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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oyeee lovely re..šŸ‘. But but but... Shravan marna nahin chahiye!😔 Thats it! Btw jeevan kashyap 🤣...shraman flashbacks both and 😭...update soon... Waiting eagerly!...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Oyeee lovely re..šŸ‘. But but but... Shravan marna nahin chahiye!😔 Thats it! Btw jeevan kashyap 🤣...shraman flashbacks both and 😭...update soon... Waiting eagerly!...


Hey saanjh we are waiting for update. when you are going to update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Heya...pakka sab log mujhe bul gaye...m really very very sorry...bohot time laga diya update dene mey...SORRIE...aur phir se sorry for not replyin to all ur comments...but trust me maine saare read kiye and a big thank u to all of them who liked and commented...Thank u sho sho much...So enough of my bhaashan and here goes the part 4...Enjoy...😊

FINALLY Part 4


The next day

"Good Morning Di" Preeti greeted Suman as she walked into the kitchen.

" Good morning puttarji...Aacha suno...Lalaji ko na Chole bhature khane hai ...toh tu bana degi??" Kamini asked sumo lovingly

After yesterday night's scene everyone had decided to be gentle at Sumo and leave the marriage topic...because there " no meaning in forcing her for it.

"Haa Chaciji...Ye bhi koi pucchnewaali baat hai...Mai abhi banati hu..."

"Good wasmorning sumo...aacha sunn..jab tu lalaji ke liye cholebhature banahi rahi hai toh mere liye.."

"Pushkar??" Preeti eyed him...

"Toh mere liye bhi wahi bana dena.." Pushkar said giving a sorry smile to preeti..

"Ye toh pura lalaji par gaya hai...biwi ke aakhose hi daarne wala..." Nirmala said entering the kitchen..but she forgot that kamini was right there..

"Jiji???"

"Aare mai toh mazak kar rahi thi..." Nirmala tried to cover up.

"Badi mumma...aap sahi toh keh rahi hai...bhai itne khoobsurat aakhen ho toh..." Pushkar was about to continue but preeti realized it and ran out blushing..

Everyone laughed.

"Aap sab log bahar baithiye...mai nashta lekar aati hu..."Sumo said getting to work.

At the dining table

"Bhai waah..kya vadiya chole bhature banaye hai..hmmm*licking his fingers*maza aa gaya suman puttar..." Lalaji managed to say between his bites..

"Saach mey Lala...Suman toh Annapurna hai...Kyu Nirmala??"

"Ye bhi koi puuchnevala baat hai Ram?? Hai he hamari Suman devi Annapurna ki tarah..."

Everyone was praising Sumo's talent.

"Papa, Mai sooch rahi thi...kyun na PCT phirse join karlu??"

"Aare ye bhi koi pucchne vali baat hai...Tumhe jo pasand aaye who karo..Koi tumhe nahi rokega.."

"Thank You Papa..."

"Aur ek baat...Please mujhe maaf kardo...aaj ke baad koi tumhe shaadi ke liye force nahi karega...Hum jaante hai ki tumhari life mey Shravan ke jagah koi nahi le sakta aur hum kisiko lene bhi nahi denge...Mujhe maaf kardo.."

"Nahi Papa...please maafi mat maangiye..aap toh mera aacha he chahoge na...par maine life mey kabhi bhi Shravan ke sivay kisiko apna pati nahi maana...jab se usse pyaar kiya hai tabse ..mai kisiko uski jagah imagine he nahi kar sakti..."

"Hum jaante hai beta..issiliye toh..aab se tumhe koi shaadi ke liye nahi kahega..tum vohi karo jisse tumhe khushi milti ha...aakhir tumhari khushi he hamare liye sab se zyada important hai..."

"Thank u so much Papa...thank u so much...aur ek baat..kya aap please uss Jeevan ko meri taraf se sorry keh denge...bechare ko maine bohot suna diya kal..."

"Haa...tu usski chinta mat kar..."

"Ok.." Saying this Sumo ran upstairs.

Later that day, at night...

Everyone is having dinner..The bell rings and a dilevery boy is standing there with a parcel in his hands..

"Mrs. Suman Malhotra??"

"Its me..." Sumo goes to the door, Signs and takes the parcel...Its quite heavy..

"Thank u .." saying she closes the door..

"Kya hai Suman??"

"Pata Nahi ma...bohot bhaari hai..."

"Sumo khol ke toh dekh..." Pushkar said with curiosity like a 6 year old..

"Haa Pushkar...Khol toh rahi hu..." Suman said removing the plastic..

There was a box full of different brands of American chocolates...3 Musketeers, Bar one,

Hershey's, M&S ...all Sumo's favs...

FLASHBACK

Sumo is talking with Shravan on the phone.

"Suuno...Mujhe Vaha ki best chocolates chahiye...especially M&Ms vaali...purra dabba lana hoga tumhe...aur 5 stars aur..."

"Bas bas madam...Laaunga...saare chocolates laaunga...vaise hum 2 hafte baad vapas yahi toh aane vale hai...toh tum tabbhi kha lena..."

"Nahi...tum laaoge ..phir hum vahape bhi khaayenge..."

"Lo dekhlo..aaur tum mujhe bhuukad kehti ho...??Kamal ho tum Sumo..."

"Aakhir Sumo kiski hu..."

FLASHBACK ENDS

Sumo came out in reality by Preeti's words..

"Di..itne saari chocolates??Kisne bheji ye sab...aur kahase??"

"Pata nahi Preeti... Aab saare foreign brands hai toh vahise bheeji hogi na..."

"Haa Di...par kisne..koi naam bhi toh nahi likhe hua...Aap box keaa..karti hu...vaise toh foreign chocolates hai toh zarror mamiji ne hi bheje honge na..."

"Haa Di..par maine aaj subah hi maasi se baat ki...unhone toh kuch nahi kaha..."

"Shayad surprise..." Sumo stopped midsentence...

"Kya hua di..??"

Sumo was totally in shock...at the bottom of the box...it was written SHRAVAN...

So hope aap logo ko pasand aaya...Will try to update as soon as possible..

Love,

ANU😊

P.S- Tomatoes and chappals most welcome...but iss nazukkali par rehem kar kar dheere se phekna...

P.P.S- Please feel free to critisize...Constructive crtisizm is mos welcome...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anuuuā¤ļø wooowww this was soo good and choclates from shravan??? Omg!!! Shit shit. ...suspence level 9999+ jaldi update kar dena bhen pls...kahi me suspence k Mara burst out na ho jao *stupid,eager me* but can't help man!! Because you write so beautiful...shravan is gift to a gya ab jaldi usko bhi le aa. ..hope to meet you soon with an update...thanks for the p.m and yay me first!!šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hain... Yeh kya... Aisi jagah pe koi chodta... But.. Interesting! Waiting eagerly... Actually shravan hai kahan... Heart attack ho jayga... Jaldi update nahin kya to... šŸ˜† Teri tarah #dramaqueen banti ja rahi hu.. Jaldi update kariyo my zeherili chidiya... Already waiting...
Much love..
JujušŸ¤—

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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Kya bomb poda end mein... Shravan hain na zinda... Mein janti this woh na zaroor wapas ayega Sumo ke liye... 🄳
Itna shock treatment mat do ke mera heart fail ho jaye... Ab jaldi Shravan ko samne lao plz... 😈

Sumo ka dadkan ruk jayegi agar Shravan aise hi shocking surprise dega to... 😔

Cliff hanger yaar toda bada update likti...

Ab continued soon & buddy thanx for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Anu,
So FINALLY hum sab ko meetha wala surprise diya tumne. Very beautiful update. Anticipating some more cute surprises before actual Shravan makes a hero wali entry. Please get him back soon. Like I told you last time Shravan ki zindagi tumhare haath me hai Anu. Lol.šŸ˜†

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update. šŸ‘

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woahhh...SHRAVAN !!!! YAYYY😃😃
its was awesome super duper chapter . 1ST reason, no body is going to force sumo for marriage. I am more happy here šŸ˜† Nice stand sumo, she can live independently with her love always.

And then the surprise !!! I realy really reallly hope shravan is back

but why he is sending chocolates first. He should first inform about his well being na !! its been 4 years after all ... it should not be like someone pretending to be shravan 😭

mega suspense yaar...please continueee asappp
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tum bin 2 Ki trh idher bhi shrawan wapas aa gya kya???? Hopefully yes!!! Plz update the next part asap.. Suspense me chorh dia yaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nail biting moment!
Chocolate boy makes first impersonal appearance in box of chocolates !
Update soonish... curiosity kills...šŸ˜‰

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