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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

wow

sumo remarrying

too weird

continue soon

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Joyness

@Joyness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Very interesting...sumo ke shadi ke din shravan ki entry...

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Hola everyone..😊..m back..soon you see...Aaj mai bohot khush hu..kyunki aaj meri behen ko best classical dancer ka award mila hai...Its her hattrick this year...so yeh update uss khushi mai de rahi hu.🥳...And to all those bhooki sherniyaa...Ye update padkar pata nahi aap logo ko kya hoga.😆..Do tell me what u'll think...Enjoy...👍🏼 NO PROOF READ

FINALLY

Part 3

"Its ok Suman...Mai Jeevan hu..Jeevan Kashyap..Tumhara hone wala Pati..."

"Kya...Ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum???"

"Aare...abhi thodi der pehle toh tumne shaadi ke liye sab ke saamne HAAN kaha..."

"Pagala gaye ho tum...mai toh tumhe thik se jaanti tak nahi...aur shaadi toh door ke baat hai...Meri shaadi ho chuki hai..."

"Mai jaanta hu...tum apne husband ke maut ke sadme se recover nahi hui ho...mai toh tumhe use zyada pyaar karon..."

SUMO'S POV

"mai toh tumhe use zyada pyaar karon..."

I couldn't take that any more..

"Tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh kehne ki...Tum mujhe Shravan se zyada pyaar karoge...Aagli baar aagr aisa kuch kaha na toh dekhna ki yeh Shravan ki sumo kya karti hai..aur agli baar ka toh sawal hi nahi uthta...niklo baahar mere ghar se...tumhe mere liye humdardi jaatane ki koi zarrorat nahi hai..mai aapni zindagi khud jee sakti hu...mujhe kisike sahare ke koi zarrorat nahi hai...samjhe tum..??

"Sumo meri baat toh suno..."

"Kuch nahi sunna mujhe...Aaur Phir se mujhe sumo kehne ki jurrat mat karna...warna bohot pachtaoge...Get out of here..." shouting this I ran to my room...

"Himmat toh dekho single pasli ke...Kehta hai ke mai tumhe Shravan se zyaada pyaar karunga...bada aaya...Mujhe tumse zyaada koi aur kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakta...Hai na Shravan??"Sumo said...As if talking to Shravan in the air...Cold and soothing breeze flew..."mujhe pata tha...tum haa hi kahoge...aakhir hu hi mai..Shravan Ki Sumo.."

SUMO'S POV FINISHED

Later at night

"Preeti puttar...jao..Suman ko niche dinner ke liye bulao..."

"Haan papaji..aabhi bulati hu..." Preeti said going upstairs..

Till Then Sumo had came out...

"Lo ..aa gayi "

"Aao puttarji...sab aapka wait kar rahe hai..."

"Sorry chachiji..."

"Koi gall nahi puttar...chalo aab shuru karo..."

Everyone starts dinner

Ramnath starts talking with suman

"Suman...tumne job hi jeevan ko kaha..thik nahi kaha...woh bohot hi aacha ladka hai..."

"Uske bare mai mujhe kuch bhi baat nahi karne papa.."

"Baat karni padei Suman...Aakhir kab tak tum aise..."Ramnath's words left his mouth and all the hands in the dining stopped...

"Aap kehna kya chahte hai Papa...Aap log mujhe yaha se nikalvana chahte hai...Boj hu naa mai aapke liye...Toh thik hai...Mai chali jaungi yaha se...mai kisika ehsaan nahi rakhna chahti..."

"Suman ...mere kehne ka who matlab nahi tha...Sunno.."

But sumo was not in the state of hearing anything...She started walking to her room...But stopped midway and looked back...

"Papa, aap toh mujhe Shravan ke liye pasand he nahi karte the na...isiliye use mujhe door karne ke liye aapne usse urgently London bhej diya...(sobbing)thik hai...mai aab aap logo ke uppar aur boj nahi banungi..."Saying this sumo ran to her room...Everyone tried to stop her...but she didn't budge...

In the room

Sumo sat down on the floor near the wardrobe...clutching a envelope in her hands..which held their honeymoon tickets...

FLASHBACK

"Di..ho gayi aapki saari packing??"

"Haa.preeti...aab bas Shravan ke bag pack karna baaki hai...who sab bhi aaj raat ko ho jayega..."Sumo replied remaining busy in her work..

"ha di..aapko toh jaldi hi hogi na...jaane ke liye...par thoda sabr rakhiye...aapke desperate hone se aapka flight jaldi nahi aa raha..."Preeti teased and sumo blushed heavily..Sumo hurled a pillow towards her...Both the sisters started giggling...

"Di,..."

"Hmm.."

"Aap khush toh ho na..."

"Aare meri preety preeti...Honeymoon par jaa rahi aurat ko puch rahi hai ke who khush hai kya...Pagl hai tu..."Suddenly they hear a commotion down...they rush downstairs...

Nirmala is sitting on the floor sobbing and Kamini is trying to calm her...Sumo is hell confused..

"Kya hua Maa...Pushkar kya hua..."Sumo asked..

"Sumo who..."

"Bolo na Pushkar kya hua hai..??Preeti insisted him to tell...

"Sumo who bhaiya..."

"Kya ...Shravan kya..."Sumo was now worried...A painful pang was rising in her chest...

"Sumo who Bhaiya ka plane...plane crash ho gaya hai..."Pushkar replied and his tears found way out...

Sumo felt her world crashing down...She was totally numb..unable to hear or sense anything...

Suddenly Pushkar's Phone rang..It flashed Shravan's name...

"Hello...Kaun??Bhaiyaa..."

"Ha Pushkar...Woh plane jo crash hua ..usme mai nahi tha...actually meri flight miss ho gayi hai...Mai aab kal ki flight se aa raha hu...Sumo aur baaki sab ko bata dena..."

Pushkar couldn't believe his ears...

He gave this good news to everyone...Sumo felt as if God had given her second life..But this happiness was shortlived..infact of only few minutes...

News flashed on the TV screen.."A big bombblast has taken place just now on the London International Airport...It has been a very massive blast affecting almost all the airport and also the runway ...Sources state that this might be a terrorist attack..."The whole living room was silent...

"Pushkar..Shravan ko call karo...pucho use ki who kaunse airpot par tha...

Pushkar tried calling him but the call wasn't answered...

"bade papa...mujhe Shravan ne apni ticket ki photocopy bheji thi ...mai check karta hu..."Varun said and checked the photo...

"Kya hua varun bhaiya...Shravan kissi aur airport par than a...Sumo asked..

"Nahi..Woh ussi airport par tha,..."

Hot fat tears rolled off her eyes down on the envelope...

"Shravan...kyun iss tarah pal bhar ki khushi de kar chale gaye tum..."

Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan yun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau
Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan kyun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau

Un binn kate naa raina
Unn binn aawe na ik pal chaina
Unn bin jeeun tto kaise main jeeu'n haay..

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bhare more naina..

So...How was it...Hope u'll liked it..Plz do tell me if aap logo ko yeh pasand nahi aaya...I lke these type of tragedy type stories so I try to fit ShraMan in them...If aap logo ko kisi aur type mei pasand ho ya improvements chahiye ho toh plz khulke bolna...😊Don't forget to tap the like button and post ur Comments...😳
Love'
ANU😳

P.S:- Constructive criticism is most welcome...
P.P.S :-Tomatoes and chappals are welcome too...Par iss nazukkali par dhree se phekna...😳

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Ressi Res😆

******

Unres

Shonaaa..!!!🤗

awwhh..plz congratulate ur sis on my behalf..🥳..hatrick woah..dono behnein multi talented han😉

*nodding in a childish way with a cute puppy eyes*mein bhi un bhooki sherniyon mein sy ek hoon😛😳

shona yaa kya tha..😲

meray pairon talay zameen khisak gae..rontay kharay ho gaay..chehray ka rang safaid par gaya..aur kuch suno gi k ya kafi hai meri halat batanay kay leay aur han ya bhi🥺🥺

Shravan had an accident😭😭..i so wish for his wel being...wht if he had succeeded to escape n is alive..aur agar ya terrorist attack tha tu kya pata thy abducted him..pata nhi..ahh.sigh

plz plz plz chaldi update karna warna soch soch kar pagla jaon gi mein😔

Suman totally shatered into trillion pieces😭

n tht part in which she comunicated with him...❤️

Shonaa u did a fantablous job!!!

pulled it brilliantly!..even though i also like tragic stories it seems close to reality so plz continue the way u r taking it...n btw mjhy dark stories hi zyada pasand hain..so m loving this one to👍🏼

Bs Shravan ko jald vapis layao

Love yaa🤗

Tadaa!

Take Care!

Sunain.

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Shravan ! 😭

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Naamika

@Naamika

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Do whatever you you want to do but SHRAVAN SHOULD BE ALIVE AND HE HAVE TO COME BACK TO SUMO PLEASE.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

So emotional part it is... 😭

Without Shravan story is incomplete... Plz bring Shravan back to Sumo's life... Can't see her like this... 😭

Excited to know what comes next...

Continue soon

Thanx for the PM

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Naamika
Do whatever you you want to do but SHRAVAN SHOULD BE ALIVE AND HE HAVE TO COME BACK TO SUMO PLEASE.

Haaye naamika... Dhamki mai Toh daar gayi😕 yaar... Lagta hai k sabse bhooki sherni hai... 😆

Don't u worry bae... Good times ahead...

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

I liked sumo's stand in this chapter. SHe is strong enough to reject ramnath and others for the 2nd marriage proposal... And she should continue this, she can even leave the house if they force her like this instead agreeing to it or killing herself. I mean her love for shravan is such that she would not be able to give space for anybody else in her life, and why is it even needed. I would appreciate if she lives a meaningful life with his memories alone. (that jeevan , how could he even claim he can love her more than shravan, does he have any idea about shravan's love)

But, can't take shravan's non-existence too yaar. Our shraman had already had enough. You can start with a tragedy but don't end it like that. Just like he escaped flight crash, Please say that he is saved from bomb blast as well... its already 4 years now 😭😭

What a twist in the first place yaar, . plane crash, immediately a bomb blast.

Save our weak hearts Please .