Jellybean..!!!🤗
mein aagae😆
without any further ado...lets begin the mission😉
Sure...😉
CHAPTER 4
Woah tht was a bit emotional n hell amusing!😃
Suman still trying to fight her agony n loneliness.Though she lives in a mansion full of humans but still she feels lonely just bcoz Shravan is everything for her.Her happiness her peace her love her everything! n whn hez not around or with her she feels lonely.
She cant even imagine in her wildest dreams to give his place to someone else its like killing herself n her love for him doing so!Thts something next to impposible for her.😳
The whole kitchen scene was Fun😆...Nirmala n Pushkar teases were👍🏼
Thanks dea..
Chocalates!!...YUUMMM...😃...inni sari..muko bhi chahiyay😳
Aww...sumo se maang le...dekh le deti hai kya...woh bhi bhukaadi hai..!!😆😉
Kisi nay Sumo ko sikhaya nhi Sharing is caring😛😆😳
Bhukkadi hai tu bilkul..😛😆
Parcal by Shravan...thts intuging😃
CHAPTER 5
This one was a heart aching one...made me soo emotional😭😭
Suman's agony n torment was🥺
For her Shravan is eveything n whn hez not in her life beside her thn for her her life even mean nothing.All she wants is to be with him no matter how.
Her anger is adding fuel to her insanity's fire😕
If tht parcal is really some kinda Mazak thn who ever is its root cause know,is dead by me😡
WHT???..shez planning to go London...thts intresting😆
Her emotional breakdown part👏...brilliantly penned!⭐️...loved it!
Glad u liked it...was waiting for ur review for this chappy...
CHAPTER 6
Ya parh kar tu meray pairon talay zameen hi khisak gae😆
Pushkar n his supportive bhai mode😆...I like it!
Glad u do..😃
Really loved the caring version of Ram for Sumo...was herat touching❤️
ooohh the POVs...❤️❤️...all of thm were fantabulous...full of emotions..loved thm!
Thanks bae..😳
Shravan aagaya...yaay..🥳...FINALLY!!!😆
N she got fainted...jis ka intnay saal intezar kiya ussi k lotnay ka yakeen na hoa issey...pagal larki😳
CHAPTER 7
Now this one was full of dhamal n dhamakaz😆...n my fav one too😳
the whole family reunion was so emotional...this chap made me cry like an idiot😭😭😭...thnks to u😆
The slap...woah...fantastic one...he desrved one😆 but i wud admit i didnt expected one😕
Hehe...I knew it...even Shravan didn't expect it..😆😆
akhhir itnay saal tarpaya are rulaya is phool ko😒
Her burstout..oohh..comendeble...AAamazing👏
Thanku...
the kisses n hugs were❤️...perfectly placed!
...Aisa lag raha hai ke naaseb se paya hai aab tumhe..."
this line...the loveliest one the loveliest part...uptill now.Loved it to core.Is line nay tu jaisay mahfil loot li😃
I too love that line...Aakhir hum raaj karte hai maifil pe...😆😆
Song choice was apt...loved it...perfect one!😉
Thank u...Thats my fav one..😃
Shraman convo was stupendously penned👍🏼...tunaay tu kamal lar dita😆
Hum Khush hua..😆😆Actually that was the most difficult task...😊
Wakia...Mil hi jaatay hain jo bannay...Ek Duje Ke Vaaste!!❤️❤️❤️
TADAA!!!🥳
Shonaa...i have done it!
Mission accomplished!😎
Really u did a fantabulous job dear...loved every tib bit of it...the emotional scenes were mindblowing..tussi chah gaay ji😉👏
Dhanyavaad ji..(thanku)😃
Thank God i read it in one go agar phalay parti tu suspense hi mera kaam tamaan kar chuki hoti😆
I mean u have a great tallent story ko aisay end par akar rokti ho kay curiosity aur suspense double speed say peek par char jaay...thts really comendble👍🏼...m impressed😉
M impressed that u r impressed..m gald that u r impressed😆
Btw madam...epilogue kahan hai🤓...yaa mein ghayab kya hoi logon nay epilogue hi likhana chor dea😳
Epilogue ke baarey mey maine Once Again mey likha hai...M not able to come up with a good idea...if u have one..Plz PM me...😕
I want one...pleaseezz...
I really enjoyed n loved reading it...thanks for such a lovely SS dear🤗
U r welcum mah cuto siso..🤗
Love ya...lots of huggs n kisses for u n have flowers too😃😆
Ab khush😳
Bohot😃😃