

Lol.. That's his biggest wish😆

"That poor girl has been the bane of my existence, its time she owns up to it." Like this guy is of mine!😳

Correction!!! Our lives!

RHTDM!!❤️ I like everything about it!

Aaj phir tumpe! ! Behari Sumo!!

Kaheki bechari? She tortured him left, right and centre on the show, this is barely even payback 😆

"Maroge toh aaise bhi tum" mumbled Suman.😆😆 chalo ek dil ki baat to zubaaN par aayi!

Haanji!!! 😉

Nanga - Nanga! ! Too much nudity!!🤣

Please don't report me 😆

Sumo-Aditya danced,,,.Arey hamara Shravu to pehley se hi jal kukdu hai! ! This wasn't needed Sumo! 😆

Absolutely! 😳

"Jala nahi Sumo, pareshaan zaroor hua. Uss bande ki niyat hi galat thi phir bhi just to get back at me you danced with him even though uncomfortable. Dukh hua mujhko ke sirf mujhe jalane ke liye tum itna gir gayi."

"Oh really! Tum nahi gire? As if that girl wasn't just to show me?"... these two! Made for each other hai,,nai !

Oh yeh! Koi shaq!?

Suddenly Aditya swirled her around and tried dancing with her. Before Suman could protest, Aditya went flying in the other direction. She figured Shravan had landed a punch square in the guy's face. He lay on the floor whimpering holding his nose. 👏 did he remove his watch first !😃

Ohhh! I totally forgot about that one.. But no he didn't.. Reaction time was a few mere seconds 😆

"Ladki jab ek baar na bole, toh uska matlab na hi hota hai.." Said Shravan in a deathly calm but firm tone. ..whistle phodu...🥳

Ek meri taraf se bhi⭐️

"Tum yakeen nahi karoge mujhpe. Nafrat karoge mujhse.." Saying she wept clutching his collar as she rested her head on his torso... aww!!🤗 Shravan is incapable of hating you sweetheart!

Khud se kar lega, par Sumo se nahi...

Suman pulled back lightly, looked up straight in his eyes and said, "I love you!"

But, we can't be together."🥺 now u can't do this to us n Shravan! Inkaar mein lipta hua iqraar!

Dil hai bekarar, ab maan bhi jao yaar😆

"Take care of yourself Shravan.." Saying she went on her tip toes and pecked his cheek as she left!! ❤️

Sanskari Damon!☺️

Arey! DAMON kisi bhi kari mai best hai 🤪

So Mr. Malhotra's first plan was a success! !

Do you think so?

What next..!! Waiting!!

Won't keep you long!

Amazing update!

Amazing comment!

Originally posted by: evaviego

Needless to say... FAAAD Update...!!!!

Awww yey!!!

Sumo is the epitome of madness and jhaliness, right?

Kuch bhi karti hai ye ladki...!!! But it was LIT.

Pagal thi woh 😆

Madam has no self control at all.. Bechara jo itne der se try kar raha tha.. he also lost his saint-like self control because of her ministrations 😆

Why should boys have all the fun... class laga di Shravan ki 😆

The flashbacks were just ❤️

I love Chotu ShraMan!

Loved their banters.

Glad😃

And the dialogues were just superb..

If I start mentioning my favourite part or the dialogue, then i would end up reposting the whole post.. so in general hi sab bol diya.. 😳 I hope you understand my feelings bro 😉

Hahaha samjh gayi mai bhavnaon ko.. don't worry😆

You have no idea how eagerly i am waiting to read what Mr. Lawyer is going to do know.

Won't keep you waiting long 😛

And also you have no clue how proud i am of myself that i have finally commented before the next part is up. 😆🥳

Dude! I'm proud of you 😆

Zoyaa... A big hug to you for this one 🤗

Hugs back at you EVA 🤗

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Zoya looong time
How are you ?

Hey! You're here! Yes, its been really long!

I'm good ya, thanks.. How are you?
Sorry yaar I didn't comment on the first chapter and I still have to comment on Postcards, but just to say to you, you better never stop writing on ShraMan or else I'll haunt you

We wouldn't want that now, would we? 😆
The first was hot like really it left me on my seat !

Hahaha😆
Coming to the second part: Sassy Shravan is my fave

Mine too! He can sass a person to hell with a mere look 😎
Man If I had the chance to dance with I would take it even if it would be problematic height wise

He could probably take us both in th godi and dance
The jealousy game is on !

Oh yeh!!
Jealous Sumo is so fun, it reminds me of the track of the hot secretary, this would have been so much fun to watch !

There was such a track to be? Oh man!
Shravan is so wicked and I for one love it !

We all do😆
Shamsher must be a really good friend to let his wife dance with another man

Not Shamsher bro! Its Shamrez!!! And they've been very good friends for a decade 😃
The open buttons of his kurta reminds me of a certain ig post #Ifyouknowyouknow

Oh yehhh!!!!
The whole conversation with Shy-ra was a riot

Shy-ra was hot herself too😆
Ye chomu yahan bhi aagaya ? Aur yahan bhi thappar khake gaye

More like mukka🤣
I Loved the "No" dialogue it reminds of the movie Pink even if I haven't watched it .

Hehehe
The last part was so cute, I miss them so much and she confessed! Yayy !
Paar ye kya ? "Can't be together ?" aise kaise ? Our boy won't let that happen ❤️
Never!
Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Zoya...

Hey!!

I really enjoyed the jealousy track... Sumo was fuming from inside when she saw Shravan was dancing with Shy... 😉 top of that Shravan was purposely pouring fuel to fire dancing with her on sensuous song... 😆 & her comment on her SHY .. YEH TOH KISI BHI ANGLE MEIN NEHIN DIKHTI... 🤣... It was sweet torture for Sumo seeing Shravan with that girl... 😆

Karma is a bi**h😆

Finally he succeeded in his mission & Sumo confessed him...what now she said they can't be together... 😭😭

Ending hamesha happy hoti hai, agar woh happy nahi hai toh woh ending nahi hai😉

It will be interesting see how Shravan resolved this mystery & get back his love... 😲

Yo!

Continue soon

Absolutely!

I couldn't send buddy request, it was not going... But I got PM thank you... 👏🤗

I guess we are already friends na? If you got the PM we are good😛

Vinu

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Zoya,

Hey Lubna!
Another amazing update from Amazing Zoya. You know I should call you AZ, because you get it right every time, A-Z in every emotion, A-Z in story telling, A-Z in picking up words that touch the heart to the core. You get everything right from A-Z.

Aww man! That's really sweet of you to say 😳

Everything was perfect, be it the jealous part of both of them or the Aditya slapping part. Suman's hesitation but still confessing her love was heartwarming.

Thank you so much!!!
Now waiting for the sharp shot Shravan Malhotra to fight back for his love. 👏 👍🏼 ❤️
Me too!!
Lubna.

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant update..It was like a merry-go-round

Hehe I know right😉

Jealousy track was fun.. Poor sumo

Bane Sumo😆

"Pehna hi kyun kurta, ehsaan kia, nanga hi aajata" was epic

Waise maza aata bada...

But Aditya was so annoying

He's always annoying bro🥱

Finally Sumo confessed her love but that happiness was Short lived😔

Thanks for the PM

Anytime!

Waiting for next update..

Me too😉

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Wow. . Loved it...the hot dance. ..seething jealous Sumo. ..but the best part was the dialogue between Shravan and Sumo...where he is ready to back out since he is sure that she would invite trouble in an attempt to get even at him...Man. ..that's love. ..Shravan might mess up..get jealous, start fights. ..but he won't play..he will give it all and love deeply.

So very well put! No matter what, he would only love

I'm quite curious to see how Zoya's Shravan solves this rubix cube!

Zoya's Shravan!! Two words, insane happiness! How I wish 😎

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Man that was intense !!

It was na😃

how do you write like that.. I mean its just so totally amazing.

Awww thank you ya!

👏

eagerly waiting for the next one...

Won't be long...