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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey buddy...


hi to you too
Wonderful update dear... 👏
thanks
ShraMan's cute moments in first part were awesome... 😊
But..!!!

but!! nahin hoga to maza kaise ayega
Sumo's accident... 😲
And the way you described the whole accident scenario was mind blowing... 👏

thanks bae
Shravan's state... 😭
main bhi😭😭

Loved it bud...!!
Cont soonish...!!

offcourse
Thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love

same to you and double
Nik


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thank you
so much!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

First part of the story was fun & bickering, 😉 Mr Malhotra's great spegetti but namak more... Sumo's line was super Youtube mein bolte hain "namak swadanusar not ichanusar"... 🤣 Sumo has fobia of darkness... But Sumo's accident... 😭. Same how it was in the show... She is seriously injured... I hope she will be fine very soon... . 😭...

Sorry mein late hoon couldn't read yesterday... 😳

Thanx for PM

Vinu

thnks vinu
and woh line...everyone seems to like it the most
sumo will be fine in the next update
koi nahi
der se hi sahi aaye to😛
welcome
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Amazing update Arpita...
Aur SS FF mey turn karva do...I love Dark stories bae...


mujhe bhi😛😛
Starting was cuto...bechara Shravu...ungli kaat di..par pyaar mey hota hai...😆

pyaar ne insaan ko nikamma bana diya🤣
chahe pyaar unrealized hi ho
NAMAK SWAAD ANUSAAR DALNA HOTA HAI ICCHA ANUSAR NAHI..Man that blowed me off so hard...cant control..🤣

no one told you to #hasokhulke😃
Their bickering was cute as always...Show ke yaad taza ho gayi..😃
mera ff safal ho gaya
Accident..😭😭 Ur buildup gave me a idea abt it and unknowingly a lone drop escaped my eyes...🥺
yeh annsoo baad ke liye bacha ke rakkho baccha...
baad main kisi aur se borrow karke lene padhenge😳😆

Pehle he tu roothi huyi hai iss liye dil toota hai aur ending mey tune toote huye dil ke PHIRSE tukde kar diye...
Waana read the next...
main koi ruthi vuthi nahin hu
mere exams the to,,,bohot busy thi
fevi quick se main khudh jodungi 3rd tak ruk jaa


Update sooonish aur please PM ko toh reply karo...itna bhi kya ruthna???

maine reply kar diya
padh lijiye

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meri behna tijhse dur jaye tere dushman main to behen hu😛


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Posted: 8 years ago
@ love you❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update... I love the way sumo chides shravan and shravan adores her... Feeling sad for suman... Shravan praying to god for the first time ... So cute... Pls update fast
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Posted: 8 years ago

hello people kaise ho, behen log? sab theek thaak

peechle chapter main to sab laga laga shock laga ho gaye the😛, but i promised i am going to get back Sumo for good and her i am with the 8th chapter. so this is a really melancholic chapter so disclaimer to banta hai.

and this one is dedicated to Thunderhead, she found me on wattpad and asked me to update. and this one is also for someone i am held to apology, meri anushka, meri behen sorry.

chalo, lets move to the chapter, shall we??

Chapter 8

"Life is not always filled with a bed of rose petals, sometimes you have to bear the thorns beneath them too." Shravan said.

...flashback

Pushkar asked the receptionist about any entries with the name Suman Tiwari'. He was instructed to go to the third floor, where the OT was, as Suman was still being operated. When he came closer to the gates of the room, he nearly fell down as something hit him on his foot making him trip. He looked back annoyed and recognized the static figure with his face in his palm and head downwards, to be his brother, Shravan. He should have expected this sitch the moment he read the news on the television.

Pushkar was coming to Mumbai to spend the weekend with Shravan and Suman, as they three didn't meet since a long time. As soon as he landed the television set in front of him flashed the news, which stated

"Mashhoor vaqeel Suman Tiwari ka hua dil dehla dene wala accident, ilaaj ke liye nazdeeki aspataal, Mumbai city hospital le jaya gaya hai."

Above the news a video of a very devastated Shravan lifting Suman off the ground and walking towards the car, was being shown.

He kept his hand on his shoulder and he looked up wearily in response. Pushkar was scandalized by the seeing the expression Shravan's face held. He looked so broken, so brittle...he had been small when he saw him like this after he saw his mom and dad fight, but after had moved in with Sumo, there were days when he appeared to be sad, but never did he appear so broken.

Shravan hugged him tight abruptly and mumbled some incoherent sentences at the first but they gradually made sense.

"Pushkar..voh sumo..sar se bohot khoon beh raha tha..bohot.."*sniff*

Pushkar closed his eyes thinking of some kind words to calm his restless brother for a short while. He parted a bit and looked face to face at him.

"Bhaiya mujhe laga ki aap Sumo ko sabse acche se jaante ho. Bhaiyaa humaari Sumo fighter hai, yaad hai jab uske dad ki death hui thi, kitna ro rahi thi Priya aunty aur Sumo ne unhe kitne acche se sambhala tha, 14 saal ki thi na voh jab, ab 24 saal ki hai matlab uski power ten times badh gayi hai." Pushkar said forcing a smile on his face even though he also felt like crying, seeing his brother and his best friend in the state they were. "Aur itna chota sa accident humaari Sumo ka kuch nhin bigaadh sakta. Aur bhagwaan ji ke paas itna time bhi nahin hai ki Sumo ki chattar- pattar sune, to aap dekhna Sumo abhi thodhi der main fighter ki tarah bahar aa jaegi." He continued speaking but his words didn't seem to make sense for Shravan his sniffles kept getting louder.

Now even Pushkar had tears in his eyes. "Bhaiya ab aap aise karoge to Priya aunty ko kaun sambhalega." Shravan looked at him startled at the mention of Priya. He had yet to inform Priya aunty, he fished for his phone and dialed her number.

"Voh aunty Sumo ka.." he couldn't complete further.

"Mujhe pata hai *sniff* main already hu Mumbai main *sniff* bas abhi hospital pohonch hi rahi hu" it was highly identifiable that Priya was heavily crying. She hung up and proceeded towards the hospital.

"Kya bola aunty ne?"

"Kaha ki unhe already pata tha, abhi hospital hi aa rahi hai." He spoke with an unreadable expression. His eyes had a pool of emotions, from restlessness to sorrowful, crestfallen to anxious, pitiable to depressed and in one word he was inconsolable.

This time when he looked at the OT door, the light blinked off and the doctor came out removing his white latex gloves. Shravan and Pushkar stormed towards him.

"Doctor, Ab kaise hai Sumo?" Shravan asked hastily.

"Body ki right side par gehri chote lagi hai, humne operation kar diya hai, abhi thodhi der main voh ICU main shift ho jaengi. Jab hosh ayega to pata chalega ki how successful has the operation been, aur kitna damage hua hai.Agar within 24 hours hosh nahin aaya to things can be different, and different in a negative way." The doctor went away with his work leaving a highly flabbergasted Pushkar, Shravan and Priya. Yes, Priya had reached the Hospital that very moment and had heard the doctor.

She was in a highly unpleasant state, eyes swollen and cheeks all red, result of long hours of crying. She looked at Shravan with eyes seething with anger.

She stood in front of him and striked his face backhanded imprinting three reddened fingers on his right cheek. She grabbed his collar and brought him down to her height.

"Kya bola tha tumne jab Suman ko apne saath Mumbai lekar aaye the, main apni Sumo ka khyaal rakhunga." Her tone softened a bit as she wept on his chest. "Yeh khyaal rakha tumne meri bachchi ka." She hit him with her knuckles on his chest. "Meri phool si bacchi iss halat main--"her throat didn't allow her to speak further. Shravan closed his eyes and took a long breadth being reminded of her state.

He held both of Priya's hands together and pulled her apart from his body. "Aunty jitni fiqr aapko Sumo ki hai, usse kahi zyada mujhe hai." He controlled his anger. "Sumo jaan hai meri agar uss par aanch bhi aayi to chot mujhe lagegi. Aap andanza bhi nahin laga sakti mujhpar abhi kya beet rahi hai."he had his eyes boiling with anger when his friendship was questioned and doubted at.

Pushkar sensed the tense in the situation and kept his hand on Shravan's shoulder which brought him back to reality. Shravan left her hands and apologized for his behavior. He shoot towards the nurse and asked her the way to the ICU. After receiving the directions he sprinted to the ICU leaving a benumbed Priya holding onto the position he had left her in. She was surprised to hear such words by him, but his voice dripped with honesty.

Shravan asked the attendant if he could be with Sumo for some time, after a little hesitance, the nurse gave into his eagerness. The nurse left the room living them isolated, that's when his eyes fell upon her. She looked so petite, so fragile. Her brown locks were covered with white bandage, her ankle with was usually adorned with anklets was plastered. He closed the door behind him and took unhandy steps towards her. He sat on the stool beside the bed and kept looking at her with a defeated expression. He took her elfin hand in his and weaved his fingers with her. He stretched her skin a little with the pad of his thumb. A tear drop fell on her thumb and at the moment he realized he had a stream flowing down his eyes.

"Kya kar liya yeh Sumo?" he spoke out of exposed vulnerability. He kept his forehead on his hand. He traced a bruise on the back of her palm and saw her flinch ever so slightly. "Bohot dard ho raha hai na, phir kyun harkate karti ho. Bacchi ho samajh nahi aata road se dur khadhe ho." He said in an angry tone venting his frustration. "Actually galti meri hai maine hi tumhe nahi roka."he again appeared dissatisfied with himself. "Sorry." He held his ears and apologized. If Sumo had been awake, she would have pulled his hand down and smiled at him, he imagined her doing so and that drew a feeble smile on his previously straight lips. "Lekin ab tum dekhna jab hosh main aogi to ek baat nahin karunga tumse." He faked anger and looked away. "Main apna khyaal khud rakhu, tum na duniya ki sabse badhi waali gadhi ho." He narrowed his eyes at her. "Lekin uske liye pehle tum utho to sahi, itni der ho gayi tumhaari chattar-pattar sunne hue." He tried to take full control of the tears which rimmed in his eyes didn't fell. "Kyun bola tumne ki main mera khyaal khudh rakhu, abhi mujhe ek chot lagegi uth kar khadhi ho joagi."a few tears travelled down his cheek. "Tum bolne se pehle bilkul nahin sochti na?" he looked down towards the floor. "Ek to pata nhin main tumse baat kyun kar rah ahu, tum ne to meri sunni hi nahi hai." He stood up and was about to move out when he felt something hindered him from moving further, Sumo had held two of his fingers securely. His eyes flung to her face optimistically but he shook his head when her eyes were found shut close. "Khud baat bhi nahi karogi aur mujhe jaane bhi nahi de rahi. Tumhaara kuch nahi ho sakta hamesha bossy." He said sitting back on the stool."Sumo please jaldi uth jao nahi to..." he looks unsure for a moment then continues. "Nahi to kuch nahin bas tum jaldi uth jao." Shravan said with helplessness making way back to him.

He kept checking the time in every 30 minutes even when he was aware of the timings. It was 4 am when he checked his watch last, and after that he drowsed on the side of his elbow, which he kept on the bed holding Sumo's fingers. Around after 3 hours something stirred under his head, his eyes shot open in a second expecting her to be up but what he saw made him close his eyes in hurt, Sumo had unlaced her feather-like fingers from his hand, making him miss the warmth. He kept his right palm on her cheek, cupping most of her face. "Aur kitna intezaar karwaogi Sumo, uth jao na. Hamesha wait karwaati ho, aaj to jaldi utho." Saying this he was about to sit back but the nurse told him to go out and this time he had to follow her. He moved out of the room reluctantly.

Sumo blinked into consciousness after about 2 hours and she examined her surroundings. The nurse came outside and informed Priya and Pushkar who were sitting outside the room restlessly. They were forbidden to enter till the doctor did the X-Ray and gave them the permission to enter in. They were told that the reports would be given after some time, after the doc examines it.

First Priya entered and her eyes teared up seeing her happy go girl daughter bound to the bed, but Sumo's feeble smile allowed her previously numb feet to move towards her.

"Kya karti hai tu? Dekh kitni lag gayi." She caressed her hair and then face as a tear or two escaped her eyes.

After a while a puzzled Pushkar came inside. Sumo had been expecting Shravan, because according to her she felt him near her even in her slumber.

"Kya meri Sumo wrestler, kya kar liya yeh, bhaiya ko, aunty ko, mujhe bhi rula diya tunne?" Pushkar came by her side and said keeping his hand on her forehead and giving her a sad smile

"Bas bhai tu mat sunna, waise bhi I am going to have a good road safety lecture from Shravan." Sumo said in whispers as she sported a feeble smile that was all she could manage. She tried to appear normal but her right side was badly hurt, She had suffered an injury on her head, a broken ankle, fractured wrist and even her foot was plastered and walking seemed to be climbing Everest for her at the moment. "Vaise hain kahan yeh mahashay?" Sumo voiced her query.

"Patah nahin kaha hai, puri raat toh yahin tha, abhi inhiko dhundh raha tha? Mile he nahin, shaayad ghar gaye honge, puri T-shirt khoon se stained thi, paagal hai tu, sabki jaan nikaaal di." He had last seen Shravan when he peeped into the ICU to check on Sumo, back then he saw both of the friends in slumber.

"Koi ghar-war nahin gaya who." Sumo denied him confidently, she was sure Shravan would not breathe on accord until he saw her, being fine; going home was a far-off thought. "Check the garden arena he would be there." She said with as he gulped a long breath. He comes to her to share all his miseries, certainly she can't do anything about most of them but comfort him, and when she is the cause he would definitely and unquestionably be in the garden until she went and placated him and he had to do the same in his turn of sorry', although it was harder to convince her. That was their ruthna-manana' game since their childhood. She smiled as she recalled it all and some scenes floated by her brain.

By the time she came into the reality a highly annoyed Shravan was standing beside the bed, not looking at her with his eyes swollen as evidence he had been shedding ounces of tears. She chuckled at the sight, he appeared so cute with that pout and pretending not to look at her.

"Maa 15 minutes ke liye humme akela chodoge, Pushkar tu bhi jaa Maa ko lekar." She wanted to talk to him in private.

Priya glanced at the two lovingly and caressed Sumo's head. She stopped short in front of Shravan and cupped his face. "Sorry beta, mujhe bas iss pagal ke liye bohot chinta ho rahi thi, saara gussa tumpar nikaal diya." She eyed at Suman and said. "Galti iss gadhi ki thi, road par chalna nahin aata." She looked back at him and removed her hand from his face and held his hands.

"Aunty aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hain, main samajh sakta hu aapki haalat, iss budhu ke vaise dekhkar meri jaan nikal gayi thi aap to phir bi uski maa hain." He confessed his state looking intently at Sumo. "Aapne toh phir bhi ek thappadh hi maara agar mujhe pata chalta na kisi aur ki wajah se Sumo ka accident hua tha maine to maar maar kar burra haal kar dena tha. But hummari badkismati mujhe apni fighting skills dikhaane ka mauka hi nahin mila." Shravan said jokingly earning a whack from Priya.

Kya bola abhi usne, uski jaan nikal gayi thi?? Itni important hu main uske liye??' Sumo thought and blushed as she bloomed.

The moment Pushkar and Priya left the room Shravan turned towards the window trying to snub her. Sumo narrowed her eyes at him for a while, trying to figure out how get this stubborn human of a friend to talk to her. Out of nowhere idea' she exclaimed. Shravan gave her a quizzical look and then turned back to his previous position, this irritated Sumo a bit and she pulled up the lever behind to get herself sitting slantingly instead of laying lifelessly.

"Malhotra, you do not need to snub me, I'm already under the effect of sedatives, and will doze off in almost an hour, if you still want to ignore me then I'm not gon'na let you do that." She said getting a bit agitated. Shravan looked at her raised figure with the corner of his eye.

Has she lost her mind?' he thought.

He almost sprinted towards her bed and stood beside her looking down at her only to find her staring back at him with the expression of victory. He shook his head at her childishness, but imagined what would she would be going through, a dozen of injuries and was smiling as if nothing had happened. He held her firm with one of his hand on her beck to not let any of her muscles stretch further and pulled the lever down, he slowly laid her down, and looked at her smiling face before she flinched and seeing his worried face she signaled thumbs up.

He sat down on the stool beside the bed and continued "Nahin sach batao problem kya hai tumhaari, hmph?" he said a bit angry.

She sighed in relief and then said, "So finally Shravan Malhotra ne mon-vrat todh diya." She said as if announcing. He chuckled at her antics and then pulled on a frown. Sumo frowned at his sudden change of expression.

"Its not a joke Sumo, tumhe sach main nahin pata ki Mumbai ki roads par kitna traffic hota hai, joh tum road par jaakar khel rahi thi?" He spoke in a louder pitch. Sumo could not respond but keep mum but she was glad that he was at least talking to her; however it's the scolding session going on, but she deserved it, she had pulled on a really childish act and that had landed her up in the hospital, would have been in coma if she hadn't gained consciousness.

Sorry' she said in a very low tone and a pout adorning her lips.

"No Sumo no pout would work this time." Her pout changed into a puppy face. "No puppy face either."

This time Sumo huffed in annoyance. "Its me who should be angry, you left my favorite necklace there on the road, god knows where is it now." Sumo knew the way to get him to talk, blame him on something unreasinable he's never done, he'd put an amazing debate to it.

"You're definitely kidding, do you want me to leave you and go behind that god forsake of a necklace." He was devastated on hearing her retort; she was the one who was renowned for wining very dire cases in a matter of one hearing. "I can buy you hundreds of those necklaces, were would I get you back if you were lost?" he spoke angered but like he really meant it.

Sumo had her heartbeat almost stopped as the gravity of his words dawned upon her. Even for him they came as a jolt, he had this habit of speaking his heart out in front of her, and that proved to be a hazard more or less. She had this instant urge to hug him, but couldn't. Courtesy- the incorporation of her right side. But she could definitely do one things, she cupped his face with her left hand brought his face up, so she could have a view of his face, there were beadlike tears in his amber eyes and it gave her a strange feeling.

"Angry??" she asked in a childish tone. He shook his head in denial. "So tujhse naraaz nahin ZINDAGI hairaan hu main waali equation, going on???" she beamed at him.

"Haan...nahi, actually I'm not shocked tum to ho hi pagal? Careless, bavakuf bacchi." He shoved her hand away and looked to the other side. This made her smile turn into a smug and he she pulled his cheek, that action she could not resist anymore, seeing him sulk with the cute pout on his lips, was giving her many feels.

"So let me guess??" she looked towards the ceiling pretending to thing deeply even though she was well aware of the fact which had him sealed. "You are disappointed with what I said just before I was taken to be operated. Isn't it??"Sumo looked at him as he snapped his head at her in bombshell.

...flashback

"Would've been a hard time? Didn't it ?" Anshika said squeezing her eyes a bit.

He inhaled a sharp breath ."Very hard, to be precise. Seeing the bubbly little sweetheart bound to the bed had left me tearing. But Sumo being Sumo would always be jolly and full of life irrespective of the situation." A soft smile played on his lips.

"She greatly related to the nickname you've given her Sumo'." They both chuckled lightly.


So Sumo knows her words affected him, of course she will, a lifetime of togetherness. so lets see how Sumo gets him to talk to her. and i assure you it is quite ridiculous but effective.

anyways HAPPY VALENTINE DAY!!!!

love

arpita

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Arpita, what an emotional chapter. Loved it. Remembered the hospital scene from the show. Can easily relate to how Shravan reacted. Hope they both realize and confess that they love each other.
Now that her mom is here, wonder she makes them realize it. Hopefully. Update soon. Thanks for the PM.

Lubna.
Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
A very long time haa...
But I loved the chapter.
It was emotional yet cute.
Thanks for the pm and yeah update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow arpi that was emotional 😭😭😭
Shravan literally speaks his heart out and makes me go aww
And sumo being sumo is jolly on a hospital bed too😆😆
Awesome update 👏👏
Update soon dea 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional chapter... Shravan was completely broken..
But Sumo is really a fighter...she is smiling even in such situation..
Thanks for the pm
Plz continue soon

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