Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Beautiful...👏👏
Penned down beautifully...
ShraMan's treasure box...❤️
Ur song...Awesome...!!!!
Waiting for more...
ANU😳

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Lovely update
Shravan and his surprise for sumo
Shraman memory box
All are beautifully expressed
Plz update soon
Waiting for next 😊

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Hi Lubna...

Perfect wedding night for Shraman fully decorated with Tulips... isse acha wedding night kya ho sakta hai for Sumo...Emarald necklace with pearl so beautiful gift for first night...if Sumo has memory box Shravan have treasury box...even though he was angry with but every moment he live with her...how can be someone loves so much...

So akhir khar humare love birds mil gaye jo bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...

Your stanza of title track was super girl...

Vinu

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#334

Lafzon mein keh na sakein,, bin keh bhi reh na sakein! !😳

Stunning! !

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#335

I am borrowing a line from your chapter"I don't have words to say how I feel"

This one was mind-blowing!!!!👏

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Aww Lubna its damn cute yaar,

Perfect wedding night, shraman moments and their memory box and treasure box

Loved from the core of my heart ❤️

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Hey Lubna...
Lovely update buddy... 😳
Shravan also had a treasure box...aww ...loved it ❤️
ShraMan's romantic moments...beautifully written dear... 😳

Sanson se milkar saans ab
Hone lagi madhosh
Dil ki is raftaar me
Khone lage sab josh
Mehekne lagi hai zindagi tere mere pyaar se
Mil hi gaye dil jo bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste......Beautiful ...Soo apt...Loved it ❤️
Awesome update dear... 👏
Exited for the next part...cont soon

Thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Such a lovely update 👏
Shravan and sumo's conversation is so beautiful...
Finally ShraMan are together Forever...

Hey Arpi,

Thank you so much. So glad you liked the conversation. 😊

Lubna.

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: deltadawn
If comment time... Record reading I did twice in 20 mins!! Loved it.
Shravans memory box is like Shravan.. wooden , carved... Tough to break into but intricately beautiful and conserving.. why I am drawing parallels I know not.I am in love with the character forever thats why😳

Sumo's is like her love...brash, half done but holding onto to everthing till it can just spill over on a slight push...

Intimacy captured beautifully... Elegantly like your poems are.. every action had a meaning... Loved it.

The song 🤗 u r so good at it that everytime you write my reaction is this..

Awesome. Valentines day update. #aaphikikamithi #mygurlhasarrived

Hey Dips,

Thanks you so much. That means a lot to me. Was so worried to write the intimate part, but once started writing it kept coming😆 That stanza was the third one I wrote, saved it for the last chapter, but I kept going. I glad I saved it for their wedding night.

Love your hashtags. Special thanks for reading it twice...

Lubna.