Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Res 😳
****
Unres
Ek 🤗 for this update buddy...
Mind blowing update dear..!!

Shravan's teasing session with Sumo at TK was awesome... 😊
And (for a change) ,a flustered Sumo... 😳

Shravan in Black pathani... Oh man!!

Sumo's jealous avtaar...too good!!
Shy is not so shy..!! 😆

That poor girl has been the bane of my existence, its time she owns up to it...Oh Man!!!
Dialogues buddy!!! 👏

The hottest couple will always be Suman Shravan n not Shy Shravan 🤣 ..

Zara zara behekta hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Humma Humma
Shravan's dance on these that too with Shyra...Poor Sumo!!

Even Mamiji seemed to be enjoying blatant display of shamelessness...It cracked me up!! 🤣

Top four buttons open...Shyra stay away 😡

Pehna hi kyu kurta, ehsaan kiya, nanga hi aajata...Oww! Sumo😳

Lagti to bilkul nahi hai yeh kisi bhi angle se shy...Full on Sumoness!!! 🤣

Sumo danced with chomu just to irritate Shravan...Not a good move Sumo!!
But Sumo karne se phle sochti kahan hai!!
And the fight btw them ...Omg!!
Well Shravan was right ,Sumo shouldnt have danced with that Aditya just to make him jealous!!

I just loved how Shravan lash out at Sumo and expressed his frustation...amazingly penned down dear!! 👏

Aditya tried forsing Sumo to dance with him...and here comes our protective Shravan..!!
Ladki jab ek baar naa bole, to uska matlab naa hi hota hai...I just sooo love this dialogue...!!

The thing I loved most about Shravan is that whatever happens he would always be there by her side when she needs him...and you have penned it down soo beautifully dear...!!

And the most awaited confession of Sumo... ❤️
But we cant be together... 💔

But Shravan wont let her go away from him no matter what...Love this avtaar of Shravan!!

Wonderful update dear...really enjoyed reading it!!
Dil khush kar ditta tussi..!!! 🤗

Oh!!..I havent written this long before!!
But i guess you wont mind.. 😳
Thanks for the pm... 😊
Loads of Love
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Let the game begin!

"Arey Sumo, tum toh aaise react kar rahi ho jaise Chachi ne tumhari shaadi announce kar di ho mere saath... naughty boy!😆

"That poor girl has been the bane of my existence, its time she owns up to it." Like this guy is of mine!😳

RHTDM!!❤️ I like everything about it!

Aaj phir tumpe! ! Behari Sumo!!

"Maroge toh aaise bhi tum" mumbled Suman.😆😆 chalo ek dil ki baat to zubaaN par aayi!

Nanga - Nanga! ! Too much nudity!!🤣

Sumo-Aditya danced,,,.Arey hamara Shravu to pehley se hi jal kukdu hai! ! This wasn't needed Sumo! 😆

"Jala nahi Sumo, pareshaan zaroor hua. Uss bande ki niyat hi galat thi phir bhi just to get back at me you danced with him even though uncomfortable. Dukh hua mujhko ke sirf mujhe jalane ke liye tum itna gir gayi."

"Oh really! Tum nahi gire? As if that girl wasn't just to show me?"... these two! Made for each other hai,,nai !

Suddenly Aditya swirled her around and tried dancing with her. Before Suman could protest, Aditya went flying in the other direction. She figured Shravan had landed a punch square in the guy's face. He lay on the floor whimpering holding his nose. 👏 did he remove his watch first !😃

"Ladki jab ek baar na bole, toh uska matlab na hi hota hai.." Said Shravan in a deathly calm but firm tone. ..whistle phodu...🥳

"Tum yakeen nahi karoge mujhpe. Nafrat karoge mujhse.." Saying she wept clutching his collar as she rested her head on his torso... aww!!🤗 Shravan is incapable of hating you sweetheart!

Suman pulled back lightly, looked up straight in his eyes and said, "I love you!"

But, we can't be together."🥺 now u can't do this to us n Shravan! Inkaar mein lipta hua iqraar!

"Take care of yourself Shravan.." Saying she went on her tip toes and pecked his cheek as she left!! ❤️

Sanskari Damon!☺️

So Mr. Malhotra's first plan was a success! !

What next..!! Waiting!!

Amazing update!

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Zoya looong time
How are you ?
Sorry yaar I didn't comment on the first chapter and I still have to comment on Postcards, but just to say to you, you better never stop writing on ShraMan or else I'll haunt you
The first was hot like really it left me on my seat !
Coming to the second part: Sassy Shravan is my fave
Man If I had the chance to dance with I would take it even if it would be problematic height wise
The jealousy game is on !
Jealous Sumo is so fun, it reminds me of the track of the hot secretary, this would have been so much fun to watch !
Shravan is so wicked and I for one love it !
Shamsher must be a really good friend to let his wife dance with another man
The open buttons of his kurta reminds me of a certain ig post #Ifyouknowyouknow
The whole conversation with Shy-ra was a riot
Ye chomu yahan bhi aagaya ? Aur yahan bhi thappar khake gaye
I Loved the "No" dialogue it reminds of the movie Pink even if I haven't watched it .
The last part was so cute, I miss them so much and she confessed! Yayy !
Paar ye kya ? "Can't be together ?" aise kaise ? Our boy won't let that happen ❤️

Take care 🤗

Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Hi Zoya...

I really enjoyed the jealousy track... Sumo was fuming from inside when she saw Shravan was dancing with Shy... 😉 top of that Shravan was purposely pouring fuel to fire dancing with her on sensuous song... 😆 & her comment on her SHY .. YEH TOH KISI BHI ANGLE MEIN NEHIN DIKHTI... 🤣... It was sweet torture for Sumo seeing Shravan with that girl... 😆

Finally he succeeded in his mission & Sumo confessed him...what now she said they can't be together... 😭😭

It will be interesting see how Shravan resolved this mystery & get back his love... 😲

Continue soon

I couldn't send buddy request, it was not going... But I got PM thank you... 👏🤗

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Hi Zoya,
Another amazing update from Amazing Zoya. You know I should call you AZ, because you get it right every time, A-Z in every emotion, A-Z in story telling, A-Z in picking up words that touch the heart to the core. You get everything right from A-Z. Everything was perfect, be it the jealous part of both of them or the Aditya slapping part. Suman's hesitation but still confessing her love was heartwarming.
Now waiting for the sharp shot Shravan Malhotra to fight back for his love. 👏 👍🏼 ❤️

Lubna.

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Brilliant update..It was like a merry-go-round

Jealousy track was fun.. Poor sumo

"Pehna hi kyun kurta, ehsaan kia, nanga hi aajata" was epic

But Aditya was so annoying

Finally Sumo confessed her love but that happiness was Short lived😔

Thanks for the PM

Waiting for next update..

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Wow. . Loved it...the hot dance. ..seething jealous Sumo. ..but the best part was the dialogue between Shravan and Sumo...where he is ready to back out since he is sure that she would invite trouble in an attempt to get even at him...Man. ..that's love. ..Shravan might mess up..get jealous, start fights. ..but he won't play..he will give it all and love deeply.

I'm quite curious to see how Zoya's Shravan solves this rubix cube!

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago