Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th - Page 38

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Outstanding update loved it to the core

Thanks Nileshni. Appreciate it.

Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
loved it...
beautifully penned...

Thanks Arushaar. 😊 so glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

You know what touched my heart the most here. ..the yearning both of them had for each other..the agony they shared...unknowingly. ..the little treasures they kept on collecting to remember each other...in love ...the art of not being able to forget each other reigns supreme.

'Yaad rakhna hi Mohabbat mein nahi hai sab kuch,

Bhool jaana bhi badi baat hua karti hai'

Did I actually dare to quote a shaayari in front of you Lubna😆

Shraman met finally...nothing can be more relieving...enjoyed this whole journey from that basement gym to their wedding so much that a little trouble in Ramnath's life doesn't bother us much...hum dekh lenge😆

Your lyrics fit the title tune yet again babe. ..fit so well in fact!

Like last time read the update the moment you posted it...but got late with my comment. .you know why❤️

Hey Reshma,

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Hey Lubna,

First of all sorry for being late, you know the reason!

Hey No worries, I'm late for responding back.

So, very first thing that tingled my heart, when Sumo asked shravan, isn't he hurt holding her, and he said he can stay like that forever! Then the decorations; be it tulips, candles or the photos! It was really beautiful! The way you described, the emotion, the longing of both, is commendable! But then comes the master stroke! The wooden chest- the treasure box! Be it her name engraved Big Ben's ticket; or jewelry for her from his first salary, or those pens! Those are like mind blowing!

Thanks Sanjh. I was very nervous. Then started thinking from Shravan's POV to think what he would do to make her feel so special as she was. I love personalizing everything, so that was me though.😊

And of course Sumo's memory box. We all knew what that box held for her! But again, those cards, roses with thorns! So perfectly described Shravan's state! It was one of the best scenes ever I have read! Then, of course much awaited their night! It was again a beautifully penned one!

Yes I thought this woud be the perfect time to exchange their treaures with each other,. Thanks that was my favorite part too. tulips and roses with thorns, I wanted to make it real that he indeed hated her but loved her more.

And Lubna how do you do that everytime! Perfect lyrics Lubna! You should take this seriously, or you should publish your own book!

Thanks Sanjh. You guys made me dream about it now. But it's hard to get to the right person, celebritries don't respond to Tweets. I wrote some of my own songs too. But getting in touch with the right person is the key. 😊

And of course at the end, Mr Oxford Malhotra knew where his name was written on her palm!

Will be waiting for the next update eagerly! Thanx for the pm sweetheart!

Phewww! This is the longest comment I have ever made till now! So you can understand how much I liked it!

Thanks for the long comment. really appreciate it. Hey you don't need any tips from me. I love your writing style more.

P. S. Surely going to take tips from you soon about some romantic scenes I have imagined for my FF.

Thanks so much Sanjh. Much Much Love to You.❤️

Originally posted by: LubSha

Thanks Eva,

I was so worried but glad I was able to pull this off. Their first night together was something we all looked forward to. I wanted them to share something that they didn't as friends but can now after becoming soulmates.

Lubna.

Nice update

Hey guys, finally was able to post it here. First it got too long and then the page kept refreshing by itself and had to do it again and again. Hopefully it doesn't happen again. Coming to the update, so sorry guys I take so long to update, was not getting enough time and was also figuring out how to move the story forward. I've something in mind now, hopefully I get it right. This chapter got too long so I divided it in two parts, the second part is right below the first one. Please like and comment to let me know your views. Thanks.

Part- 1

Morning at Malhotra House was never like this before, Ramnath had already drank 4 coffee, and was restlessly walking in his room when Pushkar entered with a file.

Berry ka phone laga???

"No Sir abhi tak to nahi".

"Please ye sign kar dijiye Sir". He signs.

"Tum kahin bahar jane wale the na Pushkar"..

"Sir maine tickets postpone kardi hai"

"Woh main ab is case ke baad hi jaoonga".

I'm sorry Pushkar, you had to cancel your Honeymoon for this, I need you here as Shravan is not working with us anymore, he said in a low voice.

It's OK Sir, Bhaiya gave me that trip as wedding gift, but I still have cases pending too, I was about to postpone it anyways.

Did you let Bhaiya know about this Berry case???

"No Pushkar, I have never seen Shravan so happy, I don't want to ruin it. I will take care of it and besides you and our whole team is with me. Oberoi is just scaring us, he wouldn't do anything as such. I'm just waiting for Berry's call. You keep trying it. Also ask the team to try to reach every family member possible. We will find a clue soon".

Yes Sir.

Pushkar...

Yes Sir

Say sorry to Preeti for me.

No worries Sir, we both know that this is important.

I'll meet you at the office after breakfast.

Sure Sir.

As Nirmala came to the dining area for breakfast she saw the house help taking another coffee for Ramnath. She knew he drinks only one, and she already saw them giving him coffee earlier. She knew something was wrong.

Saab ne phir coffee mangi kya?? She asked him.

Subah se chaar pee chuke hai saab.

Theek hai tum jao. She took the coffee and went in Ramnath's room.

Ramnath was standing with a file with eyes closed and hand on his head as he was thinking about something.

"Ram aapki coffee"

Thanks, par tumne kyun laya, he said taking the mug from her.

When is your flight?

It's not confirmed, I'll take any available flight today.

Is everything OK Ram? You seem to be very tensed.

Haan.. he paused closing his eyes. Nothing to worry, it's just about a case.

Shravan se mil kar hi jaoogi na??

Haan isiliye to tickets nahi li hai. Suman ko pagh phere ke liye bhej kar joongi.

Should I send Shravan to office when he wakes up?

No no... Nirmala I'll manage, don't let him know about all this, saying this he takes his coat and files and leave for office.

She knew that it's something serious.

Nirmala comes out and joins everyone for breakfast.

Jiji kuch bataya kya Bhaisaab ne kya baat hai? Pushkar bhi pareshaan lag raha tha.

Nahi Kamini kuch nahi kaha Ram ne par kuch badi hi baat hai.

Good Morning everyone said Aditya as he joined. Where is Shravan and Suman, they didn't join for breakfast?? He asked regretting it right away.

Abhi to shaadi hui hai na, itni jaldi nahi uthenge said Vandy making everyone chuckle.

Unaware of all the commotion downstairs their room was dark with curtains closed but the sunlight was peeking in from the sides and seams, the room was engulfed with sweet smell of the flowers and candles, Suman wiggled and the smell made her feel intoxicated, and when her eyes blinked for a mini second she felt something, and when she opened her eyes she saw the most beautiful sight ever, Shravan looking at her intently with so much love in his eyes. He was still lying beside her turned to her side. Suman blushed at his gaze as all the previous night adventures flashed in her eyes. She tilted her head asking what happened. Shravan started singing...

Good morning beautiful, how was your night?

Mine was wonderful with you by my side

And when I open my eyes and see your sweet face

It's a good morning beautiful day

I couldn't see the light, I didn't know

Day from night, I had no reason to care

But since you came along I can face the dawn

Cause I know you'll be there

Good morning beautiful, how was your night?

Mine was wonderful with you by my side

And when I open my eyes and see your sweet face

It's a good morning beautiful day

I'll never worry if it's raining outside

'Cause in here with you girl, the sun always shines

Good morning beautiful, how was your night?

Mine was wonderful with you by my side

And when I open my eyes and see your sweet face

It's a good morning beautiful day, yeah

A good morning beautiful day

"You are leaving me speechless quite often.

It was beautiful song Shravan and you made it special by singing it. Never thought that you could sing".

"I heard this Steve Holy's song many times on radio, especially while driving and subconsciously had in mind that I will sing this for you one day. And there could not be a better time for this".

What's the time Shravan?

9:30

What 9:30 How did I sleep so much? What would everyone think??

Shhh... . he put his finger on her lips.

"It's OK Sumo, it happens, don't worry. No one will think anything and besides we hardly slept last night, he winked making her blush again".

You are impossible... She tapped his hand

I need to get ready now, she tried to get up

Not yet Mrs. Malhotra he said moving on top of her within a second to make her speechless with his ministrations all over again.

No Shravan morning brea...

She couldn't complete.

Shravan was admiring at the sight, his Sumo getting ready in his room, made him smile as he came out of the shower.

She was wearing a beautiful red saree with golden embroidery work and border

You look breathtaking he said inhaling her scent as he hugged her from the back. He made her turn and kissed her forehead.

"Thank You Sumo for coming in my life", he said as she snuggled in his arms to hide her red face again.

"Sumo we are leaving for London soon. I got your Visa, just need to confirm the tickets", said Shravan getting dressed from the closet.

But Pushkar and Preeti are going for their Honeymoon tomorrow.

I know but I need break from here in order to get everything back to normal, I have some work in London, then we'll go to Venice for our Honeymoon, he winked.

She smiled at the mention of their Honeymoon.

OK Shravan, let Ramnath uncle know about your plan to go to London. Let's go now I have to go for Pagh Phere.

Sumo!! He pulled her back making her crash into his chest. I'm not letting you go alone, let's go in the evening and come back right away. You are not going there for the whole day.

Shravan I have to. She said smiling, everyone must be waiting.

I waited more than anyone could ever wait for you Sumo.

Let's just have breakfast and come back and then decide when to go, he said hugging her from back tightly so she cannot move.

We have to follow this rasam Shravan. Preeti must be waiting to go to Tiwari Killa. "OK how about you come there early and we can spent time there"

In your bedroom!!! he said excitingly, "I always wanted to corner you in your room".

Shravan!! She tapped his hand, I was going to say spend time together with Nanu, as he will be going to US soon.

We can do both he winked

May be!!! She winked back at him. We'll see about that, she said getting out his hold and rushing out.

You make me go crazy Sumo!!!

Good Morning Di why so late?? said Preeti hugging her earning a glare as everyone was looking at her.

God bless you Beta said Nirmala and Kamini as she bent down to take blessings from them. Shravan joined them.

Maa are you leaving today?? He asked while having breakfast.

Yes Shravan, I need to go, have some important meetings scheduled from tomorrow, but I'll come back to meet you.

Maa we are leaving for London in two days, said Shravan.

So soon, why don't you wait for few days she said reluctantly, as she knew there is something going on with Ramnath.

No Maa, I have to go now, but will come back to meet you. You know what we can take a halt in Mumbai for few hours then catch up a flight to London.

Sure Beta you can come anytime, she gave a faint smile as she doesn't have a reason to stop Shravan from going to London right away.

Just then Mamaji and Mausaji comes with Dabboo to take Suman for Pagh Phere.

Dabboo runs to Suman and hugs.

"Suman Di main aap ko lene aaya hoon. Main bada to nahi par bhai to hoon".

My Dabboo, said Suman pulling his cheeks a little.

"Kis ne kaha ke tum bade nahi ho, tum toh bahut bade aur samajhdar ho na". Said Sharvan giving him a hi-five.

Thank you Shravan Bhaiya... Oops sorry Jiju

Waise toh tum mujhe tum bhaiya bula sakte ho lekin mujhe Jiju pasand hai, he says making him chuckle.

Ok toh Jiju hum Suman di ko le jaa rahe hai, agar aap ko milna hai to ghar aa jana shaam ko. He said making everyone burst out in laughter.

"Jiji par Suman ki pehli rasoi to hui hi nahi"

Suman's smile faded. Shravan didn't miss that.

"Koi baat nahi Kamini, aaj Pagh Phere kar lenge aur kal subah Pehli Rasoi aur Puja. Suman kal jaldi uth jayegi".

Suman looks at Shravan.

Shravan scratches his head and whispers you forgot your bag in the room

I don't need a bag, she whispers back

Phone??

I have it.

See you in the evening Mr.Malhotra

You will have to pay for this Mrs. Malhotra...

Shravan saw Suman taking blessing from his Mom and leaving, he quickly had an idea to pick her up early.

Mom I got the flight confirmed, it's in two hours, so we have to leave right now said Aditya.

Maa do you want me to drop you guys at airport??

No beta the driver will drop us. Call me back when your flight to London is confirmed.

OK Maa he said hugging her.

See you later Bro!!

Have a safe flight Aditya.

Read it on wattpad, so commenting before you update the second part here.. Wonderful update...
The song was so beautiful and more beautiful because it was sung by Shravan for sumo..
Titanic pose was hillarious 😉
Sumo and Shravan for honeymoon Trip..
Why ramu kaka is tensed, what's the problem?..
Update soon

Part- 2

Shravan steps in the office and is surprised to see all the cabins empty.

Where is everyone, he asks the Peon

In the conference room Sir.

Why is everyone in the conference room, usually for a meeting only the lawyers related to the case are called. What case would need the whole Firm working on it, he thought.

As Ramnath was leading the meeting and giving instructions, he saw Shravan coming in so he dismissed everyone until further notice.

Is everything alright Papa?? Why is everyone here?? He asked while they were leaving.

It's just that we were discussing how to make sure our process is more efficient towards every case. Don't bother about it". You tell me did Suman leave for Pagh Phere??

Yes Papa. And Maa just left to the airport too.

Oh haan. I met her before coming to office.

Papa...

Yes Beta.

"Papa I'm thinking of going to London in two days, I wanted to confirm the tickets after talking to you".

Ramnath was relieved a bit. This was the perfect way to keep Shravan away from this case and close to his new happy life.

"That's great Shravan, go ahead. You just got married, you need to take time out for yourself and Suman too. I'm very happy for you my son. Just let me know your flight details, so I keep myself free to meet you guys before leaving".

Thank you Papa!!

I have a meeting Shravan. I'll see you later.

Make a conference call appointment with the Commissioner and connect to Sir's number in about 20 minutes, said Pushkar on the phone when Shravan entered his cabin.

What's going on Chote? Which case is making the whole office beat me around the bush???

Why would we do that Bhaiya??

Seems like that to me.

Well it's not.

Then why the urgent conference call with the Commissioner?

OK bhaiya, agreed there is an important case, it involves Berry and that's the reason Sir want it to be taken urgently. Nothing we cannot handle. So how's the first day of a married man going on?? He quickly changed the topic which didn't go unnoticed with Shravan.

Chote!!!

OK bhaiya, I did try to change the topic but there's nothing to worry, I'm here. If I need any help you'll be the first one I call.

Don't forget that!!!

And my first day of married life is going great. He winked at Pushkar before leaving for his office.

At Tiwari Killa Suman was warmly welcomed by everyone. She was very happy to be back there. She sat with Nanu and enquired about his health and his daily medications.

"Suman aur Preeti, Anuj ne do din baad ki ticket book kardi hai hamari".

Aap log do din me ja rahe hai hame chod ke Maa, cried Preeti.

Preeti ab bachon ki tarah royegi to hum kaise jaa payenge Beta.

"Don't worry Preeti, I'll make Pushkar to take you there every few months and you are going to leave for your Honeymoon tomorrow. Anuj bhaiya needs them right now. We cannot be selfish".

About the trip Di, we are not going tomorrow, Pushkar has postponed the tickets.

Why??

He's busy with an important case, he cannot leave. Hearing starts soon.

Suman just wondered Why?

Di let's go in your bedroom I need to ask to something said Preeti and Suman knew what. Don't you go there Preeti. Don't you wanna talk about your wedding night Di, she said holding her sideways and raising her eyebrow.

Tujhe koi kaam nahi, chal dono Mami ki help karte hai dinner banane me.

It was 4 pm and Shravan couldn't wait any longer so he drove to Tiwari Killa.

He was welcomed by a very excited Mausaji. Looking at him Shravan had a doubt that he's up to something, he was smiling way too much.

He met with Nanaji and was waiting for Sumo to come as he had a great excuse to take her out with him.

"Nanaji mere friend ne invite kiya hai mujhe aur Sumo ko, hum ko abhi nikalna padega", said Shravan as Suman had a slight smile on her face.

She knows him too well.

Chale Sumo??

He sounded victorious and mentally tapped himself for easily pulling this off.

Arre!! Shravan Ji aap aise nahi jaa sakte!!!

And there you go again, this sure made Shravan irritated but he kept a fake smile.

Kyun Mausaji kya hua??

Woh kya hai na Shravan Ji, ab hum log America jaa rahe hai na, toh isiliye humne ek photosession rakha hai.

What!!!

Aap pareshaan mat hoyiye photographer abhi aata hi hoga. Hum log jaldi se ek photosession kar lenge uske baad chale jana aap.

Sumo what is this, he whispered

I don't know Shravan, but we have to stay for this.

I'm not staying Sumo, let's leave before the photographer comes.

Shravan please let's do it quickly then we'll leave, I can't say no to them.

You can say no to me

Shravan!! She whispered

Sumo!!! He whispered back.

Ye lo bhai photographer aa gaya said Mamaji.

Dadu bhi ready ho kar aa gaye screamed excited Dabboo.

Shravan!! Called out Nanu seeing him restless.

Ji Nanaji

"Mujhe pata hai ke tumhe jana hai par ye log kuch yaadein banana chahte hai. Ab US jane ke baad pata nahi kitne din ke baad saath honge sab. Thodi der ruk jao, phir chale jana".

"Ji Nanaji, jaise aap kahe".

"Ye lijiye Shravan Ji aapke kapde". He said giving him a maroon sherwani.

Kya Kapde kyun main isi me photo loonga.

"Woh kya hai na Shravan ji hamare paas kayi rasmon me dulha aur dulhan ko naye kapde pehnate hai, ab aap ne kuch liya hi nahi humse to isiliye main ye laaya hoon. Bas picture lete hi aap change kar lena".

Shravan gave a fake smile. He just wanted to take Sumo and rush out of there.

Aap Suman ke kamre me tayyar ho jayiye, said Mamaji, which made Shravan excited as he would get a chance to corner her.

Sumo take this to your room I'll be there, he pretended to be on a call to send her in the room first.

Jaldi aana, she smiled taking his Sherwani to her room.

He quickly rushed to her room and closed the door.

Shravan what are you doing?? What will everyone think??

"You think about everyone else but me", he said hugging from back and holding her hands tight so she doesn't move. He nuzzled in her neck inhaling her Sumo scent which is lifeline to him.

Missed you so much Sumo.

I missed you too.

He turned her around and gave a peck on her forehead.

Shravan someone might call us, get ready soon

Not yet Mrs. Malhotra, you have to pay for not coming up to our room before leaving.

But Shravan

Shhh...

It's fun to corner you in your room, he said as she was pinned to the wall now. You have no idea how much I wanted to get cozy in here.

He was smiling on how his proximity is affecting her, she clutched his t shirt to the sides with eyes closed.

But as Shravan got close someone knocked the door calling Suman out.

Suman was startled and her instant reaction was to push him away and said let's go, Shravan didn't like this as she rushed to open the door. It was Dabboo knocking constantly asking them to join everyone.

Shravan reluctantly got ready. Suman just smiled at his childlike behavior. Seeing him pout like that was too much fun for her.

"Dekho bhai is deewar ko background banake photo kheenchna. Is ghar ki sabse laadli beti ki shaadi ka photo shoot hai, aur woh byaah ke na bade ghar me gayi hai. Isliye ye jo photoshoot hai na woh ekdum topclass hona chahiye". Said Mausaji.

"O ji tussi fikar na karo, Tun Tun aisi photo kheenchta hai na ke photo bhi dus saal baad bolti hai ke Wah Tun Tun kya photo kheenchi thi tune", replied the photographer.

Acha. woh sab to theek hai par ye Tun Tun kaun hai asked surprised Mausaji?

Tun Tun main aur kaun.

This made everyone burst out in laughter except Shravan who was still sulking that she pushed him away. The way she was looking in that red lehenga and ghoonghat was too mesmerising for him, but he decided to get back by ignoring her which was very difficult with the expressions she was giving to him with her eyes as if saying sorry to him.

"Shravan keep a stern face", he said to himself.

Soon the photo session started and they took pics with the whole family, one with just Nanu, one with Masi and Mausaji and one with Mama, Mami, Preeti and Dabboo. Suman whispered sorry but he didn't look at her. As every was done, Shravan tried to move away but the photographer stopped him saying they still have to do a solo session which made him more irritated but he just obliged to their request.

"Tum dono ki jodi kitni pyari lag rahi hai" said Mamiji

"Shravan Paa ji ab woh na woh pose ho jaye ji Titanic wala"

"What!!! Woh kaunsa pose hai he questioned trying to be calm"

The photographer then showed him the pose making everyone chuckle. Shravan reluctantly stood behind Sumo stretching his arms to the sides like her amidst everyone cheering for them.

Everyone came and hugged Suman, and by the time she turned Shravan was missing from there. She looked around then went back to her room thinking Shravan got upset and left without her. She sat on the bed thinking about him when she heard a click...

Hey guys, hopefully this doesn't hang up anymore. It's frustrating how this IF page is acting on me today. Next chapter will have details about Ramnath's case and of course will start where it ended today. Please let me know your views. Thanks

Lubna.

Lubna yaar..seriously you are too good.👏 Just when we thought that the story ends with Shraman's marriage..you come up with a whole new track creating suspense.