Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#351

amazing update

so romantic

loved it

continue soon

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#352

Awww beautiful lovely fab as always dear...so love it!

Thank u so much for such amazing updates...

Love,

Spandana

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#353

Mesmerising , Stunning and Stupendous.

Wow... You have written so beautifully and gracefully.

I just loved.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#354

You know what touched my heart the most here. ..the yearning both of them had for each other..the agony they shared...unknowingly. ..the little treasures they kept on collecting to remember each other...in love ...the art of not being able to forget each other reigns supreme.

'Yaad rakhna hi Mohabbat mein nahi hai sab kuch,

Bhool jaana bhi badi baat hua karti hai'

Did I actually dare to quote a shaayari in front of you Lubna😆

Shraman met finally...nothing can be more relieving...enjoyed this whole journey from that basement gym to their wedding so much that a little trouble in Ramnath's life doesn't bother us much...hum dekh lenge😆

Your lyrics fit the title tune yet again babe. ..fit so well in fact!

Like last time read the update the moment you posted it...but got late with my comment. .you know why❤️

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
You know what touched my heart the most here. ..the yearning both of them had for each other..the agony they shared...unknowingly. ..the little treasures they kept on collecting to remember each other...in love ...the art of not being able to forget each other reigns supreme.

'Yaad rakhna hi Mohabbat mein nahi hai sab kuch,
Bhool jaana bhi badi baat hua karti hai'

Did I actually dare to quote a shaayari in front of you Lubna😆

Shraman met finally...nothing can be more relieving...enjoyed this whole journey from that basement gym to their wedding so much that a little trouble in Ramnath's life doesn't bother us much...hum dekh lenge😆
Your lyrics fit the title tune yet again babe. ..fit so well in fact!

Like last time read the update the moment you posted it...but got late with my comment. .you know why❤️

Oh my God Chechs... You have so beautifully summed it up

Now i know why you got the best commenter award 😳

This is exactly what i also felt, but just couldnt put into words. 😊

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: evaviego

Oh my God Chechs... You have so beautifully summed it up
Now i know why you got the best commenter award 😳
This is exactly what i also felt, but just couldnt put into words. 😊

Aww Eva. ..there should be an award for the most endearing member. ..you will win unopposed sugar❤️

This story has been so close to my heart right since Lubna posted the first part. ..so the comments are always lucid 😳

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#357

Hey Lubna,

First of all sorry for being late, you know the reason!

So, very first thing that tingled my heart, when Sumo asked shravan, isn't he hurt holding her, and he said he can stay like that forever! Then the decorations; be it tulips, candles or the photos! It was really beautiful! The way you described, the emotion, the longing of both, is commendable! But then comes the master stroke! The wooden chest- the treasure box! Be it her name engraved Big Ben's ticket; or jewelry for her from his first salary, or those pens! Those are like mind blowing! And of course Sumo's memory box. We all knew what that box held for her! But again, those cards, roses with thorns! So perfectly described Shravan's state! It was one of the best scenes ever I have read! Then, of course much awaited their night! It was again a beautifully penned one! And Lubna how do you do that everytime! Perfect lyrics Lubna! You should take this seriously, or you should publish your own book!

And of course at the end, Mr Oxford Malhotra knew where his name was written on her palm!

Will be waiting for the next update eagerly! Thanx for the pm sweetheart!

Phewww! This is the longest comment I have ever made till now! So you can understand how much I liked it!

P. S. Surely going to take tips from you soon about some romantic scenes I have imagined for my FF.

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#358

Lub🤗

So so sorry for being this late(kaan pakad k sorry)

This was too good...you killed it baby...

Loved each and every scene of it

Those romantic moments made me blush😳

And those memory boxes omg!! That made me go aww

These two are so adorable...

The way he asked for permission and she agreed oh god! Love these two like anything and you too for such a nice update

Sorry again and please update soon

Dolly 😃

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#359

What is the meaning of "Channa Mereya"?

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
What is the meaning of "Channa Mereya"?

Hey Arpi,

I think it's " My Moon". Honestly speaking I just named my story that because I thought that Channa Mereya song was very apt for Shravan when Aditya announced his wedding with Suman, that's where my story started. And moreover I started as OS, because it was big I made it Two Shots and when everyone asked me to take the story forward I made it SS and now FF. I think someone asked this to me even on Wattpad., I forgot to reply her. Now when you mentioned it I'll go and reply her too.

Hope you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the question.

Lubna.

Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago