Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 84

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

are yaar ye kya kar diya end me 😲 aur ab next update next yr kaise wait kare yaar🥺 btw update was awesome...last time shravan ne jan atkati thi es bar sumo...just hope use kuch na ho bichari ne pahalehi etana dard dekha hai

Luv,
Priti


hii priti
thank uu derar...lets see sumo ke saath kya hota hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Piya di kab update karogi??? It's been ages of waiting😭😭 pleeeaaasssee update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

I was almost about to sprint from the bed after reading this! But then I remembered, no negativity in this story! So that calmed me down! As usual amazing write up Piya! Now waiting for the next one more eagerly! Please try to update soon!


thank un saanjh
ya i m tellinhg yopu there will be no negetivity in this show...
ya m back now i will start writing
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Read this at 1am in the morning and had a very disturbing sleep after that ...I trust you Piya that nothing will go wrong...you have said this once that this will be a positive story..but till then this cliffhanger will kill me!!


trust me dear.. it is a love story about two different ppl..
who overcome all their dirrences and stay together
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

whatt a chapter di.

saara chapter dil garden -garden ho raha tha aur last main to jaise heart atack hi de diya aapne.
my take on the kidnapping thingy is adi and nidhi will make an entry now, probably he'll save her. but honestly im clueless.
the last line that jerk on phone spoke took my heart beat away
"Aap to famous ban gaye sir ji..
Ek gang rape case jeet ne ke baad inta naam aur shohrat..
Toh maine socha kyun na aap ko aur ek aise case gift kardu????
Ab to aap aur bhi famous hone wale hai..
Chaliye aap ka next case meri taraf se
Same type ka..
Victim ko to aap jante hi honge

Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra "
jaldi update karna di. and MERRY CHRISTMAS AUR HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE.


thank uu dear. keep guessing what will happen to sumo...
by the way m back...
will update within 2-3 days
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi piya
Merry Christmas and happy new year !!!!
And enjoy with ur family
As always we are waiting for next update
Thank you


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hii dear...
happy new year to you too...
ya will will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Helllo guys...
A very happy wala new year to all of u
I know i gave u tension on my last update.. And was unable to update because of the vacation.. Now m back with my update..
To lets seee sumo ka jya hota hai...



Part 22

She walked towards the bed and sat on the side..
She took the photoframe which was there on his bedside table..
"Sab aapki galati hai.." She looked at his photo..
She blushed..
"Aap ne hume kya se kya bana diya.."
She covered her face with her palm,.
She heard a sound..

"Shhravan "she murmured
She felt the footsteps coming close towards her...
Dhak dhak dhak..
She closed her eyes
She put her right hand on the left side of her chest.. And felt the heartbeat...

She was blushinggg ...
She felt someone is just standing behind her...
She felt the breath near her back...
She shot her eyes open..
a negetive thought came to her mind as shravan is tall so if it was him she would feel his breath her her head .. Not near her back

She turned and found two men was standing in front if him..
She gasped in horror
They looked drunk and not at all good human being..
"Tum log kaun ho???"she asked

" Kya cheeez hai yaaar" They have evil smile on their lips..

"Ufff aaaj to kayamat aaa jayegi..." guy 1 said

One person was about to touch her when she screamed.."Shrrravaaan !!!!!"
Suman found lust in their eyes ..
And their lustful eyes were fixed on her
"Duuur raho ... " She screamed
"Agar haath lagane ki koshish bhi kii to haath tod ke rakh dungi... "She said in anger

"Are wah maal to bahut tez dhhar wali nikli... Kyaa baat ..."guy no 2 threw a flying kiss to her..

She quickly grab the showpiece from the bedside table and threw it tiwards one man..

It hits his head .. He screamed and grabbed the wounds..
Suman moved a side
"Teri to... "2nd men gritted his teeth and trying to hold her arms..
Suman ran towards the door.. And the man could only able to catch her dupatta which came off



Shetried to cover her front with her hands...
"Kaun ho tum log????? Shravan kahan hai???? Yahan kya kar rahe ho??? "...She cried in fear..

But becoz of the loud music in downstair nobody can hear her scream

"Tumhara shravan hum hai jaaneman ... " they laughed
"Tumahre saath suhagraat manane aye hai... "3rd man smiled evily
Rest of them laughed
Suman gasped in horror..



She tried to run towards the door when the man hold her waist and pulled her towards him...
She scrached his face and freed herslef and ran towards the toilet ...

But the 2nd man tried to grab her.. Suman moved in this process the man grabbed the sleeev of her blouse and ripped it off...


She screamed as his nails scrached her arm..
Un this moment the 1st man came from her behind...
And hold her from behind and picked her up...

"Shravaaannn!!!!!!!!!! "...She screamed...
She kicked him with her leg...
He dropped her ...
She ran towards the bed..

"Plzzz mujhe jaaane dooo..." She cried folding her palms together
The man Make her turned towards him .. He cluched her hair on his fist... She hissed in pain...he slapped her...
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Suman fell on the ground her head hits the corner of tge table ..
Every thing was blurry infront of her eyes
She can taste blood on her lips...

She feels blood is dripping from her fore head...

Suddenly she felt 2nd men pulled her ankle and hoovered on her...
Holding her both wrists...
She was screaming in her agony...
She felt sharp teeth near her shoulder..
"Shhhrrraaavvvaaannn!!!!! She screamed
"Main huun na tumhara shravan..." The man smiled .. He was trying to kisss her lips
Suman can smell the alcohol...
When she spat on his face...
She tried to get up but he hold his ankle and pulled her..
She hit the ground..
She felt the sharp pain on her ankle
She hurt her forhead again..


"Bahut garmi hai tujhme... "He grabbed her bare waist and dig his nailss..
He leaned on her.. Suman can feel his shrarp nails were ripping off her back..
She scrached his face..

She can see the anger on his face .. The man pulled himself and slapped her ..

Before loosing her sense all she could heard someone talking...
"Ayyy.. Yahan nahin jaldi usko leke nikal te hai koi aa jayega..."
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Nirmala rushed with ramnath...
Ramnath was shocked
"Suman kahan hai??? "Nirmala screamed...
As she realised tge situation she almost lost her balanced and was about to faint when kamini grabbed her

"Jiji samhalo apne aap ko..."kamini sobbed

Nirmala grabbed ramnath's collar and asked
"Meri beti kahan hai???? Kahan hai meri bachhhi???? Raaam meri bachhhi ... "She sobbed..

"Bhabi samhalo plzzz "lalaji said...



Pushkar rushed to shravan..
Who was sitting numb clutching suman's veil in his hand..

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa
Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

"Sumooo " he whispered
Bhai ,.. Bhaiii dekho meri taraf sumo ko kuchh nahi hoga.. Hum hone nahi.". He couldnt finish as shravan got up... And rushed outside pushing vatun who was standing on the door along with vandy..

"Shravan ruk.. "Rishi raj n agastya followed him..

"Bhai kahan jaa rahe ho.. ??"Pushkar asked
"Chhote m gonna kill that busturd... "Shravan turn around...
"Agar meri suman ko kuchh bhi huya ...aaag laga dunga main .. "He broke da vase.. Which was there on the table..
"Shravan tu shant ho jaa... "Agastya tried to calm him down...

He shoved his hand.. "Kaise shant ho jau .. Waha sumo ke saath naa jaane kya kya.." He shivered as the thought came to his mind...

"Mar jayegi ... Marjayegi woh agar.." He covered his face with his palm.. And cried loudly...


"Thank god tiwari ji yahan nahin hai.. Woh yeh bardasht nahinkar paate... "Said lalaji...

"Shravan tu shant ho jaa... "Lalaji said..

Nirmala came to him.. She slapped shravan...
Kamini rushed towards them

"Mana kia tha maine ... Aise cases mat lena.. Dekha .. Aab khush tum dono ???...".She looked at ramnth and shravan...
"Waha meri phool si bachhi na jane ..". She sobbed and couldn't nfinish..

"Jiji plzzz aisa mat boliye.. "Kamini cried
"Tu soch kamini ..."nirmala cried
"Nahi nahi jiji meri bachhi ko kuchh nahi hoga.. " Kamini shooked her head

"Varun tu mere saath chal
Commissioner se vaat ho gayi meri... Hume nikal na hoga...,"Ramnath said...
"Papa main bhi aap logo ke saath chalunga..."said shravan

"Bhai plzzz aap kahin nahin jaa yoge plzzz"...
Pushkar hold shravan's arm

"Chhote mujhe mana mat kar... Agar use kuchh huya to mainnn... Main mar jayunga... "Shravan said with a tear full eyes...

Ramnath left with varun and lalaji..
"Jiju aap plzz aisa maat bolo di ko kuchh nahi hoga... " Preeti cried

"Maine tujhe priya ki amanat sopi thi... "Nirmala said... "Mujhe meri vachhi wapas chahiye... "She cried
Shravan was feeling helpless...
"Maaa mera yakeen karo suman ko kuchh nahi hone dunga main.. "Shravan hugged nirmala...
"Sab kuchh kitna achha ho raha tha ... Yeh kya se kye ho gaya "... svatri said...

"Nani plzz aap apne tabiyat ki dhyan rakho.. Humari sumo gundo ki aisi ki taisi kar degi .. " Pushkar consoled savitri...
Everyone is crying in the living area...

Shravan stood up.. He couldn't beleive what just happened ...
It was so so perfect...
His life ...his wedded wife was snatched from him..
God plzzz make her safe
She is so so vulnerable
So fragile..
Agar use kuchh ho gaya to usse pehle meri saans ruk jayega...

Kya Maine Pa Liya Hai Kya Maine Kho Diya Hai

Shayad Yeh Soch Kar Hi Dil Aaj Ro Diya Hai



Sab kuchh mere waijaise huya...
Shravan got up and called the watchman..
"Manohar kaka .. Aaap ke rehte yeh kaise ho gaya.???? "Shravan asked him

"Shravan baba kuchh log aye the .. Unhone bola decorations ke saman leke jayenge ... To maine unhe jaane diyaaa.. "He said with a tearful eyes...
"Baba aap plzzz suman bitiya ko wapas leke ayiye... Yeh aab meri galati hai "...he wiped his tears...

Shravan was feeling pain inside his heart...
Sumooo sumooo
tumhe kuchh nahi hoga...
Main aaa raha huun

Tu Hi To Tha Mera Apna

Kaise Phir Yeh Toota Sapna




Suddenly pushkar got a call..
He took it..
"Kahan???? Hum aa rahe hai.. "He screamed
"Choite kya huya???" Asked shravan
"Bhai aap shant ho jao.. Plzzz pushakr made shravan calm who was not in a normal state..

Preeti tum sab ka kheyal rakho main abhi aata hun
"Chhote. baat kya hai ???" asked Shravan
"Bhai aap mere saath chalo... jaldi chalo baad mein batati huun.." Pushker grabbed his arm

"Ruk main bhi aata huun "...said agastya
"Ria rishi raj u guys stay here n take care of others... "Agastya said and rushed with them


Trio rushed outside..
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Suman can feel terrible pain in her whole body...
And felt that her bed is shaking...
She realised that she is lying inside the back seat of the car...
Her head is paining badly...
She touched her head .. When she heard..
"Uth gayi jaanemaan?????"
She shot up

"Kahan leke jaareho mujhe??? Gadi rokooo..."She screamed..

"Paas mat ana... Main maar dungiii..."She tried to cover her front with her hands..

"Janemaan tere adauon ne to hume pehle se hi maar diya... "said the man sitting nxt to her...
Everyone laughed...

She saw a car was standing on tge road.. "helllppp!!!!!!! "She screamed throwing her hands outside..
But she was pulled inside by her hair...

"Yeh to bahut tez nikli.. Pakad use.." The guy who was driving said...
Guy 3rd who was sitting beside her..hoovered on her...
"Chhodo mujhe ..."she screamed
She was throwing her hands and legs..
She felt than one of her ankle is feeling numb..
She hissed in pain as she felt theguy beside her.. Grabbed her knees and make her lying down on the seat hoovering on the top ofher...

She felt tht she couldn't breathe any more..
Tears flowed from hereyes...
She grabbed his hair and tried to pull him from her ...
He slapped her hard...

Her head was spinning..
She felt his teeth on the upper side of her breast

Suddenly she felt the man was pushing her lehenga up .. She gulped in horror..
And tried to kick that basturd
She felt his dirty hand scratched her thighs..
"Shrrraaavvvaaannn "...she screamed...

She felt her life is draining out ..
She was throwing her hands..
Suddenly her hand touched something on the ground of the back seat..
She realised its a beer bottle
...
She grabbed it and will all her force she break it on his head...
"Ahhh..."The guy screamed...and pulled himself off from her..

"Areee ki hoya??? "The two men looked back..
He was holding his wounds.. And was trying to stop the flow of blood...

"Are khooonnn.." The driver screamed..
Suddenly a big truck was coming from otherside was about to hit the car.. The guy no 2 who was sitting beside the driver hold the steering wheel and mooved ot it the left side causing the car hit on a big roadside tree...
The driver broke the windscreen and threw himself out of the car covered in blood...
The 2nd guy hit his head on the dashboard .. He opened the door and got out from the car with his trembling steps.. And fell on the ground loosing his consciousness..

Suman saw a biggg flashlight.. Infront of her eyes and she grabbed the back of the front seat...then she heard everybody screamed..
She lost her sense

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"Tu sahi bol rahi hai??? "Screamed pushkar on the phone
"Ekdam pushkar woh suman hi.. Main to wedding se wapas aa rahi thi phone mein baat karne ke liye car side mein park kiya... Tabhi maine dekha...Chillarahi thi...tu jaldi aaaja... "Anjali said on the otherside
"Tab tak main unka peechaa karti hun ... "Anjali continued...
"Agastya jaldi chalo "...pushkar said to Agastya who was driving...


"Chhote sumo kahan hai???? Kya bola teri frnd ne.. "Asked Shravan
"Bhai usne sumo ko lete jaate huye dekha... "She was crying for help...

"Sumooo main aa raha huun ... Tumke kuchh nahi hone dunga... Tumhe kuchh ho gaya to yeh shravan mar jayega..."Shravan murmured

To Jo Mil Ke Kho Jaayega

Jeena Mushkil Ho Jaayega





"Agastya jaldi kar "...shravan said Agastya who was driving the car sitting next to him

"Bade papa mujhe lagta hai sumo ka pata chalgaya "...pushkar called ramnath...

"sumo ko kychh nahi hona chaiye.. "Pushkar said wid a teary eyes..
Nobody replied... As everyone is hoping for tge same

"Sumo ... I know tu fighter hai... Thodi time fight karle meri sumo wrestler ... "Pushkar said impatiently...
Pushakr's phone rang...
"Ha anjali bol...
Kyaaa???????????
Sum... Sumo thik to hai????????" He screamed

Shravan looked at him...
"Tu jaldi aaa pushkar... "Anjali said while her voice choked
"Kya huya ... Kychh bole ga bhi???? "said shravan...
"Wohhh... Wohhh... Bhai... anjali bol rahi thi .. Ki...sumo ke car ka..."He didn't complete
Shravan gasped in horror

Meri duniya mein aake mat jaa

Mat jaa kahin mat jaa


"Kya bol rahi thi bol naaa "...said Agastya ...

"Kuchh nahi bhaiya aap chalo ha yahan se right lo... Thats her ...anjali .. Thats her car..." pushkar screamed as they found anjali parked her car on the side of the road... And was waiting outside of her car...
As the reached..
Pushkar and Shravan jumped out of the car...
Pushkar rushed to anjali
Shravan gasped in horror as he found sumos car...

Both of them ran towards the car...
And was found sumo leaning unconsciously grabbing the seat in front of her...
"Sumaaan "...shravan. screamed.. As he was trying to unlock tge door but couldn't...
In the meantime ramnath reached with the police...
They found pushkar and shravan was kicking the door..trying to open it..
While anjali was standing behing them covering her mouth in horror

Suddenly pushkar opend it
Ramnath rushed towards them..

He pushed pushkar and shravan...
"Sumannn..." Ramnath screamed


"Jaldi nikalo "...Ramnath screamed

Shravan pushed Ramnath aside...
"Sumooo "...he screamed ... He felt like the ground is shaking... His eyes widen in shock coz he knows how deadly it can be for sumo...
"Sumooo tumhe kuchh nahi ho sakta..."


Feeling faint himself he slowly touched her shoulder.. And suman fell onto his arm lying unconsciously ... His heart stopped...He put his hand under her nose and found her breathing faintly...
He lookesd at her bruised face...

All of them gasped in horror seeing her condition...

Shravan scooped her slack bodyin his arm...and took her out of the car

Shravan shaked her...
"Sumooo !!!!!! Sumooo!!!!!!!! "He panicked
She didn't respond...

Her jelly like limbs were dangling.. From her side
He looked at her bruised face...
Her eyes were close...
There is not a single movement in her body...

"Sumooo... Ankhe kholll... Dekh hum aa gaye "...pushkar cried...

But she didn't
Shravan was holding her helplessly
Those eyes are close..
Where his happiness belongs are close...
His life remains are close
His present his future belongs are closed...
Those round big hazulnut eyes
18 years ago he saw them for the first time.. Ans was lost in those
He brought tears on those eyes sevaral times.. But this time its close...
What ifff..!!!!!!!
"Sumooo sumooo "...he screamed...



"Beta ... Beta ankhe khol... Dekh tere bade papa aa gagaye.."...Ramnath cried loudly...

Pushkar immediately checked her pulse...
"Bhai sumo behosh hai.. Ramnath looked at him...
Pushkar took off his coat and cover her ..."Jaldi ghar chaliye.."

They made her sleep in the back seat while resting her head on Shravan's lap..
"Jaaan plzzz ankhe kholo..." Shravan patted her cheeks


Ramnath sit in the front while Agastya drove the car..
Anjali accompanied pushkar andfollowed them back to malhotra house...
"Bade papa aap arora uncle ko jaldi phone kar ke ghar bulao..."pushakr said while parking the car in side tge house


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"Sumannn!!!!!!!!!! "...Nirmala rushed towards shravan who was holding unconscious suman in his arm...
"Meri bachhhiii.. "Kamini cried loudly

Nirmala touched her face...
"Beta beta dekh... badi maaa ."...
Nirmala cried
Kamini caresed her wounds
In this process the coat slipped in the ground and every gasped seeing her condition
She was covered with bruises..., bite marks are all over her shoulder
Blood is oozing from the forehead and the corner of her lips...
The sleeve of her blouse has been ripped off..
Shravan's eyes widen in shock...
He just hugged her and broke down...

"Shravaaan plzzz tuuu abhi toot jayega to suman ko kaun samhalega .." Said rishi...

"Bhai sumo ko room mein leke chalte hai pehle .. She needs doctor... "Pushakr hold his arm..
Every body helped him to getup..

Shravan made her lying diwn on his room.. Which is now clean...
He sat beside her...
"Sumo... Plzzz ankhe kholo..." Shravan said with a choked voice..
"Dekho main agaya huuun..."
"Plzzz sumo...
I neeed uuu sumooo
"Tumhe agar kuchh ho gaya to main mar jayunga..."
And he cried out his heart...


"Bhai aap aaap thodi der shant ho jao plzzz .. Dr uncle ko ane do... Mumma aur badi maa ko rehne do...Chalo hum neeche wait kar te hai..
Plzzz bhai..."pushkar pleaded

"Main meri bachhi ko chhod ke kahin nahi jayungi.. "Said kamini...coming with the first aid box

Nirmala n kamini sat beside her pale body... While everyone went down and was waiting for dr arora to come n visit


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Shravan was sitting in the sofa covered his face with his palm...
"Jiju paani pee lo.. Di jald hi thik ho jayegi"... preeti handed over tge galss to shravan

Ramnath was talking with the commissioner of police regardin the abduction n accident..
Every oneone shot up from ther seat when they heard her loud scream
"Shhhrrrvvvaaannn !!!!!"

"Summo!!! "Shravan gasped and just drop the glasss and got up
He ran upstairs.. Followedby other members


"Sumannn!!!! "Nirmala gasped as she found suman frowned her eyebrows
"Puttar ankhe khol..." Kamini sobbed
Suman mover her hand towards her forhead
He touched the wound on her forhed

She slowly opened her eyes...
Suddenly her eyes widen..
She shot up on the bed..
"Main kahan huun?? "She said..
Kamini moved closer to her and tried to touch her..."puttar tu ghrabra mat" she couldn't complete her words and suman moved her hands..
"Haat mat lagana.." She cried..
"Puttar ji mainhuun ."...,,kamini said

She got up from the bed and winced in pain as she felt her left foot ankle give up..

Nirmala rushed towards her.. "Beta tu shant ho ja..."
She pushed her back.. And cried "duuur raho mujhseee.."
.
Pushkar just entered the room with a jug of water in his hand..
He Surprised to see her condition..
He put the jar on the bedside table and rushed towards her...
Suman mover towards the window
"Sumo hum hai... "He tried to cuppedher face..
"Plzzz mujhe chhhod dooo ."...she cried bitterly..

Pushkar realised that suman is not in her sense...
Her eyes are not normal.. They have blurred vision
Her gaze are moving rapidly which is not normal...

"Sumo idhar dekh plzzz..".. Pushar cried...

He tried control the situation when suman pushed her back and screamed loudly

"Shhhrrraaavvvaaannn!!!!!!!!"

She screamed holding her both hands together close to her chest...
Shravan entered the room and was shocked to see her condition

She was standing in her wedding lehenga.. One sleeve of her blouse has been ripped off...
Her bridal hair style has beeen loosen and the hair was messy
Her lips are swollen.. Blood was oozing from tge corner...
Her lipstic and kohl is smuged...
The locks of her hair in falling on her face..
She is trying to cover her front with her hands..
She was standing at the corner crying bitterly
"Shrrravaan aaap kahhhan hooo" ... She cried loudly closing her eyes

"Sumooo..." He said...
Everyone entered the room..
Sumans eyes fixed on him...
"Shrrravvva..". She barely speak

She sighed in relief... And ran towards him...
Forgetting everything ... Everyone's presence in this room... With her torn clothes .. Not caring of anything
She flung herself towards his chest.. And he grabbed her by her bare waist...
"Aaappp kaaahhhaaannn thhheee... She cried loudly...
"Aaappp ayeee kyyooouuunnn nahi... "She burst out in crying

"M sooorrryyy jaaannn...". Shravan cried tugging her
Tears flowing down from his eyes...
"Aapki sumo ko un logone "...She sobbed
"Shhh...jaaan.. I am Sooo sorrryyy "...,,he caresed her messy hair...
"Main aa gaya huuun "
Caressing her face... He kissed her face frantically in front of everyone...

0Main aa gaya huuun ... Yehiii huuunnn... "He said between his kisses
"Kuchh nahi hoga tumhe..." He touched her wounds... He hugged her tightly
"Tum mere paashooo... "
"Ek kharoch tak ane nahi dunga tumhe ...
Samjhi tum???? "He said
Sumo?????? Sumo????? "He asked as he didn't get any response.. He pulled himself from her and found she lost her sense...

"Summmo ???? Sumooo??" He patted her chheks..
Raj rush towards him...
"Shraavn use bed pe le chal plzzz. "Agastya said
Shravan picked her up in his arms and laid her on the bed...
Coverd her body with the duvet...

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Everyone is waiting outside while dr arora along with his female nurses was examined suman inside her room..
Shravan was pacing outside in the corridor

Nirmala was mumbling something closing her eyes.. Seems she is chanting some mantras
Preeti was holding kamini who was crying silently...
All the family members and frnds were waiting eagerly for dr to come out and announce how bad she is effected...
Because everyone understood that she is not behaving normally...
"Shrrraaavvvaaannn!!!!!"
Suddenly they all heard her scream
Shravan burges into the room.. And found sumo sitting on his bed... While two nurses were trying to calm her...
He rushed towards her and sat on the bed..
And hugger her...
"Jaaan kya huyaaa main to yehi huu."... He caresed her head...
"Yeh loggg mujheee...".. She cried...

"Aaap kahan theee???? "...she clenched her eyes...
"Beta ek minute apna haath dikhao... "Dr arora smiled at her
Suman opened her eyes and looked at shravan
He nodded and she spreaded her arm..
Dr pushed the needle in her arm...
Nirmala sobbed...
Ramnath tried to calm suman but dr stopped him
"Abhi nahi bhaisahab..."

"She traumatised
Her body n mind is in deep shock..
Uske saath zabardasti kiya gaya...
She has been molestated and physically abused..." Dr sighed

Everyone gasped
"But bhagwan kaa laaakh laaakh sukar hai ke kuchh galat nahi huwa .." Dr arora looked up and thanked god


Shravan was sitting on the bed hugging her petite body which was trembling...
"Shhh... Kuchhh nahi hoga main huuun na "...he was trying to comfort her..
Suman was breathing heavily...
"Woh ... Log... "She whispered in fear...
"Koi nahi hai.. Main huun na "...he kissed her head...
"Tum plzz shant ho jao..." He hugged her tightly

"Uski dimag mein abhi bas wohi buri yaadein hai.. Aur shravan hai... Uski brain abhi kuchh aur chheez accept nahi kar paa rahi hai..

Woh kisiko pehchaan nahi paa rahi rahi..."
Dr said

Nirmala sobbed...
"Dheere dheere uski dimag jab shant ho jayega tab woh sab pehchaan payegi..

Maine use sedative diya hai.. Kyun ke uske bahut zyada bahari chot lagi hai...

Their is a sprain in her left ankle
Aur bhi bahut hai... Maine medicine de di hai... Aur andar ki chot dheere dheere samai ke saath "...
He didn't finish...
Everbody looked at suman .. Who was feeling dizzy because of the sedative...
Shravan slowly made her lie down...
And was caresing her head...

Abhi use kapre change karwa dijiye aur aram karne dijiye..." Dr arora sighed

Kamini went towards shravans wardobe and took out her pajama and top... "Main aur jiji milke karva denge... "

"Mmm shravan mujhe tumse thodi akele mein baat karni hai... "Dr arora said...

Kya baat hai arore..." Asked lalaji

Actually yeh baat main suman ke husband saath hi karna chahunga..." Dr said

Shravan tried to get up from tge bed. But found her holding his finger in her sleep
"Shravan tum ruko hum sab bahar chalte hai "... said lalaji..
"Ha chalo chalo said varun.. "Tu yehi ruk he added

"But doctor di hosh mein kab ayegi... "Asked preeti
"Use time lage ga .." Maine injection de di hai..

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Shravan can feel his heartbeat has became faster..
Everyone except dr has left the room..

God sumo ke saath aisa kuchh na huya ho ke woh bardasht na kar paye...

"Shravan main tumse kychh baate karna chahta huun.." Dr arora cleared his throat

"Ji uncle boliye..."shravan asked with a trembling voice

"Dekho ek doctor ke hisab se hum baat kartte hai..
I know u r newly married but u have to take things very slowly with her..".dr looked at sleeping suman

Shravan bites his lower lips and nodded

"Tum log aajkal ke bachhe ho .. So i have u ask u ke tum log dhaadi se pehle i mean were u guys physically intimate?? I mean before marriage.. ??" Doc asked
"Woh uncle... Sort of .." He said lowered his eyes

"Dont mind beta but .. Did u guys have sex?? Orrr I mean is she virgin????...".."Dr asked..

Shravan shot up his head ... "Nahin uncle humare beech aisa kychh nahin huya... N yes she is a virgin..."...shravan said

"Beta uske life ka aaj bahut bada din tha.. Aur yeh hadsa ho gaya.. Thank god zyada kuchh nahin bigda... But u need to be patience wid her.".

"May be she will get scared when getting intimate with u ... But beta tumhe dhiraj rakhna padhega...".
"Uske saath itna kuchh ho chuka ke shayad koi aur trauma woh bardasht na kar paye.. Uske medical history to tum jaan te hi hoo... "Arora patted shravan' shlouder

"Nahi nahi uncle .. Aaap bilkul chinta mat ki jijiye... Main aisa kuchh nahi karunga ke wo phir se darr jaye... "He looked at the lifeless body lying down on his bed...

"Main usse itna pyaar dunga ke woh sab kuchh bhool jayegi...
Mere pyaar mein itna taqaat hai ke main uski sari karvi yaadein bhula dunga.."
A tear rolled down from his eyes...

"Haaan beta sirf tum hi use normal kar sakte ho...
Bahut kuchh saha hai bachhi ne.". Arora looked at suman...
"But mujhe patah hai tum use kuchh nahi hobe doge.."
Dr left tge room...
Shravan went to the bed...
He leaned down..
His eyes were roaming on the bruise she have on her face...
He moved tge duvet a little ..
He saw the teeth marks on her shoulder.. The cut marks on the side of her lips..
The red fingers marks which has been embossed on her creamy cheeks...
He touched the banded on her forehead...
He touched her shoulder where her choli got ripped off...
He found scratches ... He couldn't bare any more...


"M sorry jaaan "...he whisperd..
A tear dropped from his eyes and fell on her cheek...
He kissed her forehead...

"Shravan!!!!"... Nirmala called him...

He turned around to found kamini and nirmala was standing ...
"Woh suman ka kapda change karwana tha..."kamini pointed towards tge clothes she was carrying..
Shravan got up from the bed...
"Agar tu change karwa dega to.." Kamini said..

"nahin chachi aap log karwado.. "Shravan went towards the door
"Beta ab tuu bhi change kar ke.. "Raaat kaafi ho gaya .. Nirmala cupped his face...

Shravan couldn't control
And hugged nirmala...
"Maaa main kyaaa karu????? "He burst out crying
"Kya maine sachmuchh koi galti ki hai????? "...He tighen his hug...
Nirmala caresed his back..
"Beta mujhe maaf kar de...
Is mein tera koi galati nahin beta "...nirmala said in a tearful eyes..
"Phir aj meri wajai se suman ko ..". Nirmala covered his mouth...

"Puttar ab hume yeh sochna hai ke suman ko hum is dahshath bhari yaadon se kaise bahar leke aye..."kamini put her hand on his shoulder...

"Hum sab milke is mushkil ka samna karenge..."kamini smiled with a tearful eyes..
"Bas tuu dhiraj rakhna.. Koi jaldbazi mat karna .. Be gentle with her... "

"Apni shaadishuda life start karne ke liye ..Use thoda time de... Samjh raha hai na main kya bol rahi huun ..." Nirmala hold his hand...

"Ab tu jaaa neeche mere room mein jaake change kar le tab tak hum aate hai..."she added

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Shravan just stepped out from the toilet when he saw Ramnath sitting on the bed...
Ramnath was looking tired...
His eyes were telling he cried...

"Shrravan!!!!! Tu thik to hai..." Ramnath asked
"Jee papa "...shravan said

"Papa aap abhi rest karo ... Shravan said
"Ek baap aise halat mein kaise chain s soye jab ki uski beti... "Ramnath sobbed:..
Shravan hugged him...
"Pappa sumo ko kuchh nahi huya hai..." Main huun na ...
"Haaan main jaanta huun .. Tum ho... Maine aaj dekha ke suman tumpe kitna bharosa karti hai.".. Ramnath smiled..

"Pappa mere hote huye... Suman ko kuchh nahi ".. He couldn't finish... As he found Nirmala rushed inside criying bitterly...

"Maaa kya huya ???" shravan got tensed

Nirmala covered her mouth and sobbed...

"Nirmala kya huya tum aise ro kyun rahi ho?? "Ramnath asked... Holding her shoulder
Mujhe se suman ki haalat dekhi nahi gayi... Un darindon ne uski kyaaa halath kar di..."Nirmala hugged ramnath...

Shravan's eyes got widen ...
"Meri phholon si nazuk bachiii she sobbed
Uske pure jism ko unhone noch... "She couldn't complete and clenched her eyes...

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Shravan rushed outside.. While entering his room... He found kamini crying hugging a sleeping suman...

"Chachii!!! "...Shravan gasped...
"Puttar suman ko un logone bahut bahut dard diya .. "She came towads him
"Khayal rakhna meri bachhi ka..".kamini bites her lips
She left the room closing the door ...
Shravan looked at her...
His bride...
His biwi
His sumo
His jaan
Shravan looked at her lifeless body...covered with bruises...

He slowly removed her duvet
Suman was wearing a white kurta n pajama
He slowly slid her kurti from her shoulder and gasped looking at the teeth marks on the upperside of her bre**t

He covered her shoulder
He slowly moved up her kurti and clenched his eyes looked at waist... the scratches the blood marks..
"Busturdsss... "He murmurs

He looked at her ankle which was bandaged Her payel has been taken off because of that


Flashback

Shravan put his legs on the top of her ..
"Shrravan plzzz chhodo... Koi peeche mudega to... Sab samajh jayenge..."Suman wiggled...

"Mere wedding night mein ...meri dulhan meri baahon mein hai...agar koi dekhega yo woh besharam hai... Main nahi.. "He tried to bite her ear
She tried to move her feet...
This causes a lot of sound of her payal which savitri gave it to her...

Everyone turned their head around..
Shravan stopped..

"Yeh lo ab main jau to kahan jau????
Hey bgavan.. Samne tv pe chudail naach raha hai.. Side mein romance chal raha hai..

Aur peeche cham cham wala background music ke saath suhag raat wala trailer chal raha hai.."...Said pushkar
Suman gasped and turned around hidding her face...
Shravan talked to puskar ..
Then looked at her..
He touched her chin .." Kya huya???"...

"Pushkar ko pata chal gaya.. "She mumbled against his chest
"Yeh sab tumhari yeh payel ki wajai se huya...
Utaro isko" ... Shravan caresed the corner of her lips

"Bilkul nahi... Nani ka shagun hai.." She said

"But yeh awaz bahut karti hai "...Shravan tried to say..
"Meri pehli suhaag ki shagun hai yeh... Jo nani se mila ise main nahi utar sakti.. "She shyly looked at him...
Shravan was overwhelmed...
"Phir se bolo???" Shravan asked

She lowered her eyes...
Shravan tucked her in his arm...

Flashback end

Shravan touched her ankle... He kissed her toe..
He remembers how beautiful it was a when he saw her feet after mehendi...
Now it is full of scratches and marks...




He sat beside her... He slid himself under the duvet...
Kya se kya hogaya sumo..
Aaj ke raat ke liye humne kitne sapne dekhe the...
Par kabhi sapno mein bhi nahi socha tha ke aisa hoga...
He hugged her...
Main sab kuchh thik kar dunga jaaan...
He kissed her forhead..
He closed his eyes hugging her closely ...


To be continued

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Ok guys here is the update
I know its dark... But m sorry for that
So guys now we have to see shravan kaise suman ka khyal rakhta hai...
As i told u its a love story...
So koi marne warne nahi wala hai.. Chiil maro...
Nxt update will be on sunday most probably


Edited by Crazypiya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was so emotional.😭 Sumo is a wrestler indeed. It's only her boldness and presence of mind that saves her. iam feeling really bad for her. She faced so much. While she is already very weak emotionally. But is it really needed to show this much abuse in our sumo😭. All those described are too much to handle. It's not just beating and hurting with blood. But it went far far far more than that.
Sorry but our happy hum tum got me into so many feelings, which are hard to hold😭 hence couldn't help myself. But have to feel better that she escaped atleast now.
Have to wait and see how the family helps her to recover.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice but feeling very sad for suman -
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Piya,
Great update. Emotional to the core. But you handled it really well. Nothing as I expected, but no complaints. You kept it real, because in real life it would be really hard for a girl to rescue herself from such cruel people. Hats off, you for taking the story forward in such a way. 👏
Now Shravan's true love will help Sumo recover from the most dreadful nightmare.

Lubna.

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