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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: deltadawn
you made me cry after reaching my workplace... eye makeup gone..
it was sad and made me relive the accident drama... but the way you have described everything is way more painful than how it was shown.. 😭

To hell with eye make up

Natural beauty at its best

Gksd to know that I m being compared to the

Amazing writers of the show😛

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
That was so cute in the starting...shravan trying to cooka me falling miserably and then the dark...sumo was so scared nd the way he consoled her
And then accident achanak se omg!! SHRAVAN didn't believe in God then too prayed omg!! And the way you penned everything down made me see it all in front of me👏👏 kudos to you girl!!

Update soon and please make it a ff will love to read more of it

Dolly

Of course miss chauhan

Khana banana khudh kabhi seekha nahin aur sumo ki wajah se zarurat bhi nahinpadhi

Ya thanks for the appreciation and it's S's has already turned into an ff😉

Love

Arpi

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

So much emotional... The kitchen scene was so cute

Nd the accident scene reminded me of Sumo's accident track

Hope sumo get well soon

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Awww so cute beautiful love it dear!

Take care hun

Spandana

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Hey buddy...
Wonderful update dear... 👏
ShraMan's cute moments in first part were awesome... 😊
But..!!!
Sumo's accident... 😲
And the way you described the whole accident scenario was mind blowing... 👏
Shravan's state... 😭
Loved it bud...!!
Cont soonish...!!
Thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love
Nik

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

First part of the story was fun & bickering, 😉 Mr Malhotra's great spegetti but namak more... Sumo's line was super Youtube mein bolte hain "namak swadanusar not ichanusar"... 🤣 Sumo has fobia of darkness... But Sumo's accident... 😭. Same how it was in the show... She is seriously injured... I hope she will be fine very soon... . 😭...

Sorry mein late hoon couldn't read yesterday... 😳

Thanx for PM

Vinu

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Amazing update Arpita...
Aur SS FF mey turn karva do...I love Dark stories bae...
Starting was cuto...bechara Shravu...ungli kaat di..par pyaar mey hota hai...😆
NAMAK SWAAD ANUSAAR DALNA HOTA HAI ICCHA ANUSAR NAHI..Man that blowed me off so hard...cant control..🤣
Their bickering was cute as always...Show ke yaad taza ho gayi..😃
Accident..😭😭 Ur buildup gave me a idea abt it and unknowingly a lone drop escaped my eyes...🥺
Pehle he tu roothi huyi hai iss liye dil toota hai aur ending mey tune toote huye dil ke PHIRSE tukde kar diye...
Waana read the next...
Update sooonish aur please PM ko toh reply karo...itna bhi kya ruthna???

Edited by anukulgr8 - 8 years ago

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
So much emotional... The kitchen scene was so cute
Nd the accident scene reminded me of Sumo's accident track
Hope sumo get well soon

thanks meera

glad to hear my writing is fulfilling the purpose of reminiscing our beloved show

sumo will be fine soon

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Sunain
Pistu!!!🤗

The start was really cute and pretty light hearted!...just loved it!
He cudnt even boil a glass of water by himself🤣...poor fellow😆

indeed😆
ohh its my most fav song...its lyrics are❤️

sab tere favourite songs hote hain😆

"Mr. Malhotra YouTube par bolte hain namak swaad anusaar, not iccha anusaar."...this was epic🤣🤣⭐️

thats my favourite line too😛

Imaging him holding his ears with puppy eyes...was
ssacchi😃
Woah..tht blackout part was...Fantablous👏...Shraman moment was penned Beautifully...i just loved it!❤️
thanks ji
Whn he called her janneman..i was like all Awe struk

jab maine likha tha usse thodhi der pehle hi was talking to my banda on phone usne hi mujhe bola tha maine shravan ko bulva diya

OMG! OMG! OMG!
Tht accident literally made me gasp in hell shock!😲😲😲...n wht a coincidence abhi yahaan barish ho rhi hai n the very moment a great clap of thunder just frightened me to dead🤢...oh God!!

really!!😕😕
It was hell emotional😭😭...indeed a heart achning one!😭
"Apna khayaal rakna---kyonki shaayad main--"
This part made my heart ache alot and cudnt stop myself imagining the devastated state of Shravan at tht moment!

indeed he was in a devasted state
The ending was🥺

mera bhi💔 lekin itne se dil tootne laga to aage to dil roage😆
It was hell Brilliantly penned!..👏.hats off bae⭐️

thank u ji😳😳
Plz plz plz Sumo ko jaldi theek kardo..i hope she gets fine soon or else Shravan wud literally turn the city into ashes😕

he would only if sumo doesnt stop him# hint
Plz plz plz update soon cant wait to knw wht unfolds ahead..so curious and eager to knw😳

next update meri behna cum best friend ka birthday gift hai that is 3 february
love you yarr...m so so so Glad to knw u r better now...Thank God!😊
thank u again ji!! aapki dua se

Take Care!
Sunain❤️