ShraMan AU FF- Flashes[C9 PG-43] UPDATED

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Flashes

Hiii! I know many of you weren't expecting me.😭 I understand 3 weeks of complete disappearance aur on day out of the blue Arpita is back. Girls bada wala sorry especially Anu aur Piyali ko, sorry aaj PM box dekha to, literally 32 PM's, thanks for the pm's of epilogue plus 3 chapters. Itne saare comments karne hain, itne saare reply, update bhi karne hain, uff!😲 Pehle to about this piece.

Authors Note

Its not the usual fluff I write, this is a dark, sad one with the glimpse of past happiness. *You'll see it.

The updates will be weekly, usually weekends. Please, pardon me if the updates or replies are late, reason everyone knows, sports day+trip, gives you a big time crunch.

For PM's you'll have to buddy me.

Characters

Nirmala lives with the Malhotra's that is Shravan and Ramnath only, Pushkar's character will be later unfolded. Some characters will be added with the flow of the story.

Sumo and Shravan are neighbors and also classmates and the bestest of friends.

Sumo is not an orphan she has Priya as her mother and Preeti as her friend.

Sumo doesn't use Shravan; they both help each other out in studies and every other thing.

General

All the chapters will be based on some lyrics, which I will mention in the beginning of each chapter.

If you find this piece worthwhile, then please like or comment. It encourages me.

ONLY FOR ANJU: SEE I'M KEEPING MY PROMISE, THIS FF IS STARTING BEFORE IT WAS PREDICTED.

INDEX

TEASER~ Below

CHAPTER 1~ Page 4

CHAPTER 2~ Page 6

CHAPTER 3~ Page 10

CHAPTER 4~ Page 14

CHAPTER 5~ Page 17

CHAPTER 6~ Page 27

CHAPTER 7~ Page 34

CHAPTER 8~ Page 38

CHAPTER 9~ Page 43

TEASER

"So should we start the interview?" Anshika asked.

"Who's Sumo?"

That question hit him where it was supposed to do.

...

"Indian society main Log hamesha ladko ko bolte hain na anchor, thodhi hesistance hoti ha na jab kisi ladki ko mainstay bola jaye, sumo thi mere liye anchor, usse aur sirf usse aata tha mujhe handle karna." He orated.

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"Chahe aap kisi ki kitni bhi value karo leking asli value sirf jab pata chalti hai jab voh aapse dur chala gaya ho. Zindagi jaise bilkul tham si gayi thi, jab saath nhin thi." He said ironically.

...

And one fine day voh MIL GAYI.

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"Kahan thi tum, tumhe andaaza bhi hai tumhe kahan-kahan nahi dhundha?" he asked frantically.

...

"kyun karna chahte ho apni life barbaad ?"She asked helplessly.

"Cause I LOVE YOU."

"7 saal, sirf itna time de sakti hu main tumhe. You deserve better."

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"Papa aap roge nhin." She said wiping the tears that had begun to fall from his eyes. "Aap roge to main mom ko bata dungi, phir voh aapko bohot dategi."

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Note : Sumo thi'*past. Main mom se bol dungi'*future tense.

Supposed question Is sumo Shravan's wife or not '?

Confused, hena, raho confused Monday tak.🥱😛 I have already written 2 chapters so the update may be earlier than predicted.

Cheers😆

Arpita

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...welcome back..soo happy to see you...and this au seems so interesting and abhi i am very confused so pls update soon😊 also me first...yay!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start!!! Teaser aur intro tho bohut suspense leke aaye hain!!! So update soon!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice teaser ...
Why it's making me feel that Sumo is no more...

Why did she say only 7 year she can give to Shravan...

Waiting for all these answers of this question...

Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's very very interesting I am waiting for updates😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,
If teaser itself is so good, cant imagine how the chapters will be!!!

Waiting for your updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good to have u back...
Interesting teaser..!
Update sooner than soonish..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arpita you are back finally,...superb teaser yaar and interesting too. Waiting for next chapter. and I posted my first OS. Hope you find time to read it and I sent u the pm;-)
Love
Madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arpi...
Kaise Ho meri jaan.. Kaha gayab ho gayi thi yaar... Missed you sho sho much bae...
Ur apologies are accepted... Dosto se mujhe rutha aata he nahi.. 😆
Coming to the teaser... Woah.. Mind blowing 👏
I juz love dark stories u kno Aur aaj subah se maan ho raha tha kuch aisa padhne ka... N see.. U posted this... Meri khwaish puri kar di tune... Bhagwan tumhe hamesha khush rakhega...😛 #dramaqueenme 😆
I have lots of predictions abt sumo's character in mah mind...
Probable I think is that shez suffering through some disease type thing.. Hai na...
Do update soon.. Wanna see the 'updated' pm soon.. 😆
Love,
ANU 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey it seems very very interesting yaar..
Thoda himts to do
Itna intezaar mat karwao
Waiting eagerly for monday...

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