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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#251

The 1st half was so cute and fun .. Just love their bickering and your lines 'namak swadanusar,not ichanusar'😊😛 And she's afraid of dark,and how natural their love and care is towards each other that they can't realise .. but Oh god !😭😭😭 Why the accident and the way u described it , I have tears in my eyes recalling the ep from EDKV and those lines she said took my heart away .. Hope she comes out well .. update soon ..

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#252

What a shift..from heart pleasing to heart wrenching! !

Aaj khush to bahut hogey tum.. type moment !

Apna khayaal rakna...omg omg!

Nicely written!

Glad to know u are perfectly fine...stay the same!

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Fabulous update!!!!

You are really an awesome writer!!!!!

BTW,take care of your health also...

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#254

you made me cry after reaching my workplace... eye makeup gone..

it was sad and made me relive the accident drama... but the way you have described everything is way more painful than how it was shown.. 😭

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#255

That was so cute in the starting...shravan trying to cooka me falling miserably and then the dark...sumo was so scared nd the way he consoled her

And then accident achanak se omg!! SHRAVAN didn't believe in God then too prayed omg!! And the way you penned everything down made me see it all in front of me👏👏 kudos to you girl!!

Update soon and please make it a ff will love to read more of it

Dolly

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Pistu!!!🤗

The start was really cute and pretty light hearted!...just loved it!

He cudnt even boil a glass of water by himself🤣...poor fellow😆

ohh its my most fav song...its lyrics are❤️

"Mr. Malhotra YouTube par bolte hain namak swaad anusaar, not iccha anusaar."...this was epic🤣🤣⭐️

Imaging him holding his ears with puppy eyes...was

Woah..tht blackout part was...Fantablous👏...Shraman moment was penned Beautifully...i just loved it!❤️

Whn he called her janneman..i was like all Awe struk

OMG! OMG! OMG!

Tht accident literally made me gasp in hell shock!😲😲😲...n wht a coincidence abhi yahaan barish ho rhi hai n the very moment a great clap of thunder just frightened me to dead🤢...oh God!!

It was hell emotional😭😭...indeed a heart achning one!😭

"Apna khayaal rakna---kyonki shaayad main--"

This part made my heart ache alot and cudnt stop myself imagining the devastated state of Shravan at tht moment!

The ending was🥺

It was hell Brilliantly penned!..👏.hats off bae⭐️

Plz plz plz Sumo ko jaldi theek kardo..i hope she gets fine soon or else Shravan wud literally turn the city into ashes😕

Plz plz plz update soon cant wait to knw wht unfolds ahead..so curious and eager to knw😳

love you yarr...m so so so Glad to knw u r better now...Thank God!😊

Take Care!

Sunain❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written.

Thank u so much

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246
The 1st half was so cute and fun .. Just love their bickering and your lines 'namak swadanusar,not ichanusar'😊😛 And she's afraid of dark,and how natural their love and care is towards each other that they can't realise .. but Oh god !😭😭😭 Why the accident and the way u described it , I have tears in my eyes recalling the ep from EDKV and those lines she said took my heart away .. Hope she comes out well .. update soon ..

Thanks dear,

Being compared to EDKV writers

She'll be fine soon at least this time

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
What a shift..from heart pleasing to heart wrenching! !
Aaj khush to bahut hogey tum.. type moment !
Apna khayaal rakna...omg omg!
Nicely written!

Glad to know u are perfectly fine...stay the same!

Haina? ?? Mera bhi bohot Mann kar raha tha

Like inki khushi ko bhi nazar lag gayi😭

Thank you so

much

And will try to stay fine as long as possible